| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loosely" | | 1 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "resolved" | | 2 | "predator" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "crystalline" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "desire" | | 10 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1464 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 978 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.84 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | December | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Aurora | 18 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Ripples | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-forged" | | 3 | "December" | | 4 | "Welsh" | | 5 | "London" | | 6 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.58 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile, but close" | | 1 | "luminescence that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.049 | | wordCount | 1464 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile, but close" | | 1 | "Not the damp chill of London in December, but something purer, sharper" | | 2 | "not in fear, Aurora realized, but in deference" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 20.91 | | std | 21.56 | | cv | 1.031 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 72 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 85 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 69 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 114 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of Richmond Park’s damp earth and winter grass didn’t fade so much as transform, curdling into something sweeter—honeysuckle and something else beneath it, a copper tang that reminded her of old coins." | | 1 | "They did that sometimes—shifted from the periphery of her vision into something approximating a human shape, though the details never quite resolved." | | 2 | "Ancient oaks, not stone—Aurora corrected herself as they drew closer—their trunks twisted into shapes that nature alone couldn’t account for." | | 3 | "The corner of Isolde’s mouth twitched—not quite a smile, but close." | | 4 | "Not the damp chill of London in December, but something purer, sharper—a cold that didn’t feel meteorological so much as spatial , as if she’d stepped into a place where warmth was a foreign concept." | | 5 | "Not the twilight of Earth—orange and pink and fading—but a silver-blue luminescence that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 6 | "The moss beneath her boots was impossibly soft, and she noticed that her footsteps were silent here too—swallowed by the ground, erased even as she made them." | | 7 | "“I said I had visions . Prophecy implies certainty. I deal in possibilities.” Isolde began walking again, and the wildflowers bent away from her as she passed—not in fear, Aurora realized, but in deference." | | 8 | "Another sound layered beneath it—a voice, or something that had been a voice once, calling a name that was almost hers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 994 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.03219315895372234 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005030181086519115 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 114 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 114 | | mean | 12.84 | | std | 10.35 | | cv | 0.806 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 39 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 53.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.38596491228070173 | | totalSentences | 114 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 88.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she stepped through." | | 1 | "Then the light registered, and" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 97.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped walking, her boots" | | 1 | "Their voice brushed against her" | | 2 | "She drew it anyway." | | 3 | "They did that sometimes—shifted from" | | 4 | "Their form remained a silhouette," | | 5 | "They formed an archway." | | 6 | "She said interesting the way" | | 7 | "She turned and passed through" | | 8 | "They paused at the threshold." | | 9 | "They dissolved into the distortion," | | 10 | "She counted to three." | | 11 | "Her breath misted in front" | | 12 | "she muttered to herself" | | 13 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 14 | "She knelt beside the pool," | | 15 | "Her boots had indeed shifted," | | 16 | "She hadn’t noticed." | | 17 | "She hadn’t decided ." | | 18 | "She fixed her lavender gaze" | | 19 | "She didn’t know." |
| | ratio | 0.307 | |
| 6.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt the change before" | | 1 | "The air thickened." | | 2 | "The scent of Richmond Park’s" | | 3 | "She stopped walking, her boots" | | 4 | "Their voice brushed against her" | | 5 | "Aurora’s hand drifted to the" | | 6 | "The moonsilver was freezing against" | | 7 | "She drew it anyway." | | 8 | "The leaf-shaped dagger caught what" | | 9 | "Isolde glided past her without" | | 10 | "The half-Fae’s silver hair trailed" | | 11 | "Nyx solidified beside her." | | 12 | "They did that sometimes—shifted from" | | 13 | "Their form remained a silhouette," | | 14 | "Nyx’s head tilted, and Aurora" | | 15 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 16 | "The bark was silver-gray and" | | 17 | "They formed an archway." | | 18 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 19 | "Warmth spread across her sternum" |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent of Richmond Park’s damp earth and winter grass didn’t fade so much as transform, curdling into something sweeter—honeysuckle and something else beneat…" | | 1 | "She stopped walking, her boots sinking into moss that hadn’t been there a moment ago." | | 2 | "The leaf-shaped dagger caught what little light existed in this place and held it, a faint luminescence that reminded her of foxfire in Welsh graveyards." | | 3 | "Not the damp chill of London in December, but something purer, sharper—a cold that didn’t feel meteorological so much as spatial , as if she’d stepped into a pl…" | | 4 | "Not the twilight of Earth—orange and pink and fading—but a silver-blue luminescence that seemed to emanate from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 5 | "Some shifted hues as she watched, cycling through spectrums that made her eyes ache." | | 6 | "Isolde waited several yards ahead, standing beside a pool of water that reflected a sky full of unfamiliar stars." | | 7 | "Ripples spread outward and didn’t stop, continuing past the pool’s edges, expanding into the air itself." | | 8 | "Another sound layered beneath it—a voice, or something that had been a voice once, calling a name that was almost hers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She turned, her form rippling like a reflection in disturbed water" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |