| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Lucien said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "His fingers closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.369 | | leniency | 0.738 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.062 | |
| 90.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1564 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.83% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1564 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "marble" | | 2 | "pumping" | | 3 | "gleaming" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "absolutely" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "firmly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 134 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 66 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 1575 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "wait" | | 1 | "Monsieur Lucien Moreau & Mademoiselle Sabine Delacroix request the honour of your presence…" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 27 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.63% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 874 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Moreau | 2 | | Rougher | 1 | | Paris | 2 | | Lucien | 13 | | Belgravia | 1 | | Mrs | 1 | | Unadorned | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Swallowed | 1 | | Occitan | 1 | | Mademoiselle | 1 | | Sabine | 1 | | Delacroix | 1 | | Gentle | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Mrs" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Sabine" | | 6 | "Delacroix" | | 7 | "Silence" | | 8 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Paris" | | 3 | "Belgravia" | | 4 | "Occitan" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.756 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite name" | | 1 | "felt like swallowing glass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1575 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 27.16 | | std | 19.86 | | cv | 0.731 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 74 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 81 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 59 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 33 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 50 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 134 | | ratio | 0.052 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half past ten — three sharp raps that cut through the murmur of rain against Brick Lane’s cobblestones." | | 1 | "The deadbolts slid back with oiled precision — one, two, three — and she pulled the door open." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one depthless black — swept over her face with an expression she couldn’t quite name." | | 3 | "Not because she wanted to — because she didn’t want Mrs." | | 4 | "“I’m not attempting to fix anything.” He moved closer, and she caught the familiar notes of his cologne — bergamot, sandalwood, something darker underneath that she’d never been able to identify." | | 5 | "His fingers hovered over her wrist — over the crescent-shaped scar that she’d told him about during a rainstorm in his library, her head pillowed on his thigh." | | 6 | "Not roughly — just firmly enough to reclaim distance." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 870 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.028735632183908046 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009195402298850575 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 134 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 134 | | mean | 11.75 | | std | 10.31 | | cv | 0.877 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 33 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 57.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3880597014925373 | | totalSentences | 134 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, padding across the" | | 1 | "It wasn’t Eva." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes — one" | | 3 | "His voice was lower than" | | 4 | "She didn’t move to let" | | 5 | "She forced herself to meet" | | 6 | "His gloved fingers flexed on" | | 7 | "His gaze catalogued every detail" | | 8 | "He stopped near the kitchenette," | | 9 | "She shut the door harder" | | 10 | "He moved closer, and she" | | 11 | "He set the cane against" | | 12 | "She remembered that night." | | 13 | "Her voice emerged steadier than" | | 14 | "She looked up at him" | | 15 | "His voice cracked on the" | | 16 | "His fingers hovered over her" | | 17 | "His fingers closed around her" | | 18 | "His thumb traced the edge" | | 19 | "His black eye seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 23.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half" | | 1 | "Rory marked her page with" | | 2 | "Ptolemy blinked lazily from his" | | 3 | "she muttered, padding across the" | | 4 | "The deadbolts slid back with" | | 5 | "It wasn’t Eva." | | 6 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 7 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 8 | "His heterochromatic eyes — one" | | 9 | "Something between hunger and apology." | | 10 | "His voice was lower than" | | 11 | "Rory’s hand tightened on the" | | 12 | "Nobody called her that anymore." | | 13 | "Nobody except him, and only" | | 14 | "She didn’t move to let" | | 15 | "Lucien’s jaw worked." | | 16 | "A muscle flickered beneath the" | | 17 | "The use of her full" | | 18 | "She forced herself to meet" | | 19 | "His gloved fingers flexed on" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The knock came at half past ten — three sharp raps that cut through the murmur of rain against Brick Lane’s cobblestones." | | 1 | "The rain had plastered a strand of blond hair to his temple, and she noticed for the first time the shadows beneath his eyes, the gauntness in his cheeks that h…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "The word snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.123 | | leniency | 0.246 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.062 | |