Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2J56QW32QDS9M9Y7H6VYPJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.001929
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten — three sharp raps that cut through the murmur of rain against Brick Lane’s cobblestones. Rory marked her page with a takeaway receipt and unfolded herself from the sagging armchair. Ptolemy blinked lazily from his perch atop a stack of leather-bound grimoires, tail flicking once before he tucked his nose back under his paw. “Eva forgot her keys again,” she muttered, padding across the threadbare rug. The deadbolts slid back with oiled precision — one, two, three — and she pulled the door open. It wasn’t Eva. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, rainwater beading on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. The ivory handle of his cane caught the amber glow of the stairwell’s single bulb. His heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one depthless black — swept over her face with an expression she couldn’t quite name. Something between hunger and apology. “Laila.” His voice was lower than she remembered. Rougher at the edges. Rory’s hand tightened on the doorframe. Nobody called her that anymore. Nobody except him, and only during those three months in Paris when she’d been stupid enough to think she could belong to two worlds at once. “It’s Rory.” She didn’t move to let him in. “What are you doing here?” Lucien’s jaw worked. A muscle flickered beneath the sharp line of his cheekbone. “May I come in? The landing isn’t precisely suited for this conversation.” “We’re not having a conversation.” “Aurora.” The use of her full name landed like a splinter under skin. She forced herself to meet his gaze without flinching. Six months since she’d walked out of his townhouse in Belgravia. Six months since she’d left the key on the marble entryway table and closed the door on the smell of his cologne and the sound of him saying *wait* in four different languages. “You disappeared,” he said. “I looked for you.” “I didn’t want to be found.” “Clearly.” His gloved fingers flexed on the head of his cane. “Nevertheless. Certain circumstances have made it impossible for me to continue respecting your wishes.” A door creaked somewhere below. The curry house’s exhaust fan rattled to life, pumping the scent of cardamom and cumin through the floorboards. Rory stepped aside. Not because she wanted to — because she didn’t want Mrs. Bhatt from 2B reporting strange men in the hallway to the landlord. Lucien crossed the threshold like a man entering hostile territory. His gaze catalogued every detail of the cramped flat: the towers of books, the scrolls spilling across the desk, the tabby cat regarding him with imperial disdain. He stopped near the kitchenette, one hand resting on the back of a rickety wooden chair. “Cozy,” he said. “It’s what I can afford on delivery wages.” She shut the door harder than necessary. The deadbolts clicked home. “You have five minutes.” Lucien turned. The amber eye caught the lamplight, gleaming like a coin at the bottom of a fountain. “You’re angry with me.” “I’m not anything with you. You’re a man I used to know who’s currently wasting my evening.” “I ended things with Sabine.” The words came out flat. Unadorned. “Three days after you left Paris. I’ve been trying to tell you that since—” “Don’t.” The word snapped between them. Rory felt something hot and bright flare behind her sternum. “You don’t get to show up here and say her name like that’s supposed to fix it.” “I’m not attempting to fix anything.” He moved closer, and she caught the familiar notes of his cologne — bergamot, sandalwood, something darker underneath that she’d never been able to identify. “I’m attempting to explain.” “You were engaged. To a woman you’d been with for three years. A woman you conveniently forgot to mention while you were—” She stopped. Swallowed. The words felt like swallowing glass. “While we were whatever we were.” “While we were falling in love,” Lucien said quietly. “You can say it. I’ve earned the accusation.” Rory’s laugh came out hollow. “Love. Is that what you called it?” “What would you call it?” He set the cane against the table and removed his gloves, one finger at a time. The motion was deliberate. Careful. “What would you call three months of you in my bed, in my kitchen, in my study at three in the morning arguing about Etruscan verb conjugations? What would you call the way you looked at me the night before you found the wedding invitation in my desk?” She remembered that night. Remembered the way his hands had traced the curve of her spine, the way he’d whispered something in Occitan against her collarbone that she hadn’t understood but had felt in the marrow of her bones. Remembered waking alone in the grey dawn, reaching for the warmth of him and finding only cold sheets. And then the desk drawer. The cream-coloured envelope. *Monsieur Lucien Moreau & Mademoiselle Sabine Delacroix request the honour of your presence…* “I didn’t know she existed,” Rory said. Her voice emerged steadier than she expected. “You let me believe I was the only one.” “You were.” Lucien stepped forward. The space between them shrank to something dangerous. “Sabine was a contract. An arrangement between families — my father’s faction in Avaros and her father’s holdings in Lyon. There was never anything between us beyond obligation.” “And that makes it better?” She looked up at him. The height difference forced her to tilt her chin. “You let me fall for you while you were wearing another woman’s ring.” “I let myself fall for you.” His voice cracked on the last word. The amber eye was wet. “Do you understand how catastrophic that was? Half-demon bastards from Marseille don’t get to have preferences. We get to fulfill our blood-debts and keep our heads down and hope the full-blooded families don’t decide we’re inconvenient. And then you walked into that café in Montmartre with your notebook and your questions about transliteration and your absolutely infuriating refusal to be intimidated by me.” Rory’s throat constricted. “You should have told me.” “Yes.” “You should have told me the first night. The first kiss. The first time you looked at me like I was something you wanted.” “Yes.” Lucien reached for her hand. His fingers hovered over her wrist — over the crescent-shaped scar that she’d told him about during a rainstorm in his library, her head pillowed on his thigh. “I was a coward. I thought I could untangle myself from the engagement before you ever needed to know. I thought I had more time.” “You thought wrong.” “I know.” His fingers closed around her wrist. Gentle. Barely there. “I’ve known it every day for six months.” The rain intensified against the window. Ptolemy meowed once, a plaintive sound, and jumped down from his book-tower to wind around Lucien’s ankles. Traitor. “Eva told me someone was asking about me,” Rory said. “A Frenchman with a cane and too much money. She said you looked like hell.” “Eva is perceptive.” “Eva threatened to hex your eyebrows off if you hurt me again.” The corner of Lucien’s mouth twitched. “She made that abundantly clear. I believe her exact words involved a curse that would make me allergic to shellfish for the remainder of my natural life.” Despite everything, Rory felt the ghost of a smile tug at her lips. “She’s protective.” “She’s a good friend.” His thumb traced the edge of her scar. “You deserve good friends. You deserve far more than I gave you.” Silence stretched between them. The flat felt smaller than it had five minutes ago. Warmer. The rain had plastered a strand of blond hair to his temple, and she noticed for the first time the shadows beneath his eyes, the gauntness in his cheeks that hadn’t been there in Paris. “Why now?” she asked. “After six months, why tonight?” Lucien’s grip on her wrist tightened. “Because there’s trouble coming. The kind that doesn’t care about broken hearts or unfinished conversations. And I needed to see you before it arrived.” “What kind of trouble?” “The kind that has your name on a list it shouldn’t have.” His black eye seemed to absorb the lamplight, depthless and cold. “I’ve spent three weeks burning through every contact I have to find out who put it there and why. I’m close to answers. But I needed to warn you first.” Rory pulled her wrist free. Not roughly — just firmly enough to reclaim distance. “You’re telling me this is a professional visit.” “I’m telling you this is a visit I’ve been trying to make for six months, and your stubbornness forced me to wait until I had a convenient excuse.” Lucien retrieved his cane. The motion was stiff, almost pained. “I missed you. Every hour of every day. And I am not asking you to forgive me, or to take me back, or to do anything other than listen to what I’m about to say because it might save your life.” Ptolemy had migrated to the armchair, curling into the warm depression where Rory had been sitting. Outside, Brick Lane had gone quiet in the way London streets sometimes do between the last pub-goers and the first shift workers. Rory crossed her arms. “Then talk.” Lucien met her eyes. The amber one glowed faintly. “Someone in my father’s court knows what you are. Not who — what. And they’re very interested in making your acquaintance.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
1"His fingers closed around [around]"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.369
leniency0.738
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.062
90.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"precisely"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1564
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"marble"
count1
2
word"pumping"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"absolutely"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"marble"
2"pumping"
3"gleaming"
4"familiar"
5"traced"
6"warmth"
7"absolutely"
8"silence"
9"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords14
totalWords1575
ratio0.009
matches
0"wait"
1"Monsieur Lucien Moreau & Mademoiselle Sabine Delacroix request the honour of your presence…"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount874
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Eva1
Moreau2
Rougher1
Paris2
Lucien13
Belgravia1
Mrs1
Unadorned1
Rory12
Swallowed1
Occitan1
Mademoiselle1
Sabine1
Delacroix1
Gentle1
Silence1
London1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Mrs"
4"Rory"
5"Sabine"
6"Delacroix"
7"Silence"
8"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Paris"
3"Belgravia"
4"Occitan"
5"London"
globalScore0.756
windowScore0.833
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite name"
1"felt like swallowing glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1575
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean27.16
std19.86
cv0.731
sampleLengths
022
139
230
33
457
512
637
714
825
95
101
1165
128
136
1425
1523
1626
1753
183
1923
2022
2117
2225
2333
2435
2537
2617
2712
2874
2957
3021
3123
3241
3332
3481
358
361
3724
3859
393
4019
4124
4225
433
4412
4533
4615
4724
4850
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences134
ratio0.052
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten — three sharp raps that cut through the murmur of rain against Brick Lane’s cobblestones."
1"The deadbolts slid back with oiled precision — one, two, three — and she pulled the door open."
2"His heterochromatic eyes — one amber, one depthless black — swept over her face with an expression she couldn’t quite name."
3"Not because she wanted to — because she didn’t want Mrs."
4"“I’m not attempting to fix anything.” He moved closer, and she caught the familiar notes of his cologne — bergamot, sandalwood, something darker underneath that she’d never been able to identify."
5"His fingers hovered over her wrist — over the crescent-shaped scar that she’d told him about during a rainstorm in his library, her head pillowed on his thigh."
6"Not roughly — just firmly enough to reclaim distance."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.028735632183908046
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009195402298850575
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean11.75
std10.31
cv0.877
sampleLengths
022
115
224
312
418
53
616
715
821
95
108
114
126
135
1426
159
165
173
1810
1912
205
211
2212
239
2411
2533
264
274
286
2911
3014
315
3218
333
3411
3512
3610
3727
3816
393
4015
414
424
432
4416
454
4617
4710
481
4914
57.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3880597014925373
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences79
matches
0"she muttered, padding across the"
1"It wasn’t Eva."
2"His heterochromatic eyes — one"
3"His voice was lower than"
4"She didn’t move to let"
5"She forced herself to meet"
6"His gloved fingers flexed on"
7"His gaze catalogued every detail"
8"He stopped near the kitchenette,"
9"She shut the door harder"
10"He moved closer, and she"
11"He set the cane against"
12"She remembered that night."
13"Her voice emerged steadier than"
14"She looked up at him"
15"His voice cracked on the"
16"His fingers hovered over her"
17"His fingers closed around her"
18"His thumb traced the edge"
19"His black eye seemed to"
ratio0.253
23.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences79
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory marked her page with"
2"Ptolemy blinked lazily from his"
3"she muttered, padding across the"
4"The deadbolts slid back with"
5"It wasn’t Eva."
6"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
7"The ivory handle of his"
8"His heterochromatic eyes — one"
9"Something between hunger and apology."
10"His voice was lower than"
11"Rory’s hand tightened on the"
12"Nobody called her that anymore."
13"Nobody except him, and only"
14"She didn’t move to let"
15"Lucien’s jaw worked."
16"A muscle flickered beneath the"
17"The use of her full"
18"She forced herself to meet"
19"His gloved fingers flexed on"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten — three sharp raps that cut through the murmur of rain against Brick Lane’s cobblestones."
1"The rain had plastered a strand of blond hair to his temple, and she noticed for the first time the shadows beneath his eyes, the gauntness in his cheeks that h…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"The word snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.123
leniency0.246
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.062
82.0154%