Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2JD5TZGYDQEKDYDE2EJ0D1

Run Details

Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.000524
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The mist clung to the ground like a living thing, curling around the roots of the ancient oaks as Rory stepped through the gap in the hedge. The last light had bled out of the sky an hour ago, and the moon offered nothing but a pale smear behind the clouds. She’d been to the Fae Grove before, always with Silas or Eva, always in daylight when the standing stones looked like old friends and the wildflowers seemed to glow from within. Tonight was different. She’d come alone because the pendant had started pulsing again—a deep, insistent warmth against her collarbone that refused to fade, even when she pressed her palm flat over the crimson stone. The heat had pulled her from the flat above the bar, through the empty streets of Richmond, and into the dark maw of the park. She told herself it was curiosity. That she needed to know why the Heartstone reacted so strongly. That it was research, nothing more. The wrongness hit her ten paces into the clearing. The air changed. Not colder, not warmer—something in between, like stepping into a room where someone had adjusted the atmosphere to a frequency her skin didn’t recognise. The wildflowers that should have carpeted the grove were gone. In their place, a fine grey dust covered the earth, as if the colour had been leached out of the ground and left behind only ash. No breeze stirred the leaves overhead, but the grass beneath her feet trembled. A vibration, low and rhythmic, like a heartbeat pressed into the soil through a stone floor. Rory stopped. Her breath clouded in front of her, though the air didn’t feel cold. She waited, listening. Silence. Real silence, the kind that pressed against the eardrums until they ached for any sound at all. No distant traffic. No owls. No rustle of small creatures in the undergrowth. The grove had swallowed the world whole. The pendant pulsed against her throat. One beat. Two. She touched it with her fingertips and felt the surface hum. She took another step forward, and the dust puffed up around her boots. The ancient oak standing stones loomed at the edges of the clearing, their bark slick with moisture that didn’t match the dry air. One of them—the tallest, the one that always drew her gaze during the day—had changed. A fissure ran down its centre, dark and narrow, like a mouth held barely open. Rory’s skin prickled. She told herself it was just the cold, the isolation, the absence of familiar sound. She’d grown up in Cardiff, spent nights in the Brecon Beacons with her father under skies so dark you could see the galaxy spin. She knew how to be alone in the wild. But this wasn’t wild. This was something else. The vibration underfoot grew stronger. She felt it through the soles of her boots, up through her shins, settling in her chest like a second heartbeat. The pendant responded, glowing brighter, casting a faint red light across the dust. She could see her own shadow now, stretched thin and wrong, bending in a direction that didn’t match the light source. Her mouth went dry. She turned her head slowly, scanning the tree line. Nothing moved. The shadows between the trunks were thick and absolute, blacker than any night she’d ever known. She saw something shift in the periphery—a flicker, a ripple, like heat haze at the edge of a bonfire. She snapped her gaze to it. Nothing. But the certainty settled into her bones: she was not alone. It wasn’t a thought. It was a sensation, older and deeper than reason, the same instinct that made prey freeze before the predator struck. The back of her neck tightened. The small hairs on her arms rose. Every nerve in her body screamed at her to turn and walk, to run, to leave this place and never come back. She didn’t move. The fissure in the standing stone seemed to widen. She couldn’t tell if it was the light from the pendant playing tricks, or if the stone was actually splitting, the bark peeling back like a wound. The blackness within it was absolute. Not the absence of light—the presence of darkness, thick and layered, a weight that pressed against the air. Her breath came faster. Too loud. The silence of the grove amplified every exhale, turned it into a ragged, panicked sound that echoed off the invisible walls of the clearing. She tried to steady it, to slow her heartbeat, but the pendant was pulsing in rhythm with the ground now, a steady thrum that she felt in her teeth. A whisper. Not a voice—something else. The sound of dry leaves scraping across stone, but there were no leaves, only dust. It came from behind her, low and close, as if someone had leaned into her ear without making a sound. She spun, heart hammering. Nothing. But the dust at her feet had shifted. A trail, fresh and sharp, leading from the edge of the clearing to the base of the cracked standing stone. A trail made by something that had moved while she was looking away. Rory’s hand went to her pocket, where she kept the small folding knife Silas had given her. She didn’t pull it out, but the weight of it against her palm was a small comfort. The pendant’s glow flickered, and for a moment the grove was plunged into near-total darkness. The standing stones vanished. The ground disappeared. The only thing she could see was the faint red gleam of her own reflection in the blade of the knife. She held her breath. In the dark, something breathed back. It was not her breath. It was deeper, wetter, a sound that came from the fissure in the stone, from the dust on the ground, from the air itself. A long, slow inhalation that rustled the dead flowers and stirred the grey ash into tiny spirals. Rory felt the air move past her face, cold and sour, carrying a smell like damp earth and iron. The pendant flared. Light exploded across the grove—not steady, but pulsing in waves, each beat of the Heartstone sending out a crimson pulse that lit the clearing like a slow-motion camera flash. In that strobing light, she saw something at the base of the cracked stone. A shape. Not human, not animal, but something caught in between—a suggestion of limbs, of a face turned sideways, of eyes that opened and closed in places eyes shouldn’t be. She saw it for less than a heartbeat. Then the light died, and the darkness rushed back in, heavier than before. Rory didn’t wait. She didn’t think. She turned and ran, feet pounding through the ash, the pendant now cold against her skin. The grove stretched around her, bigger than it should have been, the hedge boundary impossibly far away. She could feel the wrongness following, not with footsteps, but with a pull, a gravity that dragged at her coat, her hair, her lungs. She broke through the hedge without feeling the thorns, stumbled onto the path, and kept running until the park gates grew from the shadows ahead, solid and real and utterly indifferent to what she had left behind. She didn’t stop until she hit the streetlamps of Richmond Hill, and even then she didn’t look back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1238
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"maw"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"predator"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"pounding"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"maw"
2"trembled"
3"rhythmic"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"loomed"
7"familiar"
8"scanning"
9"flicker"
10"predator"
11"weight"
12"echoed"
13"whisper"
14"flickered"
15"pulse"
16"pounding"
17"could feel"
18"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1229
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1229
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory6
Fae1
Grove1
Silas2
Eva1
Richmond2
Heartstone2
Cardiff1
Brecon1
Beacons1
Hill1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Heartstone"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Cardiff"
4"Brecon"
5"Hill"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like old friends and the wildflowe"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.255
wordCount1229
matches
0"not steady, but pulsing in waves, each beat of the Heartstone sending out a"
1"Not human, not animal, but something caught in between"
2"not animal, but something caught in between"
3"not with footsteps, but with a pull, a gravity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean38.41
std28.82
cv0.75
sampleLengths
082
13
279
39
492
518
638
720
866
959
1060
114
1253
1311
1459
153
1660
1759
1845
191
2041
2177
224
236
2465
253
2673
278
2813
2963
3037
3118
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"were gone"
1"been leached"
2"was plunged"
92.47% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was actually splitting"
1"was pulsing"
2"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences100
ratio0.08
matches
0"She’d come alone because the pendant had started pulsing again—a deep, insistent warmth against her collarbone that refused to fade, even when she pressed her palm flat over the crimson stone."
1"Not colder, not warmer—something in between, like stepping into a room where someone had adjusted the atmosphere to a frequency her skin didn’t recognise."
2"One of them—the tallest, the one that always drew her gaze during the day—had changed."
3"She saw something shift in the periphery—a flicker, a ripple, like heat haze at the edge of a bonfire."
4"Not the absence of light—the presence of darkness, thick and layered, a weight that pressed against the air."
5"Not a voice—something else."
6"Light exploded across the grove—not steady, but pulsing in waves, each beat of the Heartstone sending out a crimson pulse that lit the clearing like a slow-motion camera flash."
7"Not human, not animal, but something caught in between—a suggestion of limbs, of a face turned sideways, of eyes that opened and closed in places eyes shouldn’t be."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1240
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.024193548387096774
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007258064516129033
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean12.29
std8.93
cv0.726
sampleLengths
027
124
231
33
431
525
66
711
86
99
103
1124
1210
1326
1413
1516
162
1713
183
191
2017
213
222
238
247
256
262
271
2811
2913
3023
3115
3215
333
3415
3524
369
374
384
395
4021
4113
4221
434
449
452
4616
4719
486
491
30.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.22
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners22
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Then the light died, and"
ratio0.011
67.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences89
matches
0"She’d been to the Fae"
1"She’d come alone because the"
2"She told herself it was"
3"Her breath clouded in front"
4"She waited, listening."
5"She touched it with her"
6"She took another step forward,"
7"She told herself it was"
8"She’d grown up in Cardiff,"
9"She knew how to be"
10"She felt it through the"
11"She could see her own"
12"Her mouth went dry."
13"She turned her head slowly,"
14"She saw something shift in"
15"She snapped her gaze to"
16"It wasn’t a thought."
17"It was a sensation, older"
18"She didn’t move."
19"She couldn’t tell if it"
ratio0.382
49.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences89
matches
0"The mist clung to the"
1"The last light had bled"
2"She’d been to the Fae"
3"Tonight was different."
4"She’d come alone because the"
5"The heat had pulled her"
6"She told herself it was"
7"That she needed to know"
8"That it was research, nothing"
9"The wrongness hit her ten"
10"The air changed."
11"The wildflowers that should have"
12"A vibration, low and rhythmic,"
13"Her breath clouded in front"
14"She waited, listening."
15"The grove had swallowed the"
16"The pendant pulsed against her"
17"She touched it with her"
18"She took another step forward,"
19"The ancient oak standing stones"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"She’d come alone because the pendant had started pulsing again—a deep, insistent warmth against her collarbone that refused to fade, even when she pressed her p…"
1"In their place, a fine grey dust covered the earth, as if the colour had been leached out of the ground and left behind only ash."
2"She could see her own shadow now, stretched thin and wrong, bending in a direction that didn’t match the light source."
3"It was a sensation, older and deeper than reason, the same instinct that made prey freeze before the predator struck."
4"The silence of the grove amplified every exhale, turned it into a ragged, panicked sound that echoed off the invisible walls of the clearing."
5"It came from behind her, low and close, as if someone had leaned into her ear without making a sound."
6"A long, slow inhalation that rustled the dead flowers and stirred the grey ash into tiny spirals."
7"Light exploded across the grove—not steady, but pulsing in waves, each beat of the Heartstone sending out a crimson pulse that lit the clearing like a slow-moti…"
8"Not human, not animal, but something caught in between—a suggestion of limbs, of a face turned sideways, of eyes that opened and closed in places eyes shouldn’t…"
9"She could feel the wrongness following, not with footsteps, but with a pull, a gravity that dragged at her coat, her hair, her lungs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.0102%