Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2JDYS3SR9XW6G3G2KDEYBW

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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The third deadbolt stuck. It always did when I rushed. I forced the tumblers into alignment and yanked the door open, ready to snap at Eva for forgetting her keys again. The words died in my throat. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other adjusting a cufflink. Charcoal suit. Platinum hair slicked back. The amber eye and the black one fixed on me with the same unnerving stillness I remembered from six months ago. "The curry house downstairs has opinions about your mail situation." "You're in London." "Astute." He brushed a fleck of lint from his lapel. "May I?" No. The word sat on my tongue. Instead, Ptolemy wound himself between my ankles and chirped at our guest. Traitor. I stepped aside. Lucien surveyed the flat as he entered, his gaze drifting across the teetering stacks of Eva's research notes, the scrolls unfurled across the coffee table, the single mug crusted with yesterday's tea. He didn't comment. That was worse. "The cane's new," I said. "A souvenir from Prague." He didn't elaborate. The radiator clanked. Ptolemy resettled himself on a pile of papers. I crossed my arms and watched Lucien catalogue the room. He'd always done that, mapped exits and objects like he expected the furniture to attack. "Why are you here?" "Direct." His mouth curved, but not enough to call it a smile. "You've changed." "Six months will do that." The curve vanished. Good. I wanted the mask to crack. I wanted him to say something that wasn't wrapped in three layers of deflective charm. He set the cane against Eva's bookshelf and turned to face me fully. The amber eye caught the lamplight. The black one swallowed it. "I need your help." "No." "Aurora." "That's not my name anymore. You made sure of that." Something flickered across his features. Gone before I could name it. Lucien reached into his jacket and withdrew a folded photograph. He placed it on the coffee table beside the abandoned tea mug. I didn't look at it. "Eva's missing," he said. The radiator kept clanking. Ptolemy purred. I stared at the photograph's blank back and felt the room tilt. "Eva's in Edinburgh," I said. "Research trip. She left Tuesday." "She never arrived." "How would you know that?" Lucien didn't answer. He waited, perfectly still, while the implications settled around us like ash. I grabbed the photograph. It showed Eva outside the British Library, mid-laugh, her red scarf whipping sideways in a gust of wind. On the back, in handwriting I didn't recognise: *Carter, last contact 03:47 Thursday. Brick Lane CCTV looped between 02:12 and 03:28.* "This is surveillance." "Observation." "You've been watching her." The paper creased in my grip. "You've been watching both of us." "Would you prefer I hadn't?" His voice stayed level. "Because I can show you precisely what happens to unmonitored assets in this city. The Thames has a remarkable recovery rate." I threw the photograph at him. It spun past his shoulder and landed in Eva's half-dead fern. "Asset," I repeated. "That's what she was to you. What I was." "Aurora." "Stop saying that name." "What would you prefer?" He stepped closer. The space between us shrank to something dangerous. "Laila? The alias you burned in Soho? Malphora, perhaps? The one you didn't think I knew about?" Another step. "Or simply Rory, the girl who delivers dumplings and pretends her past didn't follow her across two borders?" My back hit the door. "I didn't come here to fight," he said quietly. "Then leave." "I can't." For the first time, something raw crept into his voice. He clamped down on it immediately, but I'd heard it. The fracture. "Eva's the only lead I have on a case that's killed three people. She stumbled into something she shouldn't have, and now she's gone. I need your help because you know her better than anyone. Because you trust me." "I trusted you." The words landed. He absorbed them without flinching. "Paris," I said. "You told me to wait in the car." "I remember." "You didn't come back." "I'm aware." "I sat there for four hours, Luc. Four hours, watching the streetlights come on, thinking you were dead. Thinking I'd have to identify your body. And then I walked back to the hotel and found your room empty. No note. No call. Nothing for three weeks." "You were safer without me." "I didn't ask to be safe." Lucien's jaw tightened. He looked away first, which surprised us both. His gaze fell on the cane propped against the bookshelf, on Ptolemy washing his whiskers, on the chaos of Eva's abandoned research. "She's not in Edinburgh," he said. "She never made it past King's Cross. I have footage of her being followed onto the platform. Two men. Professional. They had a van waiting outside the station." "Why didn't you stop them?" "Because I was in Prague, getting this." He tapped his thigh. The sound was hollow. Not flesh. "I've been a step behind ever since." I looked at the cane again, at the way he'd shifted his weight since entering, favouring his right leg. The pristine suit and careful composure suddenly read differently. "When?" "Three months ago. Same people who have Eva. I got too close to an operation in the Old Town. They objected." "Objected how?" "Explosively." I shouldn't have cared. I wanted to hold onto the anger, to keep it burning between us like a shield. But the image of Lucien caught in a blast, of him alone in some Prague hospital while I was here hating him for Paris, cracked something loose. "You should have called." "You'd changed your number." Right. I'd changed my number. Changed my name. Changed everything, trying to outrun the ghost of a man who'd apparently been bleeding in a foreign country. "When did you get back to London?" "This morning. My contact at Interpol flagged Eva's disappearance. I came straight here." He paused. "I didn't know if you'd open the door." "I almost didn't." "I know." The radiator hissed. Ptolemy stretched and resettled. Through the floorboards, I heard the curry house closing up, chairs scraping, the distant clatter of pots. "What do you need from me?" Lucien's amber eye brightened. The black one stayed dark. "Eva's research. Everything she was working on. And access to her contacts. She was tracking something, Rory. Something that goes deeper than I realised." He'd slipped. Called me Rory. I pretended not to notice. "She was working on a paper about occult symbology in London architecture," I said. "Hawkins buildings mostly. Nineteenth-century stuff." "Hawkins." A muscle in his jaw flickered. "The architect who designed the Avaros gate." "I don't know anything about gates." "But Eva did. She'd been corresponding with a collector in Prague. The same collector whose warehouse I was investigating when the bomb went off." The room felt colder. I rubbed my left wrist, thumb finding the crescent scar. "You think she found something." "I think she found everything." Lucien picked up his cane. "But I won't know until I see her notes. And I can't access them without her password, which you probably know, and her cat, which you apparently inherited." "Ptolemy stays here." "Naturally. I need the notes, not the feline." He hesitated. An unfamiliar gesture on him. "I also need you." "I'm not a field agent, Luc. I deliver food and pay rent." "You're the most resourceful person I know. You think faster than anyone in my network. And you care about Eva more than I ever could." He met my eyes. "I can't do this alone. Not with my leg. Not with the people who have her." Six months of silence. One cane. And yet here he was, asking for help like Paris hadn't happened. But Eva was missing. Eva, who'd pulled me out of Cardiff when I was drowning. Eva, who'd let me crash on her sofa for six months and never asked for a penny. Eva, whose cat was currently kneading biscuits into a priceless occult manuscript. "I have conditions." "Name them." "You tell me everything. No secrets. No leaving me behind. No more noble self-sacrifice." "Agreed." "You don't even know the rest." "I don't need to." He adjusted his grip on the cane. "Whatever they are, I accept." "That's not how negotiations work." "Then consider it a preemptive surrender." He was too good at that. Too good at disarming me with precisely the right words. I'd fallen for it once before. "Fine," I said. "But if you disappear again, I will find you. And the cane won't help." Something flickered in his mismatched eyes. Regret, maybe. Or recognition. "I'd expect nothing less." I pushed off the door and walked to Eva's desk. The notes were arranged in her usual chaos, a system only she understood. But I'd helped organise enough of it to know where she kept the important things. Lucien's reflection watched me from the window glass. He hadn't moved toward the door, hadn't grabbed his coat. He stood in the centre of the cluttered flat like he was waiting for permission to exist in my space again. "She was looking into a building in Shoreditch," I said, pulling a leather journal from beneath a stack of papers. "Abandoned warehouse. She said the symbols there didn't match any known tradition." "Show me." The intensity in his voice sent a chill down my spine. Whatever Eva had found, it was bad enough to draw Lucien Moreau across a continent with a damaged leg and a debt of guilt he hadn't finished paying. I opened the journal. Eva's handwriting filled the pages, cramped and urgent. And on the last page, sketched in red ink: a symbol I recognised from the photograph's notes. The same symbol someone had written beside *last contact 03:47.* Lucien leaned over my shoulder. I felt the warmth of him, the expensive cologne, the careful distance he maintained even at close range. "That's Avaros script," he said. "My father's language." His voice had gone flat. Not calm. Controlled. "What does it say?" He was silent for a long moment. Ptolemy stopped purring. "It says 'payment.'" The radiator clanked one final time and fell quiet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences97
tagDensity0.247
leniency0.495
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.021
88.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"precisely"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1701
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"charm"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count3
2
word"remarkable"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pristine"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
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word"down my spine"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
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1"flickered"
2"remarkable"
3"weight"
4"pristine"
5"silence"
6"intensity"
7"chill"
8"down my spine"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences133
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences133
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
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gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords16
totalWords1701
ratio0.009
matches
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1"last contact 03:47."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1004
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva13
Moreau2
Ptolemy6
Lucien12
British1
Library1
Thursday1
Lane1
Prague1
Paris2
Rory1
Six1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places
0"British"
1"Library"
2"Lane"
3"Prague"
4"Paris"
5"Six"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore0.853
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"of a man who'd apparently been bleeding in a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1701
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences204
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs110
mean15.46
std14.15
cv0.915
sampleLengths
010
127
245
310
43
512
620
73
838
95
107
1136
124
1314
145
1525
1628
171
181
1910
2033
215
224
2318
2410
253
265
2715
2843
293
301
3116
3230
3317
3412
351
364
3752
385
399
402
4163
423
438
4411
452
464
472
4846
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"were arranged"
60.38% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was, asking"
1"was drowning"
2"was currently kneading"
3"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences204
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1007
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.025819265143992055
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009930486593843098
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences204
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences204
mean8.34
std7.31
cv0.876
sampleLengths
04
16
221
36
418
52
64
721
810
93
1010
112
121
136
1412
151
163
1732
183
193
205
217
223
238
2410
2515
264
2712
282
295
303
311
326
3315
3413
356
365
374
381
391
4010
415
426
4310
4412
455
464
474
482
4912
45.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3235294117647059
totalSentences204
uniqueOpeners66
62.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"Instead, Ptolemy wound himself between"
1"Too good at disarming me"
ratio0.019
44.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences107
matches
0"It always did when I"
1"I forced the tumblers into"
2"He brushed a fleck of"
3"I stepped aside."
4"He didn't comment."
5"He didn't elaborate"
6"I crossed my arms and"
7"He'd always done that, mapped"
8"His mouth curved, but not"
9"I wanted the mask to"
10"I wanted him to say"
11"He set the cane against"
12"He placed it on the"
13"I didn't look at it."
14"I stared at the photograph's"
15"He waited, perfectly still, while"
16"I grabbed the photograph."
17"It showed Eva outside the"
18"His voice stayed level"
19"I threw the photograph at"
ratio0.439
30.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences107
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck."
1"It always did when I"
2"I forced the tumblers into"
3"The words died in my"
4"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
5"Platinum hair slicked back."
6"The amber eye and the"
7"He brushed a fleck of"
8"The word sat on my"
9"I stepped aside."
10"Lucien surveyed the flat as"
11"He didn't comment."
12"That was worse."
13"He didn't elaborate"
14"The radiator clanked."
15"Ptolemy resettled himself on a"
16"I crossed my arms and"
17"He'd always done that, mapped"
18"His mouth curved, but not"
19"The curve vanished."
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Changed everything, trying to outrun the ghost of a man who'd apparently been bleeding in a foreign country."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences97
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.227
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.021
85.3938%