| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.649 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 60.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1327 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "electric" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.01% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 59 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1319 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Eva breathed hard, her designer trainers already stained with mud." |
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| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 68 | | wordCount | 836 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.87 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 24 | | Silas | 7 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Eva | 10 | | London | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 16 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | English | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.065 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "reds that seemed to drink the light rather than reflect it" | | 1 | "carvings that seemed to writhe when Rory looked directly at them" | | 2 | "as if breathing out after holding its breath" | | 3 | "as if listening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1319 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 24.89 | | std | 19.2 | | cv | 0.772 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 63 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 49 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 57 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 63 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 95.65% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "been seen" | | 1 | "was carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees around them twisted into configurations that defied gravity—branches spiralling upward like corkscrews, bark smooth as polished bone instead of rough oak." | | 1 | "The sun—if it was still the sun—burned amber through the foliage, casting the entire grove in a perpetual late afternoon glow." | | 2 | "The grass beneath her feet didn’t crunch or rustle—it sighed, as if breathing out after holding its breath." | | 3 | "Her lavender eyes traced every facet, every pulse of warmth, and something flickered across her ageless face—surprise, perhaps, or recognition." | | 4 | "She stopped directly in front of Rory, close enough that Rory could smell her—jasmine and wet stone and something electric." | | 5 | "She pressed something into Rory’s hand—cold, sharp, impossibly light." | | 6 | "Isolde raised her hand, and the standing stones began to hum—a low, resonant frequency that vibrated through Rory’s bones, through her teeth, through the marrow of her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 850 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.027058823529411764 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007058823529411765 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.46 | | std | 10.63 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 57.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3673469387755102 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 53.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Isolde rose, and Rory" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "He moved with the certainty" | | 1 | "They pushed through a curtain" | | 2 | "Her silver hair hung loose," | | 3 | "Her voice was soft, layered," | | 4 | "Her lavender eyes traced every" | | 5 | "She walked a slow circle" | | 6 | "She stopped directly in front" | | 7 | "She pressed something into Rory’s" | | 8 | "She was standing in Richmond" |
| | ratio | 0.145 | |
| 8.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The morning mist still clung" | | 1 | "He moved with the certainty" | | 2 | "Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant" | | 3 | "Silas didn’t slow." | | 4 | "They pushed through a curtain" | | 5 | "The air thickened, grew heavy" | | 6 | "The trees around them twisted" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed at their feet" | | 8 | "Eva stopped walking." | | 9 | "Rory looked up." | | 10 | "The sky above them was" | | 11 | "The sun—if it was still" | | 12 | "Silas waited for them at" | | 13 | "Each monolith rose twelve feet" | | 14 | "Rory tore her gaze away" | | 15 | "The grass beneath her feet" | | 16 | "A figure sat in the" | | 17 | "Isolde Varga wore robes of" | | 18 | "Her silver hair hung loose," | | 19 | "Her voice was soft, layered," |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 80.65% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Where London’s grey-white cloud cover" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "He moved with the certainty of a man who had walked this route a hundred times before, his boots crushing damp ferns and leaving dark impressions in the soft ea…" | | 1 | "The air thickened, grew heavy with the scent of honeysuckle and something older, something that made Rory’s teeth ache." | | 2 | "The trees around them twisted into configurations that defied gravity—branches spiralling upward like corkscrews, bark smooth as polished bone instead of rough …" | | 3 | "Where London’s grey-white cloud cover should have been, a canopy of leaves stretched overhead, impossibly high, filtering light into dappled patterns that shift…" | | 4 | "The grass beneath her feet didn’t crunch or rustle—it sighed, as if breathing out after holding its breath." | | 5 | "Small bioluminescent fungi dotted the bases of the stones, pulsing in slow, rhythmic patterns that matched the beat of the Heartstone against her skin." | | 6 | "A figure sat in the centre of the clearing on a moss-covered stone that might have grown there." | | 7 | "Her silver hair hung loose, brushing the ground, and her lavender eyes fixed on Rory with an intensity that made her feel seen in a way she had never been seen …" | | 8 | "The standing stones seemed to lean closer, as if listening." | | 9 | "She walked a slow circle around Rory, her robes brushing the ground without disturbing a single blade of grass." | | 10 | "The hilt was carved from bone-white wood, wrapped in silver wire that glowed faintly in the grove’s amber light." | | 11 | "Isolde raised her hand, and the standing stones began to hum—a low, resonant frequency that vibrated through Rory’s bones, through her teeth, through the marrow…" | | 12 | "She was standing in Richmond Park, on the main path, with Eva sprawled on the grass beside her and Silas leaning against a nearby oak tree as if nothing had hap…" |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, but the world tilted, the amber light fractured, and the ground fell away beneath her feet" |
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| 68.92% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 37 | | tagDensity | 0.297 | | leniency | 0.595 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.162 | |