Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2JFSQ3E2KTAKQEGVM6MZ29

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Duration:
27.7s
Cost:
$0.000555
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The morning mist still clung to Richmond Park when Rory followed Silas off the main path. He moved with the certainty of a man who had walked this route a hundred times before, his boots crushing damp ferns and leaving dark impressions in the soft earth. Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant through her jacket, its faint warmth a steady pulse against her collarbone. Behind her, Eva breathed hard, her designer trainers already stained with mud. “You’re sure about this,” Eva muttered. Silas didn’t slow. “Isolde doesn’t grant audiences twice.” They pushed through a curtain of ivy that gave way like silk, and the world changed. The air thickened, grew heavy with the scent of honeysuckle and something older, something that made Rory’s teeth ache. The trees around them twisted into configurations that defied gravity—branches spiralling upward like corkscrews, bark smooth as polished bone instead of rough oak. Wildflowers bloomed at their feet in colours Rory had no name for: blues that edged into ultraviolet, reds that seemed to drink the light rather than reflect it. Eva stopped walking. “The sun,” she whispered. Rory looked up. The sky above them was wrong. Where London’s grey-white cloud cover should have been, a canopy of leaves stretched overhead, impossibly high, filtering light into dappled patterns that shifted and swirled like schools of fish. The sun—if it was still the sun—burned amber through the foliage, casting the entire grove in a perpetual late afternoon glow. Silas waited for them at the edge of a clearing marked by standing stones. Each monolith rose twelve feet from the earth, covered in spiralling carvings that seemed to writhe when Rory looked directly at them. In her peripheral vision, they remained still. “Don’t stare too long,” Silas said. “They remember.” Rory tore her gaze away and stepped into the clearing. The grass beneath her feet didn’t crunch or rustle—it sighed, as if breathing out after holding its breath. Small bioluminescent fungi dotted the bases of the stones, pulsing in slow, rhythmic patterns that matched the beat of the Heartstone against her skin. A figure sat in the centre of the clearing on a moss-covered stone that might have grown there. Isolde Varga wore robes of pale grey that pooled around her like morning fog. Her silver hair hung loose, brushing the ground, and her lavender eyes fixed on Rory with an intensity that made her feel seen in a way she had never been seen before. “The wanderer arrives,” Isolde said. Her voice was soft, layered, like multiple people speaking the same words a fraction of a second apart. “The girl who fled one cage and found herself at the mouth of another.” Eva shifted behind Rory. “That’s… creepy.” Isolde’s lips curved. “Honesty is the currency of the desperate. You reek of it, Eva Chen. The perfume cannot hide the scent of debts unpaid.” Eva went rigid. Rory stepped forward, placing herself between her friend and the half-Fae. “We came for answers,” Rory said. “Not to have our pasts thrown back at us.” Isolde tilted her head, and the movement was birdlike, predatory. “Answers are not gifts. They are weights. You will carry everything I tell you for the rest of your life. Are you still certain you wish to shoulder that burden?” Rory’s hand touched the pendant. “I’m carrying it anyway. Might as well know what I’m holding.” A long silence stretched between them. The fungi pulsed. The standing stones seemed to lean closer, as if listening. Then Isolde rose, and Rory realised with a jolt that the half-Fae left no footprints in the moss where she had been sitting. The grass stood undisturbed, as though she had never touched it at all. “Show me the gift,” Isolde said. Rory pulled the Heartstone from beneath her jacket. The deep crimson gem caught the amber light and glowed from within, casting red flecks across the clearing like scattered blood. Isolde studied it without touching. Her lavender eyes traced every facet, every pulse of warmth, and something flickered across her ageless face—surprise, perhaps, or recognition. “Where did you get this?” “Found it in my coat pocket the morning after a delivery went wrong.” “Wrong.” Isolde laughed, a sound like wind chimes. “You stepped through a tear in the Veil into the realm of Gluttony, stood before the court of Prince Belphegor, and returned with a heartstone forged in the depths of Dymas itself. And you call that wrong.” Eva’s voice cracked. “She what now?” Silas remained silent, his arms crossed, his gaze fixed on Isolde. Rory swallowed. “I didn’t ask for it. I didn’t choose any of this.” “Choice is a mortal luxury,” Isolde said. She walked a slow circle around Rory, her robes brushing the ground without disturbing a single blade of grass. “The Veil weakens. The solstice approaches. And you carry a beacon that calls to the courts of Hel like a lighthouse in the dark. You are not caught in the current, Aurora Carter. You are the current.” She stopped directly in front of Rory, close enough that Rory could smell her—jasmine and wet stone and something electric. “The Fae courts have taken notice. The demon princes have taken notice. And there are older things, things that predate both, that have begun to stir in the spaces between realms.” Isolde’s voice dropped to barely a whisper. “You are a door, child. And doors can be opened from both sides.” Rory’s mouth went dry. “How do I close it?” Isolde smiled, and there was nothing kind in it. “You don’t. You walk through it.” She pressed something into Rory’s hand—cold, sharp, impossibly light. Rory looked down. A slender dagger rested in her palm, its blade the colour of moonlight frozen on a winter pond. The hilt was carved from bone-white wood, wrapped in silver wire that glowed faintly in the grove’s amber light. “A Fae-forged blade,” Isolde said. “Rarer than truth in a demon’s mouth. It will cut through wards, through lies, through the flesh of things that should not exist. Use it wisely.” Eva stepped forward. “And us? What about the rest of us who didn’t sign up for this nightmare?” Isolde turned her gaze on Eva, and for a moment, her expression softened. “You chose your path the moment you ran from Shanghai with your mother’s emerald necklace in your pocket and a debt collector’s blood under your nails. You have been walking toward this clearing your entire life, Eva Chen. You simply didn’t know the destination.” Eva’s face drained of colour. Silas moved first, stepping between them. “Enough. She came for guidance, not to be flayed.” Isolde inclined her head. “Very well. Then I will give you this: the solstice is three nights away. When the Veil grows thin, the door in the penthouse at Blackwood Tower will open again. If you wish to close what was begun, you must enter Hel of your own accord, find the artisan who forged your pendant, and learn why it chose you.” “That’s it?” Rory said. “Go to literal Hell and ask the demon who made my jewellery what their deal is?” “I did not say it would be simple. I said it would be a path.” Isolde raised her hand, and the standing stones began to hum—a low, resonant frequency that vibrated through Rory’s bones, through her teeth, through the marrow of her. “The grove grows tired of mortal presence. You must leave.” “Wait,” Rory said, but the world tilted, the amber light fractured, and the ground fell away beneath her feet. She blinked. She was standing in Richmond Park, on the main path, with Eva sprawled on the grass beside her and Silas leaning against a nearby oak tree as if nothing had happened. The morning mist still clung to the ground. The sky was grey and ordinary. In her hand, the Fae-forged blade caught the weak English sunlight and gleamed like a promise.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
1"Chen"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1327
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"beacon"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"silk"
3"rhythmic"
4"intensity"
5"silence"
6"pulsed"
7"traced"
8"flickered"
9"depths"
10"beacon"
11"electric"
12"whisper"
13"vibrated"
14"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
45.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1319
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Behind her, Eva breathed hard, her designer trainers already stained with mud."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount836
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Rory24
Silas7
Heartstone3
Eva10
London1
Varga1
Isolde16
Fae-forged1
English1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Varga"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.065
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"reds that seemed to drink the light rather than reflect it"
1"carvings that seemed to writhe when Rory looked directly at them"
2"as if breathing out after holding its breath"
3"as if listening"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1319
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean24.89
std19.2
cv0.772
sampleLengths
063
112
26
38
416
570
63
74
859
943
108
1152
1218
1346
1437
156
1625
1714
1815
1940
2016
2119
2236
236
2429
2525
265
2713
2845
296
3011
3113
3263
3320
3451
359
369
376
3849
3931
4018
4157
425
4315
4463
4520
4615
4727
4810
4919
95.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"been seen"
1"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences98
ratio0.071
matches
0"The trees around them twisted into configurations that defied gravity—branches spiralling upward like corkscrews, bark smooth as polished bone instead of rough oak."
1"The sun—if it was still the sun—burned amber through the foliage, casting the entire grove in a perpetual late afternoon glow."
2"The grass beneath her feet didn’t crunch or rustle—it sighed, as if breathing out after holding its breath."
3"Her lavender eyes traced every facet, every pulse of warmth, and something flickered across her ageless face—surprise, perhaps, or recognition."
4"She stopped directly in front of Rory, close enough that Rory could smell her—jasmine and wet stone and something electric."
5"She pressed something into Rory’s hand—cold, sharp, impossibly light."
6"Isolde raised her hand, and the standing stones began to hum—a low, resonant frequency that vibrated through Rory’s bones, through her teeth, through the marrow of her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount850
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027058823529411764
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007058823529411765
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean13.46
std10.63
cv0.789
sampleLengths
016
130
217
312
46
53
65
716
819
923
1028
113
124
133
146
1529
1621
1714
1822
197
206
212
2210
2318
2424
2518
2614
2732
285
2918
3014
314
322
333
3422
353
3611
376
389
3910
4030
415
4211
436
443
4510
4623
4713
486
498
57.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3673469387755102
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners36
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then Isolde rose, and Rory"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences62
matches
0"He moved with the certainty"
1"They pushed through a curtain"
2"Her silver hair hung loose,"
3"Her voice was soft, layered,"
4"Her lavender eyes traced every"
5"She walked a slow circle"
6"She stopped directly in front"
7"She pressed something into Rory’s"
8"She was standing in Richmond"
ratio0.145
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"The morning mist still clung"
1"He moved with the certainty"
2"Rory clutched the Heartstone pendant"
3"Silas didn’t slow."
4"They pushed through a curtain"
5"The air thickened, grew heavy"
6"The trees around them twisted"
7"Wildflowers bloomed at their feet"
8"Eva stopped walking."
9"Rory looked up."
10"The sky above them was"
11"The sun—if it was still"
12"Silas waited for them at"
13"Each monolith rose twelve feet"
14"Rory tore her gaze away"
15"The grass beneath her feet"
16"A figure sat in the"
17"Isolde Varga wore robes of"
18"Her silver hair hung loose,"
19"Her voice was soft, layered,"
ratio0.903
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Where London’s grey-white cloud cover"
ratio0.016
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"He moved with the certainty of a man who had walked this route a hundred times before, his boots crushing damp ferns and leaving dark impressions in the soft ea…"
1"The air thickened, grew heavy with the scent of honeysuckle and something older, something that made Rory’s teeth ache."
2"The trees around them twisted into configurations that defied gravity—branches spiralling upward like corkscrews, bark smooth as polished bone instead of rough …"
3"Where London’s grey-white cloud cover should have been, a canopy of leaves stretched overhead, impossibly high, filtering light into dappled patterns that shift…"
4"The grass beneath her feet didn’t crunch or rustle—it sighed, as if breathing out after holding its breath."
5"Small bioluminescent fungi dotted the bases of the stones, pulsing in slow, rhythmic patterns that matched the beat of the Heartstone against her skin."
6"A figure sat in the centre of the clearing on a moss-covered stone that might have grown there."
7"Her silver hair hung loose, brushing the ground, and her lavender eyes fixed on Rory with an intensity that made her feel seen in a way she had never been seen …"
8"The standing stones seemed to lean closer, as if listening."
9"She walked a slow circle around Rory, her robes brushing the ground without disturbing a single blade of grass."
10"The hilt was carved from bone-white wood, wrapped in silver wire that glowed faintly in the grove’s amber light."
11"Isolde raised her hand, and the standing stones began to hum—a low, resonant frequency that vibrated through Rory’s bones, through her teeth, through the marrow…"
12"She was standing in Richmond Park, on the main path, with Eva sprawled on the grass beside her and Silas leaning against a nearby oak tree as if nothing had hap…"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, but the world tilted, the amber light fractured, and the ground fell away beneath her feet"
68.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.297
leniency0.595
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.162
72.8343%