Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2JKAH7WCC5MNXATS04RM7Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.013143
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last delivery of the night had taken Aurora Carter to the edge of Richmond Park, a stack of aluminium containers still warm in the insulated bag slung across her chest. Yu-Fei had pressed an extra twenty quid into her palm for the long run. She should have turned the scooter back toward the glow of London, toward the cramped flat above Silas' bar and the sagging couch that smelled of jasmine tea and old radiator paint. Instead she killed the engine at the park gate. The note had been I am not a robot or AI. tucked into her jacket pocket that morning, folded into a square no bigger than a postage stamp. She had unfolded it standing in the queue at Tesco, expecting a shopping list in Eva's looping cursive. The paper held a single line in handwriting she did not recognise. *The standing stones know your name.* Anyone else would have binned it. Anyone else would have chalked it up to a prank, a stray bit of nonsense from one of Silas' half-cut regulars. But Aurora had a scar on her wrist from a childhood accident that had never quite felt like an accident, and a heartstone pendant that pulsed warmth against her collarbone whenever she strayed too close to things that did not belong in a rational world. The gate loomed ahead, black iron against a sky drained of colour. She slipped through the pedestrian gap and started up the darkening path. Richmond Park at dusk had its own kind of silence. The deer had retreated to the bracken, the joggers and dog-walkers long since driven home by the November chill. Aurora walked with her hands buried in her jacket pockets, the pendant tapping a steady rhythm against her sternum with each step. It had been warm all day. Warmer now. The standing stones were07 were not marked on any tourist map. She had found them three weeks ago, chasing a late order to a address that did not exist on any street she could find. A shortcut through the park, a wrong turn, and there they were: three slabs of ancient oak turned to something harder than wood, arranged in a loose triangle around a clearing that should not have been there. Wildflowers had bloomed in riotous colour despite the frost. Tonight the flowers were21 were gone. Aurora stopped at the edge of the treeline. The clearing lay ahead, bathed in a silver light that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once. The standing stones rose from the earth like the knuckles of a buried giant. Between them, the air shimmered the way heat shimmers above asphalt in July, except the night was cold enough to numb her cheeks. The pendant flared. Not the gentle pulse she had grown accustomed to. This was a throb, deep and insistent, as though something inside the crimson gem had woken and pressed itself against the cage of its setting. She pressed her palm flat against it and felt the heat through her shirt. "Right then," she muttered, and the sound of her own voice was too small, swallowed by the clearing before it reached the trees. "Someone wanted me here." Nothing answered. Nothing moved. The shimmer between the stones continued its slow, hypnotic ripple. She stepped forward. The grass beneath her trainers was brittle, frost-crisped, each footfall a faint crunch that seemed to echo a beat too long. Ten paces in, she realised the echo was not an echo. The second crunch came a half-second after her own, soft but distinct, as though someone had matched her stride and then stopped when she stopped. Aurora turned. The path behind her was empty. The treeline stood silent, a dark scribble of bare branches against a sky where no stars had emerged. She scanned the shadows, counting heartbeats. One. Two. Three. Nothing stirred. She turned back to the stones. A woman stood in the centre of the clearing. Aurora's breath caught in her throat, sharp as a fishbone. The figure had not been there three seconds ago. She would have sworn it on anything holy. Yet there she stood,12 stood, facing away, draped in something that was not quite fabric, a shifting fall of shadow and pale light that moved like water and hung like smoke. Her hair was long, darker than the darkness between the trees, and it stirred in a wind Aurora could not feel. "Hello?" The word came out steady. Cool-headed. The part of her that had talked down an angry bar patron last Tuesday, the part that had walked away from Evan with her spine straight and her voice level, that part took the wheel. The rest of her—the animal part that knew when it was being watched—screamed from a locked room somewhere in her hindbrain. The figure did not turn. Did not speak. But the air in the clearing changed. It thickened, pressing against Aurora's ears the way cabin pressure presses before a descent. The shimmer between the stones intensified, and the wildflowers that had vanished three weeks ago began to push up through the frost in slow, silent unfurlings. Colours she could not name. Petals that moved without wind. Something brushed the back of her neck. She spun, hand flying to the spot, expecting—what? A hand? A mouth? There was nothing. Just the empty clearing, the dark trees, the silver light pooling on dead grass. Her pulse hammered in her temples. The pendant was a coal against her skin now, a point of heat that would leave a mark if it kept on. "Not funny," she said, and her voice echoed properly now, bouncing back from the stones in a way that felt deliberate. The stones were listening. They held the sound, turned it over, let it fall. A child laughed somewhere to her left. Not a joyful sound. The laugh had no warmth in it, nothing recognisable as humour. It was a mimicry, the way a magpie mimics a car alarm, the shape of a laugh without the spirit. It came from the treeline. Then again, to her right. Then a third time, from the direction of the stones. Aurora forced herself to breathe. Fear was a luxury she could not afford. Fear made you stupid. Fear made you run, and running through unfamiliar parkland in the dark was how you snapped an ankle or wandered into a bog or tripped and cracked your skull on the very stones that had called you here. She had not been called here. She had been lured. The note in her pocket. The address that did not exist three weeks ago. The pendant that had been warm all day, as though her benefactor—whoever they were—had40 had known this was coming and the gift was not a gift but a warning system. The woman in the centre of the clearing began to turn. Aurora did not wait to see her face. Some instinct older than language seized control of her limbs and she was moving, backing toward the treeline with her eyes fixed on the stones. The figure rotated with a slowness that was theatrical, a clockwork motion that had nothing to do with human anatomy. The shimmer between the stones deepened to a red that matched the heartstone's glow. The pendant burnt. Aurora hissed and clawed at her collar, pulling the chain free so the gem dangled against the outside of her jacket. It was pulsing in earnest now, a small furious heart throwing crimson light across her knuckles. The light stretched toward the clearing as though magnetised, as though the stones were calling the pendant home. The child's laugh came again, and this time the sound resolved into a word. *Laila.* Her mother's name for her. The one no one in London knew. Aurora broke. She ran. Not blind, not panicked—she was cool-headed, even in flight—but fast, faster than she had run since childhood, when she and Eva would race along Cardiff Bay and she would always, always win. Her trainers slapped the frozen path. The pendant bounced against her chest, a hot coin of warning. Behind her, the clearing made a sound that was not a laugh and not a word but something between, something hungry. The treeline rushed up to meet her. She plunged into it, branches clawing at her sleeves, and did not look back until the silver light had faded to a glimmer behind a wall of oaks. She stopped. Bent double. Sucked air that tasted of damp bark and her own adrenaline. The path ahead was07 was not the path she had arrived by. It ran in the wrong direction. It curved where it should have run straight. The trees on either side were15 were unfamiliar, their roots knobbled, their bark furrowed in patterns that almost formed faces when she let her gaze go soft. She looked down at her feet. The frost had melted. In its place were wildflowers, the same impossible blooms that had sprouted in the clearing, pushing up through the leaf litter with a persistence that bordered on violence. The park was760 was no longer7906 longer silent. Behind her, the clearing hummed. Ahead, the path stretched into a gloom that did not feel like Richmond Park, that did not feel like London, that did not feel like anywhere she could name. The pendant had stopped pulsing. Now it held a steady, unwavering heat, like a hand pressed against her chest to keep her from moving forward. She turned in a slow circle. The oaks stood ancient and patient. Between their trunks,12 trunks, the darkness shifted. Something stood there. Something tall and slim. It did not move when she faced it. It did not move when she stared. But when she turned away and turned back, it had drawn closer, and the space between the trees had narrowed. She was not alone in the Grove. She had never been alone in the Grove. The Grove itself was the thing that watched her, the thing that had worn the shape of a woman in the clearing, the thing that whispered in her mother's voice between the spaces in the air. Aurora set her jaw. She pulled the pendant free of her shirt entirely and held it out before her like a talisman, like the heart of some small sun. The light it cast was thin but true, a crimson beam that cut the gloom by inches. She started walking. The path did not want her to leave. She could feel its resistance, a subtle wrongness in the geography, the way each step required slightly more effort than the last. But the pendant was warm, and the pendant was32 was a gift, and20 gift, and somewhere beyond these warped and watching trees there was a gate, and a scooter, and a flat above a bar where the lights were on and Eva was probably32 probably waiting with a cup of something hot. Behind her, the Grove breathed. It had been holding its breath for a very long time, and now it was learning to exhale. She did not run this time. She walked, and the light went with her.
created_at"2026-04-25T15:02:20.43Z" 4/25/2026, 3:02:20 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1869
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"footfall"
count1
9
word"echo"
count3
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"resolved"
count1
13
word"race"
count1
14
word"furrowed"
count1
15
word"gloom"
count2
16
word"unwavering"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"loomed"
3"silence"
4"chill"
5"shimmered"
6"pulse"
7"throb"
8"footfall"
9"echo"
10"scanned"
11"echoed"
12"resolved"
13"race"
14"furrowed"
15"gloom"
16"unwavering"
17"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
95.55% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences151
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords1862
ratio0.004
matches
0"The standing stones know your name."
1"Laila."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1835
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.71
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Carter1
Richmond3
Park3
London3
Tesco1
Eva3
November1
July1
Tuesday1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Bay1
Grove4
Fear3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"November"
4"Evan"
5"Fear"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"July"
4"Cardiff"
5"Bay"
6"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
35.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like an accident, and a heartstone"
1"light that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once"
2"crunch that seemed to echo a beat too long"
3"not quite fabric, a shifting fall of shadow and pale light that moved like water and hung like smoke"
4"something between, something hungry"
38.88% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.611
wordCount1862
matches
0"not a gift but a warning system"
1"not a laugh and not a word but something between, something hungry"
2"not a word but something between, something hungry"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean35.13
std27.31
cv0.777
sampleLengths
077
19
258
36
472
524
659
781
86
964
103
1148
1227
1314
1460
152
1635
176
189
1979
201
2162
2265
237
2457
2535
267
2755
2855
2910
3044
3111
3267
333
3455
3514
361
3712
382
3972
4035
4115
4212
4379
448
4559
4661
4751
4846
493
98.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"were gone"
1"been called"
2"been lured"
63.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs292
matches
0"was being"
1"were listening"
2"was coming"
3"was pulsing"
4"were calling"
5"was learning"
68.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences153
ratio0.026
matches
0"The rest of her—the animal part that knew when it was being watched—screamed from a locked room somewhere in her hindbrain."
1"She spun, hand flying to the spot, expecting—what?"
2"The pendant that had been warm all day, as though her benefactor—whoever they were—had40 had known this was coming and the gift was not a gift but a warning system."
3"Not blind, not panicked—she was cool-headed, even in flight—but fast, faster than she had run since childhood, when she and Eva would race along Cardiff Bay and she would always, always win."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount65
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.03076923076923077
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean12.17
std9.96
cv0.818
sampleLengths
031
114
232
39
411
517
618
712
86
96
1021
1145
1212
1312
1410
1519
1622
176
182
1911
2024
2137
229
236
248
2519
2614
2723
283
299
3025
3114
3223
334
342
352
3610
373
3821
3911
4025
412
426
4318
446
451
461
471
482
496
33.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.29411764705882354
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners45
98.77% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences135
matches
0"Instead she killed the engine"
1"Just the empty clearing, the"
2"Then again, to her right."
3"Then a third time, from"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences135
matches
0"She should have turned the"
1"She had unfolded it standing"
2"She slipped through the pedestrian"
3"It had been warm all"
4"She had found them three"
5"She pressed her palm flat"
6"she muttered, and the sound"
7"She stepped forward."
8"She scanned the shadows, counting"
9"She turned back to the"
10"She would have sworn it"
11"Her hair was long, darker"
12"It thickened, pressing against Aurora's"
13"She spun, hand flying to"
14"Her pulse hammered in her"
15"she said, and her voice"
16"They held the sound, turned"
17"It was a mimicry, the"
18"It came from the treeline."
19"She had not been called"
ratio0.289
52.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences135
matches
0"The last delivery of the"
1"Yu-Fei had pressed an extra"
2"She should have turned the"
3"The note had been I"
4"She had unfolded it standing"
5"The paper held a single"
6"*The standing stones know your"
7"Anyone else would have binned"
8"Anyone else would have chalked"
9"The gate loomed ahead, black"
10"She slipped through the pedestrian"
11"Richmond Park at dusk had"
12"The deer had retreated to"
13"Aurora walked with her hands"
14"It had been warm all"
15"The standing stones were07 were"
16"She had found them three"
17"A shortcut through the park,"
18"Wildflowers had bloomed in riotous"
19"Tonight the flowers were21 were"
ratio0.815
37.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"Now it held a steady,"
ratio0.007
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"But Aurora had a scar on her wrist from a childhood accident that had never quite felt like an accident, and a heartstone pendant that pulsed warmth against her…"
1"The clearing lay ahead, bathed in a silver light that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once."
2"This was a throb, deep and insistent, as though something inside the crimson gem had woken and pressed itself against the cage of its setting."
3"The grass beneath her trainers was brittle, frost-crisped, each footfall a faint crunch that seemed to echo a beat too long."
4"The second crunch came a half-second after her own, soft but distinct, as though someone had matched her stride and then stopped when she stopped."
5"Yet there she stood,12 stood, facing away, draped in something that was not quite fabric, a shifting fall of shadow and pale light that moved like water and hun…"
6"The rest of her—the animal part that knew when it was being watched—screamed from a locked room somewhere in her hindbrain."
7"The shimmer between the stones intensified, and the wildflowers that had vanished three weeks ago began to push up through the frost in slow, silent unfurlings."
8"Behind her, the clearing made a sound that was not a laugh and not a word but something between, something hungry."
9"In its place were wildflowers, the same impossible blooms that had sprouted in the clearing, pushing up through the leaf litter with a persistence that bordered…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
79.4897%