| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.298 | | leniency | 0.596 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.035 | |
| 93.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1454 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1454 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "charm" | | 5 | "resolve" | | 6 | "tension" | | 7 | "porcelain" | | 8 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "let out a breath" | | 1 | "stomach dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1449 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 829 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Lucien | 11 | | Thames | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.837 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like cumin and damp carpet" | | 1 | "looked like a sinkhole, a door to somewhe" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1449 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 20.7 | | std | 17.07 | | cv | 0.825 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 69 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 59 | | 27 | 41 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 54 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 48 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.48% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "He took in the cluttered flat in a single glance—the stacks of research notes on the coffee table, the bookshelves bowed under the weight of Eva's grimoires, the litter box in the corner that needed changing." | | 1 | "His fingers brushed hers, deliberate or accidental—with him, you could never tell." | | 2 | "The flat felt smaller now, the walls pressing in, the familiar spaces suddenly full of his presence—his scent, his heat, the weight of his attention." | | 3 | "Lucien shrugged off his jacket, draped it over the back of Eva's reading chair; and sat down on the couch like he'd always been there." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 836 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.02751196172248804 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005980861244019139 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 12.6 | | std | 9.37 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 58.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3652173913043478 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere outside, a curry house" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 57.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She was still in her" | | 1 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 2 | "He smiled with his mouth" | | 3 | "Her stomach dropped and twisted" | | 4 | "She could shut the door." | | 5 | "He always left eventually." | | 6 | "She pulled the door open" | | 7 | "He took in the cluttered" | | 8 | "He set the wine on" | | 9 | "He turned, and the movement" | | 10 | "His voice dropped, the accent" | | 11 | "He walked to the window," | | 12 | "He let the curtain fall" | | 13 | "He was tall enough that" | | 14 | "She gestured at the deadbolts" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 16 | "He reached into his jacket," | | 17 | "His voice was hard now," | | 18 | "She remembered it." | | 19 | "He'd stood in the doorway," |
| | ratio | 0.406 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt rattled when" | | 1 | "She was still in her" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 3 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 4 | "He smiled with his mouth" | | 5 | "Her stomach dropped and twisted" | | 6 | "Rory's grip tightened on the" | | 7 | "The hallway smelled like cumin" | | 8 | "She could shut the door." | | 9 | "He always left eventually." | | 10 | "She pulled the door open" | | 11 | "Lucien crossed the threshold with" | | 12 | "He took in the cluttered" | | 13 | "He set the wine on" | | 14 | "He turned, and the movement" | | 15 | "His voice dropped, the accent" | | 16 | "Rory's hand went to her" | | 17 | "An old scar." | | 18 | "He walked to the window," | | 19 | "The street was alive with" |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Something that kept her awake in this cramped flat, staring at the ceiling, listening to Eva's cat purr in the dark." |
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| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice dropped, the accent thickening at the edges" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.175 | | leniency | 0.351 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |