Run: 2026-04-25-01KQ2JVQYP54S72T6X9A7S6R9J

Run Details

Duration:
30.1s
Cost:
$0.000561
Provider:
DeepSeek

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt rattled when Rory slid it open, and the chain rattled against the doorframe. She was still in her delivery jacket, the smell of MSG and soy sauce clinging to her collar, and Ptolemy weaved between her ankles as she cracked the door. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway light of the Brick Lane tenement, one hand resting on his ivory-handled cane, the other holding a bottle of wine. His platinum hair caught the fluorescents like a warning. One amber eye, one black. He smiled with his mouth but not with either eye. "Evening, Aurora." Her stomach dropped and twisted in the same motion. "Who let you up the stairs?" "The Bangladeshi gentleman in 2B was quite charmed by my French accent." A pause. "I could stand out here and discuss building security, or you could invite me in before someone sees me." Rory's grip tightened on the door edge. The hallway smelled like cumin and damp carpet. She could shut the door. He'd leave. He always left eventually. She pulled the door open and stepped back. "Five minutes. I have a shift." Lucien crossed the threshold with the easy grace of a man who knew exactly how much space he occupied. He took in the cluttered flat in a single glance—the stacks of research notes on the coffee table, the bookshelves bowed under the weight of Eva's grimoires, the litter box in the corner that needed changing. He set the wine on the kitchen counter beside a half-empty mug of tea. "You look well," he said. "I look tired. I've been working double shifts because someone's supernatural contacts keep getting me fired from respectable jobs." He turned, and the movement caught the light, making his mismatched eyes gleam. "That wasn't my doing. That was Silas's territory dispute. I merely recommended you to him." "You recommended me to a bar owner who pays me in under-the-table cash and asks me to ignore shots fired in the back alley." "I recommended you to the safest employer I know." His voice dropped, the accent thickening at the edges. "You think I don't know what happened with Evan? You think I didn't see the marks?" Rory's hand went to her wrist, where the crescent scar sat beneath the cuff of her jacket. An old scar. Not from Evan. But the motion was a tell, and Lucien's gaze tracked it. "That's not why you're here," she said. "No." "Then what?" He walked to the window, parted the cheap curtain with two fingers, and looked down at Brick Lane. The street was alive with late-night kebab shops and the rumble of the last tube trains. Ptolemy jumped onto the windowsill and pressed his head against Lucien's hand. The bastard cat had never done that for anyone. "You remember the job in Marseille?" Lucien asked. "I remember you told me it would be simple." "It was simple. Until it wasn't." He let the curtain fall and faced her. "The object we retrieved—the Black Strop—was meant for a client in Geneva. He died three days ago. Throat cut, eyes removed, his penthouse turned into a slaughterhouse." Rory folded her arms. "I'm sorry for your business associate, but I haven't touched anything occult since I left London. I deliver dumplings. I clean grease traps. I stay away from people like you." "You stayed away from me. There's a difference." The words hung between them, heavy as smoke. Lucien crossed the room in four strides, close enough that she could smell the expensive cologne beneath the clove cigarettes, the cedar and something darker beneath. He was tall enough that she had to tilt her chin to meet his gaze. Up close, the black eye looked like a sinkhole, a door to somewhere that didn't follow human physics. "The same people who killed Morillon are in London," he said. "They're looking for the Strop, and the only name they have linking it to anyone still breathing is the courier who transported it from the docks to the rendezvous point." "Me." "You." Rory's pulse hammered in her throat, but she kept her voice flat. "So you came to warn me. How chivalrous. Consider me warned. Door's that way." "I came to offer you protection." "I have protection." She gestured at the deadbolts on the door. "Those won't stop what's coming. You know that." "What I know is that you disappeared for six months. No call, no message, not even a crow with a letter tied to its leg. I thought you were dead." Her voice cracked on the last word, and she hated herself for it. Lucien's jaw tightened. The composure flickered, just for a second, and she saw something raw beneath the tailored suit and the slicked-back hair. "I was in the Badlands," he said. "There's no reception. No postal service. I crawled out of a pit in the Empyrean Wastes with a broken rib and a demon price on my head, and the first thing I did when I reached a working phone was call your old number. It was disconnected." "You could have found me." "I did find you. Took me three weeks and two favours I'll be repaying for the next decade." He reached into his jacket, and Rory tensed, but he only pulled out a photograph. A man in his fifties, face bloated and bloodless, eyes gone, throat a second mouth. Rory looked away. "That's what they do," Lucien said. "They don't ask questions. They don't negotiate. They take what they want and leave what's not worth keeping." "So what's your plan? Hide me in a safe house? Spirit me away to a cottage in the Cotswolds where you can keep me under glass until the bad men go away?" "I was thinking more along the lines of keeping you where I can see you." "How very romantic." "It's not romance, Aurora. It's survival." His voice was hard now, stripped of charm. "You think I want to drag you back into this world? You think I enjoyed watching you walk away the last time?" She remembered it. The warehouse on the Thames, rain coming down in sheets, her bag packed and her resolve brittle. He'd stood in the doorway, rain soaking his expensive suit, and he'd said *stay*. She'd said *I can't*. And she'd meant it. But she'd also meant something else. Something that kept her awake in this cramped flat, staring at the ceiling, listening to Eva's cat purr in the dark. "You wanted different things," she said quietly. "I wanted you alive. I still want that." Ptolemy meowed and jumped down from the windowsill, rubbing against Rory's leg. The sound broke the tension, and she let out a breath she didn't realize she'd been holding. "Eva's in Paris until Tuesday," she said. "Research trip to the Bibliothèque Nationale." "So we have the flat to ourselves." "Don't read into it." She moved past him to the kitchen, pulled the cork from the wine bottle with her teeth, and poured two glasses. The cheap red stained the porcelain like blood. Lucien took the glass she offered. His fingers brushed hers, deliberate or accidental—with him, you could never tell. "Two days," he said. "If they find you before Tuesday, we move you to a safe location. If they don't, you can go back to pretending I don't exist." "Fine." "One condition." "Of course there's a condition." "I stay here. On the couch. You're not leaving my sight until this resolves." Rory set her wine glass down, the stem clicking against the counter. The flat felt smaller now, the walls pressing in, the familiar spaces suddenly full of his presence—his scent, his heat, the weight of his attention. "And if I say no?" "Then I'll stand guard in the hallway. The gentleman in 2B already likes me. We'll play chess and share war stories." She laughed, and it surprised her so much she covered her mouth with her hand. Lucien's lips curved, and this time the smile reached both eyes. "You're insufferable," she said. "I've been called worse." He raised his glass. "To complicated arrangements." Rory lifted her glass, the wine catching the light, and tried to remember if she'd ever been able to say no to him. She hadn't. They drank. Ptolemy meowed again. Somewhere outside, a curry house door banged open, and the smell of cumin and diesel drifted through the crack in the window. Lucien shrugged off his jacket, draped it over the back of Eva's reading chair; and sat down on the couch like he'd always been there. Like the last six months had been a blink, a breath, a pause between notes in a song they'd never finished playing.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.298
leniency0.596
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.035
93.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1454
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1454
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"porcelain"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"flickered"
4"charm"
5"resolve"
6"tension"
7"porcelain"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1449
ratio0.002
matches
0"stay"
1"I can't"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount829
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Ptolemy4
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Eva3
Evan1
Lucien11
Thames1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Thames"
globalScore0.837
windowScore0.833
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like cumin and damp carpet"
1"looked like a sinkhole, a door to somewhe"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1449
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean20.7
std17.07
cv0.825
sampleLengths
045
151
22
39
46
533
626
78
86
969
105
1119
1228
1324
1434
1534
167
171
182
1955
208
219
2241
2334
248
258
2659
2741
281
291
3026
316
3211
338
3443
3523
3654
375
3848
393
4024
4132
4215
433
4436
4538
464
4727
487
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
43.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences115
ratio0.035
matches
0"He took in the cluttered flat in a single glance—the stacks of research notes on the coffee table, the bookshelves bowed under the weight of Eva's grimoires, the litter box in the corner that needed changing."
1"His fingers brushed hers, deliberate or accidental—with him, you could never tell."
2"The flat felt smaller now, the walls pressing in, the familiar spaces suddenly full of his presence—his scent, his heat, the weight of his attention."
3"Lucien shrugged off his jacket, draped it over the back of Eva's reading chair; and sat down on the couch like he'd always been there."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount836
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02751196172248804
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005980861244019139
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.6
std9.37
cv0.744
sampleLengths
016
129
227
39
45
510
62
79
86
914
1019
117
128
135
142
154
168
176
1819
1936
2014
215
2219
2313
2415
2524
2618
2716
2817
293
303
3111
327
331
342
3518
3616
3712
389
398
409
4114
4227
434
4430
458
468
4726
4815
4918
58.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3652173913043478
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners42
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Somewhere outside, a curry house"
ratio0.016
57.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences64
matches
0"She was still in her"
1"His platinum hair caught the"
2"He smiled with his mouth"
3"Her stomach dropped and twisted"
4"She could shut the door."
5"He always left eventually."
6"She pulled the door open"
7"He took in the cluttered"
8"He set the wine on"
9"He turned, and the movement"
10"His voice dropped, the accent"
11"He walked to the window,"
12"He let the curtain fall"
13"He was tall enough that"
14"She gestured at the deadbolts"
15"Her voice cracked on the"
16"He reached into his jacket,"
17"His voice was hard now,"
18"She remembered it."
19"He'd stood in the doorway,"
ratio0.406
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences64
matches
0"The third deadbolt rattled when"
1"She was still in her"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His platinum hair caught the"
4"He smiled with his mouth"
5"Her stomach dropped and twisted"
6"Rory's grip tightened on the"
7"The hallway smelled like cumin"
8"She could shut the door."
9"He always left eventually."
10"She pulled the door open"
11"Lucien crossed the threshold with"
12"He took in the cluttered"
13"He set the wine on"
14"He turned, and the movement"
15"His voice dropped, the accent"
16"Rory's hand went to her"
17"An old scar."
18"He walked to the window,"
19"The street was alive with"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Something that kept her awake in this cramped flat, staring at the ceiling, listening to Eva's cat purr in the dark."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His voice dropped, the accent thickening at the edges"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.175
leniency0.351
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.0493%