Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6Z3KDVJKW0J9Q46CAAQCG4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 38s
Cost:
$0.016014
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the green neon sign, fracturing the light into bleeding shards across the wet pavement. Rory pushed through the heavy oak doors of The Raven's Nest. She shook water from her jacket, the damp fabric clinging to her shoulders. The bar smelled of spilled stout, lemon polish, and old paper. Silas stood behind the mahogany counter, his silver signet ring catching the low amber light as he wiped a pint glass. He nodded once, a silent acknowledgment, then turned to restock the top shelf. His left leg dragged through a slow, familiar arc as he pivoted. Rory took a stool at the far end, away from the clustered tables. She unrolled her wrists, checking the pulse points. The crescent scar on her left wrist stood pale against her skin. She traced it once, then stilled her hand. Boots scuffed against the floorboards behind her. A shadow fell across the scarred wood of the bartop. He stepped into the light. Rory turned. The name hung in the air, unfamiliar in that mouth. He stood taller than she remembered. The soft jawline from their university days had sharpened, carved by years she had not watched. His coat was wool, expensive, damp at the hem. His eyes scanned her face, searching for the girl with the dog-eared legal texts and the nervous laugh. Rory. He dragged a stool closer. The metal legs scraped against the floor. He sat. His hands rested on his knees, knuckles white, fingers stained with ink or something darker. He leaned in. The leather of his jacket creaked. I heard you left Cardiff. Heard you vanished. I moved. He reached for the drink Silas had silently slid toward her. He did not touch it. His gaze dropped to her hands. The delivery bags still hung from her shoulder, heavy with canvas and grease-stained takeout boxes. He noticed the way she held herself. Coiled. Ready. You look different. Time does that. Not just time. He turned his palm up. A thin white line cut across his lifeline. He closed his hand. You were going to be a barrister. Right up there with your father. Arguing cases in polished courtrooms. Plans shift. He laughed, a short, brittle sound. He shook his head. The rain outside drummed a steady rhythm against the windowpanes. Maps lined the walls, edges curled, continents shifted to match old borders. Black-and-white photographs watched them from brass frames, faces frozen in silent judgment. I read about the firm. He kept his eyes on her collarbone, avoiding the bright blue of her gaze. They folded. Half the partners indicted. The rest scattered. I was not part of that firm. You were meant to be. He finally met her eyes. The air between them thickened. He swallowed. I waited. In the library. On the steps of the law building. I thought you would call. After Evan. Her fingers tightened around the rim of her glass. The condensation soaked into her palm. She kept her voice level. Flat. Unmoving. You should not have waited. Why not. Because I was not staying. He leaned back. The stool groaned. He pulled a silver case from his coat, flipped it open, and retrieved a cigarette. He lit it without offering one. The flame illuminated the hollows under his cheekbones. He exhaled a long plume toward the ceiling. Smoke curled around the brass fixtures. I took the partnership, he said. Stood over the wreckage they left behind. Picked up the pieces. Pretended it was my ambition. Did it work. He stared into the ash growing at the tip of the cigarette. He flicked it. The gray dust scattered across the wooden bar. He set the case down. It clicked against the surface. I lost the girl who used to quote Blackstone at me over cheap coffee. I lost the friend who told me to stop apologizing for taking up space. He turned his head toward the window. The neon green bled into the glass, painting his profile in sickly light. I look in the mirror and see a man who knows how to bury things. Neatly. Efficiently. No one asks questions when you hand them polished answers. Rory shifted her weight. The canvas bag slid down her arm. She caught it before it hit the floor. Her movements were precise. Practiced. You sound bitter. I sound honest. He crushed the cigarette into an ashtray. He ground it down until the filter tore. You left, and the rot set in. I covered it with better suits. Better words. But the foundation cracked. I still hear the floorboards creak at night. I still see the empty chair in the seminar room where you used to sit. She unsnapped the top pocket of her bag. Pulled out a folded paper map of central London. She spread it out over the bar. Her fingertip traced a route through Soho. Past the river. Up through the narrow streets. I do not live in the past, Dylan. I know. That is why it hurts. He reached across the bar. His hand hovered. He pulled it back. Rested it on his own knee. Do you remember the strike. The one where they locked the gates. You climbed the fence. Tore your sleeve. Laughed until you could not breathe. I remember. Where is she. Rory flexed her left hand. The crescent scar caught the light. She did not hide it. She let him see it. Let him see the calluses on her palms from steering a heavy delivery bike through London traffic. Let him see the steady rhythm of her breathing. Controlled. Unshaken. She had to go. Or I would have gone under. He closed his eyes. A muscle jumped in his jaw. He opened them. The hazel irises looked washed out. Tired. I envied you, he said. When you ran. I hated you for it. Then I hated myself for hating you. I stayed. I got comfortable. Comfort is just another word for slow suffocation. Silas moved behind the counter. He placed a fresh coaster under Rory's glass. His eyes flicked between them. He said nothing. He simply returned to polishing the taps. The movement was slow. Deliberate. You work deliveries now. Dylan asked. His voice dropped. Less accusation. More wonder. Part-time. Pays the rent. Above here. She nodded once. And the law. The law does not pay rent. The law takes pieces of you. One by one. Until you are just a ghost in a tailored suit. She gestured to his coat. His posture. The ink stains on his fingers. You know that. He did not answer. He picked up his drink. Swallowed half of it in one go. The glass clicked against the wood. He reached into his inner pocket. Drew out a folded envelope. Thick paper. Watermarked. He slid it across the bar. It stopped against her map. I am leaving the firm. Tomorrow. Selling my share. Starting over. Somewhere quiet. Without the noise. Rory stared at the envelope. She did not touch it. Why bring it here. Because you were the only one who ever told me the truth. Even when I did not want to hear it. Even when it cost me. He rubbed his thumb over his signet ring, mimicking the motion Silas made. A habit picked up from watching the old man. I need to know I did not fail. Completely. You did not. Prove it. She picked up the envelope. The paper felt heavy. Cold. She held it between them. The neon light shifted, casting long shadows across the bar. The photographs on the walls seemed to lean in. Listening. You are awake now, she said. That is enough. He let out a breath he had been holding for years. His shoulders dropped. The tension bled from his neck. He nodded. Once. Slow. Soho suits you. It is just a place. Is it. He tilted his head. Studied the lines around her eyes. The new steadiness in her stance. You look like someone who knows how to navigate the dark without flinching. Experience teaches. He stood. The stool scraped away. He pulled his coat tight. Damp wool brushed his boots. He looked down at her. Really looked. Not for the past. For the present. If you ever cross paths with my old partner. Do not take his calls. He will sell you out to save a decimal on a spreadsheet. Noted. He turned toward the door. His hand found the brass handle. He paused. Did not look back. Fix your sleeve. The stitching is coming loose. She glanced down. The canvas rip. Dark thread hanging. She had not noticed it tear during the run. She had not bothered with it. She watched his silhouette disappear into the rain-slicked street. The green neon flared through the window. Silas set a bottle down. The clink echoed in the quiet bar. Rory folded the envelope. Slid it into her bag. She picked up her glass. The whiskey sat warm. She did not drink. She just held it. Felt the weight. Felt the silence settle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"comfortable"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"navigate"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulse"
2"traced"
3"scanned"
4"flicked"
5"weight"
6"comfortable"
7"tension"
8"navigate"
9"echoed"
10"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences268
matches(empty)
94.88% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount8
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences268
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences268
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1509
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"I took the partnership, he said."
1"I envied you, he said."
2"You are awake now, she said."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1509
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.8
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff1
Silas5
Evan1
Blackstone1
London2
Soho2
Dylan2
Rory9
You12
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Evan"
3"Dylan"
4"Rory"
5"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1509
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences268
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean23.58
std25.59
cv1.085
sampleLengths
0139
122
261
31
438
58
62
746
83
93
1038
112
1244
1328
147
1536
1622
175
182
195
2049
2122
223
23108
2424
253
2660
2739
288
2950
302
313
3249
3310
3420
3533
3633
3713
384
392
403
413
4241
4347
4416
4510
464
4757
483
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences268
matches
0"were meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs323
matches
0"was not staying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences268
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1515
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.0231023102310231
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005940594059405941
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences268
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences268
mean5.63
std3.69
cv0.655
sampleLengths
017
111
213
311
421
513
612
713
88
912
108
117
1210
135
142
1510
166
1716
189
1918
201
215
227
232
2415
253
266
275
283
292
3011
315
326
3315
347
351
361
373
383
393
405
418
424
437
446
455
462
476
484
4910
53.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.3694029850746269
totalSentences268
uniqueOpeners99
15.22% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences219
matches
0"Then I hated myself for"
ratio0.005
19.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount110
totalSentences219
matches
0"She shook water from her"
1"He nodded once, a silent"
2"His left leg dragged through"
3"She unrolled her wrists, checking"
4"She traced it once, then"
5"He stepped into the light."
6"He stood taller than she"
7"His coat was wool, expensive,"
8"His eyes scanned her face,"
9"He dragged a stool closer."
10"His hands rested on his"
11"He leaned in."
12"I heard you left Cardiff."
13"He reached for the drink"
14"He did not touch it."
15"His gaze dropped to her"
16"He noticed the way she"
17"You look different."
18"He turned his palm up."
19"He closed his hand."
ratio0.502
78.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount167
totalSentences219
matches
0"Rain lashed against the green"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"She shook water from her"
3"The bar smelled of spilled"
4"Silas stood behind the mahogany"
5"He nodded once, a silent"
6"His left leg dragged through"
7"Rory took a stool at"
8"She unrolled her wrists, checking"
9"The crescent scar on her"
10"She traced it once, then"
11"Boots scuffed against the floorboards"
12"A shadow fell across the"
13"He stepped into the light."
14"The name hung in the"
15"He stood taller than she"
16"The soft jawline from their"
17"His coat was wool, expensive,"
18"His eyes scanned her face,"
19"He dragged a stool closer."
ratio0.763
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences219
matches
0"Because I was not staying."
1"Because you were the only"
2"Even when I did not"
3"Even when it cost me."
4"If you ever cross paths"
ratio0.023
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.9543%