Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6Z47WQZTK0M2Y06C3KNRP4

Run Details

Duration:
2m 49s
Cost:
$0.027364
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign bled through the frosted glass, casting long jaundiced fingers across the floorboards of The Raven's Nest. Dust motes drifted in the shafts of light, swirling around the ankles of barstools that had absorbed the sweat and secrets of the Soho night. Silas Blackwood moved behind the mahogany counter with the economy of a man conserving resources. His left knee clicked, a dry stone against flint, with every pivot. He ignored the ache, focusing on the circular motion of the rag against the wood. The silver signet ring on his right hand flashed once in the low glow before he slid his hand into his apron pocket. The bell above the door chimed. A measured toll, not the frantic jangle of a drunkard. The sound sliced through the ambient hum of the empty room. Silas paused, the rag hovering over a stain that wouldn't yield. Footsteps approached. Soft soles on hardwood. A cadence he recognized from a decade of shadows before the Prague street turned to ash. Silas straightened his spine until his vertebrae popped. He looked up. Maren stood in the halo of the neon. Time had carved her down to the wire. The curve that once softened her jawline had evaporated, leaving angles sharp enough to draw blood. Her hair, once a riot of auburn that defied regulation, was shorn close to the skull. The scar tissue along her right ear stood pale and puckered, a souvenir from a bullet that had whispered past. She wore a coat of heavy wool, the collar turned up to hide a throat that still bore the ghost of a silk scarf. "You kept the maps." Her voice held the raw friction of gravel dragged over concrete. The soprano lilt she'd used to sing codes over ham radios was gone, burned away by smoke and silence. Silas nodded toward the walls, lined with black-and-white photographs of borders that no longer existed. Photographs of men with hollow eyes, women with scarred hands, cities reduced to rubble. He had hung them not as trophies but as warnings. Every frame held a name he couldn't speak. "Maps don't change. The world does. Easier to track what's lost." Maren slid onto the nearest stool. The wood groaned under her weight. She didn't lean back. Her hands rested on the bar, fingers splayed. Silas noted the tremor in her left hand, a fine vibration that hadn't been there during the Prague drop. That hand used to be stone. Now it betrayed her with every breath. "Whiskey." She stared at a water ring on the counter. "Undiluted. The burn stuff. None of the honey you pour for the tourists." Silas turned. He grabbed the bottle of dark amber liquid from the bottom shelf, the dust thick on the label. The liquid swirled inside, catching the light like trapped spirits. He poured until the neck of the bottle touched the glass rim. He slid it across the wood. It stopped inches from her trembling fingers. "You're shaking." "Draft." Maren wrapped her right hand around the glass, her knuckles whitening. She used the strong hand to cage the weak one. A habit of containment. "The door doesn't seal." "The door seals fine. It's the knee. The damp gets in first." "How are you, Si?" The question hung in the air, heavy and static-charged. It wasn't a greeting. It was an autopsy. Silas leaned against the back bar, the wood digging into his shoulder blades. He traced the rim of a coaster until the cardboard buckled under his thumb. The photographs on the wall seemed to lean in. "I polish glass. I listen to lies from men who think they're the first to walk through that door. I wake up when the rain starts and my leg remembers the fall." "You sound bitter." "I sound accurate." Maren took a swallow. The glass clinked against her teeth. She closed her eyes, breathing in the burn. When she opened them, the hazel irises were muddy, ringed with red. "Berlin." "Berlin is a city. I prefer the truth." "You were in Berlin three months ago. The wire crossed. I saw the echo." Silas's face remained a mask of indifference, but his grip on the coaster tightened further. "People with my face show up on cameras all the time. Shadows and coincidences keep the economy running." "You checked the drop." Maren's voice sharpened, the rust burning away to reveal the steel beneath. "You went to the safe house near the Brandenburg. You stood on the corner for four minutes. You lit a cigarette and never smoked it. Just held it." "Curiosity is a disease." "So is loyalty. It killed you." "It kept you alive. Or did you forget who pulled the pin on that grenade in the courtyard?" Maren's gaze flickered to the scar on her ear. The silence stretched, taut as a tripwire. The green neon buzzed, a low electric drone that vibrated in the teeth. "I remember." She swirled the whiskey, watching the vortex form. "I remember you stayed behind. I remember the scream. I also remember you told me to run. You made the choice for both of us. You think that makes you noble? It makes you a tyrant. You decided my life was worth more than yours. You didn't ask." Silas pushed off the bar. He walked around the counter, his limp pronounced, a hitch in the step that marked the rhythm of his arrival. He stopped two feet from her. Close enough to smell the stale tobacco and the faint, medicinal tang of antiseptic that clung to her coat. "I made the only choice available. The file said you were compromised. If I let you stay, they would have broken you. I broke my leg. You kept your soul." "My soul." Maren laughed, a short, barking sound devoid of humor. She reached into her pocket and tossed a small object onto the bar. It skittered across the wood and stopped against Silas's hand. A pin. Silver, tarnished, shaped like a raven with a broken wing. Silas looked down. The metal was cold. He remembered the bench in Prague where he'd pinned that badge to her lapel. Morning steam rose from coffee cups. The unspoken words had hung between them like smoke. He could have asked her to stay. He could have thrown the badge in the Thames and walked away. He chose the mission. He chose the limp. He chose the silence. "I sold the agency," Maren said. "Three years ago. I walked out with a pension and a file full of names. I burned the file. I bought a cottage in Cornwall. Stone walls. No signal. I tried to live like a civilian. I bake. I knit. But the oven timer sounds like a detonator. The yarn feels like wire. You pulled me out of the fire, Si, but you didn't burn the match. I'm still waiting for the explosion." "You built a house on a fault line and wondered why the walls cracked." "I tried." Her voice cracked. The steel failed. "I had a garden. I planted roses. Red ones. The kind you liked. They died. The soil was too poor. Or maybe my hands were too rough. I killed them, Si. Just like I killed everything else. I tried to be Maren, the woman who sleeps until noon. But every time the wind hits the eaves, I check the locks. Every time a car backfires, I reach for a weapon that isn't there." She downed the rest of the whiskey. The glass hit the bar with a final thud. "I came back," she whispered, "to see if you were still here. To see if there was a place where the noise stopped." Silas picked up the pin. He turned it over in his fingers, the edges biting into his flesh. He looked at her face. Beneath the sharp angles and the tremors, he saw the girl who had stood under the rain in Cardiff, laughing as she tried to steal his lighter. He saw the partner who had dragged him through the rubble. He saw the woman who had become a stranger in her own skin. "The noise never stops, Maren." He slid the pin back toward her. "You just learn to tune the frequency." "I can't tune it anymore." She stood up. Her legs wavered, locking her knees to hold her upright. "It's too loud." She buttoned her coat. The wool rasped against the wool. She turned to the door, her silhouette framing against the green light. "Maren." She paused, one hand on the latch. She didn't turn back. "Don't." "Where will you go?" "North. Further north. Where the maps end." The door swung open. The night air rushed in, cold and smelling of wet pavement and exhaust. The bell chimed its measured toll. Silas remained statue-stiff. The door clicked shut. The bar settled back into its silence. He looked at the stool. The glass remained, a smear of lipstick on the rim, the dregs evaporating into nothing. He didn't clean it. He reached under the counter and pulled a leather notebook. He opened it to a page filled with names. He found Maren. He didn't cross it out. He drew a line through it, then stopped. His finger hovered over the word, trembling slightly. He closed the book. The leather cover creaked. Outside, the neon buzzed. Inside, the green light pulsed like a slow, dying heart. Silas traced the border on the wall map where the ink faded to white, his fingernail scratching the paper until the edge began to peel.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1600
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"measured"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"traced"
count2
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"mask of indifference"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"wavered"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"footsteps"
2"silk"
3"lilt"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"charged"
7"traced"
8"echo"
9"mask of indifference"
10"flickered"
11"electric"
12"vibrated"
13"unspoken"
14"wavered"
15"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1600
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1107
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Prague3
Silas14
Maren9
Thames1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Maren"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Thames"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.868
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.625
wordCount1600
matches
0"not as trophies but as warnings"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"pinned that badge"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean32.65
std29.69
cv0.909
sampleLengths
0110
138
222
311
492
534
658
756
823
955
102
1130
1212
134
1417
1568
163
173
1830
191
208
2114
2233
2344
244
256
2618
2729
2858
2950
3030
3134
3212
3367
3479
3514
3681
3716
3823
3974
4019
4121
4222
431
4412
454
467
4723
48128
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1111
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017101710171017102
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009000900090009
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean10.88
std10.14
cv0.931
sampleLengths
020
125
215
312
415
523
66
710
811
911
102
114
1216
138
143
158
168
1716
1816
1920
2024
2115
2219
2315
2414
2510
268
2711
286
296
304
318
3219
336
347
3510
3613
372
3818
3910
4012
416
427
432
4412
4510
464
474
4812
494
33.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.272108843537415
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences114
matches
0"His left knee clicked, a"
1"He ignored the ache, focusing"
2"He looked up."
3"Her hair, once a riot"
4"She wore a coat of"
5"Her voice held the raw"
6"He had hung them not"
7"She didn't lean back."
8"Her hands rested on the"
9"She stared at a water"
10"He grabbed the bottle of"
11"He poured until the neck"
12"He slid it across the"
13"It stopped inches from her"
14"She used the strong hand"
15"It wasn't a greeting."
16"It was an autopsy."
17"He traced the rim of"
18"She closed her eyes, breathing"
19"She swirled the whiskey, watching"
ratio0.456
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences114
matches
0"The green neon sign bled"
1"Dust motes drifted in the"
2"Silas Blackwood moved behind the"
3"His left knee clicked, a"
4"He ignored the ache, focusing"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"The bell above the door"
7"A measured toll, not the"
8"The sound sliced through the"
9"Silas paused, the rag hovering"
10"A cadence he recognized from"
11"Silas straightened his spine until"
12"He looked up."
13"Maren stood in the halo"
14"Time had carved her down"
15"The curve that once softened"
16"Her hair, once a riot"
17"The scar tissue along her"
18"She wore a coat of"
19"Her voice held the raw"
ratio0.93
43.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Now it betrayed her with"
ratio0.009
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Dust motes drifted in the shafts of light, swirling around the ankles of barstools that had absorbed the sweat and secrets of the Soho night."
1"Her hair, once a riot of auburn that defied regulation, was shorn close to the skull."
2"Silas noted the tremor in her left hand, a fine vibration that hadn't been there during the Prague drop."
3"He walked around the counter, his limp pronounced, a hitch in the step that marked the rhythm of his arrival."
4"Beneath the sharp angles and the tremors, he saw the girl who had stood under the rain in Cardiff, laughing as she tried to steal his lighter."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Maren wrapped, her knuckles whitening"
1"Maren's voice sharpened, the rust burning away to reveal the steel beneath"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Maren laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.103
81.0924%