Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZA5MMRMXXFKAW62NG5EXW

Run Details

Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.016454
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic click. Rory stepped into the narrow hallway. Lucien stood on the landing, rain slicking the shoulders of his charcoal wool coat. Water beads gathered at the tips of his platinum hair. He held the ivory-handled cane steady against the damp stone floor. One amber eye caught the dim bulb. The other swallowed the light. He did not move. She kept her weight on the balls of her feet. The chain lock hung between them. You look like hell. Lucien exhaled. His gaze tracked past her shoulder into the flat. Stacks of paper climbed the walls. A tabby cat stretched along a bookshelf. Three deadbolts still secured the door behind him. I needed to see you. Rory’s fingers tightened on the edge of the door. The crescent scar on her left wrist burned. She remembered the exact shade of his stare the night she walked away. Remembered the weight of his hands on her waist. Remembered the silence that followed. You show up at one in the morning. You look like you rolled out of a gutter. And you tell me you needed to see me. He stepped forward. The hinge groaned. She did not close the door. He caught the scent of old paper and cardamom. His cane tapped once against the threshold. I found what we were looking for. Rory shook her head. The words landed like stones in shallow water. We are not a we. Not anymore. You made that clear when you left the warehouse. When you let the men walk. Lucien’s jaw tightened. He shifted his weight. The wool of his suit pulled across broad shoulders. He reached into his coat pocket. Pulled out a leather folio. Tapped it against his thigh. They had leverage. I bought time. By making a deal. By keeping you breathing. Rory’s breath hitched. She crossed her arms. The fabric of her shirt strained against her ribs. Ptolemy leapt down from the shelves. Rubbed his flank against Lucien’s polished shoe. The cat purred. A low, rumbling sound that filled the narrow space. You always did care more about the job. I cared about the outcome. The outcome left me standing alone in the rain. Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers. The amber side caught the hallway light. The black side held still. He stepped inside. The door swung shut behind him. His shoulder brushed hers. Warmth radiated through the wool. She did not move away. I came back. Because you lost your leverage. Because I could not stay away. Rory turned her head. His face hovered inches from hers. She traced the line of his jaw. The stubble along his cheek cast shadows. She remembered how those hands felt wrapped around her wrists. How his breath had felt against her neck. How the silence had fractured them. You left without a word. I left to keep you safe. You left to keep yourself clean. Lucien’s free hand rose. Fingers hovered near her jaw. Stopped. Dropped back to his side. His cane tapped twice against the floorboards. You think I wanted to walk away. I know you did. You stood there while they counted the money. You did not even look back. I looked back. Every step of the way. Rory’s chest tightened. She stepped closer. The space between them vanished. She could see the pulse jumping in his throat. Could smell the rain and sandalwood and something sharper, something like ozone and burnt sugar. His demon blood hummed in the air. Her skin prickled. Say it then. Say what. Why you really left. Lucien’s gaze dropped to her mouth. Lingered. Tracked back up to her eyes. His fingers twitched at his sides. Because I knew I would not let you go. Rory’s breath caught. She pressed her forehead against his chest. Felt the steady thrum of his heart. Felt the rigid line of his shoulders. Felt the warmth seeping through the charcoal wool. Her hands slid up his coat. Found the lapels. Pulled him down. He did not resist. His free hand caught her hip. Squeezed. Drew her flush against him. The cane clattered to the floor. His fingers tangled in her black hair. Tilted her head back. His mouth hovered over hers. Waiting. Asking. She closed the distance. Heat flared. Tongues met. Teeth scraped. A low sound tore from his throat. Her fingers dug into his coat. His other arm wrapped around her waist. Pulled her harder against him. The floorboards groaned. Paper rustled in the stacks. Ptolemy yawned on the rug. Lucien broke the kiss. Rested his forehead against hers. Breath came ragged. I still have the folio. Rory’s chest heaved. Her thumb brushed his lower lip. Wiped away a bead of moisture. Put it on the table. He stepped back. Grabbed the leather folder from the counter. Slid it onto a stack of receipts. Turned back. Closed the distance again. His hands found her waist. Dug into the fabric. Pulled her in. You stayed. I always stay. His mouth found her neck. Teeth grazed the sensitive skin below her ear. She gasped. Fingers fisted in his hair. He kissed lower. Found the pulse point. Sucked gently. She arched back. The chain lock on the door rattled from the draft. Lucien pulled back. Cupped her face. Thumbs traced her cheekbones. I will not leave again. Rory’s lips parted. Her bright blue eyes darkened. She pressed her palm flat against his chest. Felt the heat rising under the wool. Do not promise what you cannot keep. I am not promising. I am telling you. He leaned in. Kissed her again. Deeper this time. Slower. His tongue claimed her mouth. Her hands slid down his arms. Found the ivory handle of his cane. Pushed it aside. Wrapped her arms around his neck. Pulled him into the bedroom. The door clicked shut behind them. Rain fell outside. The flat stayed still. The paper stacks held their breath. She guided them toward the edge of the narrow mattress. His hands moved to the buttons of his coat. Fumbled. Shrugged the wool free. It hit the floor with a heavy thud. His shirt followed. Heat radiated from his skin. The faint shimmer of a scar traced his collarbone. She recognized the mark. Recognized the night he took it for her. You kept bleeding on my floor that night. You kept stitching me up with shaking hands. Rory’s thumbs traced the ridge of muscle along his ribs. Felt the tension coiling under his skin. His gaze dropped to the small crescent scar on her left wrist. His fingers brushed the skin. Light as a breath. You never let me see this one before. You were not looking. I am looking now. Her pulse jumped under his touch. She caught his wrist. Pressed his palm flat against her chest. Felt the frantic rhythm beneath her ribs. His breath hitched. His eyes darkened. The black iris swallowed the amber whole. He leaned down. His mouth found the hollow of her throat. Sucked. Bitten gently. She arched into him. Fingers dug into his shoulders. Nails scored lines through the linen. He broke away. Stared down at her. The room held its breath. Rain drummed against the windowpane. Tell me to stop. Rory shook her head. Her hair spilled across his forearms. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his. Not a chance. He lifted her. Carried her to the bed. Lowered her onto the thin mattress. Followed her down. Knees bracketing her hips. Hands caging her shoulders. His weight settled over her. Warm. Heavy. Certain. She wrapped her legs around his waist. Pulled him close. His mouth met hers. Teeth clicked. Heat flared. Breaths tangled. The chain lock on the front door rattled again. A draft swept through the room. He did not break the kiss. His fingers slid beneath her shirt. Traced the curve of her spine. Found the small of her back. Squeezed. She arched into the pressure. Fingers tangled in his slicked-back hair. Pulled. He groaned. The sound vibrated against her lips. He rolled his hips. A hard line pressed against her thigh. She shifted. Met him. The mattress springs groaned. Paper crinkled on the floor. Ptolemy leapt onto the windowsill. Watched. Tail twitched. Lucien pulled back. Just enough. Rested his forehead against hers. Breath came fast. You are sure. I am certain. His mouth claimed hers again. Deeper. Slower. Hungrier. His hands moved to the zipper of her jeans. Fingers worked the metal. Slide down. Fabric parted. Skin met skin. Heat surged. She pushed his shoulders. Guided him down. His weight settled over her. Perfect. Solid. Right. The rain fell harder. The flat held the moment. The folio sat untouched on the counter. The deadbolts stayed fast. Nothing moved except the slow, deliberate slide of flesh against flesh. He paused. Eyes locked. Waiting. Asking. She wrapped her legs tighter around him. Pulled him in. Do not stop. He obeyed. The mattress dipped. The springs protested. His mouth found her jaw. Her neck. Her collarbone. Teeth grazed. Sucked. Bitten. She gasped. Fingers dug into his back. Nails scored lines through sweat-slicked skin. He shifted. Adjusted. Settled. Breath held. Eyes met. Bright blue met heterochromatic dark. The room tightened. The rain fell. The moment stretched. He pushed forward. Resistance met pressure. Heat flared. Breath escaped. The mattress groaned again. Outside, a siren wailed. Inside, the air grew thick. Slow. Deliberate. Rhythm found. Bodies moved. Hands tangled. Lips parted. Words stayed unspoken. The history hung heavy. The attraction burned hotter. Nothing resolved. The scene held. The beat continued.
created_at"2026-04-27T08:01:24.634Z" 4/27/2026, 8:01:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1599
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
highlights
0"really"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1599
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"weight"
count5
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count2
3
word"traced"
count5
4
word"fractured"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count3
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"warmth"
3"traced"
4"fractured"
5"pulse"
6"tension"
7"vibrated"
8"perfect"
9"unspoken"
10"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences339
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences339
filterMatches
0"look"
1"think"
2"know"
3"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences339
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1599
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1599
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Rory11
You16
Pulled8
Ptolemy3
Fingers6
Felt6
Found4
Heat5
Teeth4
Breath4
Sucked3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"You"
3"Pulled"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Fingers"
6"Heat"
7"Teeth"
8"Breath"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences117
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like ozone and burnt sugar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1599
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences339
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean21.32
std23.11
cv1.084
sampleLengths
063
120
24
332
45
544
626
728
87
912
1022
1132
126
134
144
1541
168
175
189
1941
203
215
226
2348
245
256
266
2722
287
2918
308
3145
323
332
344
3519
369
3744
3840
3948
4012
415
4215
435
4435
452
463
4742
4810
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences339
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs348
matches
0"were looking"
1"were not looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences339
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1602
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.02871410736579276
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0018726591760299626
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences339
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences339
mean4.72
std2.54
cv0.537
sampleLengths
010
16
214
310
411
57
65
74
810
96
104
112
129
136
147
158
165
179
188
1913
209
215
228
239
249
253
263
276
289
297
307
314
328
335
342
359
366
373
384
399
406
415
425
433
443
454
464
473
484
499
47.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences339
uniqueOpeners113
12.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences272
matches
0"Bright blue met heterochromatic dark."
ratio0.004
61.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount108
totalSentences272
matches
0"He held the ivory-handled cane"
1"He did not move."
2"She kept her weight on"
3"You look like hell."
4"His gaze tracked past her"
5"I needed to see you."
6"She remembered the exact shade"
7"You show up at one"
8"You look like you rolled"
9"He stepped forward."
10"She did not close the"
11"He caught the scent of"
12"His cane tapped once against"
13"I found what we were"
14"We are not a we."
15"You made that clear when"
16"He shifted his weight."
17"He reached into his coat"
18"They had leverage."
19"I bought time."
ratio0.397
90.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount201
totalSentences272
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory stepped into the narrow"
2"Lucien stood on the landing,"
3"Water beads gathered at the"
4"He held the ivory-handled cane"
5"The other swallowed the light."
6"He did not move."
7"She kept her weight on"
8"The chain lock hung between"
9"You look like hell."
10"His gaze tracked past her"
11"Stacks of paper climbed the"
12"A tabby cat stretched along"
13"I needed to see you."
14"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
15"The crescent scar on her"
16"She remembered the exact shade"
17"You show up at one"
18"You look like you rolled"
19"He stepped forward."
ratio0.739
55.15% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences272
matches
0"Because you lost your leverage."
1"Because I could not stay"
2"Because I knew I would"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.4115%