Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZBSZMG5VZ62X233VBAPFW

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Duration:
1m 41s
Cost:
$0.016682
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
They stepped through the gap in the oaks and the atmosphere thickened. Not wind. Pressure. Charged air pressed against Rory’s skin like a wet wool blanket. The scent of crushed mint and petrichor flooded her lungs. Ground cover shifted from compacted London mud to a carpet of emerald moss that yielded under her boots. She kept her posture loose. Shoulders down. Weight balanced on the balls of her feet. The silver chain of her pendant lay cold against her sternum until her third step. Heat bloomed beneath the fabric. The crimson stone pulsed once. Twice. A steady rhythm tapping against her ribs. Nyx drifted apace behind her. The shade’s silhouette elongated across the turf, edges fraying into gossamer smoke that refused to settle. Faint violet luminescence bled from where eyes should sit. Wind carried a whisper that sounded like dry reeds scraping over slate. The barrier thins here. You walk on breath and memory. Isolde moved ahead, silver hair trailing over her shoulders like spilled mercury. Her heels never kissed the soil. Wildflowers curled around her ankles, blooming, wilting, blooming again in the span of a single stride. She raised a hand to the left. Ancient oaks twisted outward, their bark carved with spirals that drank the ambient light. Time folded in the grain. Keep to the center path. The roots bite. Rory adjusted her jacket. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched. She flexed her fingers. The pendant’s heat climbed. She watched Isolde’s bare feet hover an inch above the turf. No footprints. Just damp earth that sealed itself behind the half-fae seer. Nyx dissolved into solid form. Long coat brushed against ferns that uncoiled like waking serpents. The shade’s hand passed through a floating seed pod. It shattered into glitter that hung in the air, refusing to fall. Dust motes caught the amber glow filtering through the canopy. The light does not originate from above. Nyx’s voice rode the air, thin and layered. It rises from the soil. Rory knelt. Grass blades shimmered with a faint luminescence. She pressed two fingers to the ground. Cold seeped into her skin. Moisture clung to her fingertips. The earth breathed. A slow, rhythmic expansion. She pulled her hand back. The grass snapped upright, sealing the impression. Isolde stopped at a clearing. Standing stones formed a rough circle. Lichen crusted their surfaces. The center held a basin of black water. Still. Reflecting nothing. Not the sky. Not their faces. Just depth. Step lightly. The glass floor remembers weight. Rory approached the basin. The Heartstone burned against her chest. She unclasped the chain and let it drop into her palm. The gem glowed steady now. Crimson light bled across the water’s surface. Ripples spread outward, slow and deliberate. Beneath the glassy layer, shapes moved. Not fish. Not stones. Silhouettes of wings and antlers and something with too many joints. Nyx leaned over the edge. Shadow spilled from his form like ink in water. The water accepted it without a sound. The shapes below shifted toward the darkness. They recognize their own. Rory snapped her fingers. The light died. She clamped the pendant in her fist. Heat receded. The water calmed. She tucked the stone back under her shirt. The metal left a faint red mark on her palm. What are they waiting for. She nodded toward the stones. Each face bore etchings. A crown of thorns. A set of balanced scales. A mouth open in a silent scream. All worn smooth by centuries of rain that never touched this soil. Echoes. Isolde turned. Lavender eyes caught the ambient glow. They do not ask questions. They answer them before you shape the sound. Nyx circled the basin. Coat tails swept over glowing moss. The shade paused at the third stone. Fingers, elongated and dark, traced the etching of a broken chain. The bark around the stone groaned. A low vibration traveled through the soles of Rory’s boots. Dust shook loose from the canopy. The ward holds. Nyx’s whisper sharpened. But the hinge rusts. Rory moved to Nyx’s side. The etching pulsed under the shade’s touch. Not light. Pressure. A heartbeat matching the pendant’s earlier rhythm. She reached out. Stopped an inch from the stone. Cold radiated from the surface. The air grew thick. Heavy. Like wading through syrup. Isolde stepped between them. Hands raised. Palms flat. Do not pull the thread. The tapestry frays at the edges. Nyx withdrew his hand. The groove sealed shut. The vibration ceased. The air lightened. He stepped back into shape. Solid again. Shadow pooled at his feet. Rory exhaled. Breath fogged in the sudden chill. She rubbed her wrist. The crescent scar burned. Old pain. New warning. She looked past the stones. The clearing opened into a corridor of woven branches. Bioluminescent fungi clung to the wood. Blue. Green. Violet. Light shifted in waves. Tides of color rolling through the canopy. Nyx tilted his head. The path sings. Not wind. Not water. Something older. Isolde moved forward. Silver hair caught the fungal glow. She did not look back. Follow the chorus. The grove decides who walks. Rory followed. Boots sank into mulch that smelled of ozone and crushed mint. The fungi brightened as she passed. Damp soil clung to her soles. She kept her pace steady. Eyes locked on Isolde’s retreating form. Nyx drifted behind, edges blurring with the surrounding dark. The corridor narrowed. Branches arched overhead. Woven tight. A tunnel. The light dimmed. The air cooled. Sweat prickled Rory’s neck. The Heartstone tapped a slow rhythm against her sternum. Once. Twice. Waiting. Nyx stopped. Raised a hand. Silence. Rory froze. Breath held. Ears tuned to the dark. A crunch. Wet. Close. Something dragged itself over roots. Then stopped. Isolde did not turn. Step forward. The watcher hungers for stillness. Rory moved. Boots hit a root. She stumbled. Caught herself. Knees bent. Shoulders square. The fungus flared white. Light washed over the path ahead. A clearing. Wider than the last. Flat stones arranged in a spiral. Center held a pedestal of woven wood. Resting on it sat a bowl of polished obsidian. Dark. Reflective. Empty. Nyx approached the pedestal. Shadow stretched upward. Clung to the rim of the bowl. The shade’s voice dropped to a murmur. The vessel drinks light. And gives back sound. Rory stepped up beside him. The pedestal hummed. Low. Persistent. Vibrations traveled up her legs. She placed a hand on the edge. Wood felt warm. Alive. Grain shifted under her palm. Pulled her fingers inward. She yanked her hand back. Skin tingled. Nerves sparked. Isolde circled the bowl. Hem of her dress brushed the stones. The water inside waits. Not for drink. For name. Nyx leaned closer. Violet eyes narrowed. Names hold weight here. Heavier than stone. Rory wiped her palm on her jeans. Damp skin left a dark smear. She watched the bowl. Nothing reflected. Just depth. She reached into her pocket. Fingers brushed cold metal. The Fae blade. She didn’t draw it. Just felt the weight. Anchored her. Grounded her. The pendant’s heat faded to a steady warmth. Not a warning. A compass. Nyx straightened. The grove breathes in cycles. We walk the inhale. The exhale breaks the path. Isolde raised both hands. Palms up. Fingers splayed. The roots listen. The stones answer. The water remembers. Rory stepped onto the first stone of the spiral. Grass crunched underfoot. She moved to the next. The path wound inward. Toward the pedestal. Toward the bowl. Nyx mirrored her steps. Shadow stretched along the moss. Isolde kept to the outer edge. Silver hair caught the fungal glow. The third stone hummed. Vibrations climbed her spine. She kept walking. Fourth stone. Cold seeped through her soles. Fifth. The air thickened. Taste of copper on her tongue. She stopped at the sixth. Close to the pedestal. Close to Isolde. Close to Nyx. The bowl shifted. Not physically. Sound. A low drone. Like a cello string pulled taut. Then snapped back. Ripples formed in the obsidian surface. Not water. Sand. Fine. Black. Spinning. Slow. Gathering momentum. Nyx stepped forward. Coat brushed the pedestal. The shade’s form thinned. Edges frayed. Whispers curled from his lungs. The glass sings a warning. The boundary tears at the seam. Rory unclenched her jaw. Breathe. Steady. She reached into her pocket again. Fingers wrapped around the handle of the moonsilver blade. Cold metal bit into her skin. She didn’t draw it. Just held it. Grounded. Ready. Isolde stepped closer. Lavender eyes fixed on the spinning sand. The hour bends. The roots remember the old weight. Nyx extended a hand. Shadow poured over the pedestal’s edge. Touched the bowl. The sand stopped. Held. Then rushed outward. Over the wood. Over the stones. Toward their boots. Cold. Dry. Smelling of ash and ozone. Rory stepped back. Heel hit stone. She didn’t look down. Eyes locked on the advancing tide. The pendant warmed. Steady. Calm. Not fear. Focus. Nyx withdrew his hand. The sand halted. Hovered. Waiting. Isolde raised a single finger. The groove holds. The path opens. Rory moved forward. Boots pressed into the sand. It yielded. Firm. Supportive. She stepped onto the pedestal. Wood groaned under her weight. She reached for the bowl. Fingers hovered above the black surface. Cold radiated upward. Numbness crept into her knuckles. She didn’t pull back. Didn’t dive in. Just waited. Listened. The grove held its breath. Nyx shifted to her left. Shadow pooled around her boots. Violet eyes tracked her hand. The glass drinks. The stone answers. Isolde stood at the base of the pedestal. Silver hair caught the fungal light. The hour folds. The seam holds. Rory lowered her hand. Fingers brushed the surface. Sand clung to her skin. Heavy. Real. She closed her eyes. Felt the pulse in the pendant. Matched it to the sand’s rhythm. Opened her eyes. Reached deeper. Into the dark. Into the wait. The sand surged. Coiled around her wrist. Tight. Cold. Pulling. Not down. Inward. The pedestal groaned. The fungi flared white. Isolde’s hands remained raised. Nyx’s form stretched thin, edges dissolving into the rising tide of black grit. Rory kept her fingers pressed against the surface. The metal of the dagger bit into her palm. The chain lay hot against her collarbone. The sand tightened. Pulled. The grove held steady. The path waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1714
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1714
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"weight"
count6
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"echoes"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"etching"
count2
10
word"tapestry"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"whisper"
4"shattered"
5"shimmered"
6"rhythmic"
7"echoes"
8"traced"
9"etching"
10"tapestry"
11"chill"
12"silence"
13"warmth"
14"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched her jaw"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences395
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences395
filterMatches
0"listen"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences395
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1714
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions93
wordCount1714
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory20
London1
Isolde16
Heartstone2
Nyx21
Fae1
Cold7
Shadow6
Fingers6
Violet3
Silver3
Boots3
Close4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Heartstone"
3"Nyx"
4"Cold"
5"Shadow"
6"Fingers"
7"Violet"
8"Boots"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.887
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like dry reeds scraping over slate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1714
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences395
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean32.96
std19.18
cv0.582
sampleLengths
0102
142
210
360
48
543
646
720
845
934
107
1160
1232
1337
1442
1522
1650
1710
1845
1919
2026
2154
2213
2322
2445
2532
266
2720
2811
2955
3029
3144
3220
3313
3458
3516
3617
3748
3843
3933
4029
4136
4219
4336
4424
459
4611
4756
4821
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences395
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs340
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences395
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1715
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
1"lay hot against her"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.018658892128279883
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0011661807580174927
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences395
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences395
mean4.34
std2.81
cv0.648
sampleLengths
012
12
21
311
410
518
65
72
88
915
105
115
121
137
145
1516
169
1712
184
196
2012
216
2216
237
2414
255
265
273
284
298
304
314
3211
332
3410
355
3610
379
3812
3910
407
418
425
432
447
457
465
475
483
494
56.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats27
diversityRatio0.3822784810126582
totalSentences395
uniqueOpeners151
81.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences288
matches
0"Just damp earth that sealed"
1"All worn smooth by centuries"
2"Light washed over the path"
3"Just felt the weight."
4"Then snapped back."
5"Just held it."
6"Then rushed outward."
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences288
matches
0"They stepped through the gap"
1"She kept her posture loose."
2"You walk on breath and"
3"Her heels never kissed the"
4"She raised a hand to"
5"She flexed her fingers."
6"She watched Isolde’s bare feet"
7"It shattered into glitter that"
8"It rises from the soil."
9"She pressed two fingers to"
10"She pulled her hand back."
11"She unclasped the chain and"
12"They recognize their own."
13"She clamped the pendant in"
14"She tucked the stone back"
15"She nodded toward the stones."
16"They do not ask questions."
17"They answer them before you"
18"She reached out."
19"He stepped back into shape."
ratio0.139
65.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount227
totalSentences288
matches
0"They stepped through the gap"
1"The scent of crushed mint"
2"Ground cover shifted from compacted"
3"She kept her posture loose."
4"Weight balanced on the balls"
5"The silver chain of her"
6"Heat bloomed beneath the fabric."
7"The crimson stone pulsed once."
8"A steady rhythm tapping against"
9"Nyx drifted apace behind her."
10"The shade’s silhouette elongated across"
11"Wind carried a whisper that"
12"The barrier thins here."
13"You walk on breath and"
14"Isolde moved ahead, silver hair"
15"Her heels never kissed the"
16"Wildflowers curled around her ankles,"
17"She raised a hand to"
18"Time folded in the grain."
19"The roots bite."
ratio0.788
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences288
matches(empty)
ratio0
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Ground cover shifted from compacted London mud to a carpet of emerald moss that yielded under her boots."
1"Wildflowers curled around her ankles, blooming, wilting, blooming again in the span of a single stride."
2"Ancient oaks twisted outward, their bark carved with spirals that drank the ambient light."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.3826%