Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZD6D25FYHEY0MKSQKN503

Run Details

Duration:
57.7s
Cost:
$0.009500
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Cold air bit through Rory’s jacket. She stepped past the rusted iron gate. The city vanished behind her. Ancient oak trunks rose from the mist, bark carved into standing stones. Wildflowers clung to the damp earth. Petals glowed too bright for November. Frost rimed their edges. Sweet rot lingered in the wet soil. Silver chain rode her collarbone. The Heartstone rested against her sternum. Cool metal. Still stone. She adjusted her delivery harness. Leather straps dug into her shoulders. Empty satchel slapped her hip. “Keep to the markers.” She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb. “Stones line the path. Follow the curve.” Her boots sank into moss. The ground sloped downward. The grove swallowed the distant hum of traffic. No sirens. No engine drone. Just wind threading through dry grass and the soft crush of gravel underfoot. The pendant warmed. Temperature shift crawled up her throat. She pressed a palm to the gem. Crimson stone pulsed once. Steady beat. Second heart. Heat spread through her fingers. “Right where he said.” She dragged a breath through numb lips. “Show me.” A branch snapped. Left side. She turned. Black trunks stood rigid. Pale petals shivered. Copper scent thickened. “Who’s there?” She kept her jaw loose. “I’m not hiding.” Leaves skittered across stone. Rhythm wrong. Too many steps for a fox. Too light for a deer. Rhythm matched human heels on pavement. “I’m not looking for trouble.” She took a step forward. Moss clung to her soles. “Just passing through. Drop left. Map followed. I’m gone by dawn.” The stone flared. Heat seared her palm. She ripped the chain over her head. Crimson gem glowed in her open hand. Faint light bled through her knuckles. Something hummed back. Low. Resonant. Vibrations traveled up her arm. Came from beneath the soil. “Okay.” She wiped sweat from her forehead with her sleeve. “You want this.” Breath brushed her ear. Not wind. Not voice. Air shaped like words. She flinched. Dropped to one knee. Pressed the pendant to the dirt. Ground vibrated. Roots shifted. The wildflowers tilted toward her. Petals uncurled. Black centers stared back. “Stay back.” She stood. Pressed her spine against an oak stone. Bark rough against her jacket. “I got nothing you haven’t already taken.” Shadows detached from the trunks. Tall. Thin. Limbs stretched past natural joints. They did not walk. They slid. Grass flattened without sound. Petals curled inward. “You’re not real.” She gripped the gem. Heat climbed her wrist. “Just tricks of the light. Paranoia after three all-nighters. Exhaustion playing games.” The whisper returned. Closer. Layered. Multiple throats forcing air through split lips. She recognized the cadence. Same rhythm as the underground rattle. Same pitch as a kettle boiling dry. “I came for the drop. Left the coordinates. Followed the map. Gold Empress routing. Check the logs.” A shape stepped into the clearing. Height matched the standing stones. No face. Smooth bark where eyes should sit. Fingers ended in pale thorns. It reached for the pendant. “Back.” She raised the gem. Light flared. The shape halted. Thorns retracted. “You want it. Come and get it.” Air pressure dropped. Ears popped. The wildflowers closed tight. Petals locked over black centers. Silence pressed down. Heavy. Wet. “Talk to me.” She stepped off the moss. Heels hit packed earth. “Name the price. Name the threshold. I’m not leaving empty.” The shape tilted its head. Thorns tapped the ground. One. Two. Three. Rhythm matched a countdown. “Hel portal.” She let the words hang. “Dymas bloodline. That’s why the stone burns. That’s why you track me.” Soil split. Dark water seeped through the cracks. Reflections showed no sky. Only upside-down trees and pale petals. The pendant pulsed faster. Heat scorched her palm. She refused to drop it. “You think I’m easy.” She shifted her weight. Boot heel ground into a root. “You think the grove belongs to you. You think time bends so you can starve me out.” Water rose. Ankles deep. Cold seeped through canvas. The wildflowers shivered. Black centers cracked open. Fine black powder drifted upward. Drifted toward the pendant. “Fuel.” She wiped powder from her cheek. “You burn what’s left in the pockets. You eat the drift. You starve the rest of us.” The shape stepped forward. Water parted around its ankles. No ripples. No sound. It reached again. Thorns hovered inches from the gem. “Look at me.” She raised the stone until the crimson light hit the bark where a face should be. “I see you. I hear you. I’m not running.” Thorns snapped inward. The shape recoiled. Water splashed. Black powder clung to the stones. The pendant cooled slightly. Pulse slowed. “Good.” She kept the light steady. “Stay where you are. I’m counting my steps. I’m walking out. You touch me, I break the chain. You touch the stone, I drop it in the mud. You lose your anchor. I lose my job. Lose something you care about.” The grove held its breath. The wildflowers stayed shut. The standing stones cast long, warped shadows. The pendant glowed steady against her palm. She took a step forward. Boot lifted. Muffled the wet earth. The shape did not move. Water stayed still. Black powder settled on the bark. “Watch me walk.” She dragged her other foot. Heels clicked on stone. “Count it with me. One. Two. Three.” The pendant warmed again. Stronger. Faster. Light bled through her fingers. The ground trembled. Roots groaned beneath the water. The wildflowers shuddered. Petals peeled back. Black centers yawned wide. She stopped. Lowered the gem. Breathed in the copper air. Waited for the next sound. Waited for the next shape to slide from the trunks. Kept her feet planted. Kept her jaw locked. Kept her eyes on the dark water.
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount958
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"pulsed"
2"vibrated"
3"whisper"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"pulse"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences173
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences189
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords958
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount737
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Black"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Thorns"
discoveredNames
Rory1
November1
Heartstone1
Leaves1
Moss1
Breath1
Pressed2
Heat4
Light2
Heels2
Soil1
Boot2
Thorns4
Petals5
Black6
Rhythm3
Water4
Kept3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Leaves"
3"Moss"
4"Breath"
5"Pressed"
6"Heat"
7"Light"
8"Heels"
9"Boot"
10"Thorns"
11"Petals"
12"Rhythm"
13"Water"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount958
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
78.71% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean23.95
std10.19
cv0.425
sampleLengths
053
131
223
335
43
526
613
717
810
923
1026
113
1239
1313
1412
1527
1623
1725
1823
1912
2034
2129
2219
2319
2422
2516
2619
2731
2831
2924
3024
3122
3228
3320
3447
3523
3625
3719
3829
3940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount738
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.024390243902439025
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0027100271002710027
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences189
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences189
mean5.07
std4.1
cv0.808
sampleLengths
06
17
25
312
46
56
64
77
85
96
102
112
125
136
145
1516
167
175
184
198
202
213
2213
233
246
257
264
272
282
295
3011
312
323
332
342
354
363
373
387
393
404
412
426
435
446
4510
465
4711
483
494
84.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.5502645502645502
totalSentences189
uniqueOpeners104
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences131
matches
0"Just wind threading through dry"
1"Too many steps for a"
2"Too light for a deer."
3"Only upside-down trees and pale"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences131
matches
0"She stepped past the rusted"
1"She adjusted her delivery harness."
2"She traced the crescent scar"
3"Her boots sank into moss."
4"She pressed a palm to"
5"She dragged a breath through"
6"She kept her jaw loose"
7"She took a step forward"
8"She ripped the chain over"
9"She wiped sweat from her"
10"They did not walk."
11"She gripped the gem"
12"She recognized the cadence."
13"It reached for the pendant."
14"She raised the gem"
15"She stepped off the moss"
16"She let the words hang"
17"She refused to drop it."
18"She shifted her weight"
19"She wiped powder from her"
ratio0.191
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences131
matches
0"She stepped past the rusted"
1"The city vanished behind her."
2"Wildflowers clung to the damp"
3"Petals glowed too bright for"
4"Frost rimed their edges."
5"The Heartstone rested against her"
6"She adjusted her delivery harness."
7"Leather straps dug into her"
8"She traced the crescent scar"
9"Her boots sank into moss."
10"The ground sloped downward."
11"The grove swallowed the distant"
12"The pendant warmed."
13"Temperature shift crawled up her"
14"She pressed a palm to"
15"Crimson stone pulsed once."
16"Heat spread through her fingers."
17"She dragged a breath through"
18"A branch snapped."
19"Copper scent thickened."
ratio0.687
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences3
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.7118%