Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZFWRQZX5CPRWHQXPZV1A9

Run Details

Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.016788
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic thud. Rory pulled the door inward. The hinges groaned against the damp East London air. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold. Rain streaked the shoulders of his charcoal suit. A water bead clung to the rigid line of his jaw. He held his ivory-handled cane at his side. Platinum hair plastered to his forehead gave him the look of a drowned aristocrat. His left eye caught the hallway light. Amber burned there. The right swallowed it whole. Black. Rory’s grip tightened on the doorframe. Knuckles bleached white. The crescent scar on her left wrist pulsed with a phantom heat. She had not expected him. Not here. Not after the warehouse on Rotherhithe. Not after the blood on her coat and the silence that stretched three weeks. You forgot something. He stepped past her shoulder. The door swung shut behind him. He did not wait for an invitation. His boots tracked muddy water across the warped floorboards. Boxes of old grimoires and loose parchment stacked the narrow hallway. The air smelled of cumin from the curry house below and dried ink. He set the cane against a crate marked with chalk. I have nothing for you. Rory crossed her arms. The wool of her jumper scratched her chin. She watched him move toward the small kitchenette. Muscles shifted beneath the tailored fabric of his jacket. He ran a gloved finger along the rim of a stacked pile of police files. She had left them open on the table. The case notes she used to drown out the nights. You always keep your receipts. He turned. The amber eye narrowed. The black one stayed fixed on her face. He unbuttoned his suit jacket and draped it over the back of a chair. The movement pulled the white shirt taut across his chest. Water beaded on the fabric. He did not remove his tie. He never did until he sat down. This is not a social call. Rory followed him into the cramped living space. A tabby cat curled on the radiator. Ptolemy opened one yellow eye, then closed it again. She stepped over a rolled scroll of star charts. The floorboards creaked under her weight. Lucien picked up a tarnished silver compass from the coffee table. He weighed it in his palm. The glass cracked along one edge. He had broken it during the job. Or she had. Memory refused to settle. It is a retrieval. He set the compass down. The click echoed in the tight room. He stepped closer. The space between them shrank to breathing distance. She could smell rain and bergamot and something sharper underneath. Ozone. The scent of Avaros bleeding through his human half. She held her ground. The scar on her wrist burned. She refused to look away. I told you to leave it. Rory kept her voice level. The words came out flat against the damp walls. She watched his jaw tighten. A muscle jumped under his cheekbone. He reached out. Her skin prickled before his hand even touched her. He brushed a damp strand of black hair behind her ear. The gesture lingered. Calloused fingers traced the line of her cheekbone. She did not flinch. She had spent three weeks practicing how to flinch without showing it. You told me a lot of things. He dropped his hand. The absence of his touch left a cold line across her skin. He turned toward the window. The streetlamp outside cast a sickly yellow glow across the brick wall. Reflections of his silhouette doubled in the glass. Two men. One of them not entirely human. She remembered the feeling of his breath against her neck in that safehouse. The way his teeth had almost grazed her pulse before he pulled away. The way he had left without a word when the sun came up. I had a job to finish. Rory moved to the sideboard. She poured two fingers of amber liquor into a chipped mug. The glass clinked against the wood. She pushed it across the table toward him. He did not move. His reflection watched her in the dark pane. He always watched first. Always calculated. Always found the angle that left him with the upper hand. You had a way out. He finally turned. She kept her hands flat on the table. The edges pressed into the grain. He took a step closer. The floorboards sighed. He leaned over the table. The scent of rain and old paper wrapped around her. His heterochromatic gaze dropped to her mouth. Then back to her eyes. The air grew heavy. Static built along her collarbone. She could taste copper on her tongue. You were supposed to run with me. The words left him in a low rush. French slipped into the sentence. He always did when the control slipped. His hand gripped the edge of the table. Wood fibers splintered under his knuckles. She did not move back. She had spent weeks mapping the space he occupied. Measuring every silence. Replaying every glance in the dark. The attraction sat between them like a live wire. Humming. Waiting for a spark. I stayed. Rory lifted the mug. The liquor burned going down. She set it down hard. The liquid sloshed over the rim. She watched him flinch at the sound. A small crack in the armor. She had spent three weeks waiting for exactly that. She reached across the table. Her fingers found the back of his hand. The glove was still on. She peeled it back. Skin met skin. Warmth ran up her arm. The crescent scar on her wrist aligned with a matching line of pale tissue on his palm. They had pressed their hands together in the ambulance. Promised never to look back. He had looked first. You burned the bridge. He twisted his hand. Her fingers slipped. He captured her wrist. Thumbs pressed into the scar. Heat radiated through her skin. He pulled her forward. The mug tipped. Liquor spread across the table. He did not let go. His breath hitched. The black eye swallowed the light. The amber one flared. He leaned in. The tip of his nose brushed hers. She could feel the tremor in his jaw. The restraint holding him back. The hunger underneath it. I was buying time. Rory kept her voice steady. The words scraped against her throat. She did not pull away. She traced the line of his lower lip with her thumb. He caught her wrist again. Harder. His pulse hammered against her fingertips. Fast. Erratic. Not something she had seen since the night in Marseille. The night before everything fractured. The night they shared a bed and a warning and a promise he broke. Time costs. He released her. Stepped back. The distance felt like a physical blow. He straightened his tie. Smoother. Composed. The mask slid back into place. He picked up his cane. Tapped it once against the floor. The sound cut through the thick air. He turned toward the door. The three deadbolts waited. He did not reach for them. He knew she would not let him leave yet. Not after this. Not after the truth sat bare between them. You left me with the fallout. Rory stepped into his path. Blocked the exit. She kept her shoulders square. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his mismatched ones. She saw the flicker in his chest. The hesitation. He always hesitated when she pushed. When she forced him to look at what he broke. He had told her he was not built for soft things. He had shown her exactly what he was built for. Teeth and shadows and a blade hidden in polished ivory. She remembered the weight of him against her. The way his hands had mapped her spine. The way he had whispered her name in a language she did not know. Then walked out into the rain. I took the hit. He adjusted his grip on the cane. The ivory knob caught the dim light. He did not meet her gaze. He stared at the wall behind her shoulder. A water stain spread across the plaster like a continent. He traced it with his eyes. Avoiding. Always avoiding. She reached up. Pulled the knot of his tie loose. Silk slipped through her fingers. She bunched it in her fist. Pulled him down. His forehead rested against hers. The movement was sudden. Unplanned. She felt the shift in his weight. The way his breath caught. The way his free hand found the hollow of her back. Pressing her closer. Testing the boundary. Breaking it. You always run when the ground shakes. Rory kept her grip tight. The fabric stretched against her knuckles. She felt the vibration in his chest. A low hum. Not quite human. Not entirely anything else. She remembered the taste of his skin. Salt and smoke and something electric. She had spent three weeks denying it. Now her mouth watered at the memory. She shifted her weight. Her thigh brushed his. He did not pull away. His fingers dug into the small of her back. Pulling. Anchoring. The space between them collapsed. I do not run. He broke the contact. Stepped back. The loss of his warmth left her skin cold. He moved to the table. Picked up the tarnished compass again. His thumb rubbed over the cracked glass. He did not look at her. He focused on the object like it held the answers. Like the mechanism could explain why he had come back. Why he had stood in her doorway in the rain. Why his hands shook when he thought she could not see. You left me the files. Rory crossed to the sideboard. She pulled open a drawer. Metal clinked. She tossed a set of keys onto the wood. They spun. Stood upright. The brass caught the light. She watched them settle. She knew what they opened. The storage unit in Shoreditch. The one he had paid for in cash. The one he had told her never to open until he said the word. He had never said it. She had opened it anyway. Found the ledger. The names. The reason he had pushed her away. The reason he had taken the fall. I told you to stay away. He finally looked up. The amber eye burned. The black one stayed flat. Dead weight. She walked to him. Stopped inches from his chest. She reached for his cane. He let her take it. The wood was warm. The mechanism clicked under her fingers. She pressed the release. A thin blade slid free. Steel caught the light. She pressed it against his throat. Not enough to break skin. Just enough to feel the pulse jump. Just enough to watch him breathe through it. He did not move. His hands stayed at his sides. His gaze tracked her face. Reading every micro-expression. Waiting for the strike. Waiting for the truth. I always listen. Rory dragged the flat of the blade down his sternum. Felt the ridge of his collarbone beneath the wet shirt. She released the cane. It clattered to the floor. She grabbed the lapels of his jacket. Pulled him forward. His hands flew to her waist. Grip tight. Possessive. He did not stop her. He never did when she closed the distance. She could feel the heat radiating off him. The tension coiling in his shoulders. The way his breath hitched when her knee pressed between his thighs. The way his head tilted. Waiting. Always waiting for her to bridge the final inch. You owe me a conversation. She kept her voice low. The words vibrated against his chest. She felt the answer in the shift of his hips. The rough scrape of his thumbs over her ribs. The way his mouth opened. The intake of breath that tasted like surrender. She did not move back. She held him there. Anchored by silk and steel and three weeks of silence. The flat felt smaller. The air thicker. Every beat of his heart hammered against her palm. She counted them. Matched her own pulse to the rhythm. Let it pull her under. Let it drag her forward. Let it break whatever was left standing between them.
created_at"2026-04-27T08:04:32.158Z" 4/27/2026, 8:04:32 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2050
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2050
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"weight"
count5
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"calloused fingers"
count1
5
word"traced"
count3
6
word"pulse"
count4
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"aligned"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count2
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"silk"
count2
14
word"electric"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"echoed"
4"calloused fingers"
5"traced"
6"pulse"
7"calculated"
8"warmth"
9"aligned"
10"could feel"
11"fractured"
12"flicker"
13"silk"
14"electric"
15"tension"
16"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences340
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences340
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences340
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen17
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2050
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount2050
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
East1
London1
Moreau1
Rotherhithe1
Avaros1
Marseille1
Shoreditch1
Rory12
You10
Waiting4
Pulled3
Let3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Avaros"
2"Rory"
3"You"
4"Pulled"
5"Let"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
3"Shoreditch"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences166
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a physical blow"
1"tasted like surrender"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2050
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences340
matches(empty)
22.55% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean85.42
std19.55
cv0.229
sampleLengths
087
148
264
367
461
582
662
781
895
965
1073
1178
12109
1382
1474
1579
16120
17116
1891
1984
20100
21115
22105
23112
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences340
matches
0"were supposed"
1"was built"
2"was left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs379
matches
0"was buying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences340
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2051
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.02437835202340322
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0034129692832764505
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences340
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences340
mean6.03
std2.95
cv0.489
sampleLengths
010
15
29
36
48
511
68
714
87
93
105
111
126
133
1412
155
162
176
1814
193
205
216
227
239
2411
2513
2610
275
284
298
308
319
3215
338
3410
355
362
374
388
3914
4010
415
426
437
446
458
467
479
489
496
37.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.25
totalSentences340
uniqueOpeners85
64.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences309
matches
0"Always found the angle that"
1"Then back to her eyes."
2"Then walked out into the"
3"Just enough to feel the"
4"Just enough to watch him"
5"Always waiting for her to"
ratio0.019
33.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount144
totalSentences309
matches
0"He held his ivory-handled cane"
1"His left eye caught the"
2"She had not expected him."
3"You forgot something."
4"He stepped past her shoulder."
5"He did not wait for"
6"His boots tracked muddy water"
7"He set the cane against"
8"I have nothing for you."
9"She watched him move toward"
10"He ran a gloved finger"
11"She had left them open"
12"You always keep your receipts."
13"He unbuttoned his suit jacket"
14"He did not remove his"
15"He never did until he"
16"She stepped over a rolled"
17"He weighed it in his"
18"He had broken it during"
19"It is a retrieval."
ratio0.466
32.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount264
totalSentences309
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory pulled the door inward."
2"The hinges groaned against the"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"Rain streaked the shoulders of"
5"A water bead clung to"
6"He held his ivory-handled cane"
7"Platinum hair plastered to his"
8"His left eye caught the"
9"Amber burned there."
10"The right swallowed it whole."
11"Rory’s grip tightened on the"
12"Knuckles bleached white."
13"The crescent scar on her"
14"She had not expected him."
15"You forgot something."
16"He stepped past her shoulder."
17"The door swung shut behind"
18"He did not wait for"
19"His boots tracked muddy water"
ratio0.854
16.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences309
matches
0"Now her mouth watered at"
ratio0.003
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.4064%