Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZH6ZSX9RJD2CGTQMTM6E8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.013295
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks rose like jagged teeth against the grey London sky. Rory stopped before the moss-choked trunks. Fingers brushed the crescent scar on her left wrist. The silver chain at her throat grew heavy. The Heartstone pendant warmed against her collarbone. A faint pulse. Rhythm matched her own heartbeat. Nyx materialized from the alley deep shade. Six feet of living darkness took solid shape. Violet light burned in hollow eyes. The air around the shade dropped ten degrees. Frost crystallized on the pavement. The whisper came first, carried on a draft that smelled of petrichor and old parchment. The threshold expects blood. Rory adjusted the strap of her messenger bag. The Fae-Forged Blade pressed cold against her ribs inside its sheath. Moonsilver hummed against the fabric. It expects us to walk. She stepped past the first oak. The world inverted. London fell away. The roar of traffic dissolved into a thick, velvet silence. The ground beneath her boots shifted from cracked tarmac to spongy moss. Air changed taste. It carried crushed mint, blooming nightshade, and something metallic that coated the tongue. Light fractured overhead. The canopy above wove itself into a kaleidoscope of emerald and bruised purple. Faint shimmering distortion rippled through the air like heat haze over desert sand. The Veil. Nyx drifted across the boundary. Solid form melted into fluid shadow. Violet eyes tracked the distortion. The barrier thins here. It stretches thin as onion skin. Rory reached into her pocket. Fingers closed around a smooth river stone. She needed the anchor. The pendant pulsed harder. Warmth spread through her sternum. The silver chain grew heavy. She pulled it out. The deep crimson gemstone glowed from within. Tiny veins of light fractured across its face. It is reacting to something. A figure separated from the trunk of a second oak. Silver hair fell in heavy waves past narrow shoulders. Pale lavender eyes caught the fractured light. The woman stood barefoot on the moss. No impression marked the ground behind her. Isolde moved without disturbing a single blade of grass. Wind chimes echoed from nowhere and everywhere. The stone drinks the light. It hungers for the other side. Rory lowered the pendant. The crimson glow dimmed to a steady thrum. Hungers or warns. Isolde smiled. Lips stayed still. The expression moved across her cheeks like moonlight on water. Time dragged. A falling leaf hung suspended mid-air for three heartbeats. It dropped. The sound cracked like a whip. Warnings and hungers wear the same face. You cross the water. The current pulls. You do not fight the current. You ride it. Nyx stepped forward. Shadow feet did not touch the moss. The violet eyes fixed on the suspended leaf now resting in the dirt. Time bleeds here. Seconds pool. Days evaporate. They evaporate for the careless. They pool for the observant. You carry the knife from the Courts. It cuts the heavy air. It slices the old wards. The wood remembers the blade. The blade remembers the wood. Rory’s hand drifted to her hip. The moonsilver sheath vibrated against her palm. Cold seeped through her jacket. The air around them thickened. The wildflowers blooming at her feet shifted color. Blue gave way to gold. Gold bled into white. Petals unfurled in slow, deliberate spirals. A low hum vibrated in the soles of her boots. The grove breathed. Where does the current lead. Deeper. Past the singing stones. Past the mirror pond. The hollow holds what you seek. The hollow holds what you fear. They occupy the same seat. Isolde turned. Silver hair swept the air without touching the ground. She walked ahead. Footsteps made no sound. Rory followed. Nyx trailed behind, solid form flickering between two and three dimensions. The space between the standing stones stretched. The path narrowed. Roots twisted upward like knuckles gripping the earth. Fungal growths clung to the bark. They pulsed in time with the Heartstone. Red light. Green pulse. Matching rhythm. The pendant grew hot. Rory winced. Fingers pried the chain over her neck. She held the crimson gem suspended in the air. It burned. The inner glow intensified. Tiny shards of light escaped the stone, drifting upward. They dissolved before they reached the canopy. The hum in the ground intensified. The air tasted of ozone and crushed rosemary. Keep it close. The resonance will shatter your focus. Rory looped the chain back around her neck. The heat settled. The humming dropped to a manageable thrum. She matched her breathing to the pulse. In. Out. In. Out. The path opened into a clearing. The mirror pond lay ahead. Still water reflected nothing. Sky above remained fractured. The water below stayed black. No reflection. Water refuses to lie. It swallows the image. It keeps the truth. Step lightly. The surface holds memory. Memory holds weight. Nyx leaned over the bank. Shadow fingers hovered above the black surface. The water rippled without wind. Ripples spread outward in concentric circles. Each circle carried a faint echo of sound. Laughter. Scream. Glass breaking. Footsteps on stone. The echoes layered over each other. Time pooled in the basin. The echo chamber. Voices trapped in the glass. Isolde crouched at the water’s edge. Lavender eyes fixed on the dark surface. Pale hands rested on her knees. The compulsion tightened her jaw. She could not bend the truth. She could curve it. Voices bleed through the thin places. They fall through the cracks. They wash up on the stones. You hear what you bring. You hear what you left behind. Rory gripped the strap of her bag. The canvas bit into her shoulder. The pendant pulsed against her chest. The black water shifted. A shape moved beneath the surface. Not a fish. Not a root. Something long. Something angular. It turned slowly. The reflection remained absent. The shape passed. The water stayed dark. It watched us pass. Isolde stood. Silver hair caught the fractured light. The wind chimes returned. Faster now. Urgent. It watches what it cannot eat. The hollow demands payment. You offer step. You offer breath. You offer sight. Do not offer blood. The hollow drinks deep. It remembers the taste. Nyx straightened. Violet eyes tracked the path beyond the pond. The ground sloped downward. The air grew colder. Frost webbed across the moss. The standing stones ahead leaned inward. They formed a narrow arch. The Veil shimmered inside the arch. Distortion thickened. Amber light bled through the tear. Warmth rolled off the rift. It carried the scent of roasted figs, spiced wine, and burning citrus. Dymas. The word left Isolde’s mouth. It carried no fear. Only recognition. The Half-Fae exiled from the Courts knew the taste of excess. She had tasted it long ago. It left ash on the tongue. The amber sky bleeds through. The glutton opens its mouth. It swallows sound. It swallows time. Keep your tongue. Keep your footing. The floor will rise to meet you. Rory adjusted her grip on the bag. The Fae blade hummed against her hip. The pendant burned steady. She stepped toward the arch. The ground beneath her boots softened. Moss gave way to packed earth. The earth shifted. It moved like the slow tide. It pulled forward. Not down. Forward. The arch waited. The amber light spilled over the threshold. Warmth hit her face. It carried the weight of a thousand feasts. The air grew thick. It coated the lungs. Step through. The current carries. The current does not stop. Nyx moved ahead. Shadow form stretched thin. Violet light flared. The shade slipped through the arch. Rory followed. The Veil brushed her shoulders. It felt like wet silk. It felt like cold iron. The distortion parted. Amber light washed over her. Warmth soaked her skin. The hum in the ground changed pitch. It synchronized with the pendant. It synchronized with the blade. The grove held its breath. The path ahead disappeared into the amber haze. Roots curled upward. They formed stairs. The stairs led down. Into the light. Into the heat. Into the place that never stopped eating. Rory placed a boot on the first step. The wood groaned. Not wood. Bone. Ancient. Calcified. The steps supported her weight. They held. The pendant pulsed. The blade hummed. The amber light waited. Isolde remained at the pond. Silver hair caught the fractured glow. Lavender eyes followed. The Half-Fae said nothing. She watched the path swallow them. She watched the time pool. She watched the current pull. Down. The stairs curved. The amber light deepened. The air grew heavy with spice and sugar. The hum vibrated in the teeth. Rory kept her eyes forward. Nyx flowed beside her. Shadow form solidified. Violet eyes tracked the descent. The steps multiplied. They stretched. They folded. Space bent around the curve. The grove vanished behind them. The pond faded. The standing stones disappeared. Only the light remained. Only the warmth remained. Only the descent. The stairs ended. Flat ground. Polished stone. It gleamed like black glass. It reflected the amber sky. The sky glowed warm. It pulsed. It breathed. Vines crept across the stone. They bore fruit. Dark grapes. Heavy pomegranates. Split figs bleeding honey. The air smelled of fermentation and fire. The hum settled into a steady rhythm. It matched the pendant. It matched the blade. It matched her pulse. Rory stepped onto the black glass. Her boots made no sound. The surface held her. It did not yield. Nyx materialized fully. Shadow form locked into solid shape. Violet eyes scanned the expanse. The amber light shifted. It revealed structures in the distance. Pillars carved from obsidian. Arches bent like rib cages. Tables laid with endless courses. Steam rose from silver platters. The heat rolled off the stone. It carried the crackle of roasting meat. The clink of glassware. The murmur of a hundred voices speaking in tongues that tasted of copper and honey. We entered. Isolde stood at the edge of the arch. The Veil shimmered behind her. The Half-Fae did not cross. She could not. The compulsion bound her to the grove. She bound herself to the edge. Lavender eyes fixed on the amber light. Silver hair caught the glow. The mouth opens. The throat swallows. You walk the tongue. You do not bite. You do not feed. You move forward. The path splits. The path chooses. You do not choose. Rory adjusted her bag strap. The pendant burned steady. The blade hummed cold. She stepped past the arch. The amber light swallowed her silhouette. Nyx followed. Shadow and human crossed into the glow. The heat wrapped around them. It soaked their clothes. It coated their skin. The murmur of voices grew louder. It carried laughter. It carried weeping. It carried the clatter of a thousand knives against a thousand plates. The black glass stretched ahead. It led toward the pillars. It led toward the tables. It led toward the heart of the place. Rory kept walking. Nyx matched her pace. The pendant pulsed. The blade hummed. The amber light breathed. The path ahead split into three. The middle path glowed. The left path smoked. The right path dripped condensation. The voices grew clearer. They spoke her name. They spoke his name. They spoke the shade’s true name. The sound hit like a physical blow. Rory stopped. Nyx stopped. The pendant burned hot. The blade vibrated. The amber light pulsed. The path ahead waited. The voices called. The descent continued.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsms47
found
0
word"pulse"
count4
1
word"crystallized"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count6
6
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count7
8
word"warmth"
count5
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count4
11
word"footsteps"
count2
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"echo"
count2
15
word"echoes"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count2
17
word"carried the weight"
count1
18
word"silk"
count1
19
word"synchronized"
count2
20
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"crystallized"
2"whisper"
3"velvet"
4"silence"
5"fractured"
6"kaleidoscope"
7"pulsed"
8"warmth"
9"echoed"
10"vibrated"
11"footsteps"
12"resonance"
13"weight"
14"echo"
15"echoes"
16"shimmered"
17"carried the weight"
18"silk"
19"synchronized"
20"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences393
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences393
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences393
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1899
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions104
wordCount1899
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
London2
Heartstone2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Veil4
Courts2
Isolde8
Half-Fae3
Fae5
Rory17
Fingers3
Nyx12
Violet6
Warmth4
Silver5
Time3
You14
Shadow6
Keep3
Lavender3
persons
0"Blade"
1"Veil"
2"Isolde"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Fae"
5"Rory"
6"Fingers"
7"Nyx"
8"Violet"
9"Warmth"
10"Time"
11"You"
12"Lavender"
places
0"London"
1"Courts"
2"Silver"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences126
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1899
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences393
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean33.91
std27.9
cv0.823
sampleLengths
050
149
24
324
45
59
672
716
810
949
105
1156
1211
1312
143
1534
1623
1723
187
1937
2059
215
2226
2362
246
2558
269
2753
282
2921
3049
318
3234
3328
3453
354
3615
3731
3865
391
4034
4129
4280
4310
4498
4567
461
4773
483
4964
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences393
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs379
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences393
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1905
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.011548556430446194
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.003674540682414698
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences393
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences393
mean4.83
std2.38
cv0.494
sampleLengths
012
16
29
38
47
53
65
77
88
96
108
115
1215
134
148
1511
165
175
186
193
203
2110
2212
233
2413
253
2613
2713
282
295
306
315
324
336
345
357
364
374
385
395
404
417
428
435
4410
459
467
477
487
499
28.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats83
diversityRatio0.22900763358778625
totalSentences393
uniqueOpeners90
39.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences339
matches
0"Light fractured overhead."
1"Only the light remained."
2"Only the warmth remained."
3"Only the descent."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount86
totalSentences339
matches
0"It expects us to walk."
1"She stepped past the first"
2"It carried crushed mint, blooming"
3"It stretches thin as onion"
4"She needed the anchor."
5"She pulled it out."
6"It is reacting to something."
7"It hungers for the other"
8"You cross the water."
9"You do not fight the"
10"You ride it."
11"They evaporate for the careless."
12"They pool for the observant."
13"You carry the knife from"
14"It cuts the heavy air."
15"It slices the old wards."
16"They occupy the same seat."
17"She walked ahead."
18"They pulsed in time with"
19"She held the crimson gem"
ratio0.254
7.20% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount307
totalSentences339
matches
0"The ancient oaks rose like"
1"Rory stopped before the moss-choked"
2"Fingers brushed the crescent scar"
3"The silver chain at her"
4"The Heartstone pendant warmed against"
5"A faint pulse."
6"Rhythm matched her own heartbeat."
7"Nyx materialized from the alley"
8"Violet light burned in hollow"
9"The air around the shade"
10"Frost crystallized on the pavement."
11"The whisper came first, carried"
12"The threshold expects blood."
13"Rory adjusted the strap of"
14"The Fae-Forged Blade pressed cold"
15"Moonsilver hummed against the fabric."
16"It expects us to walk."
17"She stepped past the first"
18"The world inverted."
19"London fell away."
ratio0.906
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences339
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.1159%