Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZND8Z0Z8Q62TANBY4QNC7

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.014550
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt groaned backward, its metal tongue sliding from the frame with a heavy, final clack. Rory’s fingers tightened on the cold brass before she pulled the door inward. Brick Lane traffic bled through the stairwell, a constant river of buses and shouting vendors, but none of it mattered. Not when the space between her and the man on the landing suddenly felt too small to hold the last eight months. Lucien Moreau stood exactly where she remembered him, yet entirely remade by absence. His tailored charcoal suit swallowed the dim hallway light, cut sharp enough to draw blood. Platinum blond hair was slicked back, severe and precise, framing a face that hadn’t softened in the slightest. Those eyes locked onto hers. Heterochromatic, one burning amber, the other swallowed by a black so deep it seemed to drink the stairwell gloom. He held his ivory-handled cane at a casual angle, though she knew the silver blade folded inside waited for trouble. She knew too much about his trouble. She’d learned it the hard way. Behind her, the flat exhaled. Cramped and breathless, every surface buckled under research notes, leather-bound scrolls, and stacked hardcovers. Eva’s life spilled outward in paper and ink, claiming floor space and table edges alike. The pervasive ghost of cumin and fried garlic from the curry house below clung to the damp plaster, mixing with the smell of old paper and city rain. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, threaded between Lucien’s polished oxfords and let out a low, warning trill that quickly dissolved into a rumbling purr. Rory didn’t step aside. She didn’t blink. The cool-headed part of her that delivered meals through London’s sudden downpours and dodged questions about why she’d fled Cardiff after Evan’s hands left bruises that never quite matched his apologies kicked in automatically. She kept her posture straight, her voice flat. “You’re standing on my welcome mat.” His mouth twitched. Almost a smile. Almost nothing. “You still keep three deadbolts. I remember you saying two were paranoia and three were an invitation to break down the door.” “Third one’s for the landlord.” She kept her thumb resting against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she’d never shaken since the day the kitchen knife slipped at fifteen. “What do you want, Lucien.” He shifted his weight. The movement pulled the charcoal fabric tight across his shoulders. Eight months ago, he’d left without a proper goodbye. Just a typed note slipped under her door, the paper crisp, the message sterile. Don’t follow. It’s cleaner this way. He’d thought he was protecting her. He always thought in terms of clean lines and collateral damage, a fixer who measured human lives in risk assessments and exit strategies. She’d spent weeks hating him, then weeks missing the way he’d look at her like she was the only fixed point in a spinning, unnatural mess. The hurt was still there, calcified under her ribs, but breathing the same air as him pulled it loose again. It bled warm and sharp. “I need your eyes,” he said. His voice was low, carrying the faint, rolling cadence of Marseille, though she knew his head cycled through four languages before settling on English for her. “And your mind. And I’m out of time to ask politely.” He stepped forward. She didn’t retreat. The stairwell air grew thick. She could smell sandalwood, rain-damp wool, and the faint metallic tang of something wrong. Blood. Not hers. Or maybe his. She didn’t care. Her hand left the doorframe and brushed the edge of his coat before she could stop herself. The fabric was damp. “You’re bleeding.” A faint smirk touched his lips, tired and hollow. “Part of the job description, Rory. May I?” She stared at him. The unsaid things piled up between them like the scrolls in the corner. Stay. Explain. Tell me why you left. Tell me you still want me. She exhaled, a slow, deliberate release of tension, and stepped back, pulling the door wide. “Take your shoes off. Ptolemy sheds, and I’m not washing your socks.” He crossed the threshold, the cane tapping once against the warped floorboards. The flat felt smaller with him inside. He always had a way of occupying space, not by taking it, but by making everything else seem to bend toward him. He set the heavy ivory cane on a stack of grimoires and turned slowly, taking in the chaos, then her. His mismatched eyes traced the line of her jaw, the dark fall of her straight shoulder-length hair, the way her shoulders tensed like she was bracing for impact. “You look tired,” he said softly. “I deliver noodles through rush hour traffic and dodge men who think loyalty is a hostage negotiation. Tired is the baseline.” She crossed her arms, fingers digging into her biceps. “Talk. Fast.” Lucien stepped closer. Close enough that she could see the fine lines at the corners of his eyes, the faint shadow of stubble along his jaw. Close enough that the heat radiating from him cut through the flat’s chill. He didn’t rush. He never rushed when it came to her. He’d learned that much. “I was wrong,” he said. The words weren’t rehearsed. They landed heavily, stripping away the polished fixer veneer. “Leaving was a calculation. I prioritized the objective over the variable. You.” Rory’s breath caught. She hated that it did. Her chest tightened, ribs pressing against something fragile. “You don’t get to turn me into a variable.” “I know.” He reached out, slow, giving her every chance to step back. His fingers brushed the scar on her wrist, right over her pulse. The contact sent a jolt straight up her arm, electric and terrifyingly familiar. “But you were never a variable. You were the reckoning. I just… I couldn’t risk you in the line of fire. Avaros blood runs thick in my veins, Rory. It tells me to burn everything that complicates me. Including you.” The flat went quiet except for the distant hiss of a bus brake and the soft scratching of a cat’s claws on wood. Rory stared at his hand on her wrist. She could pull away. She should. Instead, she turned her wrist slightly, pressing her skin fully into his palm. The scar felt warm under his thumb. The history between them wasn’t clean. It never would be. There had been late-night whispers in his London townhouse, the taste of cheap wine and expensive secrets, the way his heterochromatic gaze had pinned her to the wall and made her forget to be afraid. She had fled Cardiff to escape a man who called love a cage. Lucien had offered her a window, then pulled the shades when the shadows outside grew too long. “You left me in the dark,” she whispered. “That’s not protection. That’s abandonment.” “I know what it was.” His gaze dropped to her mouth, then back to her bright blue eyes. The honesty in it was naked. Stripping. “I’ve spent eight months trying to outrun you. It’s impossible. The information broker who knows every shadow in this city can’t find a single one deep enough to hide from you. I came back because I ran out of roads. And because I realized I never wanted to.” The space between them collapsed. She didn’t make it happen. He did. He closed the distance, his free hand coming up to cup her cheek, his thumb brushing just below her eye. His skin was cool, but the intent burned. When his mouth met hers, it wasn’t tentative. It was a reckoning. Eight months of silence, of anger, of wanting, all poured into a kiss that tasted like rain and stubborn surrender. Rory made a sound low in her throat, her hands finding the lapels of his charcoal suit, pulling him closer, anchoring him to the floorboards, to her, to now. His arm slid around her waist, pulling her flush against him, and she felt the damp heat of the wound against his ribs. She didn’t care. She kissed him harder, pouring every unsaid word into his mouth, every sleepless night, every time she’d almost picked up the phone and dialed a number she’d already memorized. He broke the kiss first, though he didn’t step back. His forehead rested against hers, his breath warm against her lips, his heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her sternum. “I need you in this,” he murmured, voice rough. “Not as bait. Not as collateral. With me. Beside me.” Rory’s fingers tightened in his coat. Her mind, usually so quick to map exits and calculate odds, went utterly still. Then it sharpened. She lifted her chin, meeting those impossible eyes. “If you ever leave without saying goodbye again,” she said, steady despite the hammering of her pulse, “I will track you down myself. And I won’t be polite about it.” A genuine laugh escaped him, soft and breathless, vibrating against her chest. “Duly noted.” His hand slid down to tangle with hers, his thumb tracing the crescent scar like it was a map he intended to learn by heart. The blade in his cane stayed sheathed. The deadbolts stayed thrown. For the first time in months, the cramped, book-choked flat didn’t feel like a hiding place. It felt like a beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.08
80.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1549
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"quickly"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"slightly"
5"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1549
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"variable"
count3
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"electric"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"calculate"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"weight"
2"measured"
3"tension"
4"traced"
5"chill"
6"variable"
7"pulse"
8"electric"
9"familiar"
10"silence"
11"calculate"
12"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"seem to"
2"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1549
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1280
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Lane1
Moreau1
Eva2
Lucien4
London2
Cardiff2
Evan1
Marseille1
English1
Rory6
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
places
0"Lane"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like rain and stubborn surrender"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.646
wordCount1549
matches
0"not by taking it, but by making everything else seem to bend toward him"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"learned that much"
1"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean64.54
std37.22
cv0.577
sampleLengths
072
1103
284
355
430
539
6123
743
857
917
1057
1189
126
1332
1484
1525
1678
17132
1813
1973
20156
2149
2261
2371
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"was slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs230
matches
0"was protecting"
1"was bracing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences133
ratio0
matches(empty)
90.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1288
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.043478260869565216
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010869565217391304
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean11.65
std9.33
cv0.801
sampleLengths
017
113
220
322
413
515
618
75
819
920
107
116
125
1314
1415
1528
1622
174
183
1934
208
216
223
233
242
2522
2634
275
284
2910
309
3114
322
334
346
3523
3626
3720
385
396
4026
4111
423
433
445
4514
461
472
483
493
50.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3609022556390977
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"Almost a smile."
1"Just a typed note slipped"
2"Instead, she turned her wrist"
3"Then it sharpened."
ratio0.037
14.39% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences107
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit swallowed"
1"He held his ivory-handled cane"
2"She knew too much about"
3"She’d learned it the hard"
4"She didn’t blink."
5"She kept her posture straight,"
6"His mouth twitched."
7"She kept her thumb resting"
8"He shifted his weight."
9"It’s cleaner this way."
10"He’d thought he was protecting"
11"He always thought in terms"
12"She’d spent weeks hating him,"
13"It bled warm and sharp."
14"His voice was low, carrying"
15"He stepped forward."
16"She didn’t retreat."
17"She could smell sandalwood, rain-damp"
18"She didn’t care."
19"Her hand left the doorframe"
ratio0.514
39.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences107
matches
0"The third deadbolt groaned backward,"
1"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
2"Brick Lane traffic bled through"
3"Lucien Moreau stood exactly where"
4"His tailored charcoal suit swallowed"
5"Platinum blond hair was slicked"
6"Those eyes locked onto hers."
7"He held his ivory-handled cane"
8"She knew too much about"
9"She’d learned it the hard"
10"Eva’s life spilled outward in"
11"The pervasive ghost of cumin"
12"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, threaded between"
13"Rory didn’t step aside."
14"She didn’t blink."
15"The cool-headed part of her"
16"She kept her posture straight,"
17"His mouth twitched."
18"She kept her thumb resting"
19"He shifted his weight."
ratio0.841
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Platinum blond hair was slicked back, severe and precise, framing a face that hadn’t softened in the slightest."
1"The cool-headed part of her that delivered meals through London’s sudden downpours and dodged questions about why she’d fled Cardiff after Evan’s hands left bru…"
2"He always thought in terms of clean lines and collateral damage, a fixer who measured human lives in risk assessments and exit strategies."
3"He closed the distance, his free hand coming up to cup her cheek, his thumb brushing just below her eye."
4"Rory made a sound low in her throat, her hands finding the lapels of his charcoal suit, pulling him closer, anchoring him to the floorboards, to her, to now."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She crossed, fingers digging into her biceps"
1"he murmured, voice rough"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.16
83.1704%