Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZTDMMWNN6JYBAHXFCVP37

Run Details

Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.019248
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain lock scraped against the metal bracket before Rory even pulled the handle fully open. He stood on the landing. The narrow corridor trapped the damp chill from the staircase, but he did not shiver. A tailored charcoal suit cut clean lines across his shoulders. Platinum hair sat perfectly in place against his skull. His heterochromatic eyes locked onto hers immediately. One pupil burned amber. The other swallowed the light. “You said I would never see you again,” Rory said. She kept the door open one hand length. Her thumb rested against the cold brass knob. Her left wrist ached beneath the thin fabric of her sweater. The crescent scar pulled tight when she flexed her fingers. “I lied.” He leaned his weight against his ivory handled cane. The metal tip clicked against the warped floorboards. “Regret is a poor substitute for strategy.” She stepped back. The flat behind her held the faint scent of stale tea and old paper. Delivery bags sat stacked by the kitchenette. Three deadbolts lined the door frame. She had installed them herself. “Come inside then.” She moved aside. “Or stand in the hallway and polish your excuses.” He crossed the threshold. His boots left no mark on the scuffed wood. He shut the door with two careful twists of his wrist. The first deadbolt slid home with a heavy thud. The second followed. The third clicked like a hammer falling on an empty chamber. “Eva will ask why I tracked mud across her floorboards.” He did not look at the books stacked on every surface. He studied the lines of tension in her jaw. “I will tell her I required shelter. She will accept the lie.” “You require something.” Rory crossed her arms. Her sweater caught on a loose thread. “You always do. Speak plainly, Lucien. I have parcels to drop before dawn.” He drew a slim leather folio from his inner jacket pocket. He placed it on the coffee table beside a chipped ceramic mug. The folio rested on top of a handwritten receipt. The ink had bled through the paper. “The syndicate moves tonight.” His voice carried the faint roll of Marseille. The consonants stayed sharp. The vowels stretched just enough to remind her he operated outside her rules. “They tracked the ledger. They traced it to your address.” Rory’s breath hitched. She refused to let it show. She stepped toward the table. Her fingers hovered over the leather cover. She did not touch it. “My address?” She lifted her chin. “My father practised law in Cardiff. I deliver noodles in London. I have no ledger.” “You delivered a package last Thursday.” He tilted his head. The amber eye caught the weak ceiling light. “Golden Empress kitchen. The driver never signed for it. You kept it.” She closed her eyes. The memory surfaced anyway. Greasy cardboard. A heavy parcel. The restaurant manager’s frantic hand gestures. The way the weight had shifted when she lifted it alone. “I turned it over to the manager.” She opened her eyes. “He told me to forget it.” “He told you exactly that.” Lucien stepped closer. His shadow fell across her boots. “He also told two men in the alley to wait for the rider. They arrived three minutes late. The parcel vanished. So did the manager.” Rory’s pulse hammered against her ribs. She pressed her thumb into her palm. The crescent scar burned. “What do you want from me?” “The contents.” He extended a hand. Palm up. Fingers relaxed. Controlled. “You hid it. Under your mattress. Behind the winter coats.” She stared at his palm. His skin looked pale against the dark wool of his trousers. The tendons shifted when he flexed his wrist. She remembered the weight of that hand against her throat in a different life. She remembered the exact temperature of his breath. “You broke into my life and my apartment now expects me to comply?” She stepped sideways. Her shoulder brushed the bookshelf. A stack of paperbacks slid toward the edge. She caught them before they fell. “I expect you to survive.” He lowered his hand. The cane tapped twice. “They will be here within the hour. You can run. You can fight. Or you can give me the box. I will take it off your hands. I will ensure they never look this way again.” “You say that now.” She paced the length of the room. Her heels struck the wood in a steady rhythm. “You always say you can control the board. The pieces move anyway. You left last winter. You left me to clean your mistakes.” The silence stretched. He did not flinch. He let her words hang in the damp air. He watched the rapid rise of her chest. He watched the way her gaze flicked to the window. To the fire escape. To the door. “I left because staying would have killed you.” His voice dropped half a register. The French cadence thickened. “I left because you looked at me like I was already dead. You wanted an answer I could not give. I gave you the only thing I owned. Distance.” Rory turned back. Her blue eyes flashed. Bright and unyielding. “Distance is just another word for coward.” She stopped three feet from him. She could smell his cologne. Sandalwood and something sharper. Ozone. Metal. The scent of a storm before it breaks. He did not retreat. He leaned in. His breath brushed her temple. His cane rested against the edge of the table. His other hand slid into his pocket. The fabric pulled taut over a shaped weight. “Call it what you need.” He tilted his head. His amber eye narrowed. “The men downstairs now carry suppressed pistols. They check the hallway cameras. They know you are alone. Give me the box, Rory. Or watch your flat burn around you.” She held his gaze. The air between them grew heavy. The kind of weight that precedes a collision. She remembered the way his voice sounded when he whispered her full name in the dark. She remembered the way he pulled away without explanation. She remembered the scar on her wrist when she pressed her own blade against her skin to prove she could feel something. “It is not a box.” She reached behind her. Her fingers found the cold metal latch. She pulled the mattress aside. The floorboard groaned. She lifted the panel. A waterproof case sat beneath the dust and old cables. The seal held. The edges showed no wear. Lucien’s pupils dilated. He did not move toward her. He watched her hands. He watched the way her knuckles whitened around the handle. “Open it.” She did not argue. She pressed the release latches. They clicked in perfect sequence. The case split open. Black tissue paper lined the interior. Beneath it sat a single drive. Matte finish. No markings. Just a faint etched symbol near the port. A serpent swallowing its tail. He exhaled slowly. “Avaros cipher.” The word carried genuine fear. “Where did you find this?” “Eva’s research pile.” Rory lifted the drive. The cord dangled loose. “She borrowed it from a contact at the university. Something about ancient wards. Something about blood pacts. I did not read the headers.” “You should have.” He reached for the drive. His fingers stopped mid air. Her wrist flicked upward. The drive vanished into her sweater pocket. “Not yours to take.” She stepped back. Her heel caught the edge of the rug. She straightened instantly. “You want it, you earn it. You want to protect me, stand in front of the door. Right now.” Heavy footsteps echoed on the stairs. Multiple boots. Deliberate. Synchronized. The stairwell rail rattled under a firm grip. Lucien moved first. He drew a slim blade from the cane. The ivory handle separated with a clean snap. The metal gleamed. He slid between Rory and the entrance. His posture shifted. The polished fixer vanished. The half demon hunter took his place. “Lock the bedroom.” His voice stayed calm. Measured. “Do not open it for anyone. Not even me.” “Lucien—” The doorframe splintered. A heavy boot kicked the wood near the top lock. Paint chipped. Fibres splintered. The first deadbolt groaned under sudden force. He turned his head. Just an inch. His heterochromatic eyes caught the faint light. “Move.” Rory grabbed the drive. She backed toward the bedroom. Her shoulder brushed the doorframe. The floorboards screamed under her weight. The second kick hit lower. The frame buckled. Splinters flew across the hallway. Metal screeched against metal. A shadow filled the doorway. A muzzle flashed bright in the dim corridor. Lucien swung the blade. Steel met steel. Sparks showered the floor. The first shooter yelled in Russian. The second stepped forward. The third raised a weapon. Rory’s hand found the bedroom deadbolt. She threw it. The lock slid home just as the hallway erupted in gunfire.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She moved aside [aside]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.511
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
93.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count6
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"ensure"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count2
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"synchronized"
count1
14
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"tension"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"ensure"
6"silence"
7"flicked"
8"could feel"
9"perfect"
10"etched"
11"footsteps"
12"echoed"
13"synchronized"
14"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences182
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences204
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1483
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1067
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Marseille1
Lucien4
Palm1
French1
Measured1
Russian1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Russian"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1483
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences204
matches(empty)
97.09% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean29.66
std14.53
cv0.49
sampleLengths
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247
326
435
515
647
742
827
939
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1126
1221
1330
1430
1517
1639
1717
186
1921
2046
2135
2249
2343
2441
2547
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2732
2836
2942
3065
3146
3223
332
3447
3515
3634
3724
3837
3918
4043
4117
421
4324
4414
451
4620
4730
4826
4920
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences204
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1067
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.020618556701030927
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004686035613870665
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences204
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences204
mean7.27
std5.18
cv0.712
sampleLengths
016
15
215
310
49
57
64
75
810
98
108
1111
1210
1311
148
157
163
1714
187
196
205
216
229
234
249
2511
269
273
2811
2921
309
3112
327
337
3413
3511
3612
379
387
3912
404
4113
4210
433
446
455
467
475
486
4915
33.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.27450980392156865
totalSentences204
uniqueOpeners56
39.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences167
matches
0"Just a faint etched symbol"
1"Just an inch."
ratio0.012
18.80% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount84
totalSentences167
matches
0"He stood on the landing."
1"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
2"She kept the door open"
3"Her thumb rested against the"
4"Her left wrist ached beneath"
5"He leaned his weight against"
6"She stepped back."
7"She had installed them herself."
8"She moved aside"
9"He crossed the threshold."
10"His boots left no mark"
11"He shut the door with"
12"He did not look at"
13"He studied the lines of"
14"Her sweater caught on a"
15"He drew a slim leather"
16"He placed it on the"
17"His voice carried the faint"
18"She refused to let it"
19"She stepped toward the table."
ratio0.503
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount157
totalSentences167
matches
0"The chain lock scraped against"
1"He stood on the landing."
2"The narrow corridor trapped the"
3"A tailored charcoal suit cut"
4"Platinum hair sat perfectly in"
5"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
6"The other swallowed the light."
7"She kept the door open"
8"Her thumb rested against the"
9"Her left wrist ached beneath"
10"The crescent scar pulled tight"
11"He leaned his weight against"
12"The metal tip clicked against"
13"She stepped back."
14"The flat behind her held"
15"Delivery bags sat stacked by"
16"She had installed them herself."
17"She moved aside"
18"He crossed the threshold."
19"His boots left no mark"
ratio0.94
59.88% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences167
matches
0"To the fire escape."
1"To the door."
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.022
leniency0.044
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.7161%