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Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZV2EQ14ZC99KHYT4HJGVP
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-04-20)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
2m 11s
Cost:
$0.022521
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.39%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
7.08%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
46.24%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
86.21%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
71.72%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
33.28%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.7640%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The chain bit into her
collarbone.
The crimson gem pulsed against
her sternum, a steady tick-tock that matched the frantic hammering of her own
pulse
. She stopped. Listened. Ancient oak standing stones rose around her, black silhouettes against a bruised sky. No crickets. No distant traffic.
Just the wet crunch of
her boots on damp moss. Static hissed in her ear. You cross the threshold. Just past the first ring. Keep your head down.
The ley lines are unstable
tonight. I
see
the stones. I
know
the map. Good. Tell me when the stone wakes up. She tapped the earpiece. Connection died. The grove exhaled.
She adjusted the canvas satchel
strap across her shoulder.
The delivery bags had long
since emptied at the Golden Empress.
This errand was purely her
own.
She reached up, fingers brushing
the thumbnail sized gem. The silver chain grew warmer. The beat
quickened
. Close.
A dry rasp slipped through
the trees.
Branches did not grate against
stone with such deliberate friction. She turned her head.
Shadows clung to the base
of the nearest oak.
They shifted when she looked
away. Frozen when her gaze locked onto them. Periphery tricks. Stress. Sleep deprivation.
She knew the catalogue of
false alarms. She ignored them.
She stepped past the third
stone. The air thickened. The scent of damp earth gave way to something sweeter, cloying. Wildflowers crowded the footpath, impossibly vibrant in the dead of night. Petals unfurled in shades of violet and gold, too
perfect
, too still. No insects hummed around them. No dew clung to their edges.
She knelt, brushing a knuckle
against a violet bloom. It yielded no moisture. It felt like wax. Like papier-mâché soaked in perfume.
She stood, wiping her hand
on her trousers. The pendant burned hotter now. A steady, insistent heat against her skin. Thick roots coiled across the trail, slick with algae and blackened by decades of damp. She lifted each boot high, placing them with deliberate precision. Every step sent a faint vibration up her ankles. The frequency matched the rhythm of the stone at her chest. She mapped the terrain mentally, noting the way the canopy compressed the space, the way the wind refused to penetrate the lower branches. The grove compressed around her, a throat closing
slowly
. Her
watch
read 02:14.
She had entered the boundary
minutes ago. The second hand ticked backwards.
She frowned, tapping the crystal
face. The hands spun in reverse, slowing, stopping. 02:14. Forever frozen. The grove swallowed clockwork. She slipped the
watch
into her pocket. Irrelevant. The stone guided her. It only pointed toward one thing. The path narrowed. The oaks leaned inward, branches weaving a dense canopy that choked out the sky. The pendant’s
warmth
became a brand. She unbuttoned her coat, letting the silver chain fall free. The crimson heart glowed now, a faint inner light bleeding through the metal links. It
pulsed
once. Twice. Then held steady. She stopped at the centre of the clearing. The ground dipped
sharply
. A ring of blackened soil circled a patch of nothing. Not emptiness. An absence. The air above it
shimmered
, warping the light like heat off tarmac. But it was cold. Bone-deep cold that radiated from the depression. Frost crept across the grass in jagged veins. She stepped closer. The
silence
broke. A low hum
vibrated
through the soles of her shoes. It climbed her legs, settled in her teeth. The wildflowers at the edge of the pit shuddered. Their petals dropped simultaneously. They hit the soil without a sound. A
whisper
brushed her ear. Wet. Guttural. Not English. Not anything. It slithered
down her spine
. She spun. Nothing but oaks and shadows. The sound repeated. Closer. Behind her. She drew a breath, steadying herself. Analytical. What moves without displacing air? What speaks without a mouth? The answer sat heavy in her gut. She did not wait for it. She reached into her satchel, fingers closing around the cold steel of her torch. She switched it on. The beam cut through the
gloom
. It hit the shimmering void and vanished. The light did not reflect. It dissolved. The hum spiked. The frost
raced
toward her boots. The pendant jerked against her chest, yanking the chain taut. She stumbled back. The ground beneath her feet softened. Moss gave way to spongy, yielding soil. She pulled her boot free. Something gripped the sole. Not mud. Fingers. Long, jointed, digging into the rubber tread. She wrenched her leg upward. The grip held. She dropped the torch. It rolled into the dark, casting long, twisting shadows against the trees. A shape uncoiled from the depression. It rose without sound, a column of shifting ash and shadow, tasting the cold air with invisible lips. The pendant flared, crimson light flooding the clearing, throwing
stark
white highlights against the oaks. The shape turned toward her. The
whisper
returned, clearer now, shaping itself into syllables she recognised. Rory. The frost reached her ankles. The wood of the nearest standing stone cracked with a sound like a breaking neck. She did not run. She reached for the satchel strap, fingers finding the edge of the flare packet. The shape lunged.
created_at
"2026-04-27T08:10:38.44Z"
4/27/2026, 8:10:38 AM
model
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generation_time
130892
tokens_prompt
4560
tokens_completion
9314
native_tokens_prompt
4403
native_tokens_completion
8650
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
7468
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
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(null)
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is_byok
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finish_reason
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provider_responses
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1181
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"qwen/qwen3.5-plus-20260420"
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
88.39%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
861
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"sharply"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
7.08%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
861
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"pulsed"
count
2
1
word
"pulse"
count
1
2
word
"quickened"
count
1
3
word
"perfect"
count
1
4
word
"crystal"
count
1
5
word
"warmth"
count
1
6
word
"shimmered"
count
1
7
word
"silence"
count
1
8
word
"vibrated"
count
1
9
word
"whisper"
count
2
10
word
"down her spine"
count
1
11
word
"gloom"
count
1
12
word
"raced"
count
1
13
word
"stark"
count
1
highlights
0
"pulsed"
1
"pulse"
2
"quickened"
3
"perfect"
4
"crystal"
5
"warmth"
6
"shimmered"
7
"silence"
8
"vibrated"
9
"whisper"
10
"down her spine"
11
"gloom"
12
"raced"
13
"stark"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
143
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
3
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
143
filterMatches
0
"see"
1
"know"
2
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
143
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
23
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
861
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
3
wordCount
861
uniqueNames
3
maxNameDensity
0.12
worstName
"Golden"
maxWindowNameDensity
0
worstWindowName
(null)
discoveredNames
Golden
1
Empress
1
English
1
persons
(empty)
places
0
"Golden"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
66
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
861
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
143
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
23
mean
37.43
std
32.19
cv
0.86
sampleLengths
0
25
1
3
2
28
3
5
4
4
5
5
6
10
7
8
8
8
9
53
10
58
11
96
12
77
13
54
14
54
15
8
16
93
17
77
18
74
19
79
20
1
21
20
22
21
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
143
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
159
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
143
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
864
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.02662037037037037
lyAdverbCount
7
lyAdverbRatio
0.008101851851851851
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
143
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
143
mean
6.02
std
4.06
cv
0.675
sampleLengths
0
6
1
19
2
2
3
1
4
13
5
2
6
3
7
10
8
5
9
4
10
5
11
4
12
6
13
4
14
4
15
1
16
7
17
4
18
2
19
3
20
9
21
11
22
6
23
9
24
5
25
3
26
1
27
7
28
10
29
4
30
9
31
6
32
7
33
2
34
1
35
2
36
7
37
3
38
6
39
3
40
11
41
11
42
12
43
5
44
6
45
9
46
4
47
4
48
5
49
8
46.24%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
21
diversityRatio
0.36619718309859156
totalSentences
142
uniqueOpeners
52
86.21%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
116
matches
0
"Just the wet crunch of"
1
"Just past the first ring."
2
"Then held steady."
ratio
0.026
71.72%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
43
totalSentences
116
matches
0
"You cross the threshold."
1
"I see the stones."
2
"I know the map."
3
"She tapped the earpiece."
4
"She adjusted the canvas satchel"
5
"She reached up, fingers brushing"
6
"She turned her head."
7
"They shifted when she looked"
8
"She knew the catalogue of"
9
"She ignored them."
10
"She stepped past the third"
11
"She knelt, brushing a knuckle"
12
"It yielded no moisture."
13
"It felt like wax."
14
"She stood, wiping her hand"
15
"She lifted each boot high,"
16
"She mapped the terrain mentally,"
17
"Her watch read 02:14."
18
"She had entered the boundary"
19
"She frowned, tapping the crystal"
ratio
0.371
33.28%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
99
totalSentences
116
matches
0
"The chain bit into her"
1
"The crimson gem pulsed against"
2
"Static hissed in her ear."
3
"You cross the threshold."
4
"The ley lines are unstable"
5
"I see the stones."
6
"I know the map."
7
"She tapped the earpiece."
8
"The grove exhaled."
9
"She adjusted the canvas satchel"
10
"The delivery bags had long"
11
"This errand was purely her"
12
"She reached up, fingers brushing"
13
"The silver chain grew warmer."
14
"The beat quickened."
15
"A dry rasp slipped through"
16
"Branches did not grate against"
17
"She turned her head."
18
"Shadows clung to the base"
19
"They shifted when she looked"
ratio
0.853
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
116
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
26
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The crimson gem pulsed against her sternum, a steady tick-tock that matched the frantic hammering of her own pulse."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
87.7640%