Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZXHKJFYFHJGC3EEGJAQQV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.011219
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon hummed against the damp pavement, casting a sickly emerald light over the cobblestones where Rory kept her delivery crates. She pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, the brass bell giving a dull thud rather than a chime. Maps of forgotten empires lined the walls, their parchment edges curled like dried leaves. Black-and-white photographs of Soho in the fifties stared down with grainy indifference. Rory shrugged off the weight of her bag, the canvas straps biting into her shoulders, and scanned the room. Her blue eyes swept the booths, the empty stools, the shadows pooling behind the bar. At the corner table, a figure sat with a posture that belonged to a different life. The shoulders squared against the wood, the fingers interlaced over a half-empty glass of gin, the spine rigid enough to snap. Rory stepped closer. The light from the fixture overhead carved deep hollows into the cheeks, but the jawline remained unmistakable. The woman looked up. Her face had shed the soft roundness of their university days in Cardiff. Now, sharp angles defined her visage, and a network of fine lines branched from the corners of her eyes, tracing the map of years Rory hadn't walked. Eva. Rory halted. Her left hand tightened on the strap of her bag until the leather creaked. She traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist with her thumb, a habit born of nerves she refused to voice. You kept the hair shorter. Rory slid into the booth opposite her. The wood groaned under the shift in weight. Eva's gaze dropped to Rory's wrist, lingered on the scar, then climbed back to meet the bright blue eyes. A muscle feathered in Eva's cheek. And you kept running. Eva's voice carried the faintest rasp, worn down by smoke or shouting. She reached for the gin, her knuckles blanching white around the glass. A silver ring adorned her middle finger, thick and heavy, bearing no stone. Rory noted the absence of the woven friendship bracelets they'd braided on the banks of the Taff, the ones Eva swore would bind them until the world burned. I told you to come here. Rory pushed her bag onto the floor. The canvas scraped against the tile, loud in the quiet lull between bar patrons. Silas moved behind the counter, his hazel eyes tracking the interaction with practiced neutrality. He polished a tumbler with a white cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand flashing as he worked. His left leg shifted, the slight limp betraying him as he stepped toward a stack of crates. He didn't look up, but his presence anchored the room, a silent witness to the collision. You told me you had a flat. You told me you had a network. You didn't mention the wolves. Eva's fingers drummed a erratic rhythm against the glass. The drumming ceased as she met Rory's stare. She leaned forward, the shadows swallowing the upper half of her face. The silk of her blouse whispered against the table edge, a texture far removed from the thrift-store knits they used to trade during exam weeks. London eats the soft, Rory. I carved out the soft parts first so I wouldn't get swallowed. You just... you kept the edges. Rory reached for the menu lying face down on the table and flipped it over. The cardstock was thick, stained with rings of old drinks. She didn't read it. She used the action to hold Eva's gaze without blinking. Cardiff felt like a cradle. London feels like a throat. You knew the difference. A glass shattered behind the bar. Silas didn't flinch. He swept the shards onto a tray with the cloth and moved to the sink without breaking stride. Eva's eyes flickered toward the sound, a reflex that spoke of high-strung nerves buried under layers of composure. She turned back, her posture stiffening again. I knew you needed to leave Evan. I knew the only way out was to burn the bridge behind you. Soho burns bridges every day. Rory twisted the strap of her bag, her thumb finding the ridge of the scar again. The memory of Evan's hand around her wrist flared hot, then cooled instantly into the cold calculation that had kept her alive this long. She shifted her body, angling her torso away from the door, placing the table between herself and the exit. A defensive geometry she'd adopted months ago. You didn't send a postcard. You sent a one-way ticket and a key to a room that smells of stale yeast and damp plaster. You left me to learn the language of the street while you polished rings and wore silk. Eva set the gin down. The liquid sloshed, wetting the rim. She wiped the condensation with her index finger, staring at the trail of moisture. I built the table you're sitting at. I pulled the strings to get the key. I stayed away because the moment I walked back into your life, the past walked in with me. I thought distance was protection. Rory let out a breath that fogged the air between them, though the bar held a heavy warmth. She watched the way Eva's free hand trembled, just a fraction, before she clamped it over the glass. The change was total. The girl who cried over failed essays and shared crisps in the library was gone. In her place sat a woman who wore her survival like armor, polished to a dull shine but riddled with cracks. Distance isn't protection. It's just a longer fall. Eva's jaw tightened. She looked toward the bookshelf wall behind the bar, where the wood paneling hid the secret room, the hidden depths of Silas's trade. Her hazel eyes darkened, reflecting the gloom of the bar's interior. When did you get so hard? Rory picked up the menu and let it drop back onto the table with a flat slap. She leaned in, closing the gap, her voice dropping to a register that matched the low thrum of the neon sign outside. When I learned that people who love you are the ones who drop the anvil. You didn't break, Eva. You just decided you were too valuable to chip. Eva laughed, a sharp sound that lacked any humor. She rubbed her temple, her fingers pressing into the skin as if trying to push back a migraine. You think I wanted this? You think I woke up one morning and chose the silk over the shared flat? The city demands a toll. I paid mine. You just haven't admitted you're paying yours yet. Rory's eyes dropped to the silver ring again. She studied the way the metal caught the dim light, heavy and unyielding. She thought of her own life, the deliveries through rain-slicked alleys, the way she checked the locks three times before closing the flat door above the bar, the way she calculated exits in every room she entered. She had changed too. The university student who debated law over pints was gone, replaced by a creature of reflex and observation. We're both paying. The receipt just looks different. Eva reached into her purse, her movements jerky. She pulled out a folded slip of paper, the edges frayed. She slid it across the table, stopping it inches from Rory's hand. The paper crinkled under the friction. I found something. In the files. It's about Evan. It's about why he followed you to London. Rory didn't move her hand. She stared at the paper. The scrawl on the front was frantic, ink smeared at the corners. She looked up at Eva, searching for the lie, the manipulation, the trap she knew lived in every interaction now. Eva's face remained still, though her breath hitched, a tiny fracture in the mask. You called him. Eva shook her head, the motion sharp enough to jostle her hair. I warned him you were leaving. I thought he'd let you go. I thought the distance would break his hold. Rory closed her fingers around the paper. The texture of the grain felt rough against her fingertips. She didn't unfold it. She held the weight of the revelation in the crumpled mass, feeling the heat of betrayal radiating from the simple sheet. The weight of time pressed down, heavy and suffocating. The years between them weren't just empty space; they were filled with choices made in the dark, assumptions that hardened into stone, and the slow decay of trust. You warned him. Silas moved from behind the bar, his limp pronounced as he crossed to the table. He set a fresh glass of water down in front of Rory, the condensation cold and immediate. He didn't speak. His gaze swept over Eva, lingering on the ring, the purse, the tension in the shoulders, before settling on Rory. He tapped the surface of the table twice with his signet ring, a metallic tick that cut through the ambient noise. The map on the wall shows the way out. Use it. Rory looked at Silas, then back at the paper in her hand. She looked at Eva, who had gone still, her eyes fixed on the door as if expecting the ghost they'd summoned to walk through it. The unspoken regret hung in the air, thick as the smoke that used to fill their student union, a reminder of a path not taken that had led them both to this table, to this moment, to the realization that the distance hadn't saved them at all. Rory unfolded the paper. The ink revealed a name, a date, and a line of numbers that made her pulse hammer against her veins. She didn't look up. She didn't breathe. The world narrowed to the text under her thumb.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1630
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"silk"
count3
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"gloom"
count1
11
word"calculated"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"scanned"
2"tracing"
3"traced"
4"silk"
5"shattered"
6"flickered"
7"warmth"
8"trembled"
9"depths"
10"gloom"
11"calculated"
12"tension"
13"unspoken"
14"reminder"
15"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences144
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1630
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions76
wordCount1630
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory23
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Cardiff2
Eva19
Taff1
Evan3
Silas5
London3
You16
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.794
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if trying to push back a migraine"
1"as if expecting the ghost they'd summoned to walk through it"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1630
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"learned that people"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean37.91
std28.69
cv0.757
sampleLengths
0104
1101
21
337
45
540
64
765
86
988
1019
1154
1223
1339
1414
1552
1625
1766
1841
1925
2038
2176
228
2337
246
2539
2628
2727
2836
2980
308
3137
3217
3356
343
3512
3620
3779
383
3976
4011
4184
4240
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences144
matches
0"get swallowed"
1"was gone"
2"was gone"
3"were filled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs284
matches
0"were leaving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences144
ratio0.007
matches
0"The years between them weren't just empty space; they were filled with choices made in the dark, assumptions that hardened into stone, and the slow decay of trust."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1638
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.021367521367521368
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0018315018315018315
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean11.32
std7.64
cv0.675
sampleLengths
022
122
214
312
419
515
616
721
83
917
104
1113
1227
131
142
1514
1621
175
187
198
2019
216
224
2312
2412
2513
2628
276
287
2914
3014
3120
3217
3316
347
357
365
379
388
3912
4025
415
4212
432
444
4515
4610
474
4810
495
33.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats24
diversityRatio0.1736111111111111
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount70
totalSentences140
matches
0"She pushed through the heavy"
1"Her blue eyes swept the"
2"Her face had shed the"
3"Her left hand tightened on"
4"She traced the small crescent-shaped"
5"You kept the hair shorter."
6"She reached for the gin,"
7"I told you to come"
8"He polished a tumbler with"
9"His left leg shifted, the"
10"He didn't look up, but"
11"You told me you had"
12"You told me you had"
13"You didn't mention the wolves."
14"She leaned forward, the shadows"
15"I carved out the soft"
16"you kept the edges."
17"She didn't read it."
18"She used the action to"
19"You knew the difference."
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount132
totalSentences140
matches
0"The green neon hummed against"
1"She pushed through the heavy"
2"Maps of forgotten empires lined"
3"Rory shrugged off the weight"
4"Her blue eyes swept the"
5"The shoulders squared against the"
6"Rory stepped closer."
7"The light from the fixture"
8"The woman looked up."
9"Her face had shed the"
10"Her left hand tightened on"
11"She traced the small crescent-shaped"
12"You kept the hair shorter."
13"Rory slid into the booth"
14"The wood groaned under the"
15"Eva's gaze dropped to Rory's"
16"A muscle feathered in Eva's"
17"Eva's voice carried the faintest"
18"She reached for the gin,"
19"A silver ring adorned her"
ratio0.943
35.71% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"Now, sharp angles defined her"
ratio0.007
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Eva's eyes flickered toward the sound, a reflex that spoke of high-strung nerves buried under layers of composure."
1"The memory of Evan's hand around her wrist flared hot, then cooled instantly into the cold calculation that had kept her alive this long."
2"She shifted her body, angling her torso away from the door, placing the table between herself and the exit."
3"You sent a one-way ticket and a key to a room that smells of stale yeast and damp plaster."
4"She leaned in, closing the gap, her voice dropping to a register that matched the low thrum of the neon sign outside."
5"She rubbed her temple, her fingers pressing into the skin as if trying to push back a migraine."
6"The unspoken regret hung in the air, thick as the smoke that used to fill their student union, a reminder of a path not taken that had led them both to this tab…"
7"The ink revealed a name, a date, and a line of numbers that made her pulse hammer against her veins."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.2902%