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Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZXT8RF1DB2X46T9NQMQV3
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.5 Plus (2026-04-20)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 28s
Cost:
$0.015749
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
92.24%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
53.45%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
50.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
56.41%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
18.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
55.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
90.8368%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The third deadbolt slid back
with a metallic clack.
I cracked the door, expecting
the curry house manager demanding overdue rent or a lost parcel.
The man standing on the
welcome mat held none of that. He held my breath hostage.
Lucien Moreau stood in the
dim hallway, rain beading on his charcoal shoulder, though I had not noted the weather.
His ivory cane tapped once
against the floorboards. One amber eye, one obsidian pit, fixed on my face.
You have a reputation for
vanishing, Lucien. I leaned against the doorframe. Left wrist brushed the threshold.
The crescent scar there caught
the hallway light. Do you always return with a blade in your walking stick. He smiled.
It did not reach his
eyes.
Only when the streets demand
it. Ptolemy wound around his ankles, purring.
Lucien knelt, one knee kissing
the stained rug.
He scratched the tabby behind
the ears. Black leather gloves creaked silently. Impeccable. Always immaculate. Come in before the neighbours take an interest. I pulled the door wider.
Your perfume will travel down
the stairwell. He rose. Cane clicked against the floor. He stepped inside.
The cramped flat swallowed his
height.
Towers of leatherbound books and
parchment scrolls leaned against every wall.
Eva had turned her sanctuary
into a research fortress. I had inherited the chaos. Spice thickened the air, cumin and coriander seeping through the floorboards from the kitchen below. I breathed it in. Anchored myself. You kept the place. He turned
slowly
. Amber and black eyes swept over a desk buried under translation notes and half emptied tea mugs. Still chasing ghosts. Still paying rent. I crossed the room. Fingers found the kettle switch.
You did not come for
a tour.
He placed his cane on
a side table. The ivory handle gleamed.
I came to collect what
is mine. I turned the kettle on. Steam
began to
whistle from the spout.
Your words are always so
precise. Yet your actions leave such messes. You told me to leave. He did not raise his voice. The calm was worse than shouting. You packed a bag. Left a note. Never looked back. I had reasons. I reached for the tea tin. My thumb
traced
the crescent scar again. A nervous habit. He noticed. He always noticed. Reasons built on fear. He stepped closer. The scent of sandalwood and cold iron rolled off him. And a lie you told yourself about Evan. The kettle screamed. I poured. The ceramic mug warmed my palms. Evan is dead. That is the only truth you need. Lucien’s jaw tightened. A muscle jumped beneath his cheek. You did not tell me you handled him. You were busy. I set the mug on the stack of papers. Fixing other people’s problems while mine bled out. He reached out. Fingers hovered near my wrist. I did not pull away. The heat radiating from his skin clashed with the
chill
in the room. I stayed away to keep you breathing. A noble sacrifice. I pulled my hand back. Water sloshed over the rim. Did it cost you sleep. It cost me everything. He did not blink. The heterochromatic gaze pinned me in place. You
think
I walked out of your life because I wanted to? I walked out because if I stayed, I would have torn this city apart to keep you safe. Ptolemy leapt onto the desk. Tail
flicked
. Knocked a stack of scrolls to the floor. Neither of us looked down. Dry leaves crunched under the tabby’s paws. The smell of aged paper mixed with the spice. You broke my trust. The words left my throat raw. You promised to stay when the shadows got long. You vanished. I
was hunting
the men who marked you. His voice dropped. Rough. Unfiltered. Every night. Every alley. I tracked their blood signatures through the underground tunnels. I nearly died three times. I came back for you. You
were gone
. I closed my eyes. The memory hit like a struck match. The packing. The note. The fear that if I stayed another day, Lucien’s world would swallow me whole. You never asked me to run with you. I thought I
was protecting
you from the truth. He stepped into my space. The air grew thick. His chest rose against mine. I felt the
weight
of him. The danger. The pull. I am not a man who shares his burdens, Rory. I am a man who carries them alone. And now? I tilted my chin up. Eyes met. Sparks flew.
Now you return with excuses
wrapped in
silk
.
Now you are in danger
again. His hand found my hip. Pull. Not rough. Commanding. They found you. The syndicate that trained Evan. They
know
you have the ledger. My
pulse
jumped. I kept my face blank. What ledger. The one you stole from your ex. His thumb brushed the fabric over my ribs. A caress that
felt like a brand
. You thought I did not
know
. I
know
everything you touch. You monitor me. Heat flared in my chest. I am not a specimen. You are my responsibility. He leaned down. Breath warm against my temple. Always were. From the moment you walked into my office and demanded answers. I demanded justice. I gripped his lapels. Fabric fine. Expensive. You gave me a gun and a one way ticket. I gave you a chance to breathe. His lips brushed my jaw. Lingering. Asking. A silent plea. Let me finish it. Finish what. I turned my head. Our noses brushed. The
tension
coiled tight. Dangerous. Familiar. Another mission? Another disappearance. This time I do not leave. His mouth captured mine. Hard. Desperate. Taste of bitter herbs and something ancient. I melted. Then fought back. Fingers tangled in his slicked back hair. Yanked. He groaned into the kiss. Ptolemy hissed. Leapt away. I broke the kiss. Chest heaving. You do not get to do this. I already did. He did not step back. Hand slid to my neck. Thumb
traced
my throat. You want this. You always wanted this. I want you to admit you were wrong. I pressed my forehead to his. Eyes closed. I want you to say you were afraid. Afraid. He laughed. Low. Dark. You have never met fear, little bird. I am the fear. Then tell me. I opened my eyes. Blue meeting multicoloured. Tell me you stayed away because you loved me, not because you were afraid I would break. His breath hitched. The mask slipped. Just for a second. Raw. Unarmed. I stayed away because I knew how badly I would ruin you. The truth hung between us. Heavy. Suffocating. Beautiful. I reached for the drawer beneath the desk. Fingers closed around cold steel. Drew out a folded square of heavy paper. The ledger. You want this? Take it. Lucien stared. Amber and black dilated. You kept it. I kept everything. I stepped closer. Pressed the paper against his chest.
Now tell me why you
are
really
here, Lucien. And do not use those polished little lies. His hand covered mine. Held the ledger fast. Because they are coming tonight. And I will not let them take you again. Heavy boots
echoed
in the stairwell. Three sets. Spreading out. The metal door frame shuddered. A key scratched the lock. Lucien moved. Fast. Cane snatched from the table. Blade slid out with a
whisper
. He positioned himself between me and the door. Get behind me. He did not look back. Eyes locked on the threshold. I did not hide. Pulled a second knife from my boot. I am done hiding. The first deadbolt turned. Then the second. The third held. Barely. Lucien’s jaw set. Shoulder squared. Stay sharp, Rory. The door splintered.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
92.24%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1289
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"really"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
53.45%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1289
totalAiIsms
12
found
0
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
1
word
"traced"
count
2
2
word
"chill"
count
1
3
word
"flicked"
count
1
4
word
"weight"
count
1
5
word
"silk"
count
1
6
word
"pulse"
count
1
7
word
"tension"
count
1
8
word
"familiar"
count
1
9
word
"echoed"
count
1
10
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"sanctuary"
1
"traced"
2
"chill"
3
"flicked"
4
"weight"
5
"silk"
6
"pulse"
7
"tension"
8
"familiar"
9
"echoed"
10
"whisper"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
260
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
3
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
260
filterMatches
0
"think"
1
"know"
hedgeMatches
0
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
260
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
20
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1289
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
50.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
48
wordCount
1289
uniqueNames
8
maxNameDensity
1.78
worstName
"You"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"You"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Lucien
9
Evan
3
Rory
2
You
23
Ptolemy
3
Fingers
4
Eyes
3
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Evan"
3
"Rory"
4
"You"
5
"Ptolemy"
6
"Fingers"
7
"Eyes"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.608
windowScore
0.5
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
88
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like a brand"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1289
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
260
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
121
mean
10.65
std
9.21
cv
0.865
sampleLengths
0
41
1
38
2
7
3
18
4
11
5
8
6
6
7
29
8
8
9
5
10
7
11
62
12
4
13
20
14
3
15
3
16
9
17
7
18
12
19
7
20
12
21
12
22
5
23
12
24
10
25
3
26
21
27
4
28
13
29
8
30
11
31
10
32
9
33
8
34
3
35
9
36
8
37
26
38
7
39
3
40
10
41
5
42
4
43
11
44
30
45
36
46
4
47
6
48
11
49
8
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
260
matches
0
"were gone"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
276
matches
0
"was hunting"
1
"was protecting"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
260
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1289
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
38
adverbRatio
0.02948021722265322
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.0062063615205585725
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
260
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
260
mean
4.96
std
3.23
cv
0.652
sampleLengths
0
9
1
16
2
11
3
5
4
20
5
8
6
10
7
7
8
5
9
5
10
8
11
11
12
2
13
6
14
6
15
6
16
8
17
7
18
5
19
1
20
2
21
8
22
5
23
7
24
2
25
5
26
3
27
6
28
11
29
9
30
5
31
15
32
4
33
2
34
4
35
3
36
17
37
3
38
3
39
4
40
5
41
7
42
8
43
4
44
7
45
5
46
7
47
6
48
6
49
5
56.41%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
20
diversityRatio
0.38461538461538464
totalSentences
260
uniqueOpeners
100
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
7
totalSentences
200
matches
0
"Only when the streets demand"
1
"Still chasing ghosts."
2
"Still paying rent."
3
"Then fought back."
4
"Then tell me."
5
"Just for a second."
6
"Then the second."
ratio
0.035
18.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
101
totalSentences
200
matches
0
"I cracked the door, expecting"
1
"He held my breath hostage."
2
"His ivory cane tapped once"
3
"You have a reputation for"
4
"I leaned against the doorframe."
5
"It did not reach his"
6
"He scratched the tabby behind"
7
"I pulled the door wider."
8
"Your perfume will travel down"
9
"He stepped inside."
10
"I had inherited the chaos."
11
"I breathed it in."
12
"You kept the place."
13
"He turned slowly."
14
"I crossed the room."
15
"You did not come for"
16
"He placed his cane on"
17
"I came to collect what"
18
"I turned the kettle on."
19
"Your words are always so"
ratio
0.505
55.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
162
totalSentences
200
matches
0
"The third deadbolt slid back"
1
"I cracked the door, expecting"
2
"The man standing on the"
3
"He held my breath hostage."
4
"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5
"His ivory cane tapped once"
6
"You have a reputation for"
7
"I leaned against the doorframe."
8
"The crescent scar there caught"
9
"It did not reach his"
10
"Ptolemy wound around his ankles,"
11
"Lucien knelt, one knee kissing"
12
"He scratched the tabby behind"
13
"I pulled the door wider."
14
"Your perfume will travel down"
15
"Cane clicked against the floor."
16
"He stepped inside."
17
"The cramped flat swallowed his"
18
"Towers of leatherbound books and"
19
"Eva had turned her sanctuary"
ratio
0.81
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
4
totalSentences
200
matches
0
"Now you return with excuses"
1
"Now you are in danger"
2
"Now tell me why you"
3
"Because they are coming tonight."
ratio
0.02
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
18
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"I am not a man who shares his burdens, Rory."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
90.8368%