Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ6ZYSFNFHPHZM2NW8DTD0K3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 27s
Cost:
$0.014168
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy, lubricated clunk that vibrated through the frame of Eva's door. Rory didn't hesitate. She killed the momentum of her pacing and pulled the door open, her body coiled for threat assessment before her brain could catch up to her gut. The hallway smelled of stale curry and damp brick, the pervasive scent of Brick Lane seeping up from the restaurant below, but the air around the man standing on the welcome mat was different. It carried notes of sandalwood, ozone, and something sharper—iron and ash. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow corridor, looking as if he'd just stepped out of a boardroom in Monaco rather than the grime of East London. He wore a charcoal suit tailored to within an inch of its life, the fabric dark enough to swallow the flickering light of the hallway bulb. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand daring to break rank. In his right hand, the ivory handle of his cane caught the glint of a passing car's headlights through the transom window. Rory's eyes flicked to the cane, then up to his face. Lucien's heterochromatic gaze locked onto hers. One eye was the color of polished amber, warm and deceptively human. The other was a void of black, pupil and iris merging into a depthless shadow that betrayed the demon blood running cold in his veins. He looked exactly the same as the night she'd fled, and entirely different. The sharp angles of his jaw were tighter, drawn up with a tension he couldn't quite hide, and the easy arrogance that usually draped his shoulders was gone. "Rory," he said. Her name in his voice was a texture, low and rough at the edges, the vowels softened by that Marseille lilt that had haunted her sleep since she left Cardiff. "You're loud for a fixer," Rory said. Her voice was steady, cool. She'd practiced this voice. It was the one that got her through deliveries to the wrong addresses and negotiations with drunk patrons at Silas's bar without spilling a drop. She kept her hand tight on the door knob, knuckles white. "You knock, the cat wakes up, and three deadbolts slide open. If you wanted to kill me, Lucien, you could have picked the lock without making dinner for the neighbors." Lucien's head tilted a fraction. "I wouldn't pick a lock that belonged to you. I respect your security. And my timing." He shifted his weight, and the ivory cane tapped once against the floorboards. The sound was precise, deliberate. "Eva isn't here." "I know Eva isn't here. She's at the archives. This is her flat." Rory's mind raced, quick and lateral, trying to map the variables. Why here? Why now? He was the man who had burned bridges to save her skin, then vanished into the supernatural underbelly of London without a word. He was the man who had told her, with blood slicking his fingers and his breath ragged, *Go. Don't look back.* "I know where your friend lives," Lucien said, his amber eye catching the light as he stepped a half-inch closer. The movement was fluid, predatory grace restrained by immense control. "I'm not here for Eva. I'm here for you." Rory's left wrist burned. She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar with her thumb, a nervous tic she couldn't suppress, though she refused to drop her hand from the door. The scar throbbed, a phantom echo of the childhood accident, but in this moment, it felt connected to something else. To the night Lucien had dragged her out of a warehouse in Shoreditch, his hand gripping her wrist tight enough to bruise, his black eye burning with a fury that terrified her almost as much as the creatures hunting them. "Past tense," Rory said, her blue eyes hardening. "You were here for me six weeks ago. You told me I was a liability. You told me to run before you couldn't keep me safe." She spat the words out, sharp and precise. "So either you've come to confirm I haven't been killed, or you've finally realized that your information broker instincts are failing because you walked into the one flat in London where I happen to be staying." Lucien's gaze dropped to her wrist, tracking the motion of her thumb over the scar, before dragging back up to her face. A muscle feathered in his jaw. "I came to confirm you're alive. And to tell you that running is no longer an option." The air between them tightened, charged with the static of unsaid things. Rory could feel the heat radiating off him, the unnatural warmth of his half-demon physiology warring with the chill of the drafty hallway. The attraction was a physical weight in her chest, a gravity she'd spent weeks trying to outrun. It was there in the way her breath hitched when he leaned in, in the sudden urge to reach out and straighten the lapel of that perfect suit, to see if the heart beating beneath it was as erratic as his eyes suggested. "I'm not running," Rory said, her voice dropping. "I'm staying right where I am. Above Silas's bar. Working. Living. Not being dragged into your war." "Your war," Lucien corrected softly. He raised a hand, the fingers long and elegant, but he didn't touch her. He hovered his hand near her cheek, close enough that she could feel the displacement of air, the whisper of his scent. "You think this stops because I step away? You think the things that hunt me don't follow the scent of everyone I've touched?" Rory flinched, just barely. "Is that what this is? A threat?" "It's a promise." Lucien's black eye seemed to swallow the dim light, dark and earnest. "They tracked the sigil I left on you, Rory. It's a marker. I thought if I severed the tie, if I made you hate me, the signal would dampen. It didn't. They're in the city. Now. If I leave this doorway, you have an hour before my enemies turn your life into a ledger of debts I couldn't pay." The words hit her with the force of a physical blow. Rory's mind scrabbled for logic, for a counter-argument, but the cool calculation that was her shield cracked under the raw intensity of his stare. He looked exhausted. The impeccable armor of the fixer was buckling, revealing the man beneath—the half-breed bastard of Marseille who carried the world on shoulders that looked too slender to bear it. He hadn't come to gloat. He hadn't come to manipulate. He had come because he was trapped, and he had dragged her back into the net to keep her tethered to something safe. "Silas will kill you if you bring heat to his door," Rory whispered, the threat feeling flimsy even as she spoke it. "Silas knows what I am. Silas owes me a favor I intend to cash. But you..." Lucien's hand finally moved, his knuckles brushing the line of her jaw. The contact was electric, searing and gentle all at once. His skin was hot. "You have to decide. I can stay. I can fortify this place, keep them off you until we find a counter-sigil. But I stay, I stay in your space. In your face. No more running, Rory. No more goodbyes in the dark." His thumb grazed her cheekbone, a caress so tender it made her throat ache. Rory looked at him, really looked at him, past the suit, past the cane with the thin blade concealed within, past the scar that marked her as his mark. She saw the plea masked as a warning. She saw the man who had chosen her safety over his own heart, again and again, until there was nothing left but this inevitable collision. From inside the flat, a soft *mrrp* sounded. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, wound around Lucien's ankles, purring with traitorous volume. Lucien didn't shoo the beast away. He kept his weight over his feet, his gaze never leaving Rory's, waiting. The history between them unspooled in the silence—the attraction that had sparked in back alleys and safe houses, the hurt of his abandonment, the things left unsaid in the moments before he'd shoved her onto the Tube. He was dangerous. He was complicated. He was the kind of trouble that could burn her entire world to ash. Rory's fingers relaxed on the door knob. The scar on her wrist pulsed, warm and steady. "Get in," she said, her voice rough, shedding the cool facade to reveal the fierce, intelligent spark that had kept her alive this long. "Before you start hyperventilating in my hallway. And if you track mud on Eva's scrolls, Moreau, I'll use your cane to dismantle you." A ghost of a smile touched Lucien's lips, genuine and fleeting. "Noted." He stepped across the threshold. As he passed her, the heat of him wrapped around her like a shield. Rory kicked the third deadbolt home with a decisive thud, sealing them in together. The lock clicked, final and absolute. She was trapped, and for the first time in six weeks, the knot in her chest loosened.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien corrected softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.52
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
93.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1535
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"glint"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"variables"
count1
8
word"restrained"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"charged"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count2
13
word"warmth"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"perfect"
count1
16
word"whisper"
count1
17
word"intensity"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"searing"
count1
20
word"silence"
count1
21
word"pulsed"
count1
22
word"facade"
count1
23
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"glint"
2"flicked"
3"tension"
4"lilt"
5"weight"
6"raced"
7"variables"
8"restrained"
9"throbbed"
10"echo"
11"charged"
12"could feel"
13"warmth"
14"chill"
15"perfect"
16"whisper"
17"intensity"
18"electric"
19"searing"
20"silence"
21"pulsed"
22"facade"
23"fleeting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1532
ratio0.003
matches
0"Go. Don't look back."
1"mrrp"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.29% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1159
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Monaco1
East1
London2
Marseille2
Cardiff1
Silas1
Lucien12
Shoreditch1
Rory15
Tube1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Silas"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Monaco"
3"East"
4"London"
5"Marseille"
6"Cardiff"
7"Shoreditch"
globalScore0.853
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite hide, and the easy arrogance that usually draped his shoulders was gone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1532
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
92.02% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean56.74
std26.79
cv0.472
sampleLengths
048
145
298
384
433
582
642
772
839
988
1078
1145
1295
1325
1464
1511
1674
17100
1822
1984
2076
2139
2257
2316
2447
2512
2656
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was buckling"
52.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences95
ratio0.032
matches
0"It carried notes of sandalwood, ozone, and something sharper—iron and ash."
1"The impeccable armor of the fixer was buckling, revealing the man beneath—the half-breed bastard of Marseille who carried the world on shoulders that looked too slender to bear it."
2"The history between them unspooled in the silence—the attraction that had sparked in back alleys and safe houses, the hurt of his abandonment, the things left unsaid in the moments before he'd shoved her onto the Tube."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1167
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.028277634961439587
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007712082262210797
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean16.13
std11.36
cv0.705
sampleLengths
018
13
227
334
411
526
626
713
822
911
106
1112
1225
1313
1428
153
1630
177
185
194
2025
2111
2230
235
2429
255
263
2724
282
292
3023
3118
323
3320
3410
359
364
3724
3820
3940
408
4134
4236
4322
446
4517
4612
4723
4817
4943
40.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.30526315789473685
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
52.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences79
matches
0"She killed the momentum of"
1"It carried notes of sandalwood,"
2"He wore a charcoal suit"
3"His platinum hair was slicked"
4"He looked exactly the same"
5"Her name in his voice"
6"Her voice was steady, cool."
7"She'd practiced this voice."
8"It was the one that"
9"She kept her hand tight"
10"He shifted his weight, and"
11"He was the man who"
12"He was the man who"
13"She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
14"She spat the words out,"
15"It was there in the"
16"He raised a hand, the"
17"He hovered his hand near"
18"He looked exhausted."
19"He hadn't come to gloat."
ratio0.418
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences79
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Rory didn't hesitate."
2"She killed the momentum of"
3"The hallway smelled of stale"
4"It carried notes of sandalwood,"
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"He wore a charcoal suit"
7"His platinum hair was slicked"
8"Rory's eyes flicked to the"
9"Lucien's heterochromatic gaze locked onto"
10"The other was a void"
11"He looked exactly the same"
12"The sharp angles of his"
13"Her name in his voice"
14"Her voice was steady, cool."
15"She'd practiced this voice."
16"It was the one that"
17"She kept her hand tight"
18"Lucien's head tilted a fraction."
19"He shifted his weight, and"
ratio0.924
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"To the night Lucien had"
ratio0.013
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The other was a void of black, pupil and iris merging into a depthless shadow that betrayed the demon blood running cold in his veins."
1"Her name in his voice was a texture, low and rough at the edges, the vowels softened by that Marseille lilt that had haunted her sleep since she left Cardiff."
2"He was the man who had told her, with blood slicking his fingers and his breath ragged, *Go."
3"To the night Lucien had dragged her out of a warehouse in Shoreditch, his hand gripping her wrist tight enough to bruise, his black eye burning with a fury that…"
4"Lucien's gaze dropped to her wrist, tracking the motion of her thumb over the scar, before dragging back up to her face."
5"Rory's mind scrabbled for logic, for a counter-argument, but the cool calculation that was her shield cracked under the raw intensity of his stare."
6"The impeccable armor of the fixer was buckling, revealing the man beneath—the half-breed bastard of Marseille who carried the world on shoulders that looked too…"
7"She saw the man who had chosen her safety over his own heart, again and again, until there was nothing left but this inevitable collision."
8"The history between them unspooled in the silence—the attraction that had sparked in back alleys and safe houses, the hurt of his abandonment, the things left u…"
9"He was the kind of trouble that could burn her entire world to ash."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory said, her blue eyes hardening"
1"Rory said, her voice dropping"
2"Rory whispered, the threat feeling flimsy even as she spoke it"
30.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She spat (spit)"
1"Lucien corrected softly (correct)"
2"Rory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.24
74.2818%