Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ701V6HS17D83ZSYQVFP03P

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.010859
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign bled through the rain-streaked window, painting long crimson stripes across the polished floorboards. Rory pushed through the heavy oak door and let the damp London air seal behind her. The bell above the frame gave a dull click. Inside, the place smelled of lemon wax, roasted coffee beans, and the faint metallic tang of old copper pipes. Maps curling at the edges covered the walls, their borders frayed and their coastlines shifted by decades of neglect. Black-and-white photographs hung in brass frames, capturing faces that never smiled. She shrugged off her coat. The fabric clung to her shoulders. She shook it out and hung it on the rack near the entrance. She scanned the room. Three stools lined the bar. A couple occupied a corner booth, tracing condensation rings into the wood. Near the back, past a row of amber bottles and a brass rail for coat hooks, a man sat alone. His back faced the street-facing window. His shoulders slumped inward. He drank from a glass he never lifted higher than his chest. Rory stopped. The air between them grew thick. Ten years had hollowed him out. Julian used to pace the library steps in Cardiff, knees bouncing, fingers drumming rhythms against his thighs. He used to fill rooms with arguments, with plans, with the reckless certainty of a young man who believed he could outrun consequence. Now his hands lay flat on the table. His knuckles had thickened. A pale line bisected his left eyebrow, cutting through the hair and disappearing into his temple. His jaw sat heavy. He looked down at the glass. He did not reach for it. Rory took three steps forward. The floorboards groaned under her boots. He lifted his head. His eyes caught the low light. The recognition hit him without hesitation. His pupils contracted. He did not smile. He shifted his weight and kicked out the empty chair across from him. The wood scraped against the floor. She sat. You look like you walked out of a storm. The water soaked through my jacket. I should have brought proper gear. He watched her hands. She kept them folded in her lap. He tapped a fingernail against the rim of his glass. The sound was sharp and precise. You go by Rory now. I do. People need a name that fits. He nodded slowly. His gaze drifted to the scar on her left wrist. The crescent mark peeked from beneath her cuff. She pulled the fabric down. He looked away. The barkeep behind the counter moved without sound. Silas wiped a rag along the edge of a tumbler. His grey-streaked hair caught the dim overhead bulb. He did not look up. He kept polishing. I heard you left Cardiff. I went to London. Right after the exams. Right after everything else. He traced the condensation on his glass. The water pooled at the base. He pushed the glass forward. I heard you took the solicitor course. Then dropped it. I listened to my father talk about contract law for three years. I stopped caring halfway through. His jaw tightened. A muscle jumped beneath his skin. He looked at the photographs on the wall. The frames held men in trench coats and women with sharp bobbed hair. The faces stared back in silence. I dropped out as well. I know. Your mother wrote about it. She did not mention where you went. He exhaled through his nose. The breath came out as a short puff. He rubbed his thumb over the base of his glass. I went north. Then across the channel. The work was different from what we studied. The people did not care about precedent. They cared about survival. She watched his hands. They moved with deliberate slowness. The tension lived in his shoulders. It radiated outward. He wore a jacket that had been mended three times. The stitching on the cuff was dark against the faded wool. He had traded his old restlessness for stillness. The change sat heavy in his posture. He looked like a man who had spent years holding his breath. You look tired. Sleep does not come when the mind keeps running. I stopped trying to catch it. He lifted the glass. His fingers trembled. The liquid sloshed. He drank. The amber color caught the light. He set the glass down. His eyes locked onto hers. I thought about you. Every time I passed a law library. Every time I saw a briefcase on a train. She kept her face neutral. The words hung between them. She did not reach for them. She let them sit. You could have written. You could have called. I wrote letters I never posted. The postage cost more than I could spare. The stamps piled up in a drawer. I still have them. He reached into his coat pocket. His fingers brushed against a small leather pad. He did not pull it out. He left his hand in the pocket. The fabric creased around his wrist. She noticed the way his thumb pressed against the seam. He pressed until the skin blanched. We were supposed to open a practice. You said we would take anything. Court battles. Tenancy disputes. Anything with teeth. We were twenty. We believed anger was enough. He shook his head. The motion was slow. He looked past her. The neon sign buzzed outside. The light pulsed through the window frames. Shadows stretched across the floor. The maps on the walls seemed to shift in the flicker. He looked back at her. I married someone who hated the quiet. I left before the house tore itself apart. She took the furniture. I kept the silence. She watched his throat work. The movement was tight. He looked down at his hands again. The knuckles had turned pale. He flexed them. The tendons stood out. I never asked what happened. You did not have to. The details do not matter. What matters is that I chose wrong. I chose the wrong street. I chose the wrong room. I chose to walk away when I should have stayed standing. He picked up a matchbook from the table. The cover was torn. The matches inside were bent. He ran his thumbnail along the edge. The paper caught. He stopped. He placed the book flat. He stared at the torn cover. You look different, Julian. The boy who argued about torts is gone. That boy drowned himself in certainty. I learned that certainty breaks men faster than doubt. He finally looked at her. His eyes held hers. The weight in them did not waver. She felt it press against her chest. She kept her breathing steady. She did not look away. You left a piece of yourself in every city you passed through. I left something in Cardiff too. I just did not know it at the time. He slid his chair back. The legs scuffed against the floor. He reached for his coat. His fingers brushed the edge of the table. He hesitated. He did not move his hand away. He left it resting on the wood. I thought about telling you the truth when I first saw you. The truth is heavier than I expected. She waited. The bar kept its rhythm. The couple in the corner stood up. Their chairs scraped against the floor. They buttoned their coats. They walked out. The door clicked shut. The neon buzzed louder. Julian kept his hand on the table. His breath slowed. He did not look away. He waited for her to speak. She watched the matchbook. She watched his fingers. She kept her eyes on the scar above his brow. He did not move. The air between them stayed still. He leaned forward. His voice dropped. Tell me you kept the letters I never sent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"tracing"
2"eyebrow"
3"weight"
4"traced"
5"silence"
6"tension"
7"trembled"
8"pulsed"
9"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences206
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1307
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount1307
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
London2
Cardiff3
Rory4
Julian3
You9
persons
0"Rory"
1"Julian"
2"You"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a man who had spent years hol"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1307
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences206
matches
0"is that I"
1"learned that certainty"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean29.04
std30.16
cv1.038
sampleLengths
0115
1161
255
39
412
527
65
78
863
95
1012
1118
1210
1317
1436
155
1614
1723
1826
1966
203
2115
2228
2320
2420
258
2625
2749
2820
298
3045
3123
3228
335
3438
3540
3612
3715
3833
3912
4015
4140
4219
4390
449
98.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences206
matches
0"been mended"
1"were supposed"
2"was torn"
3"is gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs268
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences206
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1312
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.01600609756097561
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001524390243902439
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean6.34
std3.46
cv0.545
sampleLengths
017
116
29
319
419
511
65
76
813
94
105
1112
1220
136
144
1512
162
176
186
1917
2023
218
224
2316
244
256
266
275
286
294
306
316
323
334
3413
356
362
379
386
396
404
417
4210
436
445
452
466
473
4810
498
33.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats35
diversityRatio0.1650485436893204
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners34
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences196
matches
0"Right after the exams."
1"Right after everything else."
2"Then dropped it."
3"Then across the channel."
ratio0.02
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount122
totalSentences196
matches
0"She shrugged off her coat."
1"She shook it out and"
2"She scanned the room."
3"His back faced the street-facing"
4"His shoulders slumped inward."
5"He drank from a glass"
6"He used to fill rooms"
7"His knuckles had thickened."
8"His jaw sat heavy."
9"He looked down at the"
10"He did not reach for"
11"He lifted his head."
12"His eyes caught the low"
13"His pupils contracted."
14"He did not smile."
15"He shifted his weight and"
16"You look like you walked"
17"I should have brought proper"
18"He watched her hands."
19"She kept them folded in"
ratio0.622
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount184
totalSentences196
matches
0"The green neon sign bled"
1"Rory pushed through the heavy"
2"The bell above the frame"
3"Maps curling at the edges"
4"She shrugged off her coat."
5"The fabric clung to her"
6"She shook it out and"
7"She scanned the room."
8"A couple occupied a corner"
9"His back faced the street-facing"
10"His shoulders slumped inward."
11"He drank from a glass"
12"The air between them grew"
13"Julian used to pace the"
14"He used to fill rooms"
15"His knuckles had thickened."
16"A pale line bisected his"
17"His jaw sat heavy."
18"He looked down at the"
19"He did not reach for"
ratio0.939
25.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences196
matches
0"Now his hands lay flat"
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He used to fill rooms with arguments, with plans, with the reckless certainty of a young man who believed he could outrun consequence."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.8422%