| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.418 | | leniency | 0.836 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1730 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1730 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "kaleidoscope" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "unravel" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "maw" | | 14 | "trembled" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "clenched fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 234 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 234 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 264 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 77.46% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 106 | | totalWords | 1730 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The air here drinks sound.\"" | | 1 | "\"And the shadow bites back.\"" | | 2 | "\"These trees remember Aldric.\"" | | 3 | "\"Before the veil of shadow, before the fall. They sang the same song. A melody of rotting sweetness.\"" | | 4 | "\"Ash burns.\"" | | 5 | "\"Memory is fire. It consumes.\"" | | 6 | "\"Eyes,\"" | | 7 | "\"Many eyes wake beneath the mold. They know the toll of the shade. They hunger for the in-between.\"" | | 8 | "\"Mortal anchors,\"" | | 9 | "\"You are useful, Little Carter.\"" | | 10 | "\"Dymas bleeds inward. A portal festers here. It feeds on the silence.\"" | | 11 | "\"It calls the shade. It calls the glutton.\"" | | 12 | "\"More. Give more.\"" | | 13 | "\"Hurry, mortal. I cannot hold the hunger long.\"" | | 14 | "\"Close.\"" | | 15 | "\"Too close to the edge. The stone... it fed.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 28.14% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 83 | | wordCount | 1313 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 32 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Earth | 1 | | Nyx | 18 | | Shadow-dust | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Roots | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Drifted | 1 | | Hands | 1 | | Isolde | 16 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shadow-dust" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Roots" | | 7 | "Drifted" | | 8 | "Hands" | | 9 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.281 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1730 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 264 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 77 | | mean | 22.47 | | std | 12.26 | | cv | 0.546 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 37 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 234 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 272 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 264 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1320 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.015909090909090907 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0030303030303030303 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 264 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 264 | | mean | 6.55 | | std | 4.21 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 57.07% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36742424242424243 | | totalSentences | 264 | | uniqueOpeners | 97 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots left no depression" | | 1 | "He shed flakes of darkness" | | 2 | "She swallowed it down." | | 3 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent" | | 4 | "Her voice wove through the" | | 5 | "Their branches bore fruit that" | | 6 | "His silhouette warped, the ambient" | | 7 | "He never spoke of his" | | 8 | "She kept her gaze forward." | | 9 | "she noted, plucking a wildflower" | | 10 | "Her heartbeat slowed, sluggish as" | | 11 | "She checked her watch." | | 12 | "She tapped the glass." | | 13 | "She looked at her hand." | | 14 | "She blinked, and the skin" | | 15 | "She pocketed the watch." | | 16 | "His head snapped toward a" | | 17 | "His form thinned as the" | | 18 | "Her vision blurred." | | 19 | "She forced her mind into" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 182 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory gripped the cold iron" | | 1 | "The air inside the boundary" | | 2 | "The half-fae woman stood at" | | 3 | "Her boots left no depression" | | 4 | "Rory stepped across the line." | | 5 | "The pavement of Richmond Park" | | 6 | "The ground softened into a" | | 7 | "Nyx flowed past her." | | 8 | "The shade's solid form rippled," | | 9 | "He shed flakes of darkness" | | 10 | "Nyx's whisper brushed Rory's ear" | | 11 | "Rory kept her face blank." | | 12 | "Fear tasted like copper." | | 13 | "She swallowed it down." | | 14 | "Her fingers brushed the crescent" | | 15 | "The skin there itched, heating" | | 16 | "The gem radiated heat, a" | | 17 | "The pulse matched the slow" | | 18 | "Isolde glided forward, her pale" | | 19 | "Wildflowers in hues nonexistent on" |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 96.77% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The half-fae woman stood at the threshold, her silver hair drifting as if suspended in water." | | 1 | "Tall grasses uncoiled, their blades etched with runes that bled ink onto the soil, whispering a litany of forgotten names." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 4.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she noted (note)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 7 | "Nyx repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 55 | | tagDensity | 0.255 | | leniency | 0.509 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.291 | |