Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ705VRA49NHG1EM2CW614NG

Run Details

Duration:
3m 33s
Cost:
$0.019653
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon from the sign above bled through the frosted glass, painting long rectangles across the worn floorboards. Rory sat in the corner booth, elbows resting on dark oak, a half-empty tumbler of neat whiskey catching the low light. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb, the old skin catching against the rough weave of her work jacket. The Golden Empress delivery bag slumped against her boot, smelling of soy and star anise. The bar breathed around her. Old maps curled at the edges on the far wall. Black-and-white photographs of forgotten sailors and Soho storefronts hung in uneven rows. Silas moved behind the mahogany counter, polishing a highball glass with a pale cloth, his silver signet ring catching the amber glow. He did not look up. He never did when regulars settled into the quiet hours. The heavy door groaned open. Cold air rushed in, carrying the damp scent of Soho rain. Footsteps measured across the threshold. The leather soles did not scuff. They paused. Rory lifted her head. Gideon stood near the coat rack. He shook water from a wool coat the color of wet slate. His shoulders sat square beneath the fabric, spine rigid, posture carved from something harder than the restless boy who used to sprint across Cardiff University quays. His hair had darkened, swept back without a trace of the messy waves she remembered. A clean line ran along his jaw. His hands, once restless, hung still at his sides. The change sat heavy in the space between them. He turned toward the booth. His eyes found hers. Recognition hit like a struck match. He did not smile. He walked forward, boots quiet on the wood, and slid into the opposite seat. The table creaked under the shift in weight. You kept the hair. He reached for the tumbler she pushed across the table. His fingers brushed the rim, steady, deliberate. He took a sip. The glass clicked down. You look like a stranger. Strangers don't end up in the same city by accident. He ran a thumb along his lower lip. The movement pulled at the skin around his eyes, carving fine lines she had not seen at twenty-two. The boy who used to laugh until he choked on his own words had folded himself into silence. Rory watched his posture. Shoulders locked, knees tight, breath measured. He had sharpened himself into something unyielding. You stopped answering the calls. I moved. Across a city. Or across a continent. You just vanished. Left the flat. Left the notes. Left the keys on the counter. Rory picked up a coaster and spun it on the table. The cardboard edge caught light. She let the circle turn twice before stopping it with a flat palm. Evan came by. You saw what he did. You saw what he wanted. I saw you lock the door. I saw you pick up the phone. You did not tell me to wait. You did not tell me anything. Some things do not need words. You know how it was. You know how he got. I know you ran. I know you left me holding the pieces of a life you decided to break. He leaned forward. The space between them tightened. His knuckles whitened around the glass. The quiet boy who used to argue philosophy until dawn had learned to hold his ground. His voice stayed low, stripped of the old theatrical cadence. You think I did not notice you took the train alone. You think I did not pack your satchel while you showered. I did not pack it. You packed it. You slid the keys under the mat and walked out before the kettle boiled. Rory stared at the wood grain. The bar hummed behind them. Silas set down a stack of coasters. The sound echoed. I had to go. He tracked me to the lecture hall. He waited outside the library. He showed up at my mother's doorstep. I could not stay and watch him tear down what I built. You could have told me. You could have let me stand in the doorway with you. You would have stayed. You always stay. Even when the floor gives way. Gideon exhaled slow. The tension in his neck eased a fraction. He unbuttoned his coat, revealing a crisp shirt beneath, collar tight, tie knotted with military precision. The boy who wore thrift store sweaters three seasons straight had armored himself in order. Order keeps people safe. You know that now. You wear that jacket like a shield. You move through this city like you expect walls to fall. I move like I expect doors to lock. They usually do. He reached into his inner pocket. His hand emerged with a small leather notebook. He placed it on the table. The cover bore the embossed stamp of a Cardiff law firm. His name sat on the spine in silver lettering. He had stayed. He had climbed. He had built the life she left behind. You told me you would follow the bar exam. You told me you would sit in that chair and argue for people who could not speak. You told me we would split the office rent. You told me a thousand things while I packed my life into a duffel bag. I told you what you wanted to hear so you would not pull me back. I knew I had to leave before the fear took root. If I stayed, I would have frozen. I would have let him win. He closed his eyes. The muscles along his jaw worked. When he opened them, the blue had not changed, but the warmth behind it had banked to ash. I waited six weeks. I called your sister. I called your parents. I drove to that flat in London. I knocked on that door above the pub. I told myself you were testing me. I told myself you would come back when the smoke cleared. The smoke never cleared. It just settled into the walls. I sent postcards from Brighton. From Margate. From Dover. You threw them away. I know you did. I saw your handwriting on the envelope. I never opened them. I could not bear to read what you decided for us. It was never us. You were holding onto a ghost. I burned him down. He laughed, quiet and sharp. The sound held no humor. It split the air and died before it hit the floor. I burned down three leases. I burned down a scholarship. I burned down a brotherhood. I burned down every excuse I had for staying put. You think I did not change? You think I sat in that courtroom and argued for strangers while you vanished into the night? I changed because you made me watch the empty space where you used to stand. Rory lifted her head. The words hit like stones. She watched his hands. The old tremor was gone. His fingers rested flat on the table. He had mastered himself. He had mastered the grief by turning it into stone. You look like you carry concrete in your chest. I carry the habit of waiting. I carry the silence you left. I carry the knowledge that when the walls close in, I stand alone because I let you walk away. He stood. The chair scraped against the floor. He did not button his coat. He did not look toward the door. He looked at her wrist. The crescent scar stood pale against the dark skin. He reached out, stopped short, and let his hand drop. You kept the ring. The cheap silver one. You kept it on the chain around your neck. I saw it when you leaned forward. You keep it because you think keeping it means you keep me. It does not. It means you keep the ghost. Let it go. Or let me go. Rory did not move. The bar air grew thick. The neon sign flickered once, painting the room in sickly green. Silas turned a bottle upside down on a rack. Water dripped into the metal sink. The sound measured the silence. I did not leave to forget you. I left so I would not have to watch you watch me break. I left so I would not have to hear you say the words you were saving. I left because the distance would either kill it or make it real. I did not know which. I still do not know. He picked up his glass. He drained the last of the whiskey. The ice clinked against his teeth. He set the glass down with a final tap. Time does not heal distance. It just makes the gap wider. You crossed it without telling me where you landed. I stood on this side and watched the horizon eat your silhouette. You can sit here and tell me you had to run. You can tell me the fear was real. You can tell me the scars make sense. I do not care. I care that you did not look back. You never looked back. You packed your life, you walked out, and you let the years pile up like unpaid invoices. I pay them every day. You do not even know the balance. Rory pressed her palm flat against the table. The wood felt cold. The scar on her wrist throbbed. She looked at his coat, his tied tie, the firm stamp on the notebook, the straight lines of a man who had learned to build walls to survive the absence of a person who preferred to burn doors. I looked back. I looked back when the train pulled out of Paddington. I looked back when I slept on that friend's floor. I looked back when I stood in this exact spot and told myself I would call. I looked back every time a door closed. I just never found you standing where I left you. He did not answer. The silence stretched, heavy and exact. He turned his wrist, revealing the pale line of an old scar, hidden beneath the cuff. He had not been idle. He had not just waited. He had bled too. The knowledge sat between them, unspoken, heavy as lead. Rory reached for her coat. The fabric brushed the table. Her fingers hovered over the notebook with the firm's name. She did not touch it. She let her hand fall. You changed. So did you. You just learned to hide it better. He stepped back. The boots did not scuff. He faced the door. The green neon pulsed against the glass. The maps on the wall seemed to lean inward. The photographs held their breath. Rory watched his profile. The line of his throat. The set of his jaw. The stillness of a man who had learned to carry weight without bending. I do not know if you stayed away because you wanted to survive or because you wanted to punish me. I only know the years have passed. I only know the space where you stood has filled with dust. I only know you walked in here and sat across from me and told me you looked back. I only know I do not believe you. He turned the handle. The latch clicked. Cold air slipped through the frame. The neon sign buzzed. Rory did not move. The scar on her wrist burned. The notebook sat untouched. The silence held. He stepped into the dark. The door closed behind him. The green light spilled across the floorboards. Rory watched the empty seat. The glass held a ring of condensation. The wood still bore the print of his knuckles. The years sat heavy in the room. She did not reach for the notebook. She did not call out. The neon flickered again. The bar exhaled. Rory traced the crescent on her wrist. The wood held the weight. The silence held the rest.
created_at"2026-04-27T08:18:04.254Z" 4/27/2026, 8:18:04 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1999
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1999
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"measured"
count3
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"silence"
count6
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count2
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"footsteps"
2"measured"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"echoed"
6"tension"
7"warmth"
8"flickered"
9"throbbed"
10"unspoken"
11"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences266
matches(empty)
56.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount15
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences266
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
3"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences266
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1999
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1999
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.1
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Soho2
Cardiff2
University1
London1
Brighton1
Margate1
Dover1
Paddington1
Rory13
Silas3
You42
Left3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Brighton"
4"Margate"
5"Dover"
globalScore0.449
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences148
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1999
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences266
matches
0"wear that jacket"
1"care that you"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean37.72
std28.15
cv0.746
sampleLengths
0143
133
284
341
44
525
65
710
861
95
102
1122
1229
1313
1426
1516
1619
1740
1844
1921
2035
2116
2213
2342
2426
2511
2654
2750
2839
2928
3055
3139
3214
3321
3463
3539
369
3731
3845
3952
4040
4159
4227
43104
4456
4557
4649
4730
482
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences266
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs424
matches
0"were testing"
1"were holding"
2"were saving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2003
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.016974538192710935
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0029955067398901645
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences266
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences266
mean7.52
std4.72
cv0.628
sampleLengths
019
121
224
315
45
510
612
722
85
910
105
1111
125
136
142
154
166
1712
1826
1915
207
219
229
235
244
256
264
2714
288
294
3010
317
324
334
345
3510
368
3718
3818
394
406
417
425
432
443
454
463
473
483
496
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats84
diversityRatio0.12781954887218044
totalSentences266
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences260
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount161
totalSentences260
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"He did not look up."
2"He never did when regulars"
3"He shook water from a"
4"His shoulders sat square beneath"
5"His hair had darkened, swept"
6"His hands, once restless, hung"
7"He turned toward the booth."
8"His eyes found hers."
9"He did not smile."
10"He walked forward, boots quiet"
11"You kept the hair."
12"He reached for the tumbler"
13"His fingers brushed the rim,"
14"He took a sip."
15"You look like a stranger."
16"He ran a thumb along"
17"He had sharpened himself into"
18"You stopped answering the calls."
19"You just vanished."
ratio0.619
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount245
totalSentences260
matches
0"The green neon from the"
1"Rory sat in the corner"
2"She traced the crescent scar"
3"The Golden Empress delivery bag"
4"The bar breathed around her."
5"Silas moved behind the mahogany"
6"He did not look up."
7"He never did when regulars"
8"The heavy door groaned open."
9"Footsteps measured across the threshold."
10"The leather soles did not"
11"Rory lifted her head."
12"Gideon stood near the coat"
13"He shook water from a"
14"His shoulders sat square beneath"
15"His hair had darkened, swept"
16"A clean line ran along"
17"His hands, once restless, hung"
18"The change sat heavy in"
19"He turned toward the booth."
ratio0.942
38.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences260
matches
0"Even when the floor gives"
1"If I stayed, I would"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His shoulders sat square beneath the fabric, spine rigid, posture carved from something harder than the restless boy who used to sprint across Cardiff Universit…"
1"The boy who wore thrift store sweaters three seasons straight had armored himself in order."
2"She looked at his coat, his tied tie, the firm stamp on the notebook, the straight lines of a man who had learned to build walls to survive the absence of a per…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.7620%