Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ70AJ7564BX2NYWQVW3PDDE

Run Details

Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.012537
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three heavy deadbolts slid back. The brass chain groaned off its hook. Rory pulled the door wide. Lucien stood in the hall. Charcoal wool draped his shoulders. Platinum hair lay flat against his skull. His ivory cane tapped once against the scuffed floorboards. One eye held the dull gleam of old amber. The other swallowed the hallway light completely black. You locked yourself in. Rory didn’t step back. She kept her shoulder pressed to the doorframe. The scent of turmeric and cumin drifted up from the curry shop below. It clung to the damp air of the flat. I keep them locked. You know that. He shifted his weight. The cane stayed still. His gaze tracked the crescent scar on her left wrist where her sleeve had slipped back. Three years since Marseille. You left without a word. I left because you told me to run. Because you looked at me like I was a liability. Like I was just another body to move out of the blast radius. He stepped forward. One boot crossed the threshold. Ptolemy the tabby darted from behind a stack of leather-bound grimoires. The cat rubbed against Lucien’s trouser leg. He didn’t look down. You were standing in a room full of burning wards. I pulled you out. You called it abandonment. You called it strategy. There’s a difference. Rory closed the door. She didn’t lock it. She let the frame rest against the jamb. The cramped rooms swallowed them. Scrolls spilled off the kitchen counter. Research notes papered the walls in crooked layers. A desk sagged under the weight of ledgers and chalk-dusted maps. She tossed her delivery bag onto a chair. The thud echoed in the narrow space. Why are you here, Luc. Information requires face-to-face. The usual channels dried up. Someone burned my contacts in the East End. She crossed her arms. The movement pulled her jacket tight across her chest. She watched his jaw tighten. He still wore the tailored cut he’d favored in Cardiff. Still carried the old money posture. Still looked at her like he was calculating angles. You want a job done. You always want something. I want the ledger from Silas’ back office. I want the name on the shipping manifest. I want you to stop looking at the floor when I speak. Rory lifted her chin. Her bright blue eyes caught the dim pendant light. I’m looking right at you. I’m looking at the man who told me he couldn’t risk loving someone who didn’t know which side of the veil they stood on. He set the cane against the wall. The ivory handle clicked against plaster. His hands stayed empty. Palms open. A gesture he’d taught her meant surrender. Or challenge. Depends on the breath between them. I said a lot of things when the wards cracked. I said what kept you breathing. You said I was a liability. You said attachment gets people killed. You said we weren’t the type to survive the fallout. He stepped closer. The space between them shrank to the width of a breath. Dust motes spun in the stale air. She didn’t move. He didn’t either. The silence stretched. Tight as a wire. I told you to go to Brick Lane. I told you to cut ties. I told you to survive. Because you couldn’t stand in the same room as me without losing your head. His mouth curved. Not a smile. Something sharper. Bitter. Hungry. You think I left because I couldn’t handle you. You think I walked away from the only thing that anchored me to this city. You think I burned my own networks and vanished into the rain just to watch you pack a bag. She reached out. Her fingers brushed the lapel of his suit. She felt the hard line of his chest beneath the wool. The heat radiating off him. He didn’t pull away. He didn’t lean in. He just stood there. Letting her feel the truth or the lie. You vanished. You stopped answering. You let me think I meant nothing. I let you live. That’s what I did. He caught her wrist. Gentle. Firm. His thumb traced the crescent scar. The skin there still remembered the glass. The memory of the accident. The memory of him wrapping it in a handkerchief three years ago. The memory of him kissing the bandage before he vanished. You don’t get to tell me how I loved you. You don’t get to rewrite the months I spent keeping your name off every hit list in London. Rory yanked her hand back. Not hard. Enough to break contact. Enough to let the air rush back into the room. Then why show up now. Why come to this door. Why make me open two deadbolts and stand here while you bleed old apologies on my floor. I need the ledger. I need the manifest. I need you to stop running from a ghost. I need you to tell me if you still hate me. Or if you’re just tired waiting for me to fix it. She turned toward the desk. She pulled a drawer open. Metal scraped wood. She took out a folded newspaper. Dated three years ago. The headline blurred. She smoothed it on the edge of the counter. Her fingers pressed flat against the paper. I don’t hate you. I hate that I still know the way you hold your shoulders when you’re lying. I hate that I still check the mirror before I leave the flat because you used to say my hair fell wrong. I hate that I kept the handkerchief. He stepped behind her. Close enough to cast a shadow across the newspaper. Close enough that his breath warmed the back of her neck. You kept it. It’s in my coat pocket. Every delivery run. Every night shift. Every time someone calls my name and I answer wrong because your voice rings first. He reached past her. His fingers brushed hers as he took the folded paper. He didn’t read it. He just held it. Let the silence press down. Heavy. Real. I’m here for the ledger. I’m here for the manifest. I’m also here because I ran out of miles. I ran out of excuses. I ran out of places where looking over my shoulder didn’t leave me imagining you in some other doorframe. Rory turned. She faced him. The desk dug into her lower back. The cat wound around his ankles. He didn’t move. She didn’t either. You want me to help you. You want me to walk back into the dark with you. After you locked me out. After you told me I’d drown if I stayed. I want you to stand where I stand. I want you to see the room. I want you to tell me if we can survive it this time. I want you to tell me if you still want to. She reached up. Her palm flattened against the knot of his tie. She felt the steady pulse under her fingers. She felt the heat of him. She felt the weight of three years of silence pressing down on her shoulders. Pull the chair out. Sit. We look at the manifest. We check your contacts. We see if you’re asking for help or just asking for forgiveness. He moved the cane aside. He dragged the stool to the desk. The legs scraped stone. He sat. He didn’t look at her. He looked at the wood grain. The old habits died slow. He kept his shoulders rigid. He kept his hands on his knees. He kept his breath measured. Rory pulled the manifest from her bag. She spread it across the desk. Ink smeared at the edges. Numbers aligned in columns. Names crossed out. New ones written in a different hand. She traced the first line. Her finger tapped the paper. You’re missing three names. You’re missing the drop point. You’re missing the reason someone burned your network. He leaned forward. His sleeve brushed hers. The wool caught on her skin. He didn’t pull back. I have the names. I need the route. I need the eyes on the street. I need you to tell me if you’ll ride shotgun. She looked up. The pendant light caught the blue in her eyes. The old amber in his met it. The air stayed still. The flat held its breath. Open the map. Point to the first intersection. We’ll see if your memory matches the streets. We’ll see if I still know the way. He reached for the chalk. He marked the wood. The line stayed straight. His hand didn’t shake. Hers didn’t either. The dust settled. The door stayed unlocked. The chain stayed off the hook. Ptolemy climbed onto the desk. The cat settled between them. Licking a paw. Watching them. Waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"calculating"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"echoed"
2"calculating"
3"silence"
4"traced"
5"pulse"
6"measured"
7"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences235
matches(empty)
94.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount8
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences235
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
2"feel"
3"look"
4"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences235
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1476
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1473
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Marseille1
Lucien2
Luc1
East1
End1
Cardiff1
Brick1
Lane1
London1
Rory7
You25
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Luc"
2"Rory"
3"You"
places
0"Marseille"
1"East"
2"End"
3"Cardiff"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
6"London"
globalScore0.651
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1476
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences235
matches
0"hate that I"
1"hate that I"
2"hate that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean26.84
std13.89
cv0.518
sampleLengths
017
143
24
334
47
524
69
731
830
918
107
1161
125
1316
1443
159
1628
1713
1829
1934
2016
2122
2234
2319
2414
2510
2643
2747
2812
298
3046
3128
3221
3327
3439
3542
3648
3724
383
3926
4029
4143
4224
4331
4439
4540
4626
4751
4842
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences235
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs321
matches
0"were standing"
1"was calculating"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences235
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount367
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.02997275204359673
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0027247956403269754
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences235
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences235
mean6.28
std3.74
cv0.596
sampleLengths
05
17
25
35
45
57
69
79
88
94
104
118
1213
139
144
153
164
174
1816
194
205
218
2210
2313
243
255
2611
277
284
2910
304
314
324
333
344
354
368
375
386
398
4011
418
427
435
443
455
468
474
489
495
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats66
diversityRatio0.25957446808510637
totalSentences235
uniqueOpeners61
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences219
matches
0"Still carried the old money"
1"Still looked at her like"
2"Then why show up now."
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount129
totalSentences219
matches
0"His ivory cane tapped once"
1"You locked yourself in."
2"She kept her shoulder pressed"
3"It clung to the damp"
4"I keep them locked."
5"You know that."
6"He shifted his weight."
7"His gaze tracked the crescent"
8"You left without a word."
9"I left because you told"
10"He stepped forward."
11"He didn’t look down."
12"You were standing in a"
13"I pulled you out."
14"You called it abandonment."
15"You called it strategy."
16"She didn’t lock it."
17"She let the frame rest"
18"She tossed her delivery bag"
19"She crossed her arms."
ratio0.589
35.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount186
totalSentences219
matches
0"The brass chain groaned off"
1"Rory pulled the door wide."
2"Lucien stood in the hall."
3"Charcoal wool draped his shoulders."
4"Platinum hair lay flat against"
5"His ivory cane tapped once"
6"The other swallowed the hallway"
7"You locked yourself in."
8"Rory didn’t step back."
9"She kept her shoulder pressed"
10"The scent of turmeric and"
11"It clung to the damp"
12"I keep them locked."
13"You know that."
14"He shifted his weight."
15"The cane stayed still."
16"His gaze tracked the crescent"
17"You left without a word."
18"I left because you told"
19"He stepped forward."
ratio0.849
45.66% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences219
matches
0"Because you looked at me"
1"Because you couldn’t stand in"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8378%