Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ70B824WNH6KDNB68HBD977

Run Details

Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.023778
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped over the root of the ancient oak. Bark bit into her boot sole. The standing stones rose like broken teeth against the London smog that failed to penetrate the tree line. Night swallowed the sky, but the grove held its own light. Bioluminescence clung to the ferns. Pale spores drifted in thick curtains. She touched the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone hummed against her sternum. A steady rhythm. A warning. "Keep moving, Rory. Just check the pulse and leave." Her voice cracked. The sound died instantly, absorbed by the moss. The cold seeped through her jacket. Richmond Park should have smelled of damp earth and dog waste. Here, the air tasted of copper and crushed petals. Sweet rot. She checked her watch. The dial spun backward. The hands melted. "Time again. Figures." She flicked her wrist. The crescent scar on her left arm caught the faint glow. Old pain. Grounding. A branch snapped. Not wind. The air hung heavy and still. The snap came from behind the third stone. Rory froze. Her hand dropped to the delivery knife in her pocket. Cold steel. Real. "Anyone there?" Silence pressed back. Heavy. Waiting. She stepped toward the stones. Her shadow stretched long and thin, but the shadow moved wrong. It lagged. "Stop that." She looked down. Her shadow rippled like water disturbed by a stone. A shape detached from the darkness beneath the oak. Tall. Too many joints. Rory backed up. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled but kept balance. "Show yourself." The wildflowers rustled. No wind. The petals turned toward her. All of them. Tiny heads swiveling on unseen stalks. The Heartstone flared. Heat bloomed against her skin. Bright crimson pulse. A voice whispered. Not in her ear. Inside her teeth. *Laila...* Rory bared her teeth. "Not that name. Not here." The shadow between the stones elongated. Fingers, black and needle-thin, gripped the bark. Rory reached the boundary. The air shimmered like heat haze. She could leave. She could turn back. But the stone pulled. It wanted the stone. "I'm not leaving until I see the source." She stepped deeper. The flowers shrieked. A high, thin sound like tearing silk. The thing behind the stone laughed. Wet. Slithering. "Come out!" Rory shouted. The anger cut the fear. She didn't cower. She challenged. A figure detached. Pale as bone. No eyes. Just a smooth surface where a face should be. It wore the shape of a man but stretched, like wax dripped and cooled wrong. It glided forward. Feet didn't touch the ground. Rory drew the knife. The blade caught the heartstone's glow. "You want this?" She tapped the pendant. "Ask nicely." The faceless thing tilted its head. Vertebrae popped. *Give it... we are hungry...* "Hungry for what?" Rory took a step forward. Knife raised. "You got a mouth, use it. No riddles." The thing reached out. Long fingers brushed the air inches from her face. Cold burned her skin. Rory slashed. The knife passed through the hand. It dissolved into mist and reformed. "Solid. Or not. Fix it." She circled left. The stones blocked her path. The grove closed in. The time on her wrist watch dissolved completely. The face blank. The flowers closed their petals. Darkening the grove. *Blood opens the door...* "Then you're locked tight." Rory spat. "I bleed for no one here." The thing lunged. Rory dropped. Slid under the reach. The wind of the pass ruffled her hair. She kicked the ankle of empty air. Impact? No. She rolled and came up by the stone. Her hand found the rough bark. Power surged through her palm. The grove recognized her touch. "This is my turf. You're the guest. Behave." The thing shrieked. A sound that shattered the stillness. The wildflowers exploded into bloom, thorns lashing out like whips. The thorns raked the pale figure. It howled. A sound of grinding gears. Rory pressed her back to the stone. Breathing hard. Sweat stung her eyes. "Stay down." The thing recoiled. It melted back into the shadow of the standing stone. Wisps of smoke. But the voice remained. Scratching against her mind. *We wait... The stone calls... The gate opens...* Rory clutched the pendant. It burned hot enough to blister. "The gate stays shut. You hear me?" No answer. Just the dripping of sap from the oak branches. Thick red sap. Rory looked at the sap. Blood? No. Resin. She wiped her hand on her jeans. "Fine. You hide. I'm still watching." She moved toward the center of the grove. The heartstone pulled her deeper. The pulse was a compass. A path cleared through the ferns. Too clear. Too inviting. "Trap. Probably." She walked anyway. Curiosity and duty braided tight in her gut. The path led to a pool. Still water. Black mirror. In the center, a figure stood on the surface. Eleanor? No. Eva? The reflection spoke. Lips didn't move. Sound came from the water. "Rory. You shouldn't have come." Rory stopped. Ten feet from the edge. "Eva died. I buried her." The reflection smiled. Teeth too sharp. "Buried the shell. The voice remains." "Liar." Rory gripped the knife so hard her knuckles whitened. "Eva sent me away. Eva lives in the dream. You're just noise." The water rippled. The reflection reached up. Hands breached the surface. Wet, grasping fingers. Rory backed away. "Stay in your puddle." The hands slapped the mud. Crawling forward. Fast. Spider-like. Rory turned. Ran. Branches whipped her face. She ducked. Swung. The heartstone flared blinding red. A barrier of light slammed down ahead. The grove protected her. Or contained her. "Great. Help or prison? Pick one." The light faded. The path ahead led to a hollow in the earth. A hole. Dark. Breathing. The pendant dragged her neck down. Rory looked at the hole. Looked at the knife. Looked at the returning shadows. "Hel's gate. That's where you're anchored." She adjusted her jacket. Checked her boots. "Then we go down." She stepped to the edge. Peered in. Something looked back. Yellow eyes. Horizontal pupils. "Down we go." She lowered herself onto a root. Began the descent. The voice in her teeth giggled. *Good girl... Feed us...* Rory bit her lip. Copper taste. "Shut up. And watch my six." She slipped into the dark. The light of the grove faded above. The wall scraped her shoulder. Rough stone. Ancient runes carved into the rock. Glowing faintly. Her fingers trailed over them. Translation bloomed in her mind. Unwanted. *Sacrifice opens the vein...* "No blood for you." She reached the bottom. A cavern. Low ceiling. Damp. The heartstone screamed. Vibration so intense her teeth ached. In the center of the cavern, a rift pulsed. A tear in reality. Violet light bled through. Creatures scuttled near the rift. Shadows with claws. Rory crouched behind a boulder. "Multiple hostiles. Rift active. No extraction." She checked the knife. Useless against mist. But the stone... She held up the pendant. The crimson glow intensified. The shadows turned. Chittering sounds. Rory stood up. Exposed. "Over here. Look at the shiny." The shadows lunged. Rory thrust the pendant forward. The crimson light blasted outward. Blinding. The shadows shrieked and scrambled back. Burning steam rose from their forms. Rory advanced. Stepping into the light of her own artifact. "Back off. This is a delivery." She walked toward the rift. The light held them at bay. Up close, the rift showed a world of jagged spires and fire. A hand reached through. Giant. Scaled. Rory didn't flinch. "You keep your hands to yourself." She pressed the heartstone against the rim of the rift. The stone fused with the stone of the world. Grinding sound. Metal on rock. The rift shuddered. The violet light flickered. *STOOOOP...* The voice was a boom now. Shaking dust from the ceiling. Rory planted her feet. "Shutting you down. Go back to bed." She twisted the pendant. The heartstone locked into place. A chain of light erupted from the crystal. Wrapped around the rift. The giant hand thrashed. Claws raked Rory's cheek. She fell. Blood sprayed warm. Pain flared. Sharp. Real. She rolled away. Grabbed the pendant from the rim. The chain held. The rift closed. The hand severed at the wrist below the barrier. The wrist fell. Clattering on the stone. Rory scrambled back. Gasping. The cave went silent. Rory touched her cheek. Wet fingers. "Stitches. Definitely stitches." She looked at the severed wrist. It twitched. Fingers curled. The heartstone in her hand dimmed. Cool again. Rory stood. Wiped her face. "One down. Who's next?" A rumble shook the floor. Deeper. Farther back. The walls groaned. Rory raised the knife. The light of the heartstone faded, leaving only shadows and the twitching wrist. "Showtime." She took a step toward the rumble. The stone at her feet cracked. A new eye opened in the rock. Pupil dilated. Rory froze. "That's a big eye." The eye blinked. The voice returned. Three voices now. Layered. *She wakes them... She wakes them all...* Rory backed up. "Wait. Wake who? I sealed it." The eye widened. The rock face split. A mouth formed in the stone. Teeth of granite. *The seal is the key... You turned the lock...* Rory stared at the pendant. Then at the mouth. "Bugger." The mouth inhaled. Wind howled. Gravity shifted. Rory dug her fingers into the ground. The rift sealed, but the cave woke up. "Great plan. Real smart, Rory." She clawed backward. The stone teeth gnashed. Rory threw the knife. It clattered against a tooth. Useless. She ran. Toward the vertical shaft. The roots waited. The cave roared. Rory leaped for the roots. Her hand caught one. The root constricted. Squeezing. She hung there. The mouth below snapped at her boots. She climbed. Faster. The root pulled down. Heavy. Rory kicked. She reached the top. The grove light blinded her. She pulled herself onto the grass. Roll. Gasping. Above, the ancient oak shivered. Leaves fell like rain. The heartstone pulsed once. A single note. Disappointed. Rory sat up. Checked her wrist. Scar gleamed. She looked down the shaft. The eye watched her from the deep. "You're welcome." She turned to run. Her feet didn't move. Vines wrapped her ankles. Thick. Green. Blooming instantly over her jeans. Flowers sprouted from her cuffs. Petals brushing her skin. Rory looked down. "Oh, for..." The vines pulled her toward the stones. Toward the standing rocks. Rory grabbed the grass. Claws dug in. "Let. Go." The flowers whispered. *Stay... Bloom... Be still...* Rory's heart hammered against the heartstone. She reached for the pendant. It burned again. Hotter. She pressed it to the vine at her ankle. Steam hissed. The vine recoiled. Rory kicked free. Dragged her hand. The vines followed. Snapping and reforming. She scrambled toward the boundary line. The oak stones marked the edge. Past them, normal darkness. London fog. The vines lashed her calf. Spikes pierced fabric. Pain shot up her leg. Rory screamed. She threw her body forward. Shoulders hit the air by the stone. A shimmer blocked her. Hard. Unyielding. She rebounded. Fell on her back. "Trapped? You want me?" The vines slithered closer. Wrapping her torso. Squeezing. Breath squeezed out. Rory clawed at her throat. The heartstone pulsed. Warmth spread. Not heat. Protection. The vines loosened. Just enough. Rory gasped. She focused on the scar. The pain. The memory of Evan. Fear didn't work. Anger did. Rory snarled. She ripped the pendant from her chain. Held it tight. "If you want it, come take it!" She smashed the pendant into the ground. Into the heart of the grove. The earth cracked. Light exploded upward. Blinding white. The vines shrieked. Burned to ash. Rory shielded her eyes. The ground heaved. She was thrown back. Landed hard against the oak stone. Wind knocked out of her. She slid down the bark. Dizzy. The grove went silent. The flowers turned gray. The light faded. Rory blinked. The pendant sat in the crater. Dark. Dormant. Safe? Or drained? She stood. Limbs felt heavy. Time distortion. How long had she been down? Hours? Days? Her muscles atrophied. Weak. She looked at her watch. Still spinning. "Great." She limped toward the boundary. No resistance. She stepped through. London air hit her. Smog. Exhaust. Real. She collapsed on the gravel path of Richmond Park. Streetlights flickered. Sirens wailed in the distance. Normal world. Rory rolled onto her back. Stared at the sky. Light pollution hid the stars. She clutched the dead stone. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. Vibration against her hip. She ignored it. Couldn't move. The buzz continued. Insistent. Rory fished the phone out. Screen cracked. Message. From Eva. *You felt that?... * Rory stared at the text. Her thumb hovered. The stone in her hand twitched. A heartbeat. Faint. Fuzzy? No. Rory squeezed her eyes shut. "Don't." She opened them. The stone glowed. Faint crimson. But the glow matched the phone screen. The text changed. *He's awake, Rory. He's watching...* Rory's blood ran cold. She looked up. Between the trees. The grove waited. Silent. But the ancient oak had eyes now. Knotholes. Watching. Rory scrambled back. Heels dug into the gravel. The phone buzzed again. *Run...* Rory ran. Limb protesting. One step. Two. A branch fell. Across her path. She jumped. Landed wrong. Ankles twisted. She hissed. Kept moving. Shadows lengthened. Moving with her. Too fast. Rory glanced back. The shadows detached from the trees. Flowing. Liquid darkness. Closing the distance. She turned her face forward. Breath ragged. "Not today." She spotted the road. Headlights. A taxi. Rory waved her arms. Frantic. The taxi slowed. Brakes hissed. Rory reached the curb. Yanked the door. Fumbled for the handle. Locked. "Open! Open the damn door!" The driver's window rolled down. Face obscured by cap and shadow. No eyes. Smooth pale skin. The faceless thing from the grove. Rory stumbled back. The taxi door melted. Became a mouth. Teeth of chrome. *Ride...* Rory spun. The shadows lapped at her heels. No road back. No grove exit. London warped. Buildings bled together. Paintings melting. Reality failing. Rory clenched the stone. It pulsed. Warm. Alive. She looked at the stone. Then at the monster taxi. "You made a mistake." She raised the pendant. "I'm not the delivery." She focused. Will poured into the crystal. The heartstone flared. Not light. Sound. A tone. Pure. Shattering. The taxi windshield cracked. The driver's face split. *NOOOO...* The taxi dissolved. Into moths. Thousands of moths. Black wings. Swirling. Rory stood in the swarm. Unharmed. The moths formed a path. Toward the river. A voice whispered from the storm of wings. *Follow... Or bleed...* Rory lowered the stone. The moths settled. Covering her boots. Heavy. She looked up. The path led to the Thames. Water black and oily. Reflections showed fire below. Rory took a step. Then another. The moths lifted. Guiding. Rory whispered. "Lead on." She walked into the distorted night. The heartstone warmed. The scar on her wrist ached. The game changed. She was the hunter now. Or the bait. Rory didn't care. She kept walking. Until the river swallowed the light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.179
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
98.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2508
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2508
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count4
7
word"flickered"
count2
8
word"crystal"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicked"
2"silence"
3"shimmered"
4"silk"
5"shattered"
6"pulsed"
7"flickered"
8"crystal"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences612
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences612
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences663
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans15
markdownWords58
totalWords2509
ratio0.023
matches
0"Laila..."
1"Give it... we are hungry..."
2"Blood opens the door..."
3"We wait... The stone calls... The gate opens..."
4"Good girl... Feed us..."
5"Sacrifice opens the vein..."
6"STOOOOP..."
7"She wakes them... She wakes them all..."
8"The seal is the key... You turned the lock..."
9"Stay... Bloom... Be still..."
10"He's awake, Rory. He's watching..."
11"Run..."
12"Ride..."
13"NOOOO..."
14"Follow... Or bleed..."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions95
wordCount2266
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London4
Heartstone2
Park2
Rory68
Knife1
Evan1
Richmond2
Eva2
Thames1
Real3
Heavy3
Wet3
Teeth3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Knife"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
5"Teeth"
places
0"London"
1"Park"
2"Richmond"
3"Thames"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2509
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences663
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs439
mean5.72
std5.15
cv0.901
sampleLengths
055
119
29
311
428
511
63
718
819
915
102
115
1218
132
1425
1514
162
1719
1811
1910
201
219
2213
2317
248
258
2613
278
2814
2932
308
3110
329
338
345
3518
3617
3714
385
3923
408
414
4212
433
4431
4516
468
4719
4813
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences612
matches
0"was thrown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs484
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences663
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2267
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.01940891045434495
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.002646669607410675
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences663
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences663
mean3.78
std2.29
cv0.607
sampleLengths
09
16
218
311
45
56
68
76
83
92
109
113
128
136
1411
159
162
174
184
193
203
214
2211
232
241
253
262
276
288
292
3010
312
321
332
343
351
361
375
3811
392
402
413
429
439
441
453
463
476
485
492
60.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats37
diversityRatio0.39668174962292607
totalSentences663
uniqueOpeners263
40.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences412
matches
0"Too many joints."
1"Just a smooth surface where"
2"Just the dripping of sap"
3"Then at the mouth."
4"Then at the monster taxi."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount87
totalSentences412
matches
0"She touched the silver chain"
1"Her voice cracked."
2"She checked her watch."
3"She flicked her wrist."
4"Her hand dropped to the"
5"She stepped toward the stones."
6"Her shadow stretched long and"
7"She looked down."
8"Her shadow rippled like water"
9"Her heel caught on a"
10"She stumbled but kept balance."
11"She could leave."
12"She could turn back."
13"It wanted the stone."
14"She stepped deeper."
15"She didn't cower."
16"It wore the shape of"
17"It glided forward."
18"She tapped the pendant"
19"we are hungry...*"
ratio0.211
55.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount333
totalSentences412
matches
0"Rory stepped over the root"
1"Bark bit into her boot"
2"The standing stones rose like"
3"Night swallowed the sky, but"
4"Bioluminescence clung to the ferns."
5"She touched the silver chain"
6"The Heartstone hummed against her"
7"A steady rhythm."
8"Her voice cracked."
9"The sound died instantly, absorbed"
10"The cold seeped through her"
11"Richmond Park should have smelled"
12"Here, the air tasted of"
13"She checked her watch."
14"The dial spun backward."
15"The hands melted."
16"She flicked her wrist."
17"The crescent scar on her"
18"A branch snapped."
19"The air hung heavy and"
ratio0.808
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences412
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The standing stones rose like broken teeth against the London smog that failed to penetrate the tree line."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory shouted (shout)"
1"Rory spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.036
leniency0.071
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.071
86.9629%