Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ72KK308R6ZM00XH8CVJWDX

Run Details

Duration:
2m 52s
Cost:
$0.031902
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign buzzed like a trapped wasp, bleeding green light onto the Soho pavement and slicing through the steam rising from the grates. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air held the scent of polished oak and damp wool. Silas stood behind the counter, the silver signet ring catching the low halogen. His left knee thrummed, a dull ache syncing with the bass vibrating from the club next door. He watched the door, hazel eyes scanning the shadows. The bell chimed. A man stepped in, pulling a hood back to reveal a face stripped of familiarity. Hair shaved close. Jaw set in a rigid line. One eye flickered with a rhythmic twitch. Silas set the polishing rag down. "Julian." The man stopped. He turned slow, testing the angle of recognition. His features shifted, relaxing into a grimace that suggested long use of facial muscles fighting a war beneath the skin. "Si." The voice came out like gravel in a mixer. Julian crossed the room. Patrons in the corner booths didn't look up. The air around Julian moved with a current that made the nearest customer shift his drink. Julian reached the bar and leaned forward, resting weight on his forearms. A tremor ran through his right hand, shaking the fabric of his jacket. A thick white scar pulsed at his temple, distorting the hairline. "Prague still getting to you?" Silas reached for the gin bottle. No words of greeting. Just the fact. Julian watched the liquid pour. Ice struck the glass with a sharp clink. He didn't take the drink. His thumb rubbed the rim, circling the glass without lifting it. "Knee bad?" "Cold damp. Always." Silas slid the tumbler over. "What brings you to this side of the river?" Julian finally lifted the glass. He drank. His throat worked, swallowing hard. A muscle feathered in his cheek, jumping against the skin. "Checking ghosts. Heard a whisper you were still breathing." "Whispers usually feed on half-truths." Silas wiped the counter, moving the rag in small circles. "You look different. Or worse." Julian set the glass down with a tap. He tapped the scar on his temple with a shaking finger. "New parts. Old problems. This took three surgeries to sit right. Doc in Zurich got greedy. Had to adjust him." Silas noted the tremor. Not fear. Neurological damage. Or withdrawal. "Greedy docs go away. Usually." "Not this one. He has leverage." Julian's eyes locked onto Silas. One eye twitched rapidly now. The other stayed dead flat, a chip of flint trapped in grey sclera. "You have leverage too. That's why you're still here." "This bar has no secrets. Just maps on the wall and drunks in booths." Silas gestured to a faded chart of the Atlantic trade routes pinned beside a black-and-white photograph of a bombed-out cathedral. Julian chuckled, a dry sound that cracked on the edge. "Maps. You pin the world up and you think you know it. We were kids pinning flags in a briefing room. Remember? You wanted to go home. You wanted the law." "Law doesn't stop bullets." Silas picked up a coaster, flipped it over. "Prague stopped that dream." "Prague stopped *me*." Julian's voice dropped. He leaned in, breath smelling of peppermint and stale tobacco. "I kept moving. You think I wanted this? You think this..." He shook his head, the tremor violent enough to rattle the coins on the counter. "This is what you survive with. You stayed. You have a life. You have the flat upstairs. I heard the footstep earlier. A girl, isn't it?" Silas's grip tightened on the coaster. Paper crinkled. He glanced toward the stairs. The floorboards above groaned faintly. "Rory helps with the books. Delivery runs. Normal work." "Normal." Julian tasted the word, his jaw working. "You found normal. I found the wire." He tapped his temple again. "They keep me sharp, Si. I can't stop. If I stop, the noise gets in. If they cut the pay, the noise gets in. The current hums behind the teeth. You hear it in the silence. You hear it in the pub. You think you're safe because you're alone. The wire knows where you hide." Silas reached under the bar. He pulled a dented metal flask and placed it next to Julian's glass. "Drink. Real brandy. Not the gin on tap." Julian looked at the flask. The twitch in his eye froze. He didn't touch the metal. "Brandy doesn't kill the static, Si." "It warms the hands. Yours can't hold a glass." Silas shrugged. "Or drown the noise. Just for an hour." Julian wrapped his left hand around his right wrist, squeezing the tremor down. The knuckles blanched white. "Control. That's what I have. They control the dose. I manage the shake. You have control. You have the limp. You have the safety. You limp left from the knee. I drag left now too. What took the second leg, Si? The years?" "The years take everyone." Silas tapped the ring. The silver bit into his finger, leaving a crescent dent. "This used to open doors. Now it just opens taps. The value shifts." "The value never shifts." Julian's voice hardened. "You're sitting on a grave, Si. Just like me. Only yours has a floorboard cover." Silas frowned. "Grave?" "Elena." Julian dropped the name. The syllables hit the air like a slap. The neon sign flickered, casting a long green shadow over Julian's face. Silas's hand moved to the ring. He twisted the metal. The motion small, instinctive. "Elena is gone. Case closed." "Gone doesn't mean forgotten. And it doesn't mean the file's buried." Julian's hand drifted toward his jacket pocket. Silas's weight shifted to his right leg, instinct overriding habit. His knee clicked, a dry joint protesting the stillness. "You came for files." Silas stated. No question mark. "I came for closure. Or a target." Julian's smile didn't reach the dead eye. "Depends on what you remember. You have the signet. You have the keys to the back room. The hidden room everyone forgets." Silas glanced at the bookshelf behind him. The third shelf from the top. A false spine waited disguised among the leather-bound logs. "That room holds dust. And old radios." "Radios don't lie. Radios remember." Julian stood up. The chair legs screeched against the floor. He placed a crisp folded note on the bar. "Read it. Then decide if you're the barman or the agent. Time's short for me. Long for you. Use it right." Julian turned. He moved toward the door, his gait uneven. A fresh limp hitched his step on the left side, worse than the knee injury. Silas caught the change. The degradation accelerated. Julian paused at the threshold. He pointed a shaking finger at the stairs leading up. "Don't let her see me, Si. If she asks..." "She won't ask. And you were never here." Silas cut him off. Julian pushed out. The bell chimed. Rain lashed the window, drumming a heavy rhythm against the glass. Silas stood alone. The note lay on the wood. Unread. The flask sat untouched. His knee flared with heat. He looked up the stairs. Heard the faint creak of the floorboards above. Rory moving in the flat. Silas picked up the note. His thumb rubbed the paper. The edges felt sharp. He didn't open it. He slid it into his pocket, next to the ring. He turned back to the bar. Poured a second glass. Held it up to the light. The liquid swirled, catching the halogen in a golden arc. "Rough night?" A voice called from a corner booth. A regular. Silas set the glass down. "Quiet." He reached for the rag. His hand hovered over the bookshelf. The false spine gleamed dully in the dim light. Silas didn't reach for it. He picked up the bottle instead, pouring a measure of gin into his own glass. He drank. The burn settled in his chest. He watched the door. The green neon buzzed. The rain continued. Silas waited for the next chime.
created_at"2026-04-27T08:58:59.049Z" 4/27/2026, 8:58:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.426
leniency0.851
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"grave"
count2
highlights
0"scanning"
1"flickered"
2"rhythmic"
3"weight"
4"pulsed"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1335
ratio0.001
matches
0"me"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount876
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.85
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Julian22
Silas25
One2
Atlantic1
persons
0"Julian"
1"Silas"
2"One"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.073
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1335
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean24.72
std19.79
cv0.801
sampleLengths
078
140
21
331
41
573
618
729
82
917
1022
119
1220
1319
1430
155
1638
1734
1810
1931
2016
2168
2218
239
2475
2518
268
2716
286
2919
3017
3143
3231
3322
343
3539
365
3737
389
3936
4022
417
4245
4332
4415
459
4612
4717
4837
4954
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences153
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount880
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.017045454545454544
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004545454545454545
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean8.73
std7.44
cv0.853
sampleLengths
024
115
213
317
49
53
615
73
86
97
106
111
123
138
1420
151
169
174
188
1916
2012
2113
2211
2311
244
253
265
278
285
2911
302
318
329
335
342
355
3610
379
3815
395
408
4111
4224
432
442
452
465
4711
485
4913
54.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.35947712418300654
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners55
28.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"Just the fact."
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences115
matches
0"His left knee thrummed, a"
1"He watched the door, hazel"
2"He turned slow, testing the"
3"His features shifted, relaxing into"
4"He didn't take the drink."
5"His thumb rubbed the rim,"
6"His throat worked, swallowing hard."
7"He tapped the scar on"
8"He leaned in, breath smelling"
9"He shook his head, the"
10"He glanced toward the stairs."
11"He tapped his temple again"
12"He pulled a dented metal"
13"He didn't touch the metal."
14"He twisted the metal."
15"His knee clicked, a dry"
16"He placed a crisp folded"
17"He moved toward the door,"
18"He pointed a shaking finger"
19"His knee flared with heat."
ratio0.252
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences115
matches
0"The neon sign buzzed like"
1"Silas stood behind the counter,"
2"His left knee thrummed, a"
3"He watched the door, hazel"
4"The bell chimed."
5"A man stepped in, pulling"
6"Hair shaved close."
7"Jaw set in a rigid"
8"Silas set the polishing rag"
9"The man stopped."
10"He turned slow, testing the"
11"His features shifted, relaxing into"
12"The voice came out like"
13"Julian crossed the room."
14"Patrons in the corner booths"
15"The air around Julian moved"
16"Julian reached the bar and"
17"A tremor ran through his"
18"A thick white scar pulsed"
19"Silas reached for the gin"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas noted (note)"
1"Silas stated (state)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.064
leniency0.128
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.085
84.0824%