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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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The deadbolt slid back with a heavy click. I pushed the door inward. The hallway smelled of cardamom and old paper. He stood on the other side. Tall. Impeccable. Charcoal suit. Platinum hair slicked back. Heterochromatic eyes locked on mine. One amber. One black. "You locked out." "I don't need a key for my own flat." "You changed the tumblers." He tapped the ivory handle of his cane against the floorboards. Tick-tock went the rhythm against the wood. "Eva does." "Eva isn't here." He stepped forward. I didn't retreat. The air between us grew thick. Five years. We hadn't shared a room since Marseille. Since the fire. Since I walked away and took the secret I wasn't supposed to keep. His gaze dropped to my left wrist. The crescent scar caught the dim light from the stairwell. He remembered that accident. Or he remembered forcing the bandage on himself. "You look tired, Rory." "And you look expensive." I crossed my arms. "What do you want, Lucien?" "You know exactly what I want." He tilted his head. The scent of sandalwood and ozone washed over me. It still worked. That was the problem. My pulse hammered against my ribs. I refused to let him see it. "I don't work for you anymore." "You never did." He smiled. A sharp, dangerous curve of his lips. "But you do work for Yu-Fei. And Yu-Fei serves clients who need information moved. Quietly. Tonight. Your route crosses my path." Ptolemy the tabby slinked from the kitchen. He brushed against my ankles and then hissed at the stranger. Lucien didn't flinch. He merely adjusted his grip on the cane. The brass rings on his fingers caught the light. My flat felt suddenly smaller. Books stacked against every wall. Scrolls spilling from cardboard boxes. Research notes pinned to the ceiling with drawing pins. Eva's sanctuary. Now his battlefield. "I don't handle packages anymore." "You handle them because you need the money." He stepped past me. I should have stopped him. I didn't. His shoulders brushed mine. Electric. Cold. "You need the money because you pay rent above a bar. You need the money because you live in a city that eats people like you for breakfast. You need the money because Evan left you with debts he never cleaned." "You don't know anything about my debts." "I know everything." He placed the cane against the wall. It clicked into place. The ivory handle split open. A thin steel blade extended. I kept my eyes on his face. Not the weapon. "The syndicate in Soho moved three times this week. They're looking for a ledger. They think you have it." "I don't." "Do you?" He closed the distance. One step. Two. His amber eye swallowed the light. His black eye tracked the staircase. "You took it from the table in Marseille. You told me you burned it. You lied." My breath caught. The flat seemed to tilt. I reached for the kitchen counter. My fingers found a ceramic knife. I didn't draw it. I just held it. "Get out." "If I leave, they break your knees next Tuesday. Or they take the cat." He nodded toward Ptolemy, who had flattened himself behind the sofa. "I came to offer you a way out. You ride with me. We move the ledger before the dawn. You get your life back. Or you stay. And I watch them turn your home into ash." "Why should I trust you?" "Because I never asked you to burn anything." He reached into his jacket pocket. I tensed. He pulled out a silver key. Tossed it onto the coffee table. It spun and settled. "My flat in Bloomsbury. Clean. Secure. You stay there tonight. I handle the exchange." "I don't take orders." "You never do." He turned toward the door. His boots scuffed the floorboards. Step by step. "But you will take the key. Because you're too smart to die in a room full of books." I stared at the key. The metal gleamed under the single bulb. My wrist scar throbbed. I remembered the heat of Marseille. The way he held me while the flames climbed the walls. The way I pushed him away. The way he never left. "Fine." The word tasted like copper. "We leave now." He turned back. His smile didn't reach his eyes. "Already packed." He grabbed the cane. The blade retracted with a soft snap. I grabbed my coat. Ptolemy yowled. I ignored him. I reached for the deadbolt. The metal felt cold. Heavy. Then the staircase erupted. Heavy boots pounded overhead. Wood splintered. Someone shouted in Russian. The door shuddered against my palm. Lucien didn't blink. He simply shifted his stance. His hand closed around the ivory handle. The cane rose like a sceptre. "Took them long enough," he murmured. The front door blew inward. Splinters rained across the floorboards. Three men filled the doorway. Leather jackets. Steel pipes. Eyes dead and flat. They stepped over the threshold. One of them pulled a silenced pistol from his jacket. Lucien moved first. He lunged forward, the cane whistling through the air. I scrambled back. My boot hit the edge of a stack of books. I stumbled. The ceramic knife slipped from my grip and clattered against the wall. "Down!" Lucien's voice cracked like a whip. I dropped behind the sofa. Ptolemy shrieked and bolted. The first man raised his pistol. I saw the barrel turn toward my hiding spot. I grabbed a heavy hardcover from the floor. I hurled it. It connected with his wrist. The gun fired. The shot tore through the plaster above my head. Dust and debris rained down. Lucien ducked. He swept the cane low. The blade caught the second man's ankle. He went down hard. Glass from a shattered vase sprayed across the kitchen tiles. The third man charged. He swung a steel pipe. It smashed into the bookshelf. Scrolls and papers exploded into the air. "Rory!" Lucien shouted. He parried the pipe with the cane's shaft. The metal screeched. Sparks flew. He twisted his wrist. The blade snapped forward. It buried itself in the man's shoulder. He dropped the pipe. He staggered backward. He tripped over the fallen bookshelf. His head cracked against the wall. He crumpled. Silence rushed back into the room. Heavy. Thick. My heart hammered against my ribs. I stood up. My hands shook. Dust coated my clothes. My hair stuck to my forehead. Lucien turned. The blade stayed buried in the wall. He walked toward me. His charcoal suit tore at the shoulder. Blood smeared his knuckles. He didn't look at me. He looked at the door. The deadbolt slid again. Not from outside. From inside. The inner flat door opened. Eva stood in the frame. She held a heavy iron poker. Her knuckles were white. Her eyes locked on Lucien. Then they dropped to the gun on the floor. Then to the second man, who was still groaning, dragging himself toward the kitchen. "I told you," she said. Her voice was quiet. Steady. "I don't share my territory." She stepped forward. The poker raised. Lucien froze. His hand hovered over the cane. I saw the recognition in his eyes. The colour drained from his face. Eva had just used a phrase. A dead code. Only one person in London knew it. Only one person taught it to her. The second man lifted his head. He grinned through broken teeth. He pulled a small device from his pocket. A timer glowed red. Thirty seconds. Eva didn't see it. Lucien did. He looked at me. His heterochromatic eyes widened. He opened his mouth to speak. The timer clicked to twenty-five.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
94.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The word tasted like [like]"
1"Lucien's voice cracked like [like]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.105
96.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1280
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"shattered"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"sanctuary"
2"electric"
3"throbbed"
4"shattered"
5"charged"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences199
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences199
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences221
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1280
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount983
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Tick-tock1
Marseille2
One4
Ptolemy4
Russian1
Lucien10
London1
Eva4
Heavy3
persons
0"Tick-tock"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Russian"
2"London"
globalScore0.991
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1280
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences221
matches
0"remembered that accident"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean23.7
std20.1
cv0.848
sampleLengths
044
13
29
322
42
59
660
74
813
939
106
1133
1267
135
1466
157
1653
172
1837
1930
2061
215
2246
234
2434
2544
269
2711
2830
294
3037
316
3238
3339
347
3557
3649
3752
3830
3934
404
413
422
4348
4415
456
468
4713
4823
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was still groaning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences221
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount985
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.025380710659898477
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005076142131979695
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences221
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences221
mean5.79
std4.67
cv0.806
sampleLengths
08
15
28
36
41
51
62
74
85
92
102
113
129
1315
147
152
166
173
186
192
207
213
2213
237
2410
254
268
274
288
295
3010
319
323
334
346
357
366
375
387
3921
407
4111
423
438
449
455
465
475
489
492
41.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences221
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences165
matches
0"Then the staircase erupted."
1"Then they dropped to the"
2"Then to the second man,"
3"Only one person in London"
4"Only one person taught it"
ratio0.03
9.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount87
totalSentences165
matches
0"I pushed the door inward."
1"He stood on the other"
2"He tapped the ivory handle"
3"He stepped forward"
4"I didn't retreat."
5"We hadn't shared a room"
6"His gaze dropped to my"
7"He remembered that accident."
8"I crossed my arms"
9"He tilted his head"
10"It still worked."
11"My pulse hammered against my"
12"I refused to let him"
13"He brushed against my ankles"
14"He merely adjusted his grip"
15"My flat felt suddenly smaller."
16"He stepped past me"
17"I should have stopped him."
18"His shoulders brushed mine."
19"He placed the cane against"
ratio0.527
14.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences165
matches
0"The deadbolt slid back with"
1"I pushed the door inward."
2"The hallway smelled of cardamom"
3"He stood on the other"
4"Platinum hair slicked back."
5"He tapped the ivory handle"
6"Tick-tock went the rhythm against"
7"He stepped forward"
8"I didn't retreat."
9"The air between us grew"
10"We hadn't shared a room"
11"His gaze dropped to my"
12"The crescent scar caught the"
13"He remembered that accident."
14"I crossed my arms"
15"He tilted his head"
16"The scent of sandalwood and"
17"It still worked."
18"That was the problem."
19"My pulse hammered against my"
ratio0.891
30.30% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences165
matches
0"Now his battlefield."
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences9
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.105
88.5237%