Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ72V2MT2YQM26BQJ8PCYS3E

Run Details

Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.021864
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the chain-link fence around the disused Camden station entrance. Harlow Quinn cut through the yellow tape with her pocket knife. The air inside tasted of damp concrete and burnt ozone. Her boots echoed on the cracked tiles as she descended the spiral stairs. Emergency lamps bled pale light across the platform. A body lay sprawled near the edge of the track, wrapped in a forensic sheet. PC Davies stood over it, clipboard in hand, tapping a ballpoint pen against the plastic cover. You brought me down here for a jumper. Davies shifted his weight and adjusted his lanyard. The victim walked past the warning markers. No hesitation. Straight into the third rail. Quinn knelt beside the sheet. She peeled back the plastic corner. The corpse wore a heavy wool coat and carried a leather satchel. Blood pooled beneath the left shoulder. The wound showed no soot. No electrical burns. The skin around the entry point remained pale and unmarked. She traced the line of the neck with a gloved finger. Clean incision. Too clean. Third rail delivers two thousand five hundred volts. Davies uncapped his pen and made a note. You get carbonization. You get muscle contraction. This looks like a butcher’s job. Butcher tools leave tool marks. Quinn flipped the satchel open. Books spilled across the wet concrete. She stacked them neatly and lifted the contents. Parchment pages. Dried botanical samples. A brass object rested at the bottom. She turned it over in her palm. Verdigris clung to the casing. Protective sigils etched the face. A needle spun lazily inside the glass dome. Where did you find that. Davies stepped forward and peered at the compass. Looters left it behind. Scammers run every tunnel in this city. Sell cheap trinkets to tourists who think they found a ghost. The needle stopped spinning. It locked onto the far wall. Quinn stood and walked toward the concrete barrier. She pressed her palm against the surface. Cold stone. Solid foundation. She closed her eyes and listened. A low hum vibrated through the floorboards. Water dripped from a fractured pipe. Something else pulsed beneath the sound. A rhythm. Not mechanical. Not animal. You hearing a rat nest. Davies kicked a loose tile. They make the whole corridor shake. I ran the building plans. Solid masonry. Water main runs two floors down. You’re chasing echoes. Quinn examined the ash scattered across the platform. Dark flakes arranged in a shallow circle around the body. She scooped a pinch between her fingers. The powder ground to a fine gray dust. Smelled of sulfur and crushed bone. She dropped it into an evidence bag and sealed the twist tie. Arsonists use accelerants. Davies pointed at a scorch mark on the platform edge. Charred wood. Accelerant trail. He lit a cigarette despite the regulations. Someone wanted this place to burn. Robbery gone wrong. Thieves argued. Victim panicked. Walked off the ledge to avoid a beating. The cigarette burned down to his fingers. He dropped it without flinching. Quinn traced the scorch pattern with her flashlight beam. The burn marks curved upward. Defied gravity. She marked the trajectory with yellow chalk. The heat traveled from the wall outward. Not downward. Not from the floor. Heat rises. Davies shook his head. Basic physics. You’re reading smoke. Smoke follows pressure gradients. Quinn crouched again and measured the blood pool with a steel ruler. The liquid spread in perfect radial lines. No directional flow. No drag marks. The victim bled while suspended. You saying he floated. Davies folded his arms. Forensics will find a gurney. A chair. A hidden mechanism. Always a mechanism. Quinn opened her jacket and unclipped her worn leather watch. The crystal reflected the flashlight beam. Eighteen years on the force taught her to distrust clean lines. She remembered DS Morris kneeling over a body in a warehouse. The same impossible blood pattern. The same clean incision. The same wall that hummed. Three years buried under a coroner’s verdict. Three years of quiet nights that never came. Check the victim’s pockets. Davies approached the corpse and began patting down the coat. Fingers brushed metal. He pulled out a rectangular bone token. Carved with interlocking rings. The edges showed fresh wear. Someone rubbed it against a rough surface. Repeatedly. Entrance fee. Quinn took the token and examined the carving. The rings matched the markings on the brass compass. She placed the token flat against her palm. The bone grew warm. The compass needle twitched again. It pointed directly at the humming wall. Markets operate in plain sight. Davies tucked the token back into the coat pocket. Pawn shops. Street vendors. Underground betting rings. People trade what they cannot explain. Police report it as contraband. I report it as evidence. Quinn stepped closer to the concrete barrier. She traced the hairline fractures running vertically up the surface. Each crack pulsed with a faint blue luminescence. She ran a gloved fingertip along the seam. The stone crumbled to dust at her touch. Behind the crumbling surface, a darkness waited. The air temperature dropped sharply. Her breath formed thick clouds. You need a jackhammer. Davies retreated toward the stairs. Call structural. Let the engineers tear it down piece by piece. We seal the scene. We file the report. We let the lab process the ash. Lab technicians catalogue dust. Quinn knelt and aligned the brass compass with the fractures. She watched the needle hold steady. She pressed her ear against the crumbling stone. The hum deepened. A low resonance vibrated through her jaw. The darkness beyond the wall breathed. Air rushed in. A draft pulled at her closely cropped hair. The boundary thinned. You tearing through a load-bearing wall. Davies gripped the stair railing. We breach code. We collapse the tunnel. We bury whatever you’re looking for under six tons of concrete. Quinn stood and wiped the dust from her knees. She tapped the compass face with her thumb. The glass fogged. The needle trembled. She reached into her evidence bag and pulled out a pair of heavy gloves. She stepped over the chalk line. She placed both hands on the fractured stone. She pushed. The concrete gave way with a sound like grinding glass. The wall folded inward. Darkness spilled across the platform. Cold air flooded the tunnel. The hum rose to a visible vibration. Shelves lined the far side of the opening. Glass vials. Dried herbs. Folded maps. The space extended into the hollowed earth. The air carried the scent of aged paper and metallic ozone. Wooden stalls formed a narrow corridor. Signs hung from wrought iron brackets. Prices written in ink that caught the emergency lamp glow. Davies dropped his clipboard. The plastic cracked on the wet floor. He stared at the opening. He raised his radio but never pressed the transmit button. Quinn stepped across the threshold. The brass compass grew heavy in her grip. She followed the needle deeper into the gloom. The evidence aligned. The impossible wound. The upward burn. The suspended blood. The bone token. The market did not hide. It waited.
created_at"2026-04-27T09:03:04.353Z" 4/27/2026, 9:03:04 AM
model"qwen/qwen3.6-27b-20260422"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency926
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time102946
tokens_prompt1149
tokens_completion6778
native_tokens_prompt1100
native_tokens_completion5890
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning4330
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.021864
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"82097366-3a73-4790-ac36-f96ba9f6f577"
id"chatcmpl-d9677103-1813-992f-973d-0445707b755d"
is_byokfalse
latency926
model_permaslug"qwen/qwen3.6-27b-20260422"
provider_name"Alibaba"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1777280584-U5WcEQSAnoCLXuDVVJfx"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1777280584-pB8NOhcsZvLNgjcnIHFY"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-d9677103-1813-992f-973d-0445707b755d"
total_cost0.021864
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Alibaba"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1178
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"traced"
count3
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count2
5
word"fractured"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"crystal"
count1
12
word"pawn"
count1
13
word"aligned"
count2
14
word"resonance"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"etched"
4"vibrated"
5"fractured"
6"pulsed"
7"mechanical"
8"echoes"
9"measured"
10"perfect"
11"crystal"
12"pawn"
13"aligned"
14"resonance"
15"trembled"
16"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences202
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen16
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1178
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1178
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Quinn13
Davies13
Morris1
You9
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Davies"
2"Morris"
3"You"
places(empty)
globalScore0.948
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1178
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean27.4
std23.25
cv0.849
sampleLengths
084
18
222
362
48
521
65
756
85
930
1010
1150
125
1327
1451
153
1642
1712
1836
192
209
214
2230
234
2417
2567
264
2737
282
2941
305
3132
3258
334
3431
354
3654
376
3823
3953
4085
4126
4243
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences202
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs209
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences202
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1180
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01440677966101695
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005932203389830509
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean5.83
std2.93
cv0.503
sampleLengths
011
111
210
313
48
515
616
78
88
97
102
115
125
136
1412
156
165
173
1810
1911
202
212
228
238
243
254
266
275
285
296
308
312
323
337
347
355
365
378
385
398
404
417
4211
434
446
458
467
472
482
496
53.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.39603960396039606
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners80
19.27% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"Always a mechanism."
ratio0.006
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences173
matches
0"Her boots echoed on the"
1"You brought me down here"
2"She peeled back the plastic"
3"She traced the line of"
4"You get carbonization."
5"You get muscle contraction."
6"She stacked them neatly and"
7"She turned it over in"
8"It locked onto the far"
9"She pressed her palm against"
10"She closed her eyes and"
11"You hearing a rat nest."
12"They make the whole corridor"
13"I ran the building plans."
14"You’re chasing echoes."
15"She scooped a pinch between"
16"She dropped it into an"
17"He lit a cigarette despite"
18"He dropped it without flinching."
19"She marked the trajectory with"
ratio0.272
29.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount149
totalSentences173
matches
0"Rain slicked the chain-link fence"
1"Harlow Quinn cut through the"
2"The air inside tasted of"
3"Her boots echoed on the"
4"Emergency lamps bled pale light"
5"A body lay sprawled near"
6"PC Davies stood over it,"
7"You brought me down here"
8"Davies shifted his weight and"
9"The victim walked past the"
10"Quinn knelt beside the sheet."
11"She peeled back the plastic"
12"The corpse wore a heavy"
13"Blood pooled beneath the left"
14"The wound showed no soot."
15"The skin around the entry"
16"She traced the line of"
17"Davies uncapped his pen and"
18"You get carbonization."
19"You get muscle contraction."
ratio0.861
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences173
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Prices written in ink that caught the emergency lamp glow."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3492%