Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ73AWACQHXZE3VWK8XW5J4T

Run Details

Duration:
55.9s
Cost:
$0.012787
Provider:
Parasail

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the grated grating above the disused Camden branch line, dripping cold through rusted iron. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the concrete stairs into the city underbelly, her boots striking the damp platform with measured, military precision. Eighteen years on the Met had carved the sharp line of her jaw into a permanent scowl, and the closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair at her temples only deepened the impression. She checked her watch, the worn leather band on her left wrist already soft from years of wear, and noted the time. The place smelled of ozone, damp concrete, and something older, like burnt copper and wet stone. The abandoned Tube station had been hollowed out into a sprawling, clandestine bazaar. Canvas tarps strung between support columns created makeshift stalls. Faded lanterns cast long, jittery shadows over crates of sealed glassware, velvet-wrapped artifacts, and handwritten ledgers. This was the Veil Market. Nobody in uniform knew the official name. They just followed the missing persons reports that funneled down to Quinn’s desk, always from the same marginalized neighborhoods, always with nothing but a pocketful of ash and a blank police report. Crime scene tape crisscrossed the edge of Platform Two. A uniformed constable shifted his weight as she approached, nodding respectfully. DS Eva Kowalski waited near the yellow cordon, her round glasses fogged at the edges, curly red hair escaping a careless knot. She tucked a damp strand behind her left ear, a nervous habit Quinn had memorized over two years of shared cases. Eva’s worn leather satchel bulged with books and field notes, the spine cracked from constant use. Morning, Detective, Eva said, her voice carrying easily over the drip of condensation. You’re early. Forensics hasn’t even unpacked the UV lights. They don’t need them, Quinn said, stepping under the tape. Not for this. Eva fell into step beside her as they moved toward the body. You found something? I found a body, Quinn corrected. And a scene that refuses to make sense. They approached the victim slumped against a tiled pillar. Male, mid-thronties, dressed in heavy wool and layered scarves. No visible trauma. No blood. But the air around him shimmered faintly, like heat rising from asphalt, though the station was freezing. Quinn’s trained eyes cataloged the details: scuff marks on the floor, a dropped satchel, a single muddy boot print leading into the dark mouth of the tunnel. Standard indicators of a struggle. But the scuffs were wrong. They radiated outward in a perfect semi-circle, as if whatever hit him had come from the center and pushed back. Lethal injection or a rare neurotoxin, Eva said, kneeling beside the body. She adjusted her glasses, keeping her distance. I’ve seen symptoms like this in three texts on alchemical poisons. Fast-acting, leaves no residue. The pulse points are blackened. His nervous system just shut down. Or his heart stopped, Quinn said flatly. No toxicology screen will tell us why. There’s more, Eva said, her brow furrowing. She reached into her satchel, pulling out a leather-bound journal and a brass instrument wrapped in velvet. Look at the tile under his hands. Faint scratches. Old. Pre-war, maybe Victorian. They form a geometric pattern. Not random. A warding sigil. He was trying to keep something in. Or out. Quinn frowned. She crouched, brushing damp dust from the cracked tiles. Eva was right. The scratches were deliberate, interlocking triangles and jagged lines. Protective geometry. But why would a street vendor or informant need a warding circle on a Tube platform? The police file listed him as a petty smuggler. A low-level courier for a local syndicate. The Met called it organized crime. Quinn suspected a clique, a coordinated network that operated just outside statutory reach, moving goods that didn’t exist on paper. Quinn’s mind worked in tight, logical sequences. If this was a turf war, the victim would be a runner. If it was a drug deal, there’d be packaging, cutters, paraphernalia. There was none. Just a body, a semi-circle of scuff marks, scratched tiles, and a lingering metallic tang in the air. She stood, scanning the platform. Her eyes caught a glint near a support beam. Small, brass, tarnished green. She crossed the space in three long strides and picked it up. A compass. But not for navigation. The casing bore a heavy verdigris patina, etched with concentric rings of protective sigils that matched the ones scratched into the tiles. The needle didn’t point north. It trembled, then locked into place, swinging slowly toward the dark tunnel exit. Shade work, Eva murmured, appearing at Quinn’s shoulder. Crafted by an artisan who understands the Weave. It doesn’t track direction. It tracks proximity to a rift. Or a tear in the Veil. Quinn’s thumb rubbed the cold brass. A tear. You’re talking about ghost stories and police reports. I’m talking about evidence you’re refusing to read, Eva said quietly. The scuff marks. The lack of blood. The way the air feels static. He wasn’t murdered by a man with a knife, Quinn. He walked into a disturbance. Something pulled him in, or he tried to close something, and it backfired. Quinn didn’t answer. The words brushed against an old scar, the one she kept hidden under three years of overtime and cold coffee. DS Morris. Three years ago, buried under a headline that read Officer Dead in Robbery Gone Wrong. No witnesses. No ballistics match. Just a body found in a disused railway siding, surrounded by the same ozone and burnt copper stench. The coroner called cardiac arrest. Quinn called it murder. The brass compass in her palm felt suddenly heavy, familiar in a way that made her skin prickle. You know what this is, Eva said. Not a question. Quinn closed her fingers around the compass. The needle held steady, pointing into the dark. I know someone’s been running a black market out of these tunnels. Enchanted relics. Banned alchemicals. Information that doesn’t belong in a police database. I know a clique is moving product, and I know this guy was part of it. She looked at Eva. You’ve been digging into restricted archives. You know how the pieces fit together. I know the Veil Market moves every full moon, Eva replied, tucking her hair behind her ear again. I know this station has been hollowed out for months. I know the rent is paid in bone tokens and favors that don’t show up on ledgers. But I also know your partner died under identical conditions. The Met called it an accident. The files say unexplained. You called it supernatural. Quinn’s jaw tightened. The military precision of her posture didn’t waver, but her breathing slowed. I need proof that stands up in court, Kowalski. Not folklore. Then look at the dust, Eva said, pointing to the floor near the tunnel mouth. Not on his shoes. On the tiles. Ash. Fine, gray ash. Not from a fire. From something that’s been burned away. And look at the scuff marks again. They aren’t drag marks. They’re recoil. Quinn dropped to one knee, ignoring the damp seeping through her trousers. She ran a finger along the edge of the semi-circle. Eva was right. The grooves were shallow, compressed outward. Like a force had been released and thrown back. Quinn’s eyes tracked the pattern to the compass needle. The brass instrument pointed directly at a cluster of shadows behind a collapsed maintenance shed. The rift isn’t open, Quinn said slowly. It’s closing. He triggered it. Or tried to seal it. Exactly, Eva said. Which means whoever killed him didn’t do it with a gun or a blade. They did it by opening the door and stepping through. Or by using a counter-sign. Look at the pillar behind him. Quinn turned. The tiled wall bore a single, fresh scorch mark in the shape of a handprint. Blackened, soot-dark, and impossibly smooth. No burn victim would leave a clean outline like that. The heat would blister, blister and peel. This was instantaneous vaporization. A suppression field, Eva said. Banned alchemy. They didn’t want a struggle. They wanted a quiet removal. And they used a bone token to enter this station tonight. The Market moves tomorrow. They’re packing up. You need to move. Quinn stood, wiping her hands on her coat. The compass needle shifted, trembling before snapping toward the tunnel exit once more. She slipped it into her pocket. The weight of it grounded her. Three years of dead ends, of files stamped CLOSED, of a partner’s name whispered in empty rooms, suddenly had a vector. Forensics will bag the body, Quinn said, her voice low and even. They’ll run tox. They’ll find traces of whatever you called alchemical. I’ll take the tunnel. Quinn, Eva warned, the bone-white light catching the sharp planes of her face, the Market doesn’t hand over its goods willingly. If a clique is running this, they’re protected. By people who don’t like questions. And they’ll know you’re watching. Let them know, Quinn said, adjusting the worn leather strap of her watch. I’ve been watching them since Morris died. I just didn’t know what I was looking at. She stepped past the crime scene tape, her boots echoing against the damp platform. The ozone grew thicker, the shadows deeper, the compass in her pocket humming against her thigh like a trapped heartbeat. She didn’t look back. She walked into the dark, following the needle, following the truth she’d spent eighteen years refusing to accept, and three years desperately needing to find.
created_at"2026-04-27T09:11:42.162Z" 4/27/2026, 9:11:42 AM
model"qwen/qwen3.6-35b-a3b-20260415"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency314
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time55745
tokens_prompt923
tokens_completion7099
native_tokens_prompt905
native_tokens_completion6235
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning4646
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"stop"
usage0.01278675
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"57ebdffc-b059-4d92-a1ac-94436bae3d31"
id"chatcmpl-8a9e46efaa66f18a"
is_byokfalse
latency314
model_permaslug"qwen/qwen3.6-35b-a3b-20260415"
provider_name"Parasail"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.1; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1777281102-KsPsLqrAMimDzSFZPPSD"
session_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1777281102-pvnHc9phLTd6dRjeppgB"
upstream_id"chatcmpl-8a9e46efaa66f18a"
total_cost0.01278675
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Parasail"
response_cache_source_id(null)

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"clandestine"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"cataloged"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"furrowing"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"glint"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"familiar"
count1
15
word"database"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"clandestine"
2"velvet"
3"weight"
4"shimmered"
5"cataloged"
6"standard"
7"perfect"
8"pulse"
9"furrowing"
10"scanning"
11"glint"
12"etched"
13"trembled"
14"familiar"
15"database"
16"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences185
matches(empty)
42.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount11
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences185
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
2"know know"
3"know, watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences185
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1582
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions11
matches
0"Morning, Detective, Eva said, her voice carrying easily over the drip of condensation."
1"I found a body, Quinn corrected."
2"Lethal injection or a rare neurotoxin, Eva said, kneeling beside the body."
3"Or his heart stopped, Quinn said flatly."
4"You know what this is, Eva said."
5"I know the Veil Market moves every full moon, Eva replied, tucking her hair behind her ear again."
6"Then look at the dust, Eva said, pointing to the floor near the tunnel mouth."
7"Exactly, Eva said."
8"A suppression field, Eva said."
9"Forensics will bag the body, Quinn said, her voice low and even."
10"Let them know, Quinn said, adjusting the worn leather strap of her watch."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1582
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn25
Met3
Tube2
Veil3
Market4
Platform1
Two1
Eva17
Kowalski2
Detective2
Victorian1
Weave1
Morris2
Officer1
Dead1
Robbery1
Gone1
Wrong1
You8
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Met"
3"Market"
4"Eva"
5"Kowalski"
6"Morris"
7"You"
places
0"Veil"
1"Robbery"
globalScore0.71
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1582
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences185
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean49.44
std28.12
cv0.569
sampleLengths
0105
182
279
322
413
515
614
797
845
914
1056
1183
1281
1346
1432
1516
1652
1790
1810
1972
2069
2126
2249
2364
2417
2538
2643
2739
2854
2927
3040
3192
93.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences185
matches
0"been hollowed"
1"are blackened"
2"been hollowed"
3"is paid"
4"been burned"
5"been released"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs309
matches
0"was trying"
1"was looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences185
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1596
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.023809523809523808
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.011904761904761904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences185
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences185
mean8.55
std6.09
cv0.712
sampleLengths
016
121
230
322
416
513
69
716
85
97
1032
119
1211
1322
1421
1516
1613
172
187
1910
203
2112
223
236
248
259
269
273
282
2917
3027
315
325
3320
3412
357
3611
374
385
396
407
417
427
4317
447
452
461
473
485
492
42.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.31891891891891894
totalSentences185
uniqueOpeners59
80.81% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences165
matches
0"Just a body, a semi-circle"
1"Just a body found in"
2"Then look at the dust,"
3"Exactly, Eva said."
ratio0.024
91.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences165
matches
0"She checked her watch, the"
1"They just followed the missing"
2"She tucked a damp strand"
3"They don’t need them, Quinn"
4"You found something?"
5"I found a body, Quinn"
6"They approached the victim slumped"
7"They radiated outward in a"
8"She adjusted her glasses, keeping"
9"I’ve seen symptoms like this"
10"His nervous system just shut"
11"She reached into her satchel,"
12"They form a geometric pattern."
13"He was trying to keep"
14"She crouched, brushing damp dust"
15"She stood, scanning the platform."
16"Her eyes caught a glint"
17"She crossed the space in"
18"It trembled, then locked into"
19"It doesn’t track direction."
ratio0.321
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount114
totalSentences165
matches
0"Rain slicked the grated grating"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"She checked her watch, the"
3"The place smelled of ozone,"
4"The abandoned Tube station had"
5"Canvas tarps strung between support"
6"This was the Veil Market."
7"Nobody in uniform knew the"
8"They just followed the missing"
9"Crime scene tape crisscrossed the"
10"A uniformed constable shifted his"
11"DS Eva Kowalski waited near"
12"She tucked a damp strand"
13"Eva’s worn leather satchel bulged"
14"Morning, Detective, Eva said, her"
15"Forensics hasn’t even unpacked the"
16"They don’t need them, Quinn"
17"Eva fell into step beside"
18"You found something?"
19"I found a body, Quinn"
ratio0.691
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences165
matches
0"If this was a turf"
1"If it was a drug"
2"If a clique is running"
ratio0.018
96.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn suspected a clique, a coordinated network that operated just outside statutory reach, moving goods that didn’t exist on paper."
1"The casing bore a heavy verdigris patina, etched with concentric rings of protective sigils that matched the ones scratched into the tiles."
2"Three years ago, buried under a headline that read Officer Dead in Robbery Gone Wrong."
3"The brass compass in her palm felt suddenly heavy, familiar in a way that made her skin prickle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.7307%