| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1573 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "deliberately" | | 2 | "really" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1573 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "measured" | | 3 | "echoes" | | 4 | "efficient" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "charged" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 185 | | matches | | |
| 73.36% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 6 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 185 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 185 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1573 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "You are researching again, Lucien says, his gaze sweeping the room." | | 1 | "You did not ask, I whisper." | | 2 | "Tell me that in six months, I say, the words slipping out before I can cage them." | | 3 | "I do not need you to keep me safe, I murmur." | | 4 | "I already decided, I whisper." | | 5 | "Then do not let go, he says." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1573 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.89 | | worstName | "You" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | French | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Lucien | 4 | | Luc | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Evans | 2 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | You | 14 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Luc" | | 3 | "Evans" | | 4 | "You" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "breath that seems to shake something loose in his chest" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1573 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 47.67 | | std | 30.7 | | cv | 0.644 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 90 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 60 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 94 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 113 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 41 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 144 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 185 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 272 | | matches | | 0 | "was expecting" | | 1 | "were running" | | 2 | "were staying" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 185 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1581 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "other void-black, locking" |
| | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.03795066413662239 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007590132827324478 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 185 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 185 | | mean | 8.5 | | std | 7.02 | | cv | 0.825 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 33.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 30 | | diversityRatio | 0.2810810810810811 | | totalSentences | 185 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, my foot stays planted." | | 1 | "Still looking for loopholes?" | | 2 | "Still trying to outthink the" | | 3 | "Still trying to live in" | | 4 | "Just an empty apartment and" | | 5 | "Always walking the line between" | | 6 | "Then do not let go," | | 7 | "Just by us, finally speaking" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 16.23% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "My hand still rests on" | | 1 | "He stands there, framed by" | | 2 | "His platinum hair is slicked" | | 3 | "I should close the door." | | 4 | "His voice is low, measured," | | 5 | "It does not matter how" | | 6 | "I keep my tone flat," | | 7 | "You have the right idea" | | 8 | "I am not sure which." | | 9 | "He does not smile." | | 10 | "He never does when the" | | 11 | "His amber eye flicks to" | | 12 | "You left the deadbolts unengaged." | | 13 | "I was expecting a package." | | 14 | "He steps forward, and I" | | 15 | "He crosses the threshold, his" | | 16 | "You are researching again, Lucien" | | 17 | "He moves with that predatory" | | 18 | "His cane taps once against" | | 19 | "I cross my arms, deliberately" |
| | ratio | 0.509 | |
| 76.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 122 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts click back." | | 1 | "My hand still rests on" | | 2 | "The hallway air is damp," | | 3 | "A quiet, dangerous familiarity that" | | 4 | "He stands there, framed by" | | 5 | "Charcoal wool cuts a sharp" | | 6 | "His platinum hair is slicked" | | 7 | "I should close the door." | | 8 | "The crescent scar on my" | | 9 | "His voice is low, measured," | | 10 | "It does not matter how" | | 11 | "The script dissolves into static." | | 12 | "I keep my tone flat," | | 13 | "You have the right idea" | | 14 | "I am not sure which." | | 15 | "He does not smile." | | 16 | "He never does when the" | | 17 | "His amber eye flicks to" | | 18 | "You left the deadbolts unengaged." | | 19 | "That is not like you." |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Because you are." | | 1 | "To make sure you are" | | 2 | "Because I thought you would" | | 3 | "Because I thought you deserved" | | 4 | "Because I was afraid that" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 37.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "A quiet, dangerous familiarity that steals the breath right out of my lungs." | | 1 | "One liquid amber, the other void-black, locking onto mine with an intensity that feels less like sight and more like a tether snapping taut." | | 2 | "His voice is low, measured, the syllables rolling with that polished French cadence that used to curl against my collarbone in the dark." | | 3 | "He crosses the threshold, his presence filling the narrow entryway, displacing the stale air." | | 4 | "The sound echoes too loudly in the cramped space, bouncing off shelves that line every available wall." | | 5 | "You are researching again, Lucien says, his gaze sweeping the room." | | 6 | "I want to list the reasons why he should leave, why the complicated terms that tore us apart still hold weight, why the supernatural underworld and a girl with …" | | 7 | "Lucien exhales, a slow, measured breath that seems to shake something loose in his chest." | | 8 | "But as his fingers tighten around my wrist, grounding me, I know the complicated terms that broke us will have to be rewritten." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |