| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde stated flatly [flatly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.579 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 96.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1443 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "resonance" | | 2 | "vibrated" | | 3 | "searing" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "oppressive" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "porcelain" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "cacophony" | | 16 | "rhythmic" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "structure" | | 19 | "constructed" | | 20 | "crystal" | | 21 | "facade" | | 22 | "shattered" | | 23 | "synchronized" | | 24 | "etched" | | 25 | "echoing" | | 26 | "navigate" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1443 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone," | | 1 | "The unknown benefactor didn't just give me a trinket. They gave me a key. Or a trap." | | 2 | "Contracted." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.81% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1172 | | uniqueNames | 23 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Aurora | 1 | | London | 2 | | Shade | 3 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Wardens | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Helbound | 2 | | Hall | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Fae | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Varga" | | 6 | "Seer" | | 7 | "Rory" | | 8 | "Blade" | | 9 | "Brendan" | | 10 | "Hall" | | 11 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Fae-Forged" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.988 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like warm glass beneath her boots" | | 1 | "moonlight that seemed to repel the amber haze, and her pale lavender eyes scanned the environment with detached precision" | | 2 | "sounded like grinding millstones, and the" | | 3 | "looked like blood, swirling around a stat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.693 | | wordCount | 1443 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer a faint pulse but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.26% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 60.13 | | std | 27.8 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 115 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 132 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 98 | | 11 | 72 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 82 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 54 | | 23 | 22 |
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| 88.75% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "were, stepped" | | 3 | "was dropped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 198 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "\"This realm eats will. It does not just feed the body; it hollows the spirit until only hunger remains.\"" | | 1 | "Where her feet touched the glassy ground, no impression marred the surface; she left no footprints, moving as if she were merely remembered rather than present." | | 2 | "These weren't just spirits; they were people taken, bound to this realm of indulgence, forced to serve the excess until their souls were drained dry." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 794 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.022670025188916875 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011335012594458438 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 15.35 | | std | 9.87 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 47.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3617021276595745 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward, and the" | | 1 | "It smelled of a banquet" | | 2 | "She was cool-headed by nature," | | 3 | "She didn't panic." | | 4 | "They gave me a key." | | 5 | "They were figures in tattered" | | 6 | "She touched the crescent-shaped scar" | | 7 | "They approached a structure that" | | 8 | "She didn't hesitate." | | 9 | "She swung the blade in" | | 10 | "Her pre-law mind began to" | | 11 | "She saw a service hatch" | | 12 | "She adjusted her grip, her" | | 13 | "They were in a realm" |
| | ratio | 0.179 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pressed against Aurora's" | | 1 | "The silver chain felt hot," | | 2 | "Rory counted the throbs, her" | | 3 | "She stepped forward, and the" | | 4 | "The transition was seamless, a" | | 5 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue" | | 6 | "The air was thick, coating" | | 7 | "It smelled of a banquet" | | 8 | "Nyx stood a pace ahead," | | 9 | "The Shade's faintly glowing violet" | | 10 | "Nyx whispered, the voice sounding" | | 11 | "The name slipped out, a" | | 12 | "Isolde Varga drifted through the" | | 13 | "The Half-Fae Seer's silver hair" | | 14 | "Isolde murmured, her speech weaving" | | 15 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 16 | "The moonsilver dagger was always" | | 17 | "She was cool-headed by nature," | | 18 | "The geometry was wrong." | | 19 | "Towers of stacked porcelain crockery" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pressed against Aurora's sternum, no longer a faint pulse but a thrumming resonance that vibrated through her ribs and into her teeth." | | 1 | "She stepped forward, and the cobblestones of London's damp alleyway dissolved into a substance that felt like warm glass beneath her boots." | | 2 | "The Half-Fae Seer's silver hair cascaded to her waist in a waterfall of moonlight that seemed to repel the amber haze, and her pale lavender eyes scanned the en…" | | 3 | "Where her feet touched the glassy ground, no impression marred the surface; she left no footprints, moving as if she were merely remembered rather than present." | | 4 | "The moonsilver dagger was always cold, a constant ache of chill against her thigh, and now it pulsed with a frost that made the metal groan softly." | | 5 | "She was cool-headed by nature, the kind of person who could talk down a drunk in the back of the Golden Empress or deconstruct a lease agreement with her father…" | | 6 | "Vines thick as pythons, draped in fruit that pulsed with internal bioluminescence, coiled around arches of wrought iron that resembled ribcages." | | 7 | "They were figures in tattered clothes, their movements jerky, their necks adorned with golden collars that glowed with the same hue as the sky." | | 8 | "They approached a structure that dominated the landscape: a hall constructed entirely of translucent crystal, revealing tables groaning with impossible feasts w…" | | 9 | "The moonsilver flared with a faint luminescence that clashed violently with the amber light, the temperature dropping instantly." | | 10 | "Inside, the air was so rich it felt hard to breathe, saturated with pheromones that tugged at her instincts." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her speech weaving riddles as naturally as breath" | | 1 | "Rory muttered, her voice low" | | 2 | "Isolde confirmed, her compulsion forcing the truth from her lips" | | 3 | "the Shade whispered, their voice echoing from the darkness beneath the benches" | | 4 | "Rory said, her voice steady, cutting through the humid din" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Isolde stated flatly (state)" | | 3 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 5 | "the Shade whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.778 | | effectiveRatio | 0.737 | |