Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ73WZ5VMEP2VJWRCMSQ9GXS

Run Details

Duration:
2m 60s
Cost:
$0.038188
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pressed the silver chain against her collarbone. The Heartstone pendant burned hot, a frantic pulse hammering against her skin. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist, grounding herself in the familiar bite of old injury. Nyx stretched a long, fluid arm, fingers dissolving into smoke before reforming into a solid hand. Readings spike. The shadow-being stood six feet two inches tall, violet eyes glowing faintly in the gloom. Their voice carried like a whisper caught on a draft, bypassing ears to rasp directly behind Rory's skull. Isolde stood barefoot on the moss. Silver hair reached her waist, untouched by wind. Pale lavender eyes tracked a shimmer in the air ahead. Ancient oak standing stones marked the perimeter, their bark etched with runes that predated memory. Wildflowers bloomed year-round at the seer's feet, petals unfurling in rapid succession. The Veil thins. Step where the grass forgets to grow. Isolde's speech held the flat, sharp cadence of glass. She left no footprints on the damp earth. Rory scanned the clearing. The space between the stones twisted like wet heat over asphalt. No sound reached this center. The distant hum of London traffic, the cry of crows, the rustle of leaves—all vanished. Silence pressed hard against her eardrums, heavy and absolute. She drew the Fae-forged blade. The moonsilver hilt leached warmth from her palm. A faint luminescence bled from the leaf-shaped edge, cutting the shadows. Steady. Rory moved forward. Boots crunched on dead needles. She stopped where the moss turned to grey ash. Nyx flowed past her, form expanding to cast a long, jagged shadow. No heat. No scent. Just hunger. Isolde tilted her head. Gluttony invites. It does not ask. Rory stepped onto the ash. The world lurched. Gravity twisted left, then snapped back. Color bled into vision. Amber light flooded her senses, warm and suffocating. The air turned thick, syrup-sweet with roasting spices, fermented fruit, and something metallic that coated the tongue. They stood on a ridge. Below, terraces of vineyards spiraled down into a valley choked with oversized flora. Pumpkins the size of carriages rolled between rows of wheat that shimmered like gold wire. The sky burned a warm, bruised orange, no sun visible, just an endless diffusion of radiance that made shadows pool deep and black beneath every object. Dymas. Nyx's form flickered, half-transparent. The Prince's table. Rory lowered the blade. The luminescence faded against the ambient glow. She reached out, fingers brushing a broad leaf near her boot. The plant shivered. Veins of sap pulsed red, thick as blood. The leaf curled around her finger, warm and sticky. Rory snatched her hand back. The saliva burned a blister on her skin. Don't touch. Isolde walked forward. Wildflowers erupted in her path, blooming instantly from bud to rot in seconds. The soil remembers the old magic. It feeds on presence. Nyx extended a hand toward the valley. Shadows in the grove below detached from the plants, slithering upward with purpose. Wardens. Or servants. They taste the intrusion. Rory checked the pendant. The crimson gem throbbed in time with the sap veins in the leaf. Heartstone reacts. We're deep in Hel territory. She turned back to the ridge. The grey ash circle remained the only anchor. Behind them, through a jagged rift in the air, the grey clouds of Earth hung, silent and small. The Veil shimmered, a faint distortion visible only to her sharpened sight. We need the artifact. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag. The artifact hides in the cellar of excess. Isolde pointed a pale finger toward a structure half-buried in the vineyard. Stone arches draped in glowing moss. A font bubbled with liquid that defied surface tension, climbing the walls before falling back in arcs of iridescent foam. Too open. The shadow-things coil there. Nyx shifted solid, height contracting to blend with the trellis. Rory looked at the shadow-shapes. They moved in unison, dragging cart-loads of fruit that shrieked when bruised. The fruit's maws tore open, rows of needle-teeth glinting. Sentinel flora. Rory tightened her grip on the blade. Keep low. Stick to the stone paths. She descended. Gravel shifted under her boots. The sound rang too loud in the syrup air. Nyx melted into the shadow of a trellis, form dissolving to ink. Isolde followed, gliding over roots as if they were air. Rory picked her steps. A tendril lashed out from the wheat, seeking her ankle. She severed it with the Fae blade. The cut hissed. Black ichor splashed where the blade passed, dissolving the tissue. The plant recoiled, screaming a high-pitched tone that made teeth ache. Silence. Rory signaled with a sharp nod. A figure emerged from the stone arches. Humanoid, but stretched. Limbs too long, joints bending backward. Skin the color of polished mahogany, etched with silver runes that pulsed with light. A crown of twisted grapevines pressed into the scalp, leaves withered and black. The entity held a fork wrought from bone, tines dripping with a sauce that smoked and curled. Fresh meat. The voice vibrated in Rory's chest, resonant and multi-tonal. Or perhaps... rare vintage? The thing tilted its head. Eyes black as oil pits fixed on Rory's pendant. Rory stopped. Heart hammered against her ribs. She kept her hand on the hilt, fingers ready to slide. Delivery. Rory's voice didn't shake. She forced the flat affect of a thousand customer interactions. Yu-Fei's run. Special request. The entity glided closer. Movement fluid, no footfalls. Long fingers drummed the bone fork against its palm. Click-click-click. Yu-Fei. The name dripped with mockery. The mortal merchant who trades in scraps. You carry scraps, delivery-wench? The delivery brings the key. Not the meal. Isolde's voice cut in from the shadows. The entity spun, long neck craning. The Seer. Exile of the Bright Courts. You bring the thief to my feast? Nyx burst from the shadow of the archway, solidifying instantly. A whip of shadow lashed from their hand, wrapping around the entity's ankle. The creature howled. Bone fork shattered. Black blood sprayed. Rory lunged. Blade flashed. She aimed for the rune etched on the creature's throat. The entity twisted, impossible flexibility allowing it to slip the strike. It backhanded Nyx. Shadow form dispersed, then re-knitted three paces back. Violet eyes flared white. Wards! Nyx warned. Stone is warded! Rory felt the resistance. An invisible layer pushed against her shoulders. Her blade sparked against something unseen inches from the creature's body. Isolde stepped forward. She reached into the air, plucking a wildflower that hadn't been there a moment ago. She crushed the bloom between thumb and forefinger. Pink dust scattered. The dust hit the ward. The magical barrier sizzled, thinning like wax under a flame. Rory drove the blade through the weakened spot. Moonsilver bit deep. The creature gurgled, runes flaring bright silver before dying to grey. It collapsed, dissolving into a stain of oil and ash. Silence returned, heavy and watchful. The archway stood open. Beyond, steps led down into cool darkness. A scent of cold stone and old wine wafted up. Cellar. Rory exhaled. Sweat cooled on her neck. Nyx reformed, taller, looming. They pointed toward the steps. The shadows inside... they move wrong. They have teeth. Isolde peered into the dark. Lavender eyes reflected nothing. The cellar holds the heart. And the heart hungers. Rory checked the pendant. The pulse quickened, a frantic drumbeat. Heat radiated from the gem, searing her chest. She nodded to the group. Down. Rory stepped onto the first stone. The temperature dropped instantly. Her breath plumed white. The amber glow above faded, replaced by the faint luminescence of her blade. Shapes stirred in the gloom. Whispers began, overlapping voices, a chorus of pleas and boasts that scratched at the mind. Keep formation. Rory moved deeper. Boots clicked on wet stone. A door loomed ahead. Carved from a single piece of obsidian. No handle. Only an indentation shaped like a human heart. Rory drew the pendant. The crimson gem matched the shape. She pressed the stone into the indentation. The mechanism clicked. Heavy gears ground. The door groaned, splitting down the center. Cold air rushed out, carrying the sound of a massive, slow heart-beat. Thump... thump... Rory froze. The vibration rattled her bones. Nyx's form rippled, shadow recoiling from the room beyond. The Prince. He sleeps. But he dreams. Isolde whispered. Waking him breaks the Veil. We walk on a knife's edge. Rory stepped over the threshold. The room opened. A cavernous space. In the center, a pedestal of bone. Upon it, an object wrapped in chains of gold and iron. The chains glowed faintly, etched with warnings that burned the eyes. The heart-beat synchronized with the pendant now. Rory's vision swam. She advanced. Steps slow. Deliberate. Nyx drifted close, whispering in her mind. Three guardians. Dormant. If you touch the object, they wake. Rory ignored the voice. Eyes fixed on the chains. Fae metal. Moonsilver could cut this. She drew the blade. The first chain hissed as the edge touched. Sparks flew. Real metal. Real danger. Rory saw her reflection in the polished bone pedestal. Bright blue eyes wide. Straight black hair plastered to her face with sweat. The crescent scar on her wrist gleamed. She looked small against the scale of the room. Isolde's hand rested on Rory's shoulder. A touch light as dust, yet grounding. The chains bind the sin. Free the object, and the realm starves. Rory ignored the riddle. Focus on the cut. She applied pressure. The Fae blade sang. Moonsilver bit into gold. A sound erupted from the darkness behind the pedestal. A low rumble. Like tectonic plates shifting. Dust rained from the ceiling. Wake cycle triggered! Cut now or die! Nyx's voice lost the whisper. It boomed, shaking the chamber. Rory twisted the blade. The chain shattered. Shhhhk. The second chain followed. The rumble grew to a roar. Shapes in the shadows stretched, limbs unfolding, claws extending. Rory reached the third chain. Her arm burned. The blade vibrated, resisting. Rory! Nyx boomed solid form shielding her side. They come! Rory lunged. Blade downward. The chain snapped. The object on the pedestal shifted. Wrappings fell away. A single, perfect grape sat in a bowl of silver. It pulsed with light. Red. Crimson. Matching the pendant. Rory stared. The artifact? A grape? The Seed of Excess. One bite. One taste. And the hunger ends. Or begins. Isolde gasped. Rory reached for the bowl. A claw the size of a spear struck the air where her head had been a second before. Rory dove. Rolling on the stone. A guardian lunged. Four eyes, six jaws, body armored in scale-mail of petrified wood. Nyx met the creature head-on. Shadow and claw clashed. Sparks of violet and amber lit the room. Isolde raised both hands. Wildflowers erupted from the stone floor, roots entangling the guardian's legs. Rory scrambled back to the pedestal. The bowl remained. She snatched the silver bowl. Light flooded her vision. The pendant flared, blinding white. Heat seared her hand. She didn't drop it. The guardian roared, breaking free of the roots. It turned toward Rory. Nyx took a heavy blow, form dissolving. They reformed, wounded, smoke trailing from a torn shoulder. Rory! Move! Rory backed toward the door. The bowl felt heavy, dense as a star. Isolde stood between Rory and the guardian. Her silver hair whipped around her. She pointed a finger at the beast. The guardian froze. Stone crawled over its scales, petrifying it from the feet up. Fate demands payment. Isolde intoned. The path clears. She turned to Rory. Eyes bleeding pale light. Run. Rory bolted. Up the steps. Through the archway. Nyx flowed alongside, solid form shielding her side. The alarm bells of Dymas began to ring. A deep, resonant toll that shook the vines, burst the fruits, and turned the amber sky to a warning deep red. Rory didn't look back. The bowl pressed against her chest. The pendant burned hot enough to blister. She hit the ridge. Grey ash circle waited. She leaped. Impact. Grey clouds. Silence. The grove. Rory landed hard. Knees buckled. She rolled, coming up on one knee, bowl clutched tight. The ash circle sealed behind them. The rift vanished. Only ancient oaks remained. Nyx collapsed to hands and knees. Shadow form stable, but dim. Isolde stood barefoot, untouched. She looked at the sky. Rain began to fall. Cold. Real. Rory set the bowl down. Her hands shook. She looked at the silver dish. The grape remained. Perfect. Pulsing. Rory reached out. Fingers hovering over the fruit. We have it. Rory's voice rasped. Throat dry as sand. She looked up. The grove watched. Waiting. Nyx dragged themselves upright. That was too close. The Prince stirs. Isolde knelt beside the bowl. Lavender eyes narrowed. The seed is not the prize. It is the key. And keys open both doors. Rory picked up the blade. Sheathed it. The metal cold against her thigh. She stood. Leg trembled, then held. What's next? Rory demanded. Isolde smiled. No teeth. Just a stretch of skin. Next, we feed the wolf. Rory grabbed the bowl. Turned toward the path. The rain soaked her hair. Black strands clung to her face. She walked. Nyx limped behind. Isolde glided. The Fae Grove deepened around them. Shadows stretched. The standing stones hummed. Rory checked the bowl. The grape pulsed once. Twice. She quickened her pace. The path narrowed. Roots shifted. A figure stood at the edge of the trail. Dressed in grey. Face hidden. Rory stopped. Hand went to the hilt. The figure raised a hand. Palm open. Delivery accepted. A voice, familiar and wrong, spoke from the grey. Rory stepped back. Who are you? The figure tilted a hand toward the grove. The one who orders. The one who pays. Rory looked at Nyx. At Isolde. Nyx's violet eyes widened. Warden. Rory tightened her grip on the bowl. No. The figure took a step. Boots left no print. Rory spun, running deeper into the grove. Branches whipped her face. Nyx pursued, form blurring. Isolde followed, silent. The grove twisted. Paths looped. Time stretched. Rory's breath sawed. Lungs burned. She didn't stop. The bowl grew hotter. The figure's laughter echoed, coming from everywhere and nowhere. Catch us if you can, Warden! We have a date in Cardiff! Rory vaulted over a fallen log. Heartstone screamed against her chest. Nyx grabbed her arm, pulling her sideways into a hollow. Roots sealed the entrance instantly. Darkness. Silence. Only the pulse of the grape. Rory exhaled. White plume. Hiding won't save you. Nyx whispered. Rory lifted the bowl. Looked at the grape. She took a breath. Then we don't hide. We bargain. She touched the grape. Skin to skin. The world dissolved.
created_at"2026-04-27T09:21:34.913Z" 4/27/2026, 9:21:34 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2453
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2453
totalAiIsms48
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"etched"
count4
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"silence"
count5
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"lurched"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count2
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count4
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"structure"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"glinting"
count1
17
word"sentinel"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count2
19
word"shattered"
count2
20
word"looming"
count1
21
word"quickened"
count2
22
word"searing"
count1
23
word"loomed"
count1
24
word"synchronized"
count1
25
word"perfect"
count2
26
word"trembled"
count1
27
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"traced"
2"familiar"
3"gloom"
4"whisper"
5"etched"
6"scanned"
7"silence"
8"warmth"
9"lurched"
10"shimmered"
11"flickered"
12"pulsed"
13"throbbed"
14"structure"
15"tension"
16"glinting"
17"sentinel"
18"vibrated"
19"shattered"
20"looming"
21"quickened"
22"searing"
23"loomed"
24"synchronized"
25"perfect"
26"trembled"
27"echoed"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences465
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences465
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences465
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2452
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions169
wordCount2452
uniqueNames29
maxNameDensity2.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Rory64
Veil3
London1
Fae-forged1
Prince3
Hel1
Earth1
Fae5
Seer1
Bright2
Courts1
Nyx25
Seed1
Excess1
Dymas2
Grove1
Isolde21
Warden2
Cardiff1
Wildflowers3
Silence5
Boots3
Stone3
Black3
Eyes3
Shadow3
Moonsilver3
Real3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Veil"
3"Prince"
4"Earth"
5"Nyx"
6"Dymas"
7"Isolde"
8"Wildflowers"
9"Silence"
10"Boots"
11"Eyes"
12"Moonsilver"
places
0"London"
1"Hel"
2"Fae"
3"Seer"
4"Grove"
5"Cardiff"
6"Stone"
7"Shadow"
globalScore0.195
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences157
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2452
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences465
matches
0"runes that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs189
mean12.97
std11.8
cv0.909
sampleLengths
054
12
233
351
410
517
668
71
829
96
1010
1143
1259
131
147
1542
1613
172
1826
1927
2024
2144
224
238
248
2538
266
2710
2826
292
3014
3138
3245
331
346
3560
362
3713
3814
3918
401
4118
4218
431
4416
458
467
4720
4823
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences465
matches
0"being stood"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs500
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences465
ratio0.002
matches
0"The distant hum of London traffic, the cry of crows, the rustle of leaves—all vanished."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2474
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pressed hard against her"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.021827000808407437
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.004850444624090542
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences465
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences465
mean5.27
std3.74
cv0.709
sampleLengths
08
112
218
316
42
515
618
76
88
910
1015
1112
123
137
149
158
164
1711
185
1915
209
215
228
2311
241
253
265
279
2812
292
302
312
324
332
344
355
363
376
384
398
4017
415
4213
4315
4426
451
464
473
484
497
49.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3225806451612903
totalSentences465
uniqueOpeners150
56.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences357
matches
0"Only an indentation shaped like"
1"Bright blue eyes wide."
2"Only ancient oaks remained."
3"Just a stretch of skin."
4"Only the pulse of the"
5"Then we don't hide."
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences357
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"Their voice carried like a"
2"She left no footprints on"
3"She drew the Fae-forged blade."
4"She stopped where the moss"
5"It does not ask."
6"They stood on a ridge."
7"She reached out, fingers brushing"
8"It feeds on presence."
9"They taste the intrusion."
10"We're deep in Hel territory."
11"She turned back to the"
12"We need the artifact."
13"They moved in unison, dragging"
14"She severed it with the"
15"She kept her hand on"
16"She forced the flat affect"
17"You carry scraps, delivery-wench?"
18"You bring the thief to"
19"She aimed for the rune"
ratio0.162
28.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount308
totalSentences357
matches
0"Rory pressed the silver chain"
1"The Heartstone pendant burned hot,"
2"She traced the crescent scar"
3"Nyx stretched a long, fluid"
4"The shadow-being stood six feet"
5"Their voice carried like a"
6"Isolde stood barefoot on the"
7"Wildflowers bloomed year-round at the"
8"The Veil thins."
9"Step where the grass forgets"
10"Isolde's speech held the flat,"
11"She left no footprints on"
12"Rory scanned the clearing."
13"The space between the stones"
14"The distant hum of London"
15"She drew the Fae-forged blade."
16"The moonsilver hilt leached warmth"
17"A faint luminescence bled from"
18"Rory moved forward."
19"Boots crunched on dead needles."
ratio0.863
14.01% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences357
matches
0"If you touch the object,"
ratio0.003
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Pumpkins the size of carriages rolled between rows of wheat that shimmered like gold wire."
1"The sky burned a warm, bruised orange, no sun visible, just an endless diffusion of radiance that made shadows pool deep and black beneath every object."
2"They moved in unison, dragging cart-loads of fruit that shrieked when bruised."
3"The plant recoiled, screaming a high-pitched tone that made teeth ache."
4"A deep, resonant toll that shook the vines, burst the fruits, and turned the amber sky to a warning deep red."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.7125%