Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ73Y2K2AWVRA2S6159QF0J3

Run Details

Duration:
2m 30s
Cost:
$0.021606
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door to The Raven's Nest hissed open, cutting a wedge of damp street air through the stale gin haze. Rory kept her forehead pressed against the cool glass of the window, watching a black cab idle at the curb. The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed like a trapped insect, casting a sickly pulse over her black hair. She counted the seconds between the bus signals to drown out the silence of the flat above. Silas moved behind the bar, his limp dragging a slow rhythm as he polished a tumbler. The old maps on the walls held their breath. Black-and-white photographs of strangers in fedoras and veils watched the room with glassy indifference. The bell chimed. Rory turned, expecting the delivery driver for the Golden Empress leftovers she'd forgotten in the fridge. A woman stood in the threshold, shedding a wool coat the colour of bruised plums. She shook a silver umbrella, sending a spray of rain across the floorboards. Her face sharpened as the light caught it, all angles and high cheekbones where softness should have lingered. Her eyes scanned the room with the predatory efficiency of a hawk assessing a field of mice. The umbrella handle clattered against a boot. The woman looked down. Rory felt the floor shift. Memories of Cardiff slammed into her ribs. Rain on slate tiles. The smell of old paper and Earl Grey. A hand pulling her toward a train, desperate and firm. "You're still sitting at the window." The voice carried a lilt that had been sanded down, the Welsh vowels flattened by years of London boardrooms and forced enunciation. The woman stepped fully inside, kicking the door shut with a heel that cost more than Rory's monthly rent. "Eva." Rory pushed off the glass. Her left wrist brushed the rough wood of the table. The small crescent scar itched, a phantom memory of broken china and a shouting match that ended with her mother sweeping shards into the bin. She tucked the hand into her pocket. Eva moved to the bar. Silas did not look up, but his hand stilled on the glass. The air thickened, charged with the static of a man who recognized a threat in the posture of a stranger. "Whiskey," Eva said. "Single malt. If the bottle has a label I can pronounce, it won't pass." "Labels are for ships, not spirits." Silas set a heavy glass on the wood. His hazel eyes flicked to Rory, then back to Eva. A silent assessment passed between the three. "You're far from the M25." Eva's jaw tightened. She didn't turn. "Roads change. People forget the exits." Rory approached, her boots silent on the worn floor. She stopped six inches from Eva's elbow. Up close, the transformation became undeniable. Eva wore gold chains thin as spider silk against her throat, each link precise. Her nails were painted a matte charcoal, filed to lethal points. The girl who had slept in Rory's guest bedroom, clutching a stuffed rabbit with one ear bitten off, had been excised and replaced by this architect of sharp lines. "Four years," Rory said. "Four years, eleven months." Eva lifted the glass. The amber liquid caught the green neon, swirling like poisoned honey. "I tracked the name to the restaurant. Yu-Fei's ledgers are... accessible." "You checked the ledgers." "I verify assets. It's what I do." Eva took a sip, holding the burn, her eyes never leaving Rory. "You're delivery. I wondered if you'd kept the law texts." Rory laughed, a short, dry sound. "Law texts don't pay the heating bill. They don't stop men like Evan from learning how to bypass a deadbolt." The mention of the name acted like a physical blow. Eva's hand jerked. A ring of water from the glass spread across the wood grain. "Evan. I heard rumours." "Rumours. That's all you deal in. I'm here. I'm delivering noodles to squatters and living in a flat that smells of stale beer. I'm not a rumour." "You vanished, Rory. You changed the number. You told your father you went to Manchester. You told your mother you'd call." Eva's voice cracked, the veneer splintering for a fraction of a second. She reached for the glass again, gripping the stem so hard her knuckles bleached white. "I sat in the garden waiting for the bell to ring. Every day. For six months." "You sent packages. Sweaters I couldn't wear. Books I couldn't read. You sent guilt wrapped in tissue paper." "I sent lifelines." Rory stepped closer. Her bright blue eyes bore into Eva's polished mask. "You sent reminders. Reminders that I dropped out. That I betrayed the scholarship. That I let the family name bleed out in the gutter." "The name didn't matter." "The name mattered to Brendan. The name mattered to the firm that fast-tracked you before you even graduated." Eva slammed the glass down. The sound rang through the bar, sharp enough to make the photographs seem to vibrate. Silas's head turned, slow and deliberate. His silver signet ring flashed as he reached for a bottle behind the register. "Don't," Eva whispered. The word hissed. "Don't you dare drag him into this." "I drag nothing. You polished the path. You became Brendan's daughter. You became the barrister he wanted. You cleaned your hands and walked into the City while I was scrubbing blood off kitchen tiles." "I couldn't fix it." Eva's shoulders hunched, the posture of a girl bracing for rain. "You called me screaming in the night. You told me to come to your flat. I had a moot court hearing. I had to be there. If I walked away, everyone would see I was scared. They would see that the Carters produced victims." "Victims." Rory repeated the word, tasting the ash. "So I became a victim. And you became a statue." Eva turned fully, her face exposed. The eyes held a frantic depth, a hunger that contradicted the cold exterior. She reached out, fingers hovering over Rory's sleeve. "I have a flat in Canary Wharf. One bedroom. Bath inside. The view clears the Thames. I pay forty thousand a year." Rory pulled her arm back, tucking the scar deep into her pocket. "I have a kettle that screams and a view of Silas's neon sign. I sleep through the night. I didn't sleep through the night for two years until I got off the train." "Stay." The plea hung in the damp air, fragile as spun sugar. "Stay where? In a glass box where you count your assets and check the locks three times before bed?" Eva's breath hitched. A muscle jumped in her jaw. "It's safe. It's clean. You have a job. You have contacts. Silas..." Eva glanced at the barkeep. The look was searching, calculating. She saw the limp, the grey streaks, the way the room bent its attention around him. "Silas keeps the wolves at bay. He doesn't open doors. You're asking him to take you in?" "I'm asking if you're still the girl who solved the cipher puzzle in six seconds. The girl who knew how to hide in plain sight." Rory looked around the room. The maps. The hidden room behind the bookshelf, though she hadn't yet been shown the way. The quiet authority of a man who traded in secrets and survived. "I'm the girl who survives," Rory said. "But I didn't come here to be saved by the woman who missed the train because of a moot court." Eva flinched. She reached into her coat pocket, producing a leather wallet. She extracted a card, embossed with gold foil, and slid it across the table. "My direct line. Encrypted. Use it. If Evan..." "The card stays." Rory pushed it back. Eva's hand stayed on her side of the table. The silence stretched, filled only by the hum of the neon and the distant wail of a siren. "You look at me and you see a cautionary tale." Eva's voice dropped, stripped of the corporate edge, leaving something raw and trembling. "You're wrong. I look at you and I see the sister I abandoned to the fire so I could keep the house burning. I have a name. I have a title. I have nothing." She leaned in, her gaze locking onto the scar that Rory tried to hide. The eyes narrowed, recognizing the shape, the location, the story written in scar tissue. "That cut. The plate. You always said you fell." Eva's voice barely rose above a whisper. "Evan broke the plate. You deflected." Rory's throat tightened. She forced her hands to stay still. "You were in the garden." "I heard the crash. I ran to the door. You were sweeping. You stood there, hand bleeding, and you told me your father wanted you to learn responsibility. You stood there and you lied to me." Eva closed her eyes. A single tear tracked through the powder on her cheek, ruining the perfect architecture of her face. "I was a coward then. I'm a coward now. But I'm here. And I'm not leaving until you tell me what you actually need." Rory turned her gaze back to the window. The green neon reflected in her eyes, fracturing into shards of light. She watched a lone figure cross the street, head down against the rain. "You want to fix it. You think if you buy me a flat and call the police, the timeline resets. You think I can go back to Cardiff, to the library, to the girl who believed the law was a shield." Rory opened her pocket, pulling out a crumpled receipt. She smoothed it on the table next to the whiskey glass. "I can't go back. The law is a sword, Eva. Evan knows how to wield it. You know how to wield it. I just want to live." Eva stared at the receipt. Her finger traced the edge of the gold card, then withdrew. She reached for her drink, the glass trembling just enough to splash a drop onto her cuff. She didn't wipe it away. "Silas knows the underground. The routes. The people who operate outside the file." Eva spoke the words slowly, testing the shape of the offer. "I can pay him. He takes cash. He takes discretion. Rory, let me do this. One thing. Let me be the friend you needed." Rory looked down at the scar on her wrist. The skin was pale, the crescent sharp against the dark vein beneath. She thought of the flat above, the smell of old wood and frying oil, the safety of a name no one recognized. She thought of Eva, standing in a glass tower, counting the seconds until her heart stopped racing. The barman set a fresh coaster on the wood. His movement was fluid, silent, his hazel eyes fixed over the rim of his own glass. "Names have weight," Silas said, his voice a gravel rumble that cut through the tension. "You shed yours to survive. She kept hers and nearly drowned. Which one is heavier?" Eva's head snapped up. She met his gaze, the calculation warring with the desperation in her eyes. Rory picked up the receipt and folded it, crease over crease, until it became a small, hard square. She slipped it into her pocket. "Heavy enough," Rory murmured. "Now drink your whiskey, Eva. The rain isn't stopping."
created_at"2026-04-27T09:22:11.177Z" 4/27/2026, 9:22:11 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1893
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1893
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"single tear"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"scanned"
3"lilt"
4"charged"
5"flicked"
6"silk"
7"calculating"
8"whisper"
9"single tear"
10"perfect"
11"traced"
12"racing"
13"weight"
14"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1893
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1137
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.29
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Earl1
Grey1
Welsh1
London1
Rory25
Silas5
Eva26
persons
0"Nest"
1"Earl"
2"Grey"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.357
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1893
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean25.93
std16.9
cv0.652
sampleLengths
077
139
23
316
463
511
634
76
841
91
1047
1137
1217
1336
1412
1576
164
1730
184
1929
2026
2125
224
2327
2421
2543
2618
273
2836
294
3018
3140
3213
3334
344
3555
3618
3727
3822
3945
401
4111
4219
4321
4426
4517
4625
4733
4827
4926
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences112
matches
0"been sanded"
1"were painted"
2"been excised"
3"been shown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was searching"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences156
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1139
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.01755926251097454
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006145741878841089
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean12.13
std8.08
cv0.666
sampleLengths
020
120
220
317
416
59
614
73
816
915
1013
1118
1217
137
144
155
167
174
188
1910
206
2122
2219
231
245
2510
2625
277
285
2912
3020
313
3214
3314
3410
357
365
373
383
396
409
417
426
4314
4411
4529
464
478
4811
4911
42.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.21153846153846154
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences105
matches
0"She counted the seconds between"
1"She shook a silver umbrella,"
2"Her face sharpened as the"
3"Her eyes scanned the room"
4"Her left wrist brushed the"
5"She tucked the hand into"
6"His hazel eyes flicked to"
7"She didn't turn."
8"She stopped six inches from"
9"Her nails were painted a"
10"She reached for the glass"
11"Her bright blue eyes bore"
12"His silver signet ring flashed"
13"She reached out, fingers hovering"
14"She saw the limp, the"
15"She reached into her coat"
16"She extracted a card, embossed"
17"She leaned in, her gaze"
18"She forced her hands to"
19"She watched a lone figure"
ratio0.276
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences105
matches
0"The door to The Raven's"
1"Rory kept her forehead pressed"
2"The green neon sign above"
3"She counted the seconds between"
4"Silas moved behind the bar,"
5"The old maps on the"
6"The bell chimed."
7"Rory turned, expecting the delivery"
8"A woman stood in the"
9"She shook a silver umbrella,"
10"Her face sharpened as the"
11"Her eyes scanned the room"
12"The umbrella handle clattered against"
13"The woman looked down."
14"Rory felt the floor shift."
15"Memories of Cardiff slammed into"
16"The smell of old paper"
17"A hand pulling her toward"
18"The voice carried a lilt"
19"The woman stepped fully inside,"
ratio0.971
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The small crescent scar itched, a phantom memory of broken china and a shouting match that ended with her mother sweeping shards into the bin."
1"The girl who had slept in Rory's guest bedroom, clutching a stuffed rabbit with one ear bitten off, had been excised and replaced by this architect of sharp lin…"
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, his voice a gravel rumble that cut through the tension"
96.43% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
2"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.107
82.3300%