| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 86.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1537 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1537 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "lilt" | | 5 | "unspoken" | | 6 | "navigate" | | 7 | "navigated" | | 8 | "intensity" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "shattered" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.27% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 7 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1534 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "You left unsaid things, Lucien, she whispered." | | 1 | "I stayed away because I thought you deserved better than complications, he said, the words barely audible." | | 2 | "I know, she replied." | | 3 | "If you stay, she said, no maps." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1534 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "You" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Lane | 3 | | Evan | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Brick | 3 | | Empress | 1 | | French | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Lucien | 4 | | London | 2 | | Aurora | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | You | 19 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "You" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Empress" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 0.881 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 70.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like cumin and exhaustion, hiding" | | 1 | "felt like a marker, a boundary he’d res" | | 2 | "breath that seemed to release years of held tension" |
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| 69.62% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.304 | | wordCount | 1534 | | matches | | 0 | "not to grab, not to force, but to rest lightly against her jaw" | | 1 | "not to force, but to rest lightly against her jaw" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 56.81 | | std | 35.73 | | cv | 0.629 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 108 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 89 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 113 | | 9 | 76 | | 10 | 88 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 83 | | 14 | 141 | | 15 | 86 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 107 | | 20 | 78 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 67 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "been curled" | | 1 | "was raised" |
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| 59.65% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 285 | | matches | | 0 | "was already solving" | | 1 | "were working" | | 2 | "was keeping" | | 3 | "were still bleeding" | | 4 | "wasn’t looking" | | 5 | "was looking" |
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| 86.47% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "One amber, burning like old honey; the other black as a starless sky." | | 1 | "The demon blood in his veins made him graceful, but it was the human half—the sharp mind, the quiet patience—that had unraveled her." | | 2 | "The scent of him cut through the dust and old paper—cedar, ozone, something faintly metallic, like struck flint." |
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| 89.87% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1543 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "beside dog-eared grimoires," |
| | adverbCount | 69 | | adverbRatio | 0.04471808165910564 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010369410239792612 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 10.09 | | std | 7.66 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 31.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 28 | | diversityRatio | 0.27631578947368424 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she just stood there," | | 1 | "Mostly because of the books." | | 2 | "Mostly because of him." | | 3 | "Then I learned you were" | | 4 | "Then say them now." | | 5 | "Instead, she reached out." |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 14.20% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood there, fingers still" | | 1 | "He filled the narrow hallway," | | 2 | "She should have slammed the" | | 3 | "You’re late, she said." | | 4 | "Her voice was steady, cool" | | 5 | "I’m exactly on time, Rory." | | 6 | "You’re just terrible at keeping" | | 7 | "She stepped back, pulling the" | | 8 | "She’d moved fast when Evan’s" | | 9 | "It had become permanent." | | 10 | "He didn’t take off his" | | 11 | "He never did." | | 12 | "You’re working at the Empress" | | 13 | "I watched your car circle" | | 14 | "You watch a lot of" | | 15 | "She set her keys in" | | 16 | "You just appear." | | 17 | "He moved past her toward" | | 18 | "He poured two fingers of" | | 19 | "He spoke to the room" |
| | ratio | 0.514 | |
| 75.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 106 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "The lock clicked, the deadbolt" | | 1 | "She stood there, fingers still" | | 2 | "He filled the narrow hallway," | | 3 | "Platinum hair slicked back with" | | 4 | "Aurora hadn’t expected him." | | 5 | "She should have slammed the" | | 6 | "You’re late, she said." | | 7 | "Her voice was steady, cool" | | 8 | "Lucien’s mouth twitched." | | 9 | "A ghost of one." | | 10 | "I’m exactly on time, Rory." | | 11 | "You’re just terrible at keeping" | | 12 | "She stepped back, pulling the" | | 13 | "The three deadbolts clunked home" | | 14 | "Ptolemy, who had been curled" | | 15 | "The tabby knew better than" | | 16 | "The flat swallowed the sound" | | 17 | "Brick Lane’s evening traffic muffled" | | 18 | "Every surface groaned under the" | | 19 | "She’d moved fast when Evan’s" |
| | ratio | 0.768 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, under his gaze, it" | | 1 | "Just as the man who" | | 2 | "If she pressed just right," | | 3 | "If you stay, she said," |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 99.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The demon blood in his veins made him graceful, but it was the human half—the sharp mind, the quiet patience—that had unraveled her." | | 1 | "Then I learned you were working deliveries, living in a flat that smelled like cumin and exhaustion, hiding from a past you never talked about." | | 2 | "You were a half-blood playing fixer for creatures that would drain us dry." | | 3 | "That she’d been afraid of wanting someone who lived in a world she couldn’t fully understand, and afraid of wanting someone who understood her too well." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |