| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 90.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1067 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1067 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "flickered" | | 16 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 211 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 211 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1067 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1067 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Do | 3 | | You | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1067 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 88.92 | | std | 48.08 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 113 | | 1 | 105 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 146 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 97 | | 7 | 106 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 90 | | 10 | 93 | | 11 | 181 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 211 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1069 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.021515434985968196 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0018709073900841909 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 211 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 211 | | mean | 5.06 | | std | 3.79 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 43.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 29 | | diversityRatio | 0.3412322274881517 | | totalSentences | 211 | | uniqueOpeners | 72 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, wildflowers carpeted the ground" | | 1 | "Then, a flicker." | | 2 | "All accounted for." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 89.05% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She stopped at the threshold." | | 2 | "She had come for the" | | 3 | "She pulled her foot free," | | 4 | "She checked her wristwatch." | | 5 | "She flipped it over, tapped" | | 6 | "She scanned the perimeter." | | 7 | "She took a step forward." | | 8 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "I know you are here." | | 10 | "Her voice did not echo." | | 11 | "She moved deeper." | | 12 | "She recalled the note." | | 13 | "Her watch lay dead." | | 14 | "Her breath plumed in front" | | 15 | "She rubbed her left wrist." | | 16 | "She kept her eyes forward." | | 17 | "She turned slowly." | | 18 | "You tracked a vanishing point." | | 19 | "You found the coordinates." |
| | ratio | 0.327 | |
| 70.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 131 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the tangled" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against" | | 4 | "The crimson gem pulsed, a" | | 5 | "She stopped at the threshold." | | 6 | "The air inside the grove" | | 7 | "Winter should have stripped Richmond" | | 8 | "She had come for the" | | 9 | "The coordinates scrawled on the" | | 10 | "The ground gave way slightly," | | 11 | "She pulled her foot free," | | 12 | "The pendant grew hotter." | | 13 | "A minute inside could be" | | 14 | "She checked her wristwatch." | | 15 | "The second hand jerked backward," | | 16 | "She flipped it over, tapped" | | 17 | "Time sat heavy in the" | | 18 | "A branch snapped." | | 19 | "Rory turned her head." |
| | ratio | 0.78 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The crimson gem pulsed, a slow, steady rhythm that matched her own heartbeat." | | 1 | "Instead, wildflowers carpeted the ground in shades of violet and white, petals trembling in a stillness that refused to move." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |