Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ74GZP0Q1Z5BC75XGBHD0BK

Run Details

Duration:
38.5s
Cost:
$0.005281
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the tangled bracken. The ancient oak standing stones rose from the earth like jagged teeth, their bark silvered by moonlight and centuries of neglect. She adjusted the strap of her canvas bag, the heavy thermal container pressing against her hip. The Heartstone Pendant burned against her collarbone. The crimson gem pulsed, a slow, steady rhythm that matched her own heartbeat. She stopped at the threshold. The air inside the grove carried the scent of damp soil and crushed mint, thick enough to taste. Winter should have stripped Richmond Park bare. Instead, wildflowers carpeted the ground in shades of violet and white, petals trembling in a stillness that refused to move. She had come for the portal. The coordinates scrawled on the back of a delivery slip, the instructions left in a sealed envelope on her kitchen counter, the three words etched in unfamiliar ink. *Follow the warmth.* Her boots sank into the moss. The ground gave way slightly, soft and yielding, like breathing flesh. She pulled her foot free, wiping the dark dirt from her sole. The pendant grew hotter. A minute inside could be hours outside. She checked her wristwatch. The second hand jerked backward, then froze. She flipped it over, tapped the glass against her thumbnail. Nothing. Time sat heavy in the clearing. A branch snapped. Not from the wind. From the left. Rory turned her head. The trees stood rigid. No movement in the canopy. She scanned the perimeter. Shadows pooled beneath the oaks, deeper than the moonlight should allow. Then, a flicker. Pale skin, bare shoulder, vanishing behind a trunk. She took a step forward. The moss swallowed her tread. Another step. The shadow did not retreat. It watched. She tightened her grip on the bag. I know you are here. Her voice did not echo. The grove absorbed it, deadened, leaving a hollow ring in her ears. She moved deeper. The flowers bent toward her boots, stems curving like necks straining upward. The pendant dragged at her skin, a constant reminder of the heat behind the veil. She recalled the note. Do not look up. Do not linger. The threshold opens at midnight. Her watch lay dead. How long had she walked? The temperature dropped. Her breath plumed in front of her, white and sharp. She rubbed her left wrist. The crescent scar caught the pale light, a familiar anchor in the disorientation. She kept her eyes forward. Peripheral movement demanded attention. A pale hand brushed a leaf. A footstep behind her, soft as falling ash. She stopped. The sound stopped. She turned slowly. Nothing but the endless wall of oaks and the sea of flowers. Stay with me. You tracked a vanishing point. You found the coordinates. You do not lose a paper trail now. She adjusted her grip on the bag. The thermal container rattled. Glass against plastic. She had not packed anything. The sound echoed from the wrong direction. She unclipped the side pocket, checked the contents. Water bottle. Torch. First aid. All accounted for. The rattle came again. Closer. From inside the bag. She unzipped it. The bottle sat still. The torch remained dark. She zipped it shut, fingers trembling. The pendant flared, bright crimson against her skin. Heat radiated through her sweater. She pressed her back against the nearest stone. The oak felt warm. Not sun-warmed. Living-warm. Pulsing. Roots shifted beneath her boots. Not wind. Not settling earth. The ground undulated, a slow, deliberate roll. She stepped back, scanning the canopy. Leaves scraped against each other, forming patterns. Words? No. Just rhythm. A cadence. It matched the pendant’s pulse. Faster now. Her chest tightened. She forced her breathing even. In for four. Hold for four. Out for four. The old trick from counseling. It failed. The grove tightened around her. The flowers leaned in, petals brushing her trousers. The scent of mint turned sweet, cloying, like rotting honey. She pulled her jacket collar up. Muffled the air. Muffled the sound of her own name. Someone had said it. Soft. From the right. She turned. A face hovered in the dark between two trunks. Pale. Features blurred, as if viewed through frosted glass. No mouth moved. The whisper came again. Rory. She did not answer. She stepped sideways, putting the stone between them. The shadow shifted. It did not walk. It flowed. Roots cracked under unseen weight. She kept moving. Left foot. Right foot. Do not run. Running triggers the chase. She remembered the old tales. Run, and it learns your pace. Walk, and it waits. She maintained a steady pace. The pendant burned through her sweater. She reached into her pocket, fingers closing around the cool metal of the chain. It felt like a lifeline. It felt like a tether. The grove narrowed. Trees pressed closer, trunks thick as towers. The flowers stopped. All of them. Bent inward. Facing the center. A hollow opened in the earth. Dark. Deeper than the moonlight could reach. The pendant screamed against her skin. Not heat. Vibration. A low hum that rattled her teeth. She crouched, peering into the dark. No light reflected. No surface showed. Just void. The pendant pulsed once. Hard. A shock of heat shot up her neck. She gasped. The thing beside her stopped. The whisper returned. Closer. Right beside her ear. Turn. She did not. She focused on her boots. On the moss. On the scar on her wrist. She counted the petals of the nearest flower. Five. Seven. Three. The numbers meant nothing. Numbers were control. Control was survival. The ground trembled. A low rumble vibrated through the soles of her shoes. The trees leaned inward. The canopy closed, blocking the sky. Total dark, save for the crimson glow of the pendant. The glow flickered. Dimmed. Returned. Each cycle took longer. The thing beside her breathed. Slow. Wet. Patient. It had been there since she crossed the stones. Since she stepped onto the moss. Since the watch died. It had not approached. It had waited. It had watched. It knew her name. It knew the route. It knew the reason she walked into the dark. The certainty settled in her stomach, heavy and cold. She was not alone. She never had been. The void in the center pulsed in time with the pendant. The shadows reached. The breath warm against her neck. She stood still. She listened. The grove held its breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"etched"
2"warmth"
3"scanned"
4"flicker"
5"echo"
6"reminder"
7"familiar"
8"echoed"
9"scanning"
10"pulse"
11"whisper"
12"weight"
13"trembled"
14"vibrated"
15"flickered"
16"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences211
filterMatches
0"know"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences211
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1067
ratio0.003
matches
0"Follow the warmth."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1067
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.28
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Richmond1
Park1
Rory3
Do3
You3
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1067
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean88.92
std48.08
cv0.541
sampleLengths
0113
1105
275
35
4146
520
697
7106
836
990
1093
11181
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences211
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1069
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.021515434985968196
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018709073900841909
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences211
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences211
mean5.06
std3.79
cv0.749
sampleLengths
06
121
216
37
413
55
618
77
820
96
1028
119
1211
1312
144
157
164
177
1810
191
206
213
224
233
244
254
265
274
2811
293
308
315
325
332
345
352
367
375
385
3912
403
4112
4215
434
444
453
465
474
485
493
43.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.3412322274881517
totalSentences211
uniqueOpeners72
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences168
matches
0"Instead, wildflowers carpeted the ground"
1"Then, a flicker."
2"All accounted for."
ratio0.018
89.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences168
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She stopped at the threshold."
2"She had come for the"
3"She pulled her foot free,"
4"She checked her wristwatch."
5"She flipped it over, tapped"
6"She scanned the perimeter."
7"She took a step forward."
8"She tightened her grip on"
9"I know you are here."
10"Her voice did not echo."
11"She moved deeper."
12"She recalled the note."
13"Her watch lay dead."
14"Her breath plumed in front"
15"She rubbed her left wrist."
16"She kept her eyes forward."
17"She turned slowly."
18"You tracked a vanishing point."
19"You found the coordinates."
ratio0.327
70.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences168
matches
0"Rory pushed through the tangled"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"The Heartstone Pendant burned against"
4"The crimson gem pulsed, a"
5"She stopped at the threshold."
6"The air inside the grove"
7"Winter should have stripped Richmond"
8"She had come for the"
9"The coordinates scrawled on the"
10"The ground gave way slightly,"
11"She pulled her foot free,"
12"The pendant grew hotter."
13"A minute inside could be"
14"She checked her wristwatch."
15"The second hand jerked backward,"
16"She flipped it over, tapped"
17"Time sat heavy in the"
18"A branch snapped."
19"Rory turned her head."
ratio0.78
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The crimson gem pulsed, a slow, steady rhythm that matched her own heartbeat."
1"Instead, wildflowers carpeted the ground in shades of violet and white, petals trembling in a stillness that refused to move."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.7852%