Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ74PDN0XWHTXXPSH4JRYV1V

Run Details

Duration:
2m 49s
Cost:
$0.034464
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rusted maintenance stairs groaned under Harlow’s weight. She cleared the final step and stepped into the damp dark of the decommissioned tube tunnel. The air carried the weight of wet brick and stagnant ozone. Yellow crime scene tape formed a jagged boundary across a stretch of platform that hadn’t hosted a train in forty years. Sergeant Miller stood near a collapsed wooden stall. He chewed the corner of a cigarette pack. He straightened when gravel crunched under his boots. Right on time, Detective. You flagged this as a robbery gone wrong. Robbers don’t pick the abandoned Camden extension for a quick score. The victim called it a dead drop. Standard fare for the underground trade. He pointed a flashlight toward a body bag half-wrapped in tarpaulin. The beam shook. Forensics finished dusting an hour ago. Pulled partial prints. Nothing matches the local crews. No overhead cameras. City council severed funding decades back. Harlow scanned the perimeter. Dead electrical conduits hung from the ceiling like severed nerves. Water stains mapped the vaulted tiles in bruised patterns. She stepped past the yellow tape. Her boots tracked straight lines. Military precision anchored her stride. The worn leather watch on her left wrist caught the flashlight spill. Cracks mapped the strap. Show me the evidence grid. Up top. The van’s engine idles near the service road. Miller kicked a shattered glass vial. It skittered across the flagstones. Hit a metal drain cover. Looked like a deal turned violent. Knife wounds. Clean exits. No struggle marks on the walls. Harlow knelt by the first evidence marker. Splintered pine formed the crate base. Thick residue coated the bottom. Iridescent. She brushed a gloved finger through the paste. The substance refused to smudge. It pooled into perfect geometric shapes. Heat radiated through the latex. Alchemical compound. Street chemists blend rat poison with industrial solvents now. Explains the second-degree burns on the victim’s palms. Rat poison doesn’t leave crystalline fractals on old growth oak. She stood. She angled her light to catch the wood grain. Faded symbols ran along the planks. Protective wards. Intact despite the decay. This isn’t a chop shop. The vendor built this stall for specific trade. You’re reading into shadows, Quinn. Miller lit the cigarette. Blue smoke coiled into the damp air. We get a body. We find the weapon. We close the file. Stop chasing phantoms. I buried a partner who chased phantoms and walked into a brick wall. Her jaw set hard. The memory of DS Morris’s empty office pressed against her ribs. She ignored the sergeant’s glare. She moved to the second marker. A brass disc lay face down in the grime. She picked it up. The metal retained warmth. Verdigris coated the casing edges. She flipped it over. Protective sigils etched the glass face. The needle spun. Once. Twice. Then locked. It pointed straight at the far tunnel wall. What’s that? Miller stepped closer. His shadow stretched long across the tiles. Surveyor’s tool. Harlow slipped the compass into a plastic bag. She sealed the zip. Points toward structural weaknesses. Or dimensional rifts, depending on the maker. Right. Keep digging, Detective. Or are we waiting for a ghost to sign a confession? Harlow ignored him. She followed the needle’s direction. The wall ahead showed fresh scorch marks. Not fire. Something colder. The brickwork warped inward. The mortar crumbled to fine white dust. She pressed her palm against the stone. Vibration traveled up her arm. Faint. Rhythmic. The blast pattern runs counter to standard demolition charges. She tapped the fractured masonry. Explosives push outward. This pulled inward. Vacuum effect. Siphon bomb. Blackmail artists use them in the Docklands. Miller shrugged. Leaves the room intact. Takes out the target. Leaves a clean kill sheet. Siphon bombs don’t leave ozone residue. Harlow lifted her sleeve. The fabric smelled sharp. Metallic. They don’t melt mortar into glass beads. They don’t warp steel rails into origami folds. She crouched again. Scuffed floorboards revealed tread marks. Deep grooves. Claw-like indentations. She traced the path. The prints led to the collapsed stall. They circled back. They never crossed the yellow tape. They never left the platform. Footprints show the suspect never crossed the perimeter. Harlow stood. She turned to Miller. Your robbery theory falls apart. No entry wounds. No exit wounds. The victim bled out standing. He didn’t run. He watched the breach collapse. Miller exhaled smoke. He stamped the ash against his shoe. The victim had a panic attack. Slipped on wet tiles. Hit his head. We’re done here. Pack it up. Fill out the incident log. Harlow stepped over scattered debris. She found a bone token half-buried in the dirt. Carved from a raven’s femur. Smooth edges. Drilled hole at the top. She held it up. The light caught the grooves. A merchant’s badge. Or a key. Entry requires a toll. Harlow ran her thumb over the carving. Bone tokens. Specific weight. Specific density. This place isn’t a random squat. It’s a checkpoint. The Veil Market operates from abandoned infrastructure. They move locations every full moon. This stall sat at the transit hub. Miller rubbed his neck. He backed toward the stairs. You want to call this a cult meeting, go ahead. I’ll update the log. Just get your paperwork filed by morning. Command doesn’t fund folklore. Harlow didn’t look back. She followed the compass needle again. The wall ahead shimmered. Heat waves distorted the air. The scorch marks formed a perfect circle. Three feet wide. She knelt. Scraped the dust away. Symbols matched the compass face. Shade artisan work. Precise. Deliberate. The rift collapsed inward. She pressed her fingers to the warped stone. Cracks spiderwebbed outward. Supernatural energy discharge tied the victim’s nervous system to the portal. When it sealed, his brain shut down. Stroke mimic. That’s what the coroner will call it. The evidence points to a trade dispute over coordinates. Miller laughed. The sound bounced off the tiled arches. Write it up. I’ll sign off on your fantasy novel. You’re chasing echoes. Harlow pocketed the bone token. She aligned the compass. The needle trembled. Shifted. Now pointed toward the service corridor beyond the station. Away from the platform. Toward the upper tunnels. The market moves. Harlow tracked the needle’s arc. Full moon cycle dictates the schedule. Three days until the next shift. They already packed the valuable inventory. The buyer didn’t steal goods. He stole the location data. The vendor refused to surrender the next checkpoint. The buyer paid in violence. And you’ll follow a spinning toy into a hole? Miller’s voice dropped. Stay within your remit, Quinn. Command won’t authorize a treasure hunt. You’ll get suspended before you reach the exit. Command doesn’t see what I see. Harlow snapped the compass shut. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked steady. They see a dead man in a tunnel. I see a vendor who sold a breach to a buyer who couldn’t pay. The energy signature matches the case that took Morris. The same pattern. The same signature. I’m not repeating that mistake. She stepped toward the corridor. The air grew colder. The tunnel ceiling dripped. Water pooled around her ankles. She ignored the soak. She traced the scuff marks along the wall. Fresh paint. Not municipal. Imported. Check the archival records for the station’s demolition permits. Harlow ran her hand over the brickwork. The council never condemned this level. They buried it. Someone paid for silence. The lease agreements still exist in the restricted archives. Miller turned toward the stairs. His radio crackled. Duty room voices overlapped. He didn’t answer. He just walked. His boots faded into the dark. Harlow followed the compass. The needle pulled her forward. She scanned the floor. Shattered glass. Copper wiring. A drop of dark fluid. She swabbed it. The sample clung to the stick. Viscous. Red. Not blood. Resin. Or sap. Veil signatures. She matched the drip pattern to the stall’s inventory markers. Alchemical binders stabilize dimensional folds. Someone forced a portal open in a residential basement. The backlash traveled through the transit network. The vendor stood in the line of fire. He knew the coordinates. He kept them locked in his head. She reached the corridor’s end. The service door hung open. Rusted hinges. Graffiti covered the inner wall. Modern tags layered over older markings. Runes. Old English. Latin. All crossed out. She scraped one away. Fresh chalk underneath. A date. Tomorrow. They’re relocating. She photographed the wall. Flash blinded the dark. Dust motes swirled. New checkpoint. Same token system. The buyer wants the map. The vendor died guarding it. Miller’s footsteps echoed behind her. He stopped at the threshold. You’re chasing a phantasm. Call it in. Walk away. You’re painting a target on your back. Morris walked away. Now he’s a headstone with a cracked face. She turned. Her eyes locked on his. The flashlight beam cut across her sharp jaw. Salt-and-pepper hair stuck to her forehead. Sweat traced the line of her neck. I’m mapping the rifts. I’m closing the loop. She pushed past him. The corridor slope steepened. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped. She adjusted her coat. The compass burned against her palm. The needle vibrated. It wanted a direction. It found it. She stepped into the pitch. Boots rang against iron grating. The tunnel narrowed. Pipes groaned above. Water rushed through them. She counted the steps. Forty-seven. The grating ended. Concrete floor. Freshly poured. Smooth. No scuff marks. Impossible. She ran a hand along the wall. The paint hadn’t dusted. Workers laid this floor within the last twelve hours. City maintenance crews don’t operate at this hour. Private contractors do. High clearance. High pay. She checked the compass again. The needle pointed straight ahead. Toward a set of double doors. Steel. Reinforced. Padlocks hanging loose. Chains cut with plasma torches. Clean edges. No sparks. Industrial job. She touched the severed chain. Cold metal. Professional crew. Or something with thermal capabilities. The buyer brought specialists. They wanted clean extraction. No witnesses. No traces. She pushed the doors open. They groaned on stiff hinges. The room beyond stretched wide. Floodlights powered by a portable generator hummed in the corner. Crates stacked in neat rows. Seals intact. Wax stamps bearing a crescent moon. Inventory. She stepped inside. The generator’s roar filled her ears. She moved to the nearest crate. Checked the wood. Pine. Same as the platform stall. She tapped it. Hollow sound. She pried the lid open. Glass jars lined the interior. Labels typed on aged paper. Ingredients listed in Latin. Dried roots. Ground stones. Dried eyes wrapped in linen. Black market inventory. She lifted a jar. The liquid inside swirled on its own. Silver tendrils formed and dissolved. They didn’t flee. They staged a transfer. The body was a decoy. A smokescreen for the shipment. The buyer wanted the ledger. The vendor hid it in plain sight. She set the jar down. Her glove left a print on the glass. She wiped it clean with her sleeve. She checked the generator’s fuel line. Taped to the floor. Fresh adhesive. No dust. Crew left minutes ago. She traced the tape’s edge. The adhesive still held moisture. They’re moving stock through the maintenance tunnels. They took the high route. Avoided the street sirens. They’ll hit the road before dawn. She walked to the far wall. A whiteboard stood propped against the brick. Markers lined the top. Lists covered the surface. Dates. Locations. Token counts. She stepped closer. The ink glistened. Uncured. Schedule. She traced the entries with her finger. Camden. Full moon. Next location blank. Vendor initials circled. K. and V. Cross referencing the museum archives confirms the pattern. The restricted sections hold the land deeds. The clique leases the underground transit routes. They pay in alchemical reagents. The buyer wants to own the route. Not just trade on it. She pulled out her notebook. Copied the list. Pressed hard. The paper tore slightly. She smoothed it. Checked the compass one last time. The needle spun wildly. Then settled. Pointed toward the ventilation shaft. They’re moving up. She looked toward the corridor exit. The market shifts above ground. Tomorrow night. The buyer wants the coordinates. The vendor refused to hand them over. The buyer paid in violence. The evidence aligns. The fracture line runs straight to the city archives. Someone inside the museum is funding the expansion. Miller’s voice drifted from the doorway. The radio in his pocket buzzed. He didn’t answer. He just watched. You’re connecting dots on a blank page. He stepped into the room. His coat brushed the doorframe. Dispatch got a tip. Warehouse district. Southbank. Police are rolling out patrol cars. Standard procedure. Call it in. Get backup. Tell them to check the floodgates. She slammed the notebook shut. The market uses water routes. Fast. Quiet. They’ll move the stock before dawn. The ledger travels by canal. Not by road. The buyer wants the transfer complete before the sun rises. The token system locks the next location. Whoever holds the bone keys controls the schedule. She grabbed the bone token from her pocket. Slid it onto the whiteboard ledge. It clicked against the metal frame. The sound rang sharp. I’m taking the lead. She adjusted her coat. She checked her watch again. 2:14 AM. Lock this room. Tag the evidence. File your report. I’ll handle the intercept. The archives hold the lease contracts. Eva Kowalski will pull the restricted files. I’ll meet her at the British Museum. We’ll trace the paper trail before the tide turns. Miller shook his head. He stepped back into the corridor. You’re painting targets on your back. Command won’t cover you. You’ll get stripped of your badge. Command doesn’t know the rules. She pushed through the steel doors. The generator’s hum faded behind her. She followed the compass. The needle pulled her toward the stairs. Toward the surface. Toward the next shift. The evidence sits in the archives. The buyer wants the route. I’ll cut off the supply line before the moon rises again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2333
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2333
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"carried the weight"
count1
2
word"standard"
count3
3
word"scanned"
count2
4
word"shattered"
count2
5
word"perfect"
count2
6
word"crystalline"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count1
11
word"traced"
count5
12
word"shimmered"
count1
13
word"echoes"
count1
14
word"aligned"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"footsteps"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"carried the weight"
2"standard"
3"scanned"
4"shattered"
5"perfect"
6"crystalline"
7"warmth"
8"etched"
9"rhythmic"
10"fractured"
11"traced"
12"shimmered"
13"echoes"
14"aligned"
15"trembled"
16"silence"
17"footsteps"
18"echoed"
19"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences496
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences496
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences496
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2333
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount2333
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow15
Miller14
Detective2
Camden2
Quinn2
Morris3
Docklands1
Veil2
Market1
English1
Latin2
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
You10
Water3
Command5
Fresh3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Miller"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
4"Market"
5"Kowalski"
6"You"
7"Water"
8"Command"
places
0"Docklands"
1"Latin"
2"British"
3"Museum"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences155
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Looked like a deal turned violent"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2333
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences496
matches
0"repeating that mistake"
77.78% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean35.35
std14.93
cv0.422
sampleLengths
080
14
28
311
450
555
65
742
843
92
1017
1146
1231
1339
1447
1512
1625
1715
1844
1922
2024
2130
2237
2338
2434
2541
2646
2734
2845
2951
3022
3130
3249
3331
3462
3535
3638
3724
3838
3952
4040
4128
4226
4347
4435
4536
4636
4730
4828
4938
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences496
matches
0"get suspended"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs448
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences496
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2339
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.013681060282171868
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0017101325352714834
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences496
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences496
mean4.7
std2.51
cv0.534
sampleLengths
08
116
211
321
48
58
68
74
88
911
107
116
1211
133
146
153
165
173
186
194
2010
219
226
235
245
2512
264
275
282
298
306
315
325
336
342
352
366
377
386
395
401
418
425
436
445
452
469
478
4810
492
56.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.3911290322580645
totalSentences496
uniqueOpeners194
33.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences398
matches
0"Dead electrical conduits hung from"
1"Just get your paperwork filed"
2"Away from the platform."
3"All crossed out."
ratio0.01
81.31% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount138
totalSentences398
matches
0"She cleared the final step"
1"He chewed the corner of"
2"He straightened when gravel crunched"
3"You flagged this as a"
4"He pointed a flashlight toward"
5"She stepped past the yellow"
6"Her boots tracked straight lines."
7"It skittered across the flagstones."
8"She brushed a gloved finger"
9"It pooled into perfect geometric"
10"She angled her light to"
11"You’re reading into shadows, Quinn."
12"We get a body."
13"We find the weapon."
14"We close the file."
15"I buried a partner who"
16"Her jaw set hard."
17"She ignored the sergeant’s glare."
18"She moved to the second"
19"She picked it up."
ratio0.347
65.53% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount314
totalSentences398
matches
0"The rusted maintenance stairs groaned"
1"She cleared the final step"
2"The air carried the weight"
3"Sergeant Miller stood near a"
4"He chewed the corner of"
5"He straightened when gravel crunched"
6"You flagged this as a"
7"Robbers don’t pick the abandoned"
8"The victim called it a"
9"He pointed a flashlight toward"
10"The beam shook."
11"Forensics finished dusting an hour"
12"Nothing matches the local crews."
13"City council severed funding decades"
14"Harlow scanned the perimeter."
15"Water stains mapped the vaulted"
16"She stepped past the yellow"
17"Her boots tracked straight lines."
18"Military precision anchored her stride."
19"The worn leather watch on"
ratio0.789
37.69% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences398
matches
0"Now pointed toward the service"
1"Now he’s a headstone with"
2"Whoever holds the bone keys"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.5430%