Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ76QEJWS03AC0TAZKEXKM3G

Run Details

Duration:
4m 3s
Cost:
$0.055519
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back. Brass groaned against the painted frame. Rory pulled the door open. Cold stairwell air rushed past her shoulders. Lucien stood on the threshold. Charcoal wool absorbed the dim hallway light. Platinum hair swept back in a severe line. The ivory head of his cane rested against his knuckles. One amber eye caught the bare bulb overhead. The other swallowed it whole. Rory’s fingers tightened on the door edge. The crescent scar on her left wrist pulled white against her skin. She held her ground. You changed the locks. I added two. You taught me to count the exits. I taught you to survive them. He stepped forward. The toe of his Oxford shoe crossed the worn linoleum. He did not ask permission. He never did. Rory released the door. It swung wide and knocked a tower of leather-bound folios against the plaster. Paper spilled across the floorboards. She bent to gather them. Black hair fell across her cheek. She swept it back with an ink-stained hand. Lucien closed the door behind him. The deadbolts slid home with three heavy thuds. He moved into the cramped room. His shoulders brushed a milk crate stacked with research notes. Ptolemy uncoiled from a rusted radiator. The tabby stretched, claws scraping flaking paint, then wound around Lucien’s ankles. The cat remembers me. Ptolemy remembers anyone who drops tuna on the floor. Rory stacked the last folio. She straightened. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his mismatched gaze. She crossed her arms. The wool of her jumper stretched tight. You look expensive for a Tuesday. I dress for the company I keep. He tapped the cane against a leaning bookshelf. Dust rose in the stagnant air. Cumin and fried onion drifted up from the curry house below. The scent clung to the peeling wallpaper. He tilted his head. The amber eye narrowed. You vanished. Three weeks. No calls. No drops. Silas thought you caught a train back to Cardiff. Silas talks too much. I needed quiet. This place has it. Between the noise downstairs and Eva’s hoarding. Quiet does not suit you. You run when the ground shifts. You ran from Evan. You ran from me. I walked away from you. There is a difference. You handed me a ledger and told me to burn it. You stood there while I held the matches. Then you turned your back. I turned my back so you would not see my hands shake. He set the cane against a wooden chair. His fingers flexed. Knuckles bleached white. He stepped into the centre of the room. The floorboards creaked under his weight. The ledger contained names. My father’s associates. Avaros does not forgive loose threads. I gave you an out. You took it as an insult. You gave me a test. You always test me. You measure my loyalty against your silence. You expect me to bleed for clues you refuse to speak. I expect you to stay. The words dropped heavy. He reached out. His thumb hovered over the crescent scar on her wrist. He did not touch it. Heat radiated from his palm. You left a hole in my network. You left a hole in my chest. I patched the first. The second refuses to close. Rory’s breath hitched. She forced it steady. Her jaw tightened. You do not get to play wounded. You broker secrets. You trade in leverage. You told me affection clouded judgment. You called it a liability. I lied. He closed the distance. His palm covered her scar. Warmth seeped into her skin. His shoulder brushed hers. The space between them vanished. I called it a liability because I felt it first. I watched you outthink three enforcers in a Shoreditch alley. I watched you laugh over stale noodles at two in the morning. I felt the ground tilt. I panicked. I pushed. You shoved. She did not pull away. Her pulse hammered against his thumb. She lifted her chin. The bright blue of her eyes caught the dim light. You handed me a one-way ticket and a burner phone. You told me to disappear. I did. I learned the silence you wanted. I wanted you safe. Safe does not mean gone. I tracked your deliveries. I watched you circle the Golden Empress on a rusted bicycle. I counted the times you checked your mirrors. I stood across the pavement and choked on the distance. Then cross it. Stop hovering in doorways. Stop measuring the space between us like a ledger entry. Speak plain. I love you. The words cut through the curry-scented air. He did not blink. His heterochromatic gaze held firm. I love your sharp tongue. I love the way you map a room before you enter it. I love that you refuse to break. I failed you. I own it. I stand here to fix it. Rory’s fingers curled into his jacket lapel. The fine wool bunched under her grip. She pulled him a fraction closer. You do not fix people. You arrange them. You move pieces until the board suits you. I am not moving you. His free hand rose. His knuckles brushed her jaw. Stubble scraped her skin. His thumb traced the line of her cheekbone. I am asking you to move me. Tell me where to stand. Tell me what to carry. I will bear the weight. You carry a blade in a walking stick. You carry half a demon’s blood and a city’s worth of debts. You do not know how to rest. Teach me. Show me how to set the cane down. Show me how to stay in one room without counting the windows. You start by listening. No more tests. No more ledgers. No more disappearing acts when the heat rises. You look me in the eye. You speak the truth. You take the hit beside me. I take it in front of you. I stand between you and the fire. I burn first. That is the arrangement. Arrangements break. Promises hold. Swear it. On my mother’s grave. On my father’s chains. On every scar I earned before I met you. I swear it. His forehead rested against hers. His breath warmed her skin. She closed the gap. Lips met. Pressure built. His hands slid to her waist. Fingers dug into the fabric. She pulled him closer. The desk groaned under their combined weight. Scrolls tumbled. Paper scattered across the threadbare rug. He broke the kiss. His chest heaved. His mismatched eyes locked onto hers. Stay. Do not pack a bag. Do not check the trains. Stay in this cramped room with the cat and the dust and me. I stay if you drop the act. No more Frenchman. No more fixer. Just Lucien. Just Lucien. He exhaled. His shoulders dropped. The rigid line of his spine softened. He stepped back. His hands fell to his sides. I forgot how to be him. You remembered for me. She stepped back. Her heel caught a fallen notebook. She righted herself. She pointed at the cleared patch of desk. Clear the surface. We have work. Eva left half-translated warding scripts. The ink is drying. I need your French. I need your steady hands. He bent. His fingers gathered the scattered pages. He stacked them with precise movements. He placed them on the cleared wood. He rolled up his sleeves. Pale forearms caught the dim light. He picked up a fountain pen. He tested the nib against a scrap of paper. Black ink bloomed. Read the first line. I will translate. I will stay. I will not move until you tell me to. Rory pulled a chair close. The wood scraped the floor. She sat. Her knee brushed his thigh. She opened the battered journal. Yellowed pages cracked. She traced the cramped script with a fingernail. Commence par le sang. It starts with blood. Standard invocation. The syntax is twisted. Eva mixed Breton with Latin. Look at the marginalia. Lucien leaned in. His shoulder pressed against hers. The scent of sandalwood and cold rain clung to his collar. His pen moved. Letters formed. Sharp angles. Clean strokes. He worked in silence. The restaurant below clattered pans. Shouts rose in Bengali. The flat held steady. Rory watched his hand. The tendons shifted under skin. The pen scratched. She reached out. Her fingers covered his. The pen stopped. Ink pooled. He turned his palm. Their fingers laced. Knuckles aligned. Scar met smooth skin. You shake. Breathe. The script waits. The city waits. We do not rush. I breathe when you touch me. I breathe when you look at me. I forgot the rhythm. You reset it. Keep writing. We finish this page. We eat. We sleep. We wake. We do it again. No running. No tests. No running. He returned his hand to the paper. The pen moved. Letters filled the margins. His shoulder stayed pressed to hers. The flat shrank around them. Books towered. Dust settled. Ptolemy leapt onto the desk. The cat purred. The sound vibrated through the wood. Rory turned the page. The paper rasped. She read the next line. Her voice carried steady over the scratch of the pen. The deadbolts held. The street noise faded. The room held two bodies. One desk. One shared breath.
created_at"2026-04-27T10:10:59.975Z" 4/27/2026, 10:10:59 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1547
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1547
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"affection"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"grave"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"aligned"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"shared breath"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"affection"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"traced"
6"grave"
7"standard"
8"aligned"
9"vibrated"
10"shared breath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences304
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences304
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences304
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen14
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1547
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1547
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Oxford1
Lucien6
Tuesday1
Cardiff1
Eva3
Evan1
Shoreditch1
Golden1
Empress1
Frenchman1
French1
Breton1
Latin1
Bengali1
Rory9
One3
You37
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
4"You"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Cardiff"
2"Shoreditch"
3"Bengali"
4"One"
globalScore0.304
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1547
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences304
matches
0"love that you"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean22.75
std14.84
cv0.652
sampleLengths
066
123
24
310
46
562
648
74
89
927
106
117
1240
1317
1418
1519
1633
1712
1828
1924
2027
215
2227
2323
2410
2525
262
2723
2841
292
3025
3123
3242
3319
343
3516
3636
3720
3816
395
4021
4122
4227
4322
4434
4521
466
4720
4861
4924
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences304
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs337
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences304
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1552
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.010309278350515464
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences304
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences304
mean5.09
std2.52
cv0.496
sampleLengths
05
16
25
37
45
57
68
710
88
95
107
1112
124
134
143
157
166
173
1810
195
203
214
2213
235
245
256
268
276
288
296
3010
316
3212
334
349
355
362
379
384
397
406
417
428
436
4411
457
464
474
482
492
25.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats75
diversityRatio0.23355263157894737
totalSentences304
uniqueOpeners71
25.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences262
matches
0"Then you turned your back."
1"Then cross it."
ratio0.008
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount151
totalSentences262
matches
0"She held her ground."
1"You changed the locks."
2"I added two."
3"You taught me to count"
4"I taught you to survive"
5"He stepped forward."
6"He did not ask permission."
7"He never did."
8"It swung wide and knocked"
9"She bent to gather them."
10"She swept it back with"
11"He moved into the cramped"
12"His shoulders brushed a milk"
13"Her bright blue eyes locked"
14"She crossed her arms."
15"You look expensive for a"
16"I dress for the company"
17"He tapped the cane against"
18"He tilted his head."
19"I needed quiet."
ratio0.576
26.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount227
totalSentences262
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back."
1"Brass groaned against the painted"
2"Rory pulled the door open."
3"Lucien stood on the threshold."
4"Charcoal wool absorbed the dim"
5"Platinum hair swept back in"
6"The ivory head of his"
7"The other swallowed it whole."
8"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
9"The crescent scar on her"
10"She held her ground."
11"You changed the locks."
12"I added two."
13"You taught me to count"
14"I taught you to survive"
15"He stepped forward."
16"The toe of his Oxford"
17"He did not ask permission."
18"He never did."
19"Rory released the door."
ratio0.866
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences262
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.8618%