Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ76VAED30C5DYWWX9CY8MCF

Run Details

Duration:
3m 10s
Cost:
$0.037506
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park stood locked behind her. Rory slipped through the maintenance gap she had mapped three nights prior, boots sinking into damp earth. The city hum faded the moment she crossed the tree line. Silence took its place. Not the quiet of sleeping woods. The heavy, expectant stillness of a held breath. She unhooked the silver chain from beneath her collar. The Heartstone rested against her sternum, a thumbnail of deep crimson glass. Heat radiated through her jumper. The pull had started at dusk, a steady thrum that dragged her away from the Golden Empress delivery route and straight into the dark. She followed it. She always followed it. Ancient oaks rose ahead, trunks twisted into upright slabs that mimicked standing stones. Moss clung to the bark in thick velvet patches. The boundary. Beyond it, the ground sloped into a hollow where wildflowers pushed through the soil despite the November chill. White petals caught the moonlight. They should have been dead months ago. Rory stepped between the two largest trunks. The air thickened. Her lungs worked harder to drag it in. The temperature dropped, yet sweat gathered at the nape of her neck. She pressed the pendant flat against her skin. The stone burned hotter. Something clicked to her left. Wood on bone. A dry, rhythmic tap. She stopped. The sound stopped. Wind should have moved through the canopy. Owls should have hunted. Richmond Park never went completely mute. This hollow swallowed noise whole. Rory adjusted her grip on the chain. The crescent scar on her left wrist prickled. She rubbed the mark with her thumb. The skin felt tight, stretched over something waking beneath it. Show yourself. The words left her mouth flat. No tremor. No plea. Just a command thrown into the dark. Leaves shifted ten paces ahead. Not from wind. From weight. Something pressed down on the forest floor and lifted again. The cadence matched a walk, but the spacing was wrong. Too long between steps. Too light on the landing. Rory moved forward. Boots crunched over frost-stiffened grass. She kept her shoulders square, eyes tracking the tree line. The pendant pulsed against her ribs. Each beat sent a wave of warmth down her spine. Hel portal. The benefactor’s note had used those exact words. Find the breach. Follow the heat. Do not step through. She reached the centre of the hollow. Wildflowers formed a rough circle around a patch of bare earth. The soil there looked scorched, though no ash clung to her boots when she stepped close. The air above the patch warped. A heat haze in freezing weather. Light bent around nothing. The clicking returned. Closer. Behind her now. She turned. The standing stones stood empty. Shadows pooled at their bases, thick and oily. One shadow detached from the trunk of an oak. It slid sideways across the moss. No body cast it. No moon angle explained the movement. You are wasting my time. Rory kept her voice level. She shifted her weight, ready to pivot. The scar on her wrist throbbed. She flexed her fingers. Blood rushed back into her palms. A wet drag answered her. Something heavy pulled across roots. The sound came from the right, then the left, then directly ahead. The hollow played tricks with direction. Sound bounced off the warped air and returned fractured. She stepped toward the scorched earth. The pendant flared. Heat seared her chest. She hissed through her teeth and yanked the chain away from her skin. The silver links bit into her fingers. The stone glowed from within, a dull crimson ember waking in the dark. The drag stopped. Breathing replaced it. Not hers. The rhythm sat just behind her right ear. Shallow. Moist. Each exhale carried the scent of damp soil and crushed pine needles. The hairs on her arms rose. She did not flinch. She rolled her shoulders back and kept her chin level. Move into the light. The breathing hitched. A low vibration rattled in the dark, too deep for a throat, too steady for machinery. The wildflowers trembled. Petals shed in slow drifts, falling upward before correcting themselves and dropping to the ground. Time stuttered. Rory watched a single leaf hang suspended for three heartbeats before surrendering to gravity. She checked her watch. The second hand ticked backward. She snapped the clasp shut and shoved the watch into her pocket. Useless. The grove operated on its own clock. She had known that from the first map she studied. Knowing did not steady her pulse. The wet drag resumed. It circled. Wide arc. Deliberate. Something mapped her position without stepping into the open. Branches did not snap. Ferns did not crush. Only the sound of friction against earth marked its path. Rory tightened her grip on the pendant. The silver chain cut into her palm. Blood welled along the lifeline. She let it drip. The drops hit the scorched soil and vanished before they pooled. I am not running. The words hung in the thick air. The circling stopped. The breathing moved closer. It sat just beyond her peripheral vision now. She turned her head a fraction. Nothing but oak trunks and pooling shadow. She turned back. The shadow had shifted again. It stood taller. It leaned inward. A twig cracked behind her left knee. She pivoted. Empty space. The crack echoed again, further out, then right beside her ear. The grove folded distance like paper. She stepped onto the bare earth. The ground gave slightly, spongy and warm. The air above it rippled. The pendant burned so hot her jumper smoked at the neckline. She unclasped the chain and let the stone hang free in her palm. The crimson glow painted her fingers in stark relief. Veons of light pulsed in time with her heartbeat. The breathing synced with it. In. Out. In. Out. Perfect match. Rory closed her fingers around the stone. Heat seared her skin. She kept her grip locked. You want the breach. You do not get me. A sound answered. Not a voice. A mimicry of one. Her own syllables played back, stripped of tone, flattened into a hollow rattle. The words came from the trees, from the ground, from the space directly behind her molars. The grove copied her. It learned the shape of her voice and wore it. She stepped backward. The scorched earth clung to her boots. The ripple in the air widened. A seam opened in the dark. Not a tear. A dilation. The edges curled inward, revealing a sliver of colour that did not belong to night. Bruised violet. Sickly green. The scent of ozone and old copper flooded the hollow. The pendant vibrated against her palm. The heat spiked. Her scar split open. A thin line of blood traced the crescent shape. She did not look down. She kept her eyes on the seam. The breathing stopped. The drag stopped. The hollow went dead silent. Rory felt the weight of attention press against her back. Not one pair of eyes. Many. Layered. Stacked. Watching from angles that defied the tree line. The air grew heavier. Her knees locked. She forced them straight. I see you. The seam pulsed. The wildflowers bent away from it. Shadows detached from every oak trunk at once. They slid across the moss, converging on the bare earth. No footsteps. No rustle. Just the smooth glide of darkness pooling around her boots. The pendant flared white-hot. Rory bit down on her tongue. Copper flooded her mouth. She kept her hand closed around the stone. The heat climbed her wrist. It met the open scar. The pain grounded her. She used it. She planted her feet wider. She raised her chin. The shadows stopped a handspan from her toes. They rose. They formed a wall. No faces. No limbs. Just depth. The kind of dark that swallowed light and refused to give it back. A sound broke from the centre of the wall. A wet click. A exhale. A syllable shaped from damp earth and fractured wood. It spoke her name. Not Rory. Not Aurora. The third one. The one she buried in Cardiff. The one Evan used when the door locked behind him. The wall leaned in. The seam behind her widened. The pendant burned through her palm. She did not let go.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
17.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1390
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"weight"
count3
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count2
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"perfect"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"traced"
count1
17
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"velvet"
2"chill"
3"rhythmic"
4"weight"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"down her spine"
8"throbbed"
9"fractured"
10"trembled"
11"pulse"
12"echoed"
13"stark"
14"perfect"
15"vibrated"
16"traced"
17"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences237
matches
0"a wave of warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences237
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences237
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1390
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1390
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Golden1
Empress1
November1
Rory11
Aurora1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Heat3
You3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"November"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Heat"
5"You"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1390
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences237
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.57
std18.7
cv0.632
sampleLengths
056
157
254
342
412
55
622
732
82
917
1039
1154
1250
137
1440
155
1628
1737
1846
196
202
2142
224
2353
2445
2536
2634
274
2849
2928
3060
315
326
3316
349
3553
3656
3734
3811
3937
403
4141
4248
4333
4423
4527
4620
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences237
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs233
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences237
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1392
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"tight, stretched over something"
1"over frost-stiffened grass."
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.028017241379310345
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005028735632183908
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences237
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences237
mean5.86
std3.73
cv0.635
sampleLengths
010
117
211
34
46
58
69
712
85
924
103
114
1213
139
142
1518
165
177
187
193
208
2112
228
234
245
253
264
272
283
297
304
316
325
337
348
357
3610
372
386
392
402
417
425
433
442
4510
4610
474
485
493
33.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats38
diversityRatio0.2869198312236287
totalSentences237
uniqueOpeners68
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences198
matches
0"Just a command thrown into"
1"Too long between steps."
2"Too light on the landing."
3"Light bent around nothing."
4"Only the sound of friction"
5"Just the smooth glide of"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences198
matches
0"She unhooked the silver chain"
1"She followed it."
2"She always followed it."
3"They should have been dead"
4"Her lungs worked harder to"
5"She pressed the pendant flat"
6"She rubbed the mark with"
7"She kept her shoulders square,"
8"She reached the centre of"
9"It slid sideways across the"
10"You are wasting my time."
11"She shifted her weight, ready"
12"She flexed her fingers."
13"She stepped toward the scorched"
14"She hissed through her teeth"
15"She did not flinch."
16"She rolled her shoulders back"
17"She checked her watch."
18"She snapped the clasp shut"
19"She had known that from"
ratio0.253
23.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount173
totalSentences198
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Rory slipped through the maintenance"
2"The city hum faded the"
3"Silence took its place."
4"The heavy, expectant stillness of"
5"She unhooked the silver chain"
6"The Heartstone rested against her"
7"Heat radiated through her jumper."
8"The pull had started at"
9"She followed it."
10"She always followed it."
11"Moss clung to the bark"
12"They should have been dead"
13"Rory stepped between the two"
14"The air thickened."
15"Her lungs worked harder to"
16"The temperature dropped, yet sweat"
17"She pressed the pendant flat"
18"The stone burned hotter."
19"Something clicked to her left."
ratio0.874
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences198
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ancient oaks rose ahead, trunks twisted into upright slabs that mimicked standing stones."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.5057%