Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ76XG2DMGZ7BHTD76KFFQSB

Run Details

Duration:
3m 28s
Cost:
$0.048685
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon bled through the frosted front window of the Raven’s Nest, painting the scuffed floorboards in sickly emerald. Rory wiped down the mahogany counter, cloth moving in tight circles. The place smelled of lemon polish, damp wool, and the ghost of last night’s stout. Old maps of forgotten empire clung to the walls, their edges curling like dry leaves. Black and white photographs watched from behind glass, faces blurred by time and cigarette smoke. She stacked three clean tumblers, aligned them with the grain of the wood, and listened to the low hum of the refrigerator. The bell above the door clattered. A draft swept in, carrying the bite of Soho rain and exhaust fumes. Footsteps crossed the threshold. Heavy. Deliberate. Not the usual late-night stragglers. Rory looked up. The woman stood just inside the doorway, shaking water from a tailored charcoal coat. Her hair, once a wild cascade of copper, now sat pinned in a severe knot at the nape of her neck. Sharp lines cut across her face. A silver watch caught the neon glow. She scanned the room, eyes passing over the photographs, the empty stools, the maps. They landed on Rory. The breath left Rory’s lungs. You kept the Cardiff accent. You lost yours. The woman unbuttoned her coat. She slid onto the third stool from the left, the one with the cracked leather. Her fingers tapped the bar top. Once. Twice. Three years, Rory. Three years and four months. You stopped answering your phone. I buried it. Along with the rest of that life. Whisky. Neat. Whatever’s cheapest. Rory pulled a bottle of blended Scotch from the lower shelf. The glass clinked as she set it down. Amber liquid caught the dim light. She pushed it across the wood. You used to drink cider. Sweet stuff. Stole it from your dad’s garage. I used to do a lot of things. The woman wrapped both hands around the glass. Her knuckles stood white. Cardiff feels like a different country now. The streets. The river. You. I’m still here. Are you? She took a slow drink. Swallowed. A thin line appeared between her brows. You’re wiping tables in a Soho dive. You were supposed to be in courtrooms. Cross-examining witnesses. Wearing those ridiculous heels you bought for graduation. Rory dropped the cloth into the bucket beneath the counter. Water splashed against the metal. She dried her hands on her apron. Courtrooms don’t suit me. Neither do heels. I deliver noodles for Yu-Fei by day. I tend bar by night. I sleep upstairs. It’s quiet. Quiet. She repeated the word like it tasted sour. You ran from Evan. You ran from your father’s expectations. You ran all the way to London and called it peace. I called it survival. The woman set the glass down. The base hit the wood with a dull thud. She traced the rim with her thumb. A small tremor ran through her hand. She stilled it against the bar. I went back, you know. After you left. I thought I could fix what he broke. I thought I could stand in that flat and pretend the shouting didn’t rattle the windows. Rory’s fingers curled around the edge of the counter. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the light. She turned her hand over. He put you in hospital, Eva. Twice. And you left me there. The words came out flat. Stripped of heat. Just fact. You packed a rucksack. You caught the last train to Paddington. You didn’t look back. I asked you to come. You asked. You didn’t wait. Silence stretched between them. The refrigerator cycled off. Rain drummed against the pavement outside. A car horn blared, muffled by the thick glass. Rory reached beneath the counter. She pulled out a second glass. Poured two fingers of the same cheap Scotch. Set it beside her own side of the bar. She didn’t drink. She just watched the liquid settle. I wrote. Every week for six months. Letters came back unopened. I moved. Eva’s shoulders dropped a fraction. The rigid line of her spine softened. Changed my name. Changed my number. I needed the past to stay dead. You were part of the past. I’m sitting right here. You’re a ghost in a delivery jacket. Eva’s mouth twisted. Not quite a smile. Not quite a grimace. Do you remember that summer we drove to Brecon? The car broke down near Hay-on-Wye. We slept in the back seat. Ate cold beans from a tin. You swore you’d never let anyone tell you how to live. I remember you shivering. I gave you my jumper. You gave me everything back then. Eva lifted the glass again. Drained it. Set it down harder this time. Now you hand out noodles and polish rings for a man who walks with a limp and watches the door like he expects bullets. Rory glanced towards the back corridor. The bookshelf stood flush against the wall. Silas kept his secrets behind it. She turned back. Silas pays my rent. He doesn’t ask questions. That’s worth more than corner offices and billable hours. Is it? Eva’s eyes dropped to Rory’s wrist. The scar. The tense tendons. Or is it just another way to hide? Rory picked up the cloth again. She wrung it out. Water dripped onto the floorboards. She wiped a clean patch of the bar, over and over, until the wood gleamed. You changed your hair. Your clothes. Your voice. You walk like you’re carrying lead in your pockets. What exactly are you hiding from, Eva? Myself. The admission hung in the air. Heavy. Unadorned. She unclasped the silver watch. Laid it on the counter. The face read twenty-past eleven. The second hand ticked forward. I spent three years building a fortress. Glass walls. Steel doors. I thought if I looked hard enough, if I spoke sharp enough, the girl who cried on your bathroom floor would disappear. Did she? She’s sitting on a stool. Drinking cheap whisky. Talking to the only person who knew her before the walls went up. Eva’s fingers crept towards the watch. She didn’t pick it up. She just rested her palm beside it. I heard you were in London. I told myself I wouldn’t come. I walked past this place four times tonight. The green sign kept pulling me in. You could have knocked. I didn’t know if you’d open it. Rory stopped wiping. She set the cloth down. She leaned forward, elbows on the bar, close enough to see the fine lines around Eva’s eyes, the faint scar through her left eyebrow, the way her pupils swallowed the dim light. I would have opened it. You say that now. Eva’s throat worked. She swallowed again. Time does things to people, Rory. It sands down the edges. It fills the cracks with dust. You look at me and see the girl who stole cider. I look at you and see the one person who actually escaped. And I hate you for it. I hate myself more. Hate takes energy. You look exhausted. I am. Eva finally picked up the watch. She fastened it back around her wrist. The click of the clasp echoed in the quiet room. I came to see if you were real. If any of it was real. The Brecon trip. The cold beans. The promises we made when we were twenty and stupid. They were real. Real things break. Eva stood. The stool legs scraped against the floor. She buttoned her coat. The fabric pulled tight across her shoulders. She left a ten-pound note on the bar. It sat beside the empty glass. Keep the change. You just got here. I’ve been here long enough. She turned towards the door. Her hand hovered over the brass handle. She didn’t look back. The rain’s letting up. Rory watched her fingers wrap around the metal. The green neon painted Eva’s silhouette in sharp relief. The bell above the door waited. The maps on the wall held their silence. The whisky glass sat empty.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"aligned"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"aligned"
1"footsteps"
2"scanned"
3"traced"
4"silence"
5"eyebrow"
6"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences225
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences225
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences225
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1346
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1346
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Rory15
Cardiff2
Scotch2
Yu-Fei1
Evan1
London2
Eva12
Paddington1
Brecon2
Hay-on-Wye1
You26
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Eva"
5"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Paddington"
4"Brecon"
5"Hay-on-Wye"
globalScore0.534
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1346
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences225
matches
0"remember that summer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean24.93
std20.78
cv0.834
sampleLengths
098
130
269
35
45
53
628
73
810
914
1031
1113
1232
133
1439
1522
1624
1730
184
1935
2032
2124
227
2330
245
255
2623
2737
2811
2933
304
3156
329
3343
3422
3517
3621
3730
3824
3962
402
4166
424
437
4440
455
4660
476
4855
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences225
matches
0"were supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs267
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences225
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1353
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.028824833702882482
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.003695491500369549
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences225
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences225
mean5.98
std4.26
cv0.712
sampleLengths
020
111
215
315
415
522
66
713
84
91
101
115
123
1314
1421
156
167
1714
184
195
205
213
225
2315
246
251
261
273
285
295
303
317
321
331
342
3511
368
376
386
395
402
416
428
438
444
457
462
472
481
493
40.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats30
diversityRatio0.32
totalSentences225
uniqueOpeners72
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
ratio0
31.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount90
totalSentences191
matches
0"She stacked three clean tumblers,"
1"Her hair, once a wild"
2"She scanned the room, eyes"
3"They landed on Rory."
4"You kept the Cardiff accent."
5"You lost yours."
6"She slid onto the third"
7"Her fingers tapped the bar"
8"You stopped answering your phone."
9"I buried it."
10"She pushed it across the"
11"You used to drink cider."
12"I used to do a"
13"Her knuckles stood white."
14"I’m still here."
15"She took a slow drink."
16"You’re wiping tables in a"
17"You were supposed to be"
18"She dried her hands on"
19"I deliver noodles for Yu-Fei"
ratio0.471
41.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount160
totalSentences191
matches
0"The green neon bled through"
1"Rory wiped down the mahogany"
2"The place smelled of lemon"
3"She stacked three clean tumblers,"
4"The bell above the door"
5"A draft swept in, carrying"
6"Footsteps crossed the threshold."
7"Rory looked up."
8"The woman stood just inside"
9"Her hair, once a wild"
10"A silver watch caught the"
11"She scanned the room, eyes"
12"They landed on Rory."
13"The breath left Rory’s lungs."
14"You kept the Cardiff accent."
15"You lost yours."
16"The woman unbuttoned her coat."
17"She slid onto the third"
18"Her fingers tapped the bar"
19"You stopped answering your phone."
ratio0.838
52.36% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences191
matches
0"Now you hand out noodles"
1"If any of it was"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0658%