Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ76Z37PB2MY5D17TE6H6BR7

Run Details

Duration:
3m 49s
Cost:
$0.052824
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave with a heavy clack. Rory pulled the door open, ready to tell Eva she had forgotten her keys again, and the breath left her lungs like a struck match. Lucien Moreau filled the threshold. Rain glossed the shoulders of his tailored charcoal suit. Water beaded on the slicked-back platinum of his hair, darkening it to silver at the temples. He leaned on the ivory handle of his cane, weight resting easy, but Rory knew better than to mistake the posture for relaxation. His eyes caught the dim stairwell light, one amber, one bottomless black, and pinned her in place. The heterochromatic gaze had unsettled her the first time they met. It still did. It always would. Carter, he said. His voice was low, polished French vowels softening the edges of her surname. May I come in? She did not move. The scent of him hit her first: bergamot, damp wool, and the faint, metallic tang of ozone that always clung to his half-demon blood. It dragged up memories she had spent six months burying under delivery routes and stale takeout. The last time she had seen him, he had been walking away down a wet Shoreditch street, his back straight, her own words still ringing between them like a slammed door. You are not supposed to know where I am, she said. Her voice stayed level. Cool-headed. She had practiced that tone until it felt like armor, until it drowned out the girl who had fled Cardiff with a duffel bag and a bruised heart. I am an information broker, chérie. Knowing where people are is rather the point. He tilted his head, the amber eye catching the flicker of the bare bulb overhead. And you are not answering your mobile. I turned it off. Deliberately. Also the point. A draft snaked through the gap, carrying the heavy cumin and fried garlic from the curry house below. Ptolemy materialized at her ankles, pressing a striped shoulder against her shin, purring like a faulty engine. Rory kept her hand on the doorframe, knuckles white. The small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a childhood souvenir from a broken glass and a rainy afternoon, caught the light when she shifted. Lucien’s gaze dropped to it, just for a fraction of a second, before returning to her face. He remembered. Of course he remembered. He collected details the way other men collected debts. Five minutes, she said, stepping back. If you are here to sell me another cursed ledger, you can save the pitch. He crossed the threshold, the tap of his cane against the worn floorboards precise as a metronome. The flat swallowed him. Eva’s research had metastasized since Tuesday. Towers of paperback occult histories leaned against the sagging sofa. Unrolled scrolls weighted by mismatched mugs covered the coffee table. Sticky notes bloomed across the peeling wallpaper like yellow lichen. Lucien navigated the chaos without touching a thing, his suit immaculate, his presence suddenly too large for the cramped one-bedroom. He had to duck slightly to avoid a hanging macramé planter Eva refused to take down. At five-foot-eleven, he made the room feel like a dollhouse. He stopped by the window, rain streaking the glass behind him. I am not here for business. Then you are lost. She shut the door. The three deadbolts felt absurd now, theatrical. She did not lock them. Brick Lane does not suit you, Lucien. Too many stairs. Not enough mirrors. A ghost of a smile touched his mouth. You always did prefer to wound with precision. I prefer honesty. Something you treat like a negotiable commodity. She crossed her arms, leaning against a bookshelf that groaned under the weight of Eva’s demonology texts. Her straight shoulder-length black hair slipped over her collar, damp from the humidity of the flat. Say what you came to say. I have a shift at the Golden Empress in two hours, and Yu-Fei will dock my pay if I am late again. He set the cane against the wall. The movement was deliberate. Without it, he stood taller, the careful aristocrat fading into something leaner, sharper. He took two steps toward her. The space between them shrank, charged and sudden. You left without a word, he said. The polished veneer cracked, just at the edges. Six months. No calls. No notes. You vanished into delivery routes and dead ends, and I was left wondering if I had imagined the whole of it. Rory’s throat tightened. She kept her face still. We made an agreement. The job was done. The ledger was secured. We walked away. You walked away. His voice dropped. I stood on that pavement and watched you go. You did not look back. Looking back gets you killed. The words came out sharper than she intended. She softened them, forced her shoulders down. We were never going to work, Lucien. You trade in secrets. I am trying to stop bleeding from the last person who promised me forever. We were a collision, not a destination. He was close enough now that she could see the fine tension in his jaw, the way his mismatched eyes tracked the pulse at her throat. The ozone scent mingled with the curry spices and the dust of old paper. Ptolemy wound between Lucien’s polished oxfords, utterly unbothered by the half-demon in the room. You think I do not know what fear looks like? Lucien asked quietly. I was born of a realm that eats hesitation. My father’s blood comes from Avaros, and I have spent my life building walls so high even I forget how to climb them. And yet. He reached out, slow, telegraphing the movement like a man approaching a spooked horse. His fingers hovered near her wrist, not touching. You asked me to stay. That night. In the safehouse. You asked me, and I told you it was complicated. It was. Her voice fractured. She hated that it fractured. You have a foot in Avaros and a foot in London. You broker favors for things that wear human skin like coats. I am a law school dropout with a delivery bike and a landlord who thinks I am smuggling kegs. Complicated does not cover it. I should have said yes. The words landed heavy in the cluttered room. Rain tapped against the window. Somewhere downstairs, a pan clattered, and a burst of laughter rose through the floorboards. Rory stared at him. The cool-headed mask slipped, just an inch. Her bright blue eyes, usually so guarded, betrayed the sudden sheen of unshed frustration. You are saying that now, she said. Six months late. I am saying it because I have spent half a year watching you from a distance like a coward. Because every time I picked up the phone, I heard you telling me that trust is not a currency I know how to spend. He finally closed the distance. His thumb brushed the crescent scar on her wrist. The contact was light, electric. Her breath caught. I do not want to broker this, Aurora. I do not want to negotiate terms. I want to stay. Her name in his mouth undid something vital. She had spent months calling herself Rory, shrinking into the syllables, hiding from the woman who had run from an abusive ex and a suffocating pre-law track. He said Aurora like it was a vow. She did not pull away. You will leave when it gets dangerous. You always do. It is what you are built for. Then let me prove you wrong. His hand slid up, palm warm against her forearm, stopping just below her elbow. Let me be the one who does not walk out when the weather turns. I am tired of being the Frenchman in the charcoal suit who knows everything except how to keep the one person who sees him. The air between them felt thin. She could count the lashes framing his black eye, see the amber one catch the lamplight. His cologne, the rain, the heat of him, it crowded out the smell of old paper and cumin. Ptolemy leapt onto the coffee table, sending a cascade of sticky notes fluttering to the floor. Neither of them looked away. You hurt me, she said. The admission felt like pulling glass from a wound. When you turned your back. When you let me think I was just another asset in your ledger. I told myself I was fine. I told myself I was smart enough to walk away clean. I was not. His jaw tightened. The hand on her arm shifted, fingers threading gently through hers. I know. And I will spend as long as it takes to earn back the ground I lost. Not as a fixer. Not as a broker. Just as Lucien. She studied his face. The careful tailoring, the platinum hair, the cane leaning against the wall like a discarded prop. Beneath it all was the man who had patched her up after the warehouse job, who had translated Aramaic curses at two in the morning while she drank terrible tea, who had looked at her like she was the only fixed point in a spinning world. The hurt was still there, a dull ache behind her ribs, but the attraction was a live wire, sparking every time his thumb stroked her skin. Five minutes is up, she whispered. He did not move. Then give me five more. She exhaled, long and slow, and let her fingers curl around his. The scar on her wrist pressed against his knuckles. Outside, a siren wailed down Brick Lane, swallowed by the rain. Inside, the flat held its breath. Lock the door, she said. He did not smile. He just turned, drew the three deadbolts home with steady clicks, and came back to her. When he kissed her, it was not a negotiation. It was a surrender. And for the first time in six months, Rory stopped running.
created_at"2026-04-27T10:15:10.337Z" 4/27/2026, 10:15:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
84.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1663
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"utterly"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1663
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count2
8
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"unsettled"
2"flicker"
3"navigated"
4"charged"
5"tension"
6"pulse"
7"fractured"
8"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences178
matches(empty)
94.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences178
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"think"
2"know"
3"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences178
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1663
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions8
matches
0"Carter, he said."
1"You are not supposed to know where I am, she said."
2"Five minutes, she said, stepping back."
3"You left without a word, he said."
4"You are saying that now, she said."
5"You hurt me, she said."
6"Five minutes is up, she whispered."
7"Lock the door, she said."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1663
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
Rory7
French1
Shoreditch1
Cardiff1
Tuesday1
Lane2
Lucien8
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Avaros2
London1
Aurora2
Frenchman1
Aramaic1
Brick2
You16
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"You"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Shoreditch"
1"Cardiff"
2"Lane"
3"Golden"
4"Avaros"
5"London"
6"Brick"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like armor, until it drowned out t"
1"felt like pulling glass from a wound"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1663
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences178
matches
0"practiced that tone"
1"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean42.64
std28.12
cv0.659
sampleLengths
033
15
282
320
475
544
636
78
8101
921
10103
1117
1233
1316
1471
1538
1642
1723
1820
1952
2054
2189
2256
235
2452
2510
2684
2743
2822
2958
3061
3152
3243
3392
346
359
3638
375
3844
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences178
matches
0"was left"
1"are built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs316
matches
0"were never going"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences178
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1674
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03225806451612903
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.005376344086021506
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences178
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences178
mean9.34
std7.04
cv0.754
sampleLengths
08
125
25
39
416
523
617
711
83
93
103
1113
124
134
1424
1516
1631
1711
184
191
2028
216
228
2315
247
254
261
273
2818
2917
309
3125
3217
332
344
359
366
3715
3817
394
406
4110
4210
4310
4420
4516
4610
4711
486
494
43.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.30337078651685395
totalSentences178
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences168
matches
0"Also the point."
1"Of course he remembered."
2"Then you are lost."
3"Too many stairs."
4"Somewhere downstairs, a pan clattered,"
5"Then let me prove you"
6"Then give me five more."
ratio0.042
15.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount86
totalSentences168
matches
0"He leaned on the ivory"
1"His eyes caught the dim"
2"It still did."
3"It always would."
4"His voice was low, polished"
5"She did not move."
6"It dragged up memories she"
7"You are not supposed to"
8"Her voice stayed level."
9"She had practiced that tone"
10"I am an information broker,"
11"He tilted his head, the"
12"I turned it off."
13"He collected details the way"
14"He crossed the threshold, the"
15"He had to duck slightly"
16"He stopped by the window,"
17"I am not here for"
18"She shut the door."
19"She did not lock them."
ratio0.512
70.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences168
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave with"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the threshold."
3"Rain glossed the shoulders of"
4"Water beaded on the slicked-back"
5"He leaned on the ivory"
6"His eyes caught the dim"
7"The heterochromatic gaze had unsettled"
8"It still did."
9"It always would."
10"Carter, he said."
11"His voice was low, polished"
12"She did not move."
13"The scent of him hit"
14"It dragged up memories she"
15"The last time she had"
16"You are not supposed to"
17"Her voice stayed level."
18"She had practiced that tone"
19"I am an information broker,"
ratio0.78
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences168
matches
0"If you are here to"
1"Because every time I picked"
2"Just as Lucien."
ratio0.018
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Ptolemy materialized at her ankles, pressing a striped shoulder against her shin, purring like a faulty engine."
1"She crossed her arms, leaning against a bookshelf that groaned under the weight of Eva’s demonology texts."
2"You broker favors for things that wear human skin like coats."
3"I am a law school dropout with a delivery bike and a landlord who thinks I am smuggling kegs."
4"She had spent months calling herself Rory, shrinking into the syllables, hiding from the woman who had run from an abusive ex and a suffocating pre-law track."
5"I am tired of being the Frenchman in the charcoal suit who knows everything except how to keep the one person who sees him."
6"Beneath it all was the man who had patched her up after the warehouse job, who had translated Aramaic curses at two in the morning while she drank terrible tea,…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.3073%