Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ77143YTYWA5262CEGGPGVY

Run Details

Duration:
3m 22s
Cost:
$0.046744
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt surrendered with a heavy clack. Rory dragged the door inward. The hinge groaned against the damp Brick Lane air. Lucien filled the frame. Charcoal wool stretched across his shoulders. Rain glossed the platinum sweep of his hair. His ivory cane tapped once against the threshold. The amber eye caught the stairwell bulb. The black one swallowed it whole. You kept the locks. I keep what works. Step back or step in. The curry downstairs is burning cumin again and I refuse to marinate in the hall. He crossed the threshold. The door clicked shut behind him. His cane swept a stack of dog-eared journals aside. Paper slid across the warped floorboards. Ptolemy bolted from a tower of scrolls and vanished under the sofa. You redecorated. Or you finally let the British Library vomit in your sitting room. Research does not tidy itself. Wipe your shoes. I just scrubbed the grout. He scraped his oxfords against the coir mat. Water darkened the fibres. He shrugged out of his jacket. The movement pulled the fabric tight across his back. He draped the jacket over a chair already buckling under leather-bound tomes. Three weeks, Aurora. Not a text. Not a call. Just silence and a forwarded invoice from Silas. I paid the tab. You got your money. The arrangement ended. The arrangement ended when you walked out of the warehouse. The money was an afterthought. She folded her arms. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the lamplight. She rubbed her thumb over the ridge. You wanted a clean exit. I gave you one. Do not rewrite the ledger now. I rewrite nothing. I stand in a room that smells of turmeric and dust and watch you pretend the last month never happened. He stepped closer. The cane clicked against a loose board. His cologne cut through the cumin. Bergamot and something darker. Smoke. Or ozone. Move your stick. You are scuffing the floor. You are scuffing the truth. Look at me. She lifted her chin. Blue met amber and black. His jaw tightened. A muscle jumped near his ear. You left your ring on the bonnet of my car. You did not even slam the door. You just walked. Like I was a contract you fulfilled and filed away. You told me to choose. You laid out the terms like a barrister drafting a will. Stay and bleed with you, or walk and keep my lungs. I chose breathing. I never asked you to bleed. I asked you to stand beside me. There is a difference. Not in your world. Your world eats people who stand still. I watched it chew through three of your associates in a fortnight. I am not built for teeth. He set the cane against the wall. The ivory handle gleamed. He reached out. His fingers stopped an inch from her wrist. Heat radiated from his skin. She did not pull back. She did not lean in. You flinch when engines backfire. You catalogue every exit in every room. You sleep with a knife under your pillow. You are already built for teeth, Rory. You just refuse to admit you like the bite. Her breath hitched. She masked it with a sharp exhale. She turned toward the kitchenette. The counter groaned under a landslide of photocopied archives and empty mugs. She picked up a chipped kettle. Tea or whiskey. I have both. Neither comes with a lecture. Whiskey. Neat. And I did not come to lecture. I came because Silas mentioned a man asking after you. A man with a Marseille accent and a habit of breaking fingers. The kettle clattered against the sink. Water splashed over her knuckles. She wiped them on her jeans. You handled Marseille last year. You told me the ledger was closed. Ledgers reopen. Debts mutate. This one wears a new face and carries a photograph of you leaving the Golden Empress. He thinks you hold the cipher. I hold takeout menus and a cat that sheds on everything I own. I do not deal in ciphers. He crossed the room in two strides. His hand closed over hers. Calluses rasped against her palm. His grip stayed light. Firm. Grounding. You hold my patience. You hold the only key I never copied. Stop playing the novice. It insults us both. She twisted her wrist. Not to break free. To feel the pressure shift. His thumb brushed the crescent scar. A jolt shot up her arm. She swallowed it. You pushed me out. You packed my bag. You placed it by the door like a hotel concierge. Do not act wounded because I took the hint. I packed your bag because two men were already climbing the fire escape. I placed it by the door because I knew you would argue until the glass shattered. I saved your life and you called it a dismissal. You did not say a word. You just pointed at the stairs. Words get people killed. Action keeps them breathing. I chose action. I chose wrong. I own that. He released her hand. The absence of warmth left a hollow space. He turned toward the window. Rain streaked the glass. Neon from the curry house sign painted his profile in bruised purple. You own nothing. You hoard it. You lock it behind three deadbolts and call it control. I lock it because the alternative is watching you walk into a room and never walk out. I have buried enough ghosts. I refuse to dig another with your name on the stone. Ptolemy slunk from beneath the sofa. The tabby wound around Lucien’s ankles. A low purr vibrated through the floorboards. Lucien crouched. His suit trousers pulled taut. He scratched behind the cat’s ears. Ptolemy leaned into the touch. Even the stray trusts me. You trained him better than you train yourself. He likes your cane. It smells like ozone and trouble. Cats have poor judgement. He rose. His knee brushed a stack of notes. Pages fluttered to the rug. He did not look down. His gaze stayed locked on her mouth. You kissed me in the rain outside the warehouse. You tasted like copper and fear. You pulled away before I could answer. You left me standing in the downpour with a burning chest and a ringing phone. I let it ring. I let you go. That was my mistake. I do not make the same mistake twice. You let me go because you wanted to. Do not dress it up as nobility. I let you go because I thought distance would keep you breathing. Distance failed. You are still here. I am still here. The man from Marseille is three streets over and closing the gap. We run out of time for pride. She stepped into his space. The hem of her jumper brushed his waistcoat. She reached up. Her fingers caught the knot of his tie. Silk slipped against her skin. She tightened it. Not enough to choke. Enough to anchor. You want me to stay. Say it. No metaphors. No ledgers. No half-demon riddles. Just the words. His breath warmed her forehead. The amber eye flared. The black one deepened. Stay. The syllable hung in the turmeric air. Heavy. Bare. Stripped of armour. She loosened the tie. Her knuckles grazed his collarbone. His pulse hammered against her skin. Fast. Steady. Alive. You owe me an apology. Not for the bag. For the silence. You vanished into your suits and your shadows and left me to guess whether you bled out in an alley or just grew bored. I bled. I stitched it myself. I sat in a bath that ran pink for an hour and stared at the ceiling and counted the seconds until I could walk without limping. I did not call because hearing your voice would have broken the seam. I chose the stitch. I chose wrong again. She traced the line of his jaw. Stubble rasped against her fingertip. His eyes shuttered for a fraction of a second. Then opened. Raw. You are terrible at this. I am excellent at negotiations. I am rubbish at this. You ruin my syntax. Good. Keep it ruined. Sit down before you knock over another century of research. Tell me about the man with the Marseille accent. Tell me why he thinks I hold a cipher. Tell me everything you held back. He moved to the sofa. The cushions sighed under his weight. Ptolemy leapt onto his lap and kneaded the charcoal wool. Lucien rested his hand on the cat’s spine. His other hand patted the space beside him. The cipher belongs to my father’s house. It maps the gates between Avaros and the alleys you walk. You touched it the night you pulled me from the burning warehouse. Your skin brushed the metal. It marked you. You carry the echo. He wants the echo. He will tear this city apart to scrape it from your bones. She sat. The cushion dipped. Their thighs pressed together. Heat bled through denim and wool. She did not shift away. You knew. You knew it marked me and you still packed my bag. I knew it marked you. I also knew the mark stays dormant unless activated by proximity to his bloodline. I am the bloodline. I stayed away to keep it sleeping. My absence failed. He caught the scent. He is coming. I am here first. She turned her hand over. Palm up. Fingers spread. An invitation. A challenge. Then wake it. Show me what I am carrying. Stop hiding behind distance and deadbolts. Put your hand in mine and burn the ledger. His fingers slid over hers. Skin met skin. The air thickened. The curry house sign flickered outside. Rain drummed against the pane. His grip tightened. The scar on her wrist warmed. A low hum vibrated through her bones. Not pain. Recognition. You feel that. I feel you. Finally. No more running. No more polite exits. You stay in this room until we finish this. He leaned in. His forehead rested against hers. Breath mingled. The hum climbed her arm. Settled in her chest. Beat in time with his pulse. The door handle rattled. Heavy knuckles rapped against the wood. Once. Twice. A voice filtered through the boards. Thick. Accented. Asking for the girl with the blue eyes. Lucien’s hand tightened around hers. His cane lay against the wall. His other hand moved to his waistcoat. Metal clicked. Rory stood. Her fingers stayed locked with his. She dragged him up with her. You wanted me to stay. I am staying. Open the door. Let him see what happens when you stop running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1780
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1780
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count2
4
word"fluttered"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"echo"
count2
10
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"shattered"
2"warmth"
3"vibrated"
4"fluttered"
5"silk"
6"pulse"
7"traced"
8"weight"
9"echo"
10"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences315
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences315
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences315
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1780
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1780
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.64
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
British1
Library1
Aurora1
Silas2
Rory3
Marseille4
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien5
Avaros1
Rain3
You47
Ptolemy4
Do3
Tell3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Rain"
4"You"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"British"
3"Library"
4"Marseille"
globalScore0.18
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences130
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like copper and fear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1780
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences315
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean23.73
std12.29
cv0.518
sampleLengths
022
139
24
324
437
514
613
739
817
911
1015
1121
1215
1323
1423
158
168
1718
1830
1930
2017
2129
2237
2336
2433
2511
2631
2717
2812
2926
3019
3123
3220
3328
3427
3539
3612
3717
3833
3916
4033
4137
4213
4314
4426
4557
4615
4741
4839
4917
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences315
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs376
matches
0"were already climbing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences315
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1783
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"under leather-bound tomes."
1"No more polite exits."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.020190689848569827
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0016825574873808188
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences315
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences315
mean5.65
std3.53
cv0.625
sampleLengths
08
15
29
34
46
58
68
77
86
94
104
115
1215
134
146
159
166
1712
182
1912
205
213
225
238
244
256
269
2712
283
293
303
318
324
334
343
3510
365
374
3810
397
405
414
426
433
4420
453
467
476
484
491
32.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats56
diversityRatio0.30158730158730157
totalSentences315
uniqueOpeners95
48.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences274
matches
0"Just silence and a forwarded"
1"Even the stray trusts me."
2"Just the words."
3"Then wake it."
ratio0.015
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount160
totalSentences274
matches
0"His ivory cane tapped once"
1"You kept the locks."
2"I keep what works."
3"He crossed the threshold."
4"His cane swept a stack"
5"I just scrubbed the grout."
6"He scraped his oxfords against"
7"He shrugged out of his"
8"He draped the jacket over"
9"I paid the tab."
10"You got your money."
11"She folded her arms."
12"She rubbed her thumb over"
13"You wanted a clean exit."
14"I gave you one."
15"I rewrite nothing."
16"I stand in a room"
17"He stepped closer."
18"His cologne cut through the"
19"You are scuffing the floor."
ratio0.584
40.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount230
totalSentences274
matches
0"The third deadbolt surrendered with"
1"Rory dragged the door inward."
2"The hinge groaned against the"
3"Lucien filled the frame."
4"Charcoal wool stretched across his"
5"Rain glossed the platinum sweep"
6"His ivory cane tapped once"
7"The amber eye caught the"
8"The black one swallowed it"
9"You kept the locks."
10"I keep what works."
11"Step back or step in."
12"The curry downstairs is burning"
13"He crossed the threshold."
14"The door clicked shut behind"
15"His cane swept a stack"
16"Paper slid across the warped"
17"Ptolemy bolted from a tower"
18"Research does not tidy itself."
19"I just scrubbed the grout."
ratio0.839
18.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences274
matches
0"To feel the pressure shift."
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"I hold takeout menus and a cat that sheds on everything I own."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.8518%