Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ771WJQF324HCVG9A1N54J2

Run Details

Duration:
3m 50s
Cost:
$0.054762
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back. Rory pulled the door open. Rain slicked the stairwell behind him. Lucien filled the frame, charcoal wool dark at the shoulders, platinum hair plastered neat despite the weather. Water dripped from the ferrule of his ivory cane onto the frayed welcome mat. "You changed the locks." "I added two. People keep showing up uninvited." He stepped inside without waiting for permission. The narrow hallway swallowed him whole. He brought the smell of ozone and expensive tobacco into a space that already choked on turmeric and damp paper. Ptolemy bolted from a leaning tower of grimoires and vanished under the sofa. "Eva owes me a ledger. She isn't answering her phone." "Eva's in Glasgow. You know that. You track everyone." He tapped the cane against a stack of bound scrolls. Dust plumed in the yellow lamplight. "I track debts. The ledger contains names I require." Rory shut the door. The wood met the frame with a solid thud. She turned the locks one by one. The metal sliders rasped against their housings. "You could have sent a runner. Or a text. Or a carrier pigeon. You chose my doorstep." "Runners lose their nerve. Pigeons get eaten. Texts lack nuance." He adjusted his cuff. The fabric strained over his wrist. "You look tired, Aurora." "It's Rory. And I'm working double shifts at the Golden Empress while translating fourteenth-century warding runes for a woman who hoards takeout menus. Fatigue comes with the rent." He moved deeper into the flat. His shoulders brushed a shelf. A paperback slid off and hit the floorboards. He didn't look down. "You left Marseille in a hurry." "I left because you handed me a one-way ticket and a list of reasons I shouldn't stay." "I handed you safety." "You handed me an exit." She stepped around a crate of annotated maps. The cramped space forced them close. His cologne cut through the curry smell rising from the restaurant below. Sharp. Clean. Familiar. "You didn't ask what I wanted." "I knew what you needed." His amber eye caught the lamp glow. The black one stayed flat and depthless. "Evan's associates still crawl the docks. You think distance erases a trail?" "Distance works fine when the person drawing the map doesn't keep redrawing it." She picked up a stray highlighter from the coffee table. The plastic clicked against her thumbnail. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" He rested the cane against an armchair buried under thick jumpers. His knuckles whitened on the ivory handle. "The ledger. And you." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one I brought." He unbuttoned his coat. Rainwater darkened the wool at the hem. "You kept the scar." Her left hand drifted to her wrist. The crescent mark sat pale against her skin. "Childhood accident. Doesn't wash off." "I meant the other one." His gaze dropped to her mouth. "The one I put there." Heat climbed her neck. She set the highlighter down. "You didn't put anything there. You walked out of a hotel room at three in the morning and left a note written in French. I had to use a dictionary to realise you were breaking things off." "I wrote it in French because English failed me." He stepped forward. The floorboard groaned under his weight. "You translate dead languages. You should understand the weight of a tongue that refuses to cooperate." "I understand cowardice when I read it." She held her ground. The edge of the coffee table pressed into her thighs. "You wanted me gone. I obliged. Now you want a book. Take it and leave." "I want the book." His voice dropped an octave. "I also want to know why you kept the silver lighter." She stiffened. The Zippo sat on the windowsill behind a row of neglected succulents. Tarnished. Heavy. "It lights the stove. The pilot goes out." "It belonged to my father." He reached past her. His sleeve brushed her arm. Static snapped. He didn't pull back. "You told me you threw it in the Seine." "I lied." She met his stare. Blue against amber and void. "You left first. I kept the only thing that didn't walk out the door." His jaw tightened. A muscle jumped beneath the skin. "You make it sound simple." "It is simple. You decide what stays. You decide what goes. You decided I went." She sidestepped. The movement put inches between them. The air felt thick and heavy. "The ledger's on the kitchen counter. Under a stack of takeaway menus. Take it." He didn't move toward the kitchen. His hand lifted. Fingers hovered near her cheek. He stopped a breath away. "You smell of cardamom and rain." "I smell of fried noodles and damp paper." She caught his wrist. His pulse beat hard against her thumb. "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't rewrite history to suit your conscience." She released him. Her palm tingled. "You wanted distance. You got it. Three years. Two countries. One very clear message." "The message was a shield." He lowered his hand. The cane clicked against the leg of the table. "Avaros bleeds into Marseille. My father's kin hunt half-breeds who refuse the tithe. You stood next to me in a city that eats weakness. I pushed you away so they wouldn't taste you." "You pushed me away because you couldn't handle someone who saw you flinch." She crossed her arms. The fabric of her jumper stretched tight across her chest. "I don't need protecting. I need honesty. You gave me neither." He exhaled. The sound scraped rough in the quiet room. "I give you the truth now. I tracked your route from Cardiff to London. I paid off two dockside informants to keep Evan's name out of your orbit. I sit in a Mayfair office and listen to whispers, and every time your name surfaces, my chest tightens. I came to this door because the ledger is an excuse." Ptolemy crept from under the sofa. The cat wound around Lucien's polished oxford. He didn't shake him off. "An excuse for what?" "To see if you still look at me like I'm a problem you want to solve." He tilted his head. The lamplight caught the sharp line of his cheekbone. "You do." "I look at you like a man who owes me an apology he's too proud to shape into words." She stepped back. Her heel caught a rolled map. She steadied herself against the doorframe. "Say it properly. Or leave." He set the cane down. The concealed blade inside gave a faint metallic sigh. He closed the distance. His hands found her waist. The wool of his coat scratched her jumper. "I was wrong." The words hung in the cramped air. Heavy. Raw. "Wrong about what?" "About sending you away. About the note. About believing I could carve you out of my life and bleed quietly." His thumbs pressed into her hips. "I miss your voice. I miss the way you argue with street vendors. I miss waking up to your foot against my shin." Her breath caught. She forced it out slow. "You don't get to say that and expect the floor to stop shaking." "I expect nothing." He leaned in. His forehead rested against hers. The heat of his skin bled through. "I stand here. You decide what happens next." She gripped his lapels. The fabric bunched in her fists. "You left me in a foreign city with a dictionary and a broken heart." "I know." "You don't get to fix it with a speech." "I know." She pulled him closer. The space between them vanished. His mouth found hers. The kiss tasted of rain and old regrets. His hands slid up her back. Fingers tangled in her hair. She pressed him against the door. The wood rattled in its frame. The deadbolts held firm. He broke the kiss. His breath hit her cheek. "Aurora." "Rory." She bit his lower lip. Hard enough to sting. "Say it right." "Rory." He traced the scar on her wrist with his thumb. The skin jumped under his touch. "I'm not leaving." "You don't get to declare things." She hooked her leg around his. The movement knocked a stack of journals off the coffee table. Pages scattered across the rug. "You earn them." He dropped to one knee. Not in submission. In reach. His hands settled on her thighs. "Tell me how." She looked down at him. The heterochromatic stare held steady. No deflection. No retreat. "Start by admitting you're terrified." His jaw worked. "I'm terrified." "Good." She threaded her fingers through his platinum hair. The strands slipped cool and smooth. "Now stand up and help me find the ledger before Eva skins us both." He rose. His palms stayed on her. The flat narrowed around them. Books boxed them in. Curry smoke seeped through the floorboards. He didn't let go. "It's under the menus. Top of the counter. Next to the kettle." He turned his head. His mouth brushed her temple. "I'm not looking at the counter." She shoved his chest. Light. Firm. "Move." He stepped back. The cane lay abandoned by the chair. He walked to the kitchen archway. His shoulders filled the space. He reached for the stack of laminated cards. His fingers paused. "Rory." "What." "The lighter's on the sill. You kept it polished." She crossed her arms. "I keep my things in order." He pulled the ledger free. Leather cracked. Dust fell. He turned. The book rested against his ribs. "You kept me in order too." She picked up a fallen journal. The spine split. "Don't push your luck." He set the ledger on the table. His hand covered hers on the cracked cover. Warmth seeped through her skin. "I'm not pushing. I'm staying." She met his eyes. The amber burned. The black swallowed. "Prove it." He lifted her hand. His mouth pressed against her knuckles. The kiss lingered. "Dinner. Tomorrow. My office. I'll cook." "You burn water." "I'll order from Yu-Fei." A corner of his mouth lifted. "I'll tip well." She pulled her hand back. The journal snapped shut. "Eight o'clock. Don't be late." He picked up the ledger. He didn't move toward the door. Rain drummed against the window. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa and claimed a cushion. Lucien's coat dripped onto the rug. He stood his ground. The flat held them tight.
created_at"2026-04-27T10:16:41.822Z" 4/27/2026, 10:16:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1726
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1726
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"traced"
4"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences171
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences266
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1726
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount928
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity0.32
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Zippo1
Lucien3
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Zippo"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1726
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences266
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs154
mean11.21
std9.82
cv0.877
sampleLengths
047
14
28
346
410
59
616
79
827
917
1010
1110
124
1328
1423
156
1617
174
185
1929
206
215
2214
2312
2413
2516
266
2718
284
294
306
3111
324
3315
345
355
366
375
389
3937
409
419
4216
437
4414
4515
464
475
4811
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount928
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.010775862068965518
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences266
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences266
mean6.49
std5.7
cv0.878
sampleLengths
05
15
26
317
414
54
68
77
86
920
1013
1110
129
1310
146
159
164
179
187
197
2017
2110
224
236
244
2528
266
275
288
294
306
3117
324
335
348
356
3612
371
381
391
406
415
427
437
4412
4513
4610
476
486
4911
45.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.22932330827067668
totalSentences266
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount85
totalSentences151
matches
0"He stepped inside without waiting"
1"He brought the smell of"
2"He tapped the cane against"
3"She turned the locks one"
4"He adjusted his cuff."
5"He moved deeper into the"
6"His shoulders brushed a shelf."
7"He didn't look down."
8"She stepped around a crate"
9"His cologne cut through the"
10"His amber eye caught the"
11"She picked up a stray"
12"He rested the cane against"
13"His knuckles whitened on the"
14"He unbuttoned his coat."
15"Her left hand drifted to"
16"His gaze dropped to her"
17"She set the highlighter down."
18"He stepped forward."
19"She held her ground."
ratio0.563
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount148
totalSentences151
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back."
1"Rory pulled the door open."
2"Rain slicked the stairwell behind"
3"Lucien filled the frame, charcoal"
4"Water dripped from the ferrule"
5"He stepped inside without waiting"
6"The narrow hallway swallowed him"
7"He brought the smell of"
8"Ptolemy bolted from a leaning"
9"He tapped the cane against"
10"Dust plumed in the yellow"
11"Rory shut the door."
12"The wood met the frame"
13"She turned the locks one"
14"The metal sliders rasped against"
15"He adjusted his cuff."
16"The fabric strained over his"
17"He moved deeper into the"
18"His shoulders brushed a shelf."
19"A paperback slid off and"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences151
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0897%