Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ773T2GNQG00WYJ8W1MM6YN

Run Details

Duration:
36.0s
Cost:
$0.009037
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate swung shut behind her. The latch clicked with the finality of a vault door. Rory stepped onto the gravel. Richmond Park swallowed the distant hum of London. October frost lay on the grass like crushed glass. The air smelled of wet earth and something sweeter underneath. Wildflowers pushed through the ice. White petals. Yellow stamens. Blooming in the dead of winter. She adjusted the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone pressed cold against her collarbone. Crimson gemstone caught the moonlight. The stone warmed in three seconds. A steady pulse traveled up the metal. Heat bit her skin. She pressed a thumb to the crescent scar on her left wrist. The skin was smooth. The memory was not. She walked toward the tree line. The oaks stood at regular intervals. Ancient trunks thick as warehouse pillars. Bark split into deep fissures. They formed a perfect semicircle. A boundary. She stopped between two stones. Her breath plumed in the air. The mist didn’t dissipate. It pooled around her boots. She checked her watch. The second hand twitched backward. This was the place. The ledger placed the Hel portal here. Yu-Fei’s basement held a hand-drawn map. She traced the crimson route to Richmond. She left Cardiff. She left Evan. She traded a flat above Silas bar for this dirt path. Pre-law lectures taught her to read clauses. They never taught her to read the soil. A branch snapped. Left of her. No wind moved the canopy. The sound echoed too clean. Like a knife striking bone. She turned her head. Shadows stretched across the grass. They detached from the roots. Pale shapes. Barely visible. They slipped behind the oak trunks. She took a step forward. The shapes froze. Took another step. They moved again. “I know you’re out there.” The words left her mouth sharp. Dry. “Show me your face or stay buried.” The pendant flared. The heat climbed her neck. Faint inner glow seeped through her coat. She rubbed her palm over the silver. The chain felt heavy. Like it weighed down her entire spine. She listed facts out loud. Pre-law methodology. Establish parameters. Define the threat. Atmospheric pressure dropped. Temperature held at four degrees Celsius. Heart rate elevated. Pupils dilated. Fear was a chemical response. She would override it. A twig cracked behind her. She spun. Nothing. Just the wildflowers swaying without a breeze. Their scent shifted. Sweet turned copper. Blood on the tongue. She backed away from the tree line. Her boot caught on a root. She corrected her balance. The ground felt spongy. Too soft for packed earth. She looked down. Roots writhed beneath the soil. Thin white threads. Moving like veins. She stepped over them. Fast. “You want me to sit still.” She spoke to the dark. “I don’t do still.” The wind carried a whisper. Not a voice. A texture. Rough bark against stone. It brushed her ear. Cold air bit her neck. She didn’t flinch. She turned slowly. The path ahead split into three trails. All identical. Oak trunks leaned inward. The canopy closed overhead. Moonlight fractured into green shards. Time warped. Her watch spun backward. The glass face fogged. She dropped it. Glass shattered on grass. She stepped away. Didn’t look back. The Heartstone pulsed faster. Thump-thump against her ribs. Warmth turned to heat. She pressed two fingers to the gem. The metal burned. “Stop.” The stone ignored her. It drove forward. Toward the center trail. She followed. The grass crunched under her boots. The sound echoed too loud. Too wet. Like chewing. She tightened her jaw. Listened. Beyond the crunch, something dragged. Heavy. Slow. Deliberate. A voice answered from the trees. Low. Guttural. Not human. “You came looking.” “I came to finish it.” She kept walking. Boots found solid ground. “Leave the books alone. Leave my friends alone.” The dragging sound stopped. Silence pressed in. The wildflowers bent toward the center trail. Petals curled inward. Stems twisted. Forming a corridor. She walked through. The air grew thick. Hard to draw breath. The trees pressed closer. Bark scraped her shoulders. She didn’t stop. The Heartstone burned. She gripped the chain hard enough to bruise. Fingers locked. A shape moved at the edge of vision. Right side. Tall. Thin. It vanished when she turned her head. Returned. Closer now. Just a sliver of pale. Barely human. She didn’t run. Running triggered chase instinct. She matched pace. Eyes forward. Fingers on the pendant. “You’re walking beside me.” She spoke flat. “I see the way the grass flattens ahead of you. I hear the weight shift. You’re heavy. Why carry yourself like a stone?” The grass laid flat in a straight line ahead of her. No wind. Just pressure. The air tasted like ozone. Like lightning striking soil. She reached into her coat pocket. Fingers found cold steel. A letter opener. She didn’t pull it out. Weight was enough. “Put it down.” The figure stepped out from between two oaks. No face. Just smooth wood where features should be. Eyes hollow. Mouth a split branch. It wore tattered grey cloth. Like rotting leaves. It didn’t move legs. It glided. Inches above ground. The Heartstone flared. Crimson light cut through the dark. The figure paused. It tilted its head. Wood creaked. She backed until her spine hit an oak trunk. Bark dug into her shoulders. She didn’t look away. “You want a trade. I didn’t bring coins.” The figure leaned forward. Cold air washed over her. Frost formed on the silver chain. The Heartstone dimmed. The warm pulse stuttered. She felt breath she hadn’t exhaled trapped in her lungs. The figure raised a long branch-hand. Pointed at her chest. At the stone. “Take it.” The voice sounded like grinding gravel. “Give it back.” She swallowed. Throat dry. Fingers tightened around the letter opener. Metal bit her palm. “Not yours.” The ground shook. Not tremors. Footsteps. Many. Heavy. Surrounding the circle. The wildflowers snapped upright. Petals turned black. Stems twisted into shapes. Claws. Jaws. Teeth made of thorns. The figure stepped closer. The split in its wooden face widened. Dark hollow opened. Inside, something red pulsed. Slow. Rhythmic. Like a second heart. She pressed her back harder against the tree. Wood splintered under her shoulder blades. “You said leave the books alone.” Her voice stayed level. “You don’t get the stone. You don’t get anything.” The figure stopped. Arms lowered. The red pulse inside the hollow quickened. The Heartstone grew cold. Then hot. Then cold again. Chains rattled on her neck. Silver links bit into her skin. Frost spread across her coat. The circle of trees closed in. Trunks pressed together. Blocking the path behind. Blocking the path ahead. Only forward remained. The figure turned. Drifted into the dark tunnel it carved. Waiting. She stepped forward. Boots sank into soft earth. The Heartstone pulsed once. Strong. Sharp. Crimson light reflected off the thorn-teeth lining the grove walls. She kept walking. Eyes locked on the hollow opening ahead. The air grew thicker. The silence broke. A low hum vibrated through the soil. Up through her soles. Into her bones. She didn’t stop. She didn't look back. She reached into her coat. Fingers closed around the letter opener. Cold steel. She pushed forward. The trees parted.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"parameters"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count3
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"quickened"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"perfect"
2"traced"
3"echoed"
4"parameters"
5"whisper"
6"fractured"
7"shattered"
8"pulsed"
9"warmth"
10"silence"
11"weight"
12"footsteps"
13"rhythmic"
14"quickened"
15"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences268
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences268
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences278
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1208
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1109
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Park1
London1
Heartstone7
Hel1
Richmond2
Cardiff1
Evan1
Silas1
Dry1
Celsius1
Boots2
Crimson3
Bark3
Like6
Cold3
Fingers5
Eyes3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Evan"
2"Boots"
3"Bark"
4"Like"
5"Fingers"
6"Eyes"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Cardiff"
4"Silas"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like grinding gravel"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1208
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences278
matches(empty)
86.55% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean46.46
std21.04
cv0.453
sampleLengths
064
163
253
356
459
519
668
770
815
974
1064
1113
1220
1357
1445
1530
1648
1758
1826
1945
2011
2116
2252
2333
2468
2581
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences268
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs218
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences278
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1116
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.025985663082437275
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0035842293906810036
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences278
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences278
mean4.35
std2.5
cv0.576
sampleLengths
07
110
25
38
49
510
65
72
82
96
108
117
125
136
147
154
1612
174
184
196
206
216
225
235
242
255
266
274
285
294
305
314
327
336
347
353
363
3711
387
398
403
413
425
435
445
454
465
475
482
492
63.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.420863309352518
totalSentences278
uniqueOpeners117
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences212
matches
0"Just the wildflowers swaying without"
1"Too soft for packed earth."
2"Just a sliver of pale."
3"Just smooth wood where features"
4"Dark hollow opened."
5"Then cold again."
6"Only forward remained."
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences212
matches
0"She adjusted the silver chain"
1"She pressed a thumb to"
2"She walked toward the tree"
3"They formed a perfect semicircle."
4"She stopped between two stones."
5"Her breath plumed in the"
6"It pooled around her boots."
7"She checked her watch."
8"She traced the crimson route"
9"She left Cardiff."
10"She left Evan."
11"She traded a flat above"
12"They never taught her to"
13"She turned her head."
14"They detached from the roots."
15"They slipped behind the oak"
16"She took a step forward."
17"They moved again."
18"She rubbed her palm over"
19"She listed facts out loud."
ratio0.288
66.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount167
totalSentences212
matches
0"The iron gate swung shut"
1"The latch clicked with the"
2"Rory stepped onto the gravel."
3"Richmond Park swallowed the distant"
4"October frost lay on the"
5"The air smelled of wet"
6"Wildflowers pushed through the ice."
7"She adjusted the silver chain"
8"The Heartstone pressed cold against"
9"Crimson gemstone caught the moonlight."
10"The stone warmed in three"
11"A steady pulse traveled up"
12"Heat bit her skin."
13"She pressed a thumb to"
14"The skin was smooth."
15"The memory was not."
16"She walked toward the tree"
17"The oaks stood at regular"
18"Bark split into deep fissures."
19"They formed a perfect semicircle."
ratio0.788
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences212
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences7
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She spoke (speak)"
1"She spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.235
88.3124%