Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ77EM3XDQCW8JZNKFVHJBKR

Run Details

Duration:
3m 40s
Cost:
$0.050159
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon from the street sign bled through the rain-slicked window and painted the rim of Rory’s glass. She traced the crescent scar on her left wrist with her thumb. The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low friction of damp wool and clinking ice. Old maps peeled at the corners above the booths. Black-and-white photographs watched the room with hollow eyes. A stool scraped against the floorboards. Someone took the seat two down from hers. Silas slid a tumbler across the polished wood. Ice cracked against glass. You still take yours with a twist of lemon. I remember that much. Rory turned. The voice dragged up four years of Cardiff rain and library dust. She looked at the man beside her. The face held the same sharp jaw, but the softness around the mouth had hardened into something deliberate. His hair, once a chaotic sweep of brown, sat cropped close to the skull. A charcoal coat hung off his shoulders, expensive but worn at the cuffs. He kept his hands flat on the bar, knuckles white. Morgan. He lifted his glass. The movement looked rehearsed. Four years and you still sit in the corner like you plan to bolt through the fire exit. Old habits keep you breathing. You look different. Time does its work. You cut your hair. She ran a hand through the straight black strands hitting her shoulders. The ends felt blunt against her palm. London weather ruins anything longer. You never answered my letters. The ones I sent to the old address. He rotated his glass. The ice clinked in a steady rhythm. I moved around. Cardiff got small. You know how it shrinks when you stop pretending it fits. I know how it feels when you leave people behind without a word. He drank. The swallow looked difficult. He set the glass down with a soft thud. I wrote back. Drafted three versions. Burned them all. Some things look worse on paper. You chose silence instead. That works better for you. Silence keeps the noise down. You learned that trick before I did. You packed a single bag and vanished before the term ended. Eva covered your tracks. I stared at an empty desk for a month. Rory pressed her thumb harder against the scar. The skin whitened. Staying meant bleeding out slowly. Leaving meant I kept the rest of my blood. You sat in those lectures and took notes while the world cracked open. I needed air. He turned his head. The neon caught the hollows under his eyes. Lines bracketed his mouth, deep and set. I sat in those lectures because my father paid for the seat. I took notes because I thought the ink would build a ladder out of that house. It did. The rungs just cut my hands on the way up. You made partner at the firm. I saw the announcement online. Blackwood & Hayes. Or whatever they call themselves now. He laughed. The sound came out dry, stripped of warmth. They call it a golden cage. I sign documents that bury people. I wear the right suits. I drink the right scotch. I wake up at three in the morning and count the cracks in the ceiling. The ladder works. It just leads to a room with no windows. You wanted the corner office. You drew it on napkins in the student union. Sketched the view of the bay. I drew a fantasy. The bay looks grey from up there. The glass reflects your own face back at you until you forget what you looked like before the tie went on. Silas limped past the end of the bar. His signet ring caught the low light as he wiped a spill. He nodded once at Rory. The gesture carried the weight of a locked door and a spare key. She dipped her chin. The old man moved toward the back, his left leg dragging a fraction against the floorboards. Morgan watched him go. His fingers tapped the bar. One, two, three. A nervous rhythm he used to drum on exam desks. You live above this place now. Deliver noodles for a living. I tracked the address through a mutual contact. Took me six months to work up the nerve to walk through that green door. You could have called. Saved yourself the train fare. Phones make it too easy to hang up. I needed to see if you still looked at people like you were measuring the distance to the exit. I do. It keeps the surprises down. He shifted on the stool. The wool coat whispered against the wood. He pulled a silver cigarette case from his pocket, flipped it open, then snapped it shut without taking one out. The motion looked automatic. Empty. I ran into Evan last winter. At a charity function in Cardiff. He wore a tailored suit and talked about property development. He asked about you. I told him I had no idea where you went. I lied. I knew you were in London. I just did not know if you wanted to be found. Rory’s jaw tightened. She picked up her glass. The lemon twist released a sharp burst of oil into the air. You told him nothing. That was the right call. He collects apologies like trophies. I stopped handing them out. He looked at her hands. The scar stood out against the pale skin. His gaze lingered, then dropped to his own drink. I should have walked you to the station that night. I should have stood on the platform and watched the train pull out. I sat in my car outside your building instead. Engine running. Wipers slapping the glass. I told myself you needed space. I told myself a lot of things. You told yourself the truth scares you. It still does. He nodded. The movement looked heavy. It does. I married a woman who likes quiet dinners and never asks where I go on Thursday nights. I keep a separate bank account. I delete my search history. I play the part. The script runs smooth. I just forget my lines when the house goes dark. You built the life you sketched on those napkins. You just hate the ink now. I hate that I traded the only person who actually read the margins for a leather chair and a view of a grey bay. I hate that I let four years rot between us because I was too proud to admit I got it wrong. Pride keeps the spine straight. Regret bends it. You are standing up fine. He turned his glass again. The ice had melted. The amber liquid looked diluted. I am standing. I just do not know where I am pointing my feet anymore. You look steady. You look like you figured out how to breathe. I learned to stop holding my breath. That counts for something. It counts for everything. I came here to say I was wrong. To say I should have chased the train. To say I still keep that stupid napkin in my wallet. The one with the bay and the crooked tower. The ink bled through the paper years ago. I can still read the lines. Rory set her glass down. The condensation left a ring on the wood. She wiped it away with the edge of her sleeve. The motion felt slow. Deliberate. You kept a napkin. I kept a locked drawer. We both hoard paper instead of fixing the cracks. Paper does not argue back. Paper stays where you put it. People leave. Paper yellows. You know how this works. He reached into his coat. The fabric rustled. He pulled out a worn leather wallet, flipped it open, and slid a folded square of paper onto the bar. The edges had frayed. Blue ink stained the creases. He pushed it toward her. His fingers stopped an inch from hers. Take it. Or leave it. I just needed to put it on the table. She looked at the paper. The folds held years of friction. She did not touch it. She kept her hands flat on her knees. The scar faced upward. You came all this way to drop a ghost on my counter. I came to see if the ghost still had a pulse. The jukebox in the corner clicked. A low bass line vibrated through the floorboards. Rain lashed against the green-lit window. Silas appeared at the far end of the bar, polishing a pint glass with a white cloth. He watched them over the rim. His hazel eyes held no judgment. Just the quiet calculation of a man who had seen a thousand conversations die on those stools. Morgan picked up his drink. He drained it in one swallow. He set the empty glass down. The sound echoed in the space between them. I catch the last train back at eleven. I booked a return ticket. I can tear it up. Or I can fold it and put it back in my pocket. The choice sits right here on the wood. Rory traced the rim of her glass. The lemon twist had sunk to the bottom. She watched it drown in the amber dark. You always did like leaving the door open. Even when the wind blew the rain in. I learned to stop closing it. You taught me that. Before you left. Before I let you. He kept his hand near the napkin. His knuckles had lost their white tension. The skin looked tired. Weathered. He did not pull back. He did not push forward. He just waited. The clock above the door ticked. The second hand jumped. The green neon hummed. The maps on the wall held their faded borders. The photographs kept their silence. Rory lifted her hand from her knee. Her fingers hovered over the frayed paper. The creases caught the low light. She pressed her thumb against the edge. The ink felt rough against her skin. She did not lift it. She just held it there. The weight of four years settled into the wood. The rain kept falling. The bar kept breathing. Morgan watched her hand. His chest rose. Fell. He did not speak. He just let the moment stretch. The ice in Rory’s glass cracked. A single sharp sound. She kept her thumb on the paper. The scar on her wrist caught the neon. Blue light bled into the white skin. She pressed down. The napkin stayed flat. Morgan’s breath hitched. He did not move. The clock ticked. The door stayed shut. The green sign buzzed. The maps held their lines. The photographs watched. Rory’s fingers curled. Just slightly. The paper shifted. A millimetre. No more. Morgan’s eyes dropped to her hand. His throat worked. He swallowed. The sound barely cleared the air. He kept his palm open on the bar. Waiting. The rain drummed against the glass. The bass line thumped. Silas set the pint glass down. The cloth folded in his hands. He turned away. The space between them held. Tight. Heavy. Unbroken.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1848
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1848
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"traced"
count2
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"carried the weight"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"chaotic"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"carried the weight"
5"pulse"
6"vibrated"
7"echoed"
8"tension"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences283
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount7
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences283
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences283
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1848
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1848
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.41
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Raven1
Nest1
Cardiff3
Hayes1
Evan1
London2
Thursday1
Silas4
You26
Morgan6
Paper3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"You"
6"Morgan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.797
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences140
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like before the tie went on"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1848
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences283
matches
0"remember that much"
1"learned that trick"
2"hate that I"
3"hate that I"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean28.43
std35.05
cv1.233
sampleLengths
062
126
213
376
41
58
618
78
88
919
1018
1111
1217
1313
1415
1515
169
1736
1811
1930
2019
2140
2220
2310
2449
2520
2632
2758
2822
2934
309
3127
327
3337
3455
3520
3619
3722
3851
3910
406
4148
4215
4345
4413
4514
4627
4711
4854
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences283
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs361
matches
0"were measuring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences283
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1852
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.026997840172786176
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0026997840172786176
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences283
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences283
mean6.53
std4.04
cv0.619
sampleLengths
019
112
214
39
48
56
68
78
84
99
104
112
1212
137
1418
1514
1613
1710
181
194
204
2118
225
233
244
254
2612
277
285
295
308
314
327
333
343
3511
3613
372
384
399
403
413
423
436
444
455
465
477
4811
494
33.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats46
diversityRatio0.21908127208480566
totalSentences283
uniqueOpeners62
12.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences258
matches
0"Just the quiet calculation of"
ratio0.004
18.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount130
totalSentences258
matches
0"She traced the crescent scar"
1"You still take yours with"
2"I remember that much."
3"She looked at the man"
4"His hair, once a chaotic"
5"He kept his hands flat"
6"He lifted his glass."
7"You look different."
8"You cut your hair."
9"She ran a hand through"
10"You never answered my letters."
11"He rotated his glass."
12"I moved around."
13"You know how it shrinks"
14"I know how it feels"
15"He set the glass down"
16"I wrote back."
17"You chose silence instead."
18"You learned that trick before"
19"You packed a single bag"
ratio0.504
10.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount232
totalSentences258
matches
0"The green neon from the"
1"She traced the crescent scar"
2"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
3"A stool scraped against the"
4"Someone took the seat two"
5"Silas slid a tumbler across"
6"Ice cracked against glass."
7"You still take yours with"
8"I remember that much."
9"The voice dragged up four"
10"She looked at the man"
11"The face held the same"
12"His hair, once a chaotic"
13"A charcoal coat hung off"
14"He kept his hands flat"
15"He lifted his glass."
16"The movement looked rehearsed."
17"You look different."
18"Time does its work."
19"You cut your hair."
ratio0.899
96.90% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences258
matches
0"To say I should have"
1"To say I still keep"
2"Even when the wind blew"
3"Before you left."
4"Before I let you."
ratio0.019
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.5050%