| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 88.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "potential" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "crystalline" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "mosaic" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "silence" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "chill" | | 22 | "vibrated" | | 23 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1343 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Quiet, Nyx murmured, the voice like wind dragged through dead reeds." | | 1 | "It calls them to the table, she said, riddling, but the table never stays still." | | 2 | "Instinct, Aurora said smoothly." | | 3 | "We cross where the waters divide, Isolde said, voice soft as falling leaves." | | 4 | "I know this place, they whispered, voice fracturing." | | 5 | "It is what is true, Isolde said gently." | | 6 | "It remembers the weight, Nyx breathed." | | 7 | "Or so the right hands could, Isolde murmured." | | 8 | "Nyx, she said, not looking up." | | 9 | "I can become the space between, Nyx replied." |
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| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1326 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Veil | 3 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 1 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Seer" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "leaf that seemed to drip occasionally, shedding tiny metallic flakes that vanished before hitting the floor" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.234 | | wordCount | 1343 | | matches | | 0 | "neither warm nor" | | 1 | "not to drown, but to embrace" | | 2 | "not with a sound, but with a sigh" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 49.74 | | std | 30.41 | | cv | 0.611 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 124 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 97 | | 5 | 92 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 71 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 84 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 78 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 73 | | 24 | 60 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 38 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 264 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, a low, rhythmic grinding echoed—the sound of millstones, or giants chewing stone." | | 1 | "For a heartbeat, they were just a man—tall, broad-shouldered, draped in travel-stained wool, eyes wide with panic." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 189 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.015873015873015872 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010582010582010581 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 9.52 | | std | 6.6 | | cv | 0.693 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 56.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3971631205673759 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" | | 1 | "Then the shadow bled back," | | 2 | "Then, a shape surfaced." | | 3 | "Then don’t fight it." | | 4 | "Then stepped forward." |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her shoulders squared," | | 1 | "They moved forward." | | 2 | "Her pale lavender eyes traced" | | 3 | "It calls them to the" | | 4 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 5 | "She moved through the world" | | 6 | "She pulled the Fae-forged blade." | | 7 | "She pressed the tip to" | | 8 | "She didn’t mention the compass-needles" | | 9 | "She didn’t mention that pre-law" | | 10 | "She flexed her left wrist," | | 11 | "She used it." | | 12 | "They descended a ramp that" | | 13 | "We cross where the waters" | | 14 | "It was liquid shadow." | | 15 | "I know this place, they" | | 16 | "They called it before the" | | 17 | "You said you were trapped" | | 18 | "It is what is true," | | 19 | "She stepped toward the dais." |
| | ratio | 0.273 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tore with a" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped through first, boots" | | 2 | "She kept her shoulders squared," | | 3 | "Isolde followed, bare feet silent," | | 4 | "The place opened into a" | | 5 | "Arches of fused glass and" | | 6 | "Roots thick as carriage wheels" | | 7 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 8 | "Aurora’s Heartstone pendant, pinned beneath" | | 9 | "Winter solstice week, and the" | | 10 | "They moved forward." | | 11 | "The stone underfoot was polished" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted a half-step behind," | | 13 | "The faint violet gleam of" | | 14 | "The stones remember hunger." | | 15 | "Isolde didn’t look back." | | 16 | "Her pale lavender eyes traced" | | 17 | "Gourds split open revealed constellations" | | 18 | "Wine flowed upward in thin" | | 19 | "It calls them to the" |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "Though she already understood." | | 1 | "If this place is a" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 19.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through first, boots meeting stone that was neither warm nor cold, but humming with a low, gravitational pull that pressed against her ribs." | | 1 | "Isolde followed, bare feet silent, silver hair catching the unnatural amber light that bled from the other side." | | 2 | "Roots thick as carriage wheels arched over winding pathways, their bark woven with veins of crystalline resin that throbbed faintly." | | 3 | "Nyx drifted a half-step behind, their form shifting subtly from a solid humanoid silhouette to wispy vapor before settling back into a familiar shape." | | 4 | "The faint violet gleam of their eyes caught on the resin veins, casting long, wrong shadows that stretched toward the ceiling instead of the path." | | 5 | "They descended a ramp that spiraled inward, the architecture growing older, rougher." | | 6 | "The polished stone gave way to quarried bedrock, scored with deep grooves that caught the amber light and threw it back in fractured rainbows." | | 7 | "Constellations bled into one another, connected by thin lines of gold leaf that seemed to drip occasionally, shedding tiny metallic flakes that vanished before …" | | 8 | "She finally stepped forward, her silver hair brushing the air as if caught in an unseen current." | | 9 | "She glanced at Isolde, who watched the opening with pale, knowing eyes, and at Nyx, who had reclaimed their solid silhouette but left a trail of faint violet du…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |