| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 33 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.24% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1330 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1330 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "resonance" | | 3 | "pawn" | | 4 | "carried the weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "vibrated" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "knuckles turned white" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "d in sympathy" | | 1 | "d with anger" |
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| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1330 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "We see the light, Aurora. Come to the door. Daddy misses his property." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1024 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "You" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "You" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 4 | | Silas | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | You | 6 | | Evan | 2 | | Rory | 6 | | Carter | 1 | | Ellis | 1 | | Lies | 1 | | Little | 1 | | Bird | 1 | | Aurora | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Irish" | | 3 | "You" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Carter" | | 7 | "Ellis" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1330 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 27.71 | | std | 20.2 | | cv | 0.729 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 42 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 75 | | 26 | 69 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 68 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 588 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sleek ivory-handled cane" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03231292517006803 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017006802721088437 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 12.2 | | std | 12.03 | | cv | 0.986 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 32 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 62.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3944954128440367 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Then you appear dripping in" | | 1 | "Then the cellar door buckled" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 12.59% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She flung the iron bolt" | | 1 | "He held a sleek ivory-handled" | | 2 | "She planted a boot against" | | 3 | "He stepped forward anyway." | | 4 | "He invaded her space instantly," | | 5 | "His hand, gloved in black" | | 6 | "He also owns the bar" | | 7 | "They would break your cane." | | 8 | "They would enjoy breaking" | | 9 | "He did not look at" | | 10 | "I just wiped around." | | 11 | "He rotated slowly. The left" | | 12 | "Your blood calls to the" | | 13 | "You are the only thing" | | 14 | "She yanked her wrist free." | | 15 | "My mother was Welsh." | | 16 | "My father Irish." | | 17 | "You project your pathology onto" | | 18 | "You thought I did not" | | 19 | "He knows you possess the" |
| | ratio | 0.519 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She flung the iron bolt" | | 1 | "Rain lashed the landing, and" | | 2 | "Water dripped from his slicked-back" | | 3 | "He held a sleek ivory-handled" | | 4 | "The storm swirled around him," | | 5 | "She planted a boot against" | | 6 | "He stepped forward anyway." | | 7 | "The heavy thud of his" | | 8 | "He invaded her space instantly," | | 9 | "His hand, gloved in black" | | 10 | "The metal rattled once, twice," | | 11 | "Silas owns the lease." | | 12 | "He also owns the bar" | | 13 | "They would break your cane." | | 14 | "They would enjoy breaking" | | 15 | "Lucien moved to the kitchenette." | | 16 | "Rory noticed. She always noticed." | | 17 | "He did not look at" | | 18 | "I just wiped around." | | 19 | "He rotated slowly. The left" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 61.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "If I mention your name," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 60.44% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He rotated slowly. The left sleeve of his suit jacket pulled back. The skin along his forearm pulsed with a vein of black ink that crawled toward his wrist. Fai…" | | 1 | "Lucien gripped her waist, pulling her flush against him. His heterochromatic eyes flared. The amber eye swallowed the black. His form shifted, shadows lengtheni…" | | 2 | "She hesitated, looking at the weapon in her hand, then at the man who held her heart and her ruin. She turned and descended. The stairs creaked under her weight…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 25 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 60 | | tagDensity | 0.033 | | leniency | 0.067 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |