Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ77TZQF4ZPXCMMEVGD849YQ

Run Details

Duration:
39.3s
Cost:
$0.010381
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain slid back. The metal clicked against the strike plate. I turned the first deadbolt. The second followed. The third locked home as I twisted the handle. Light from the hallway cut across the scuffed floorboards. I kept my shoulders squared. My left wrist rested against the doorframe. The crescent scar caught the yellow glare. He filled the gap. Charcoal wool brushed the peeling paint. Ivory cane tapped the threshold. Slicked-back platinum hairs refused the damp London air. One amber iris locked onto mine. The other swallowed the light. Black as polished stone. I did not step back. I refused to yield an inch of the door threshold. You kept the locks. He rested the cane against his shoulder. The leather grip shifted under his palm. His voice carried the flat Marseille lilt I memorized years ago. Or did you just finally admit the street eats people who sleep without steel? I closed the door an inch. The chain caught the frame. Books stacked to the ceiling. Scrolls banded in red twine. A takeout container balanced on a stack of case files. Ptolemy yowled from the sofa. Tabby tail lashed a cushion. The street does not eat me. I survived. My tone stayed level. Like a stone skipping water. You are blocking the chain. He smiled. It never reached his eyes. The one that used to watch me across crowded rooms. He stepped inside. Boots scuffed the mat. I do not block chains. I return favors. His cane swept the room. The tip knocked a pen backward. He adjusted his cuff. You stopped answering cards three months ago. I do not ignore cards. I answered them internally. Externally, I turned toward the kitchenette. Mugs lined a chipped shelf. I reached for a dented ceramic cup. My fingers brushed the rim. Cold glass waited. You ignored me. I poured water from a rusted kettle. Steam curled against the window. Rain had started tapping the glass. A heavy London rhythm. You left Cardiff in a hurry. You took the delivery route. You took your silence. He moved quieter than the shadows in a hotel corridor. He stopped behind me. The scent of bergamot and old paper wrapped around my shoulders. I kept my gaze on the kettle. The whistle threatened to tear through the flat. I did not take silence. I gave you distance. His voice dropped a register. The leather of his gloves creaked. You ran. I stood the ground. Running leaves tracks. Standing leaves questions. The kettle screamed. I killed the gas. The flame died. I set the cup on the counter. My knuckles whitened. Tracks lead places. I turned. We faced each other in the narrow aisle. I had to tilt my head up. Five six against five eleven. His shoulders blocked the hallway light. I kept my hands visible. The scar on my wrist stood pale against dark skin. You built a maze out of my habits. You followed until I tripped. Then you left me in the dark. He set the cane against a stack of atlases. The ivory handle clicked against a bookplate. His hands stayed open. Palms up. A gesture I remembered from hotel lobbies and back alleys. I never left you. One amber eye tracked the line of my jaw. The black one watched my mouth. You looked at me like a problem to solve. A contract to balance. I am not a ledger. You treat everything like math. I treated you like a variable I could not balance. I stepped around the counter. Ptolemy darted out from under a chair. Tail high. He brushed my ankle. I kept walking. I needed clear space. I needed to breathe air that did not taste like him. My flat smelled like rain and burnt toast. His smelled like expensive wool and controlled chaos. He followed. Two long strides crossed the room. He stopped where the hallway narrowed. The books leaned inward. Scrolls formed a paper fortress. My chest tightened. I folded my arms. The cotton of my shirt rubbed my skin. You wanted clarity. He tilted his head. A strand of blond hair fell across his forehead. He did not brush it away. You wanted me to say what I should have been saying all along. I was waiting for you to look me in the eye. You never did. I looked. I held his gaze. The amber one crackled. The black one stayed still. I looked at the floor. I looked at the door. I looked at the exit signs, the ceiling tiles, the dust on the window sill. I avoided your face because it broke me. My voice dropped. It broke me. Silence stretched. Ptolemy jumped onto the table. A stack of papers shifted. One slid to the edge. It caught on his shoe. He bent. Slow. Deliberate. The suit coat pulled taut across his back. He straightened with the paper. His fingers hovered over the edge. He did not hand it to me. He tore it. Clean. The sound sliced the quiet. Then do not look at the floor now. He let the halves drop. They fluttered onto a pile of receipts. He stepped into my space. The air grew thick. My pulse hammered against my collarbone. I kept my ground. My feet planted wide. I am looking. I said it. The word came out raw. I am looking right at you. I see the way you angle your shoulder when you prepare a lie. I see the way your left hand grips the cane when you want to reach out. I see the man who told me to run and then followed me to the port. He exhaled. A short, sharp breath. His jaw worked. The muscle feathered under thin skin. He leaned back. The movement broke the tension like a snapped cable. I told you to run. His voice stripped down to the bone. Evan put a knife to your ribs. He put the same knife to mine three years before that. I know what it looks like when love turns into ownership. I would rather you hate me than bleed for me. I did not hate him. I loved him. I closed my eyes. The memory of his coat, his hands, his voice in Marseille winters pressed against my lids. I opened them. The flat looked sharper. Higher contrast. You think hate is cleaner. I stepped forward. One boot crossed the invisible line between the kitchen and the living room. You think distance keeps skin intact. I stood inches from him. I could feel the heat radiating off his chest. I could smell the bergamot again. It made my teeth ache. You were never clean, Lucien. You were just careful. He swallowed. His throat moved. The heterochromatic eyes narrowed. Amber flared. Black darkened. Careful keeps you alive. He raised his hand. His glove hovered near my cheek. He did not touch. The heat of his palm stopped an inch from my skin. I felt the weight of the restraint. It anchored me to the floor. Then live. I reached up. My fingers closed around his wrist. The leather creaked. The scar on my left hand pressed against his pulse. His heartbeat jumped. Fast. Erratic. He turned his head. His lips brushed my knuckles. The gesture was so out of sync with his tailored suits, his cane, his controlled world that it stole the air from my lungs. He did not pull back. He stayed there. My skin against his glove. My breath against his mouth. Ptolemy yowled. The sound echoed off the paper walls. A lamp shook on a side table. We did not move. I do not know what you want. His voice vibrated against my fingers. I wanted you to tell me the truth. I released his wrist. My hand fell to my side. I turned toward the window. Rain streaked the glass. Reflections of books, of empty mugs, of his standing figure superimposed over the dark city. The truth sits in my pocket. He followed my reflection. His steps were quiet. He stood behind me in the glass. Then hand it over. I did not turn around. I kept my hands loose. I kept my breathing even. He reached into his inner jacket. Metal clicked. He placed something on the windowsill. Flat. Rectangular. Heavy. A key. Brass. Worn teeth. Silas asked for it back. Lucien murmured. The bar manager did not ask. He demanded. I kept the spare. I finally turned. He stood with his hands in his pockets. The cane rested against his thigh. The charcoal suit looked impossibly sharp against the peeling wallpaper. The books leaned closer. The flat felt smaller. Tighter. Real. I walked to the sill. I picked up the key. It was warm. His fingerprints lingered on the teeth. I turned it over. The metal caught the streetlight. Why now. I set the key on the windowsill. My fingers stayed flat against the glass. Because I am tired of watching you from behind doorframes. He stepped closer. His shadow merged with mine on the floorboards. He did not touch me. He did not need to. The space between us hummed. Static. History. Everything we never packaged or shipped or filed away. I looked at him. Really looked. The scar on my wrist throbbed. The rain drummed. Ptolemy purred against a stack of legal pads. Lucien Moreau stood in a room full of paper and promises, waiting for me to make the next move. I reached out. My hand met his. Skin against skin. Glove removed. Calluses caught my fingertips. His fingers curled around mine. The grip was firm. Unyielding. I did not let go. I did not pull away. I just held on. The key stayed on the sill. The deadbolts stayed thrown. The door stayed shut.
created_at"2026-04-27T10:30:24.247Z" 4/27/2026, 10:30:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"lilt"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"variable"
count1
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"lilt"
1"silence"
2"variable"
3"fluttered"
4"pulse"
5"tension"
6"could feel"
7"weight"
8"echoed"
9"vibrated"
10"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences303
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences303
filterMatches
0"see"
1"know"
2"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences303
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1636
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1636
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
London2
Marseille2
Cardiff1
Lucien3
Moreau1
One4
You19
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"One"
3"You"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.919
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like rain and burnt toast"
1"smelled like expensive wool and controlled"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1636
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences303
matches(empty)
81.13% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean32.72
std14.2
cv0.434
sampleLengths
028
128
238
315
443
541
622
724
835
930
1040
1140
1232
1320
1466
1532
1642
1762
1823
1915
2049
2115
2239
2322
2439
2543
2662
2727
2851
2937
3061
3113
3242
3329
3451
3520
3613
3742
3821
3919
4017
415
4219
4337
4428
4516
4647
4742
4826
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences303
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs335
matches
0"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences303
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1637
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.021991447770311544
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0036652412950519244
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences303
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences303
mean5.4
std3.1
cv0.575
sampleLengths
04
17
25
33
49
59
65
77
87
94
106
115
128
136
145
154
165
1710
184
197
207
2111
2214
236
245
255
265
2710
285
295
306
312
324
335
345
352
365
3710
383
394
405
413
425
436
444
457
465
474
486
495
34.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats47
diversityRatio0.22112211221122113
totalSentences303
uniqueOpeners67
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences264
matches
0"Externally, I turned toward the"
1"Then you left me in"
2"Then do not look at"
3"Then hand it over."
ratio0.015
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount162
totalSentences264
matches
0"I turned the first deadbolt."
1"I kept my shoulders squared."
2"My left wrist rested against"
3"He filled the gap."
4"I did not step back."
5"I refused to yield an"
6"You kept the locks."
7"He rested the cane against"
8"His voice carried the flat"
9"I closed the door an"
10"My tone stayed level."
11"You are blocking the chain."
12"It never reached his eyes."
13"He stepped inside."
14"I do not block chains."
15"I return favors."
16"His cane swept the room."
17"He adjusted his cuff."
18"You stopped answering cards three"
19"I do not ignore cards."
ratio0.614
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount243
totalSentences264
matches
0"The chain slid back."
1"The metal clicked against the"
2"I turned the first deadbolt."
3"The second followed."
4"The third locked home as"
5"I kept my shoulders squared."
6"My left wrist rested against"
7"The crescent scar caught the"
8"He filled the gap."
9"Charcoal wool brushed the peeling"
10"Ivory cane tapped the threshold."
11"The other swallowed the light."
12"I did not step back."
13"I refused to yield an"
14"You kept the locks."
15"He rested the cane against"
16"The leather grip shifted under"
17"His voice carried the flat"
18"I closed the door an"
19"The chain caught the frame."
ratio0.92
18.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences264
matches
0"Because I am tired of"
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9739%