Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ77VBASYR2YEKAXHRAPARS3

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Duration:
3m 46s
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$0.057792
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Alibaba

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back. I pulled the door open. Lucien filled the frame. Charcoal wool suit, platinum hair swept back, ivory cane resting against his thigh. The amber and black eyes locked onto mine. You changed the locks. I changed my life. He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation. The narrow hallway swallowed his broad shoulders. Curry spices and old paper clung to the damp air. He did not flinch at the smell. He never flinched at anything. I shut the door. The wood groaned against the warped jamb. Eva is in Cardiff. I know. He tapped the cane tip against the scuffed linoleum. I came for you, Aurora. The name hit like a bruise pressed too hard. Nobody called me that anymore. Not since Marseille. Not since he walked away while the warehouse burned. I crossed my arms. The crescent scar on my left wrist caught the dim bulb light. Rory. And you are standing on a stack of Sumerian tax records. He glanced down. A leather-bound folio lay crushed under his polished Oxford. He shifted his weight. The movement brought him closer. Too close. Sandalwood and cold iron cut through the cumin haze. You look tired. You look expensive. A corner of his mouth twitched. Not quite a smile. More like a blade testing its edge. May I sit? No. He sat anyway. The sagging armchair swallowed him. Ptolemy leapt from a tower of grimoires and landed on his knee. The cat purred. Traitor. Lucien stroked the tabby spine with gloved fingers. We need to talk about the Avaros ledger. I burned it. You copied it first. I kept my face blank. Cool head. Quick thinking. That was how I survived Evan. That was how I survived Lucien. Prove it. He reached into his breast pocket. My breath hitched. I hated that it hitched. He pulled out a folded photograph. Glossy paper. Creased edges. He slid it across the low table. It stopped against a chipped mug. The image showed my handwriting. Neat. Precise. Cipher notation margining a list of demon-blood transactions. My stomach tightened. Where did you get that? A dead man in Shoreditch. He adjusted his cuff. He swallowed his tongue before I could ask who paid him to steal from you. I did not ask for your protection. You never do. His voice dropped. Rough velvet. That is the problem. I stepped back. My hip bumped a shelf. Scrolls rattled. Dust motes danced in the stale air. Leave the photo. Leave the flat. I will handle it. You handle everything alone. Until you bleed. The words hung heavy. I remembered cobblestones. Rain. His hand on my throat. Not to choke. To steady. The promise he broke when the sirens wailed. I picked up the photograph. The paper felt greasy. What do you want, Lucien? The cipher key. No. They are coming for you, Rory. The buyers. The sellers. The things that wear human skin and crave what runs in your veins. I laughed. Sharp. Bitter. I am a delivery girl for a Chinese restaurant. I carry chopsticks and plastic bags. Not demon blood. You carry a mind that cracks codes no scholar touches. He leaned forward. The cane rested against his knee. You carry a past that refuses to stay buried. And you carry my mark. My fingers went to my collarbone. The skin there burned. Old magic. Stupid magic. I should have scraped it off with a razor. It faded. Liar. He stood. The chair springs whined. He closed the distance in two strides. I refused to retreat. The bookshelf dug into my shoulder blades. His hand rose. I flinched. He stopped. His knuckles hovered an inch from my jaw. Look at me. I looked. The amber eye held fire. The black one held the void. Both held me. You left me in that alley. I drew them away. You let me think you were dead. I let you live. His thumb brushed my lower lip. Calloused leather. Warm. Grief keeps you moving. Hope makes you careless. I caught his wrist. The grip felt solid. Real. Dangerous. Do not touch me. Make me stop. The challenge sat between us. Thick. Suffocating. I wanted to shove him. I wanted to pull him closer. My pulse hammered against my ribs. Ptolemy jumped down and scattered a pile of index cards. The sound broke the spell. I released him. Get out. Not without the key. Then you stay out. He sighed. The sound carried exhaustion. He turned toward the door. The cane tapped a steady rhythm. One. Two. Three. The wood splintered inward. Shards flew past my ear. I dropped. Lucien moved faster. The ivory handle twisted. Steel hissed free. A thin blade caught the hallway light. Boots crunched over the threshold. Heavy. Military grade. Three men. Black tactical gear. Faces hidden behind matte visors. The lead figure raised a compact rifle. The barrel pointed straight at my chest. Lucien stepped in front of me. His suit jacket flared. The cane blade angled up. Stay down, Rory. The rifle cocked. A red laser dot painted his shoulder. I grabbed a brass paperweight from the floor. Cold metal. Heavy base. I rose behind him. The lead man spoke. Voice synthesised. Metallic. Hand over the girl, Moreau. The Master wants his property back. Lucien did not blink. Tell your master he can come collect her himself. The rifle fired. I threw the paperweight. It struck the visor. Glass cracked. The shot went wide. Plaster exploded off the wall. Dust choked the air. Lucien lunged. The blade flashed. Blood sprayed dark across the curry-stained wallpaper. The second man swung a baton. I ducked. The wood smashed into a bookshelf. Volumes rained down. I kicked his knee. Bone crunched. He howled. The third man grabbed my hair. I twisted. My elbow drove into his ribs. He grunted. His grip tightened. He yanked me toward the broken door. Lucien turned. Blood slicked his blade. His eyes went fully black. The demon woke. Let her go. The man laughed. He pressed a knife to my throat. Cold steel bit skin. Drop the sword, half-breed. Or I open her up. Lucien froze. The cane lowered an inch. I felt the blade press deeper. A warm trickle ran down my neck. I met Lucien's gaze. The amber flickered back. Fear. Raw. Human. I stomped on the captor's instep. He shifted. I drove my head back. Cartilage cracked. His grip loosened. I broke free. The rifle swung toward me again. Lucien threw himself forward. The bullet hit him. He staggered. He did not fall. I grabbed the fallen baton. I swung. Wood connected with temple. The gunman dropped. Silence fell. Heavy. Broken only by ragged breathing. Lucien pressed a hand to his side. Crimson seeped through charcoal wool. He looked at me. Blood stained his teeth. The key, Rory. Now. I reached into my pocket. My fingers closed around the cold metal drive. I pulled it out. The floorboards beneath us groaned. A low hum vibrated through the soles of my shoes. The air turned frigid. Frost crawled up the cracked door frame. Lucien's head snapped toward the hallway. They brought a breacher. The walls shuddered. Plaster dust snowed down. The hum grew louder. Teeth-rattling. Bone-deep. I shoved the drive into his palm. Can you walk? I can run. Good. I grabbed his arm. Because the stairs are already gone. The ceiling tore open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1240
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stomach"
2"velvet"
3"pulse"
4"flickered"
5"silence"
6"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences286
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences286
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences286
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1240
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1240
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Cardiff1
Aurora1
Marseille1
Sumerian1
Oxford1
Avaros1
Evan1
Lucien14
Shoreditch1
Rory4
Chinese1
Moreau1
Master1
You10
Heavy3
Blood3
persons
0"Evan"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Moreau"
4"Master"
5"You"
6"Blood"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Marseille"
2"Oxford"
3"Shoreditch"
globalScore0.935
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1240
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences286
matches
0"hated that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs99
mean12.53
std10.1
cv0.807
sampleLengths
010
125
24
34
437
511
64
716
826
916
1012
1132
123
133
1417
153
161
1724
188
198
203
214
2221
232
2437
2518
265
2724
287
2912
3017
3110
327
3326
349
355
363
371
3823
394
4018
4133
4223
432
441
4539
463
4716
486
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences286
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs271
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences286
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1246
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay crushed under his"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.015248796147672551
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016051364365971107
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences286
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences286
mean4.34
std2.47
cv0.57
sampleLengths
05
15
24
313
48
54
64
78
87
910
107
115
124
137
144
152
169
175
189
195
203
219
224
2312
241
2511
263
279
284
295
302
319
323
333
346
354
367
373
381
393
405
4112
423
431
448
458
463
474
485
492
53.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.34965034965034963
totalSentences286
uniqueOpeners100
31.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences215
matches
0"More like a blade testing"
1"Then you stay out."
ratio0.009
56.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount88
totalSentences215
matches
0"I pulled the door open."
1"You changed the locks."
2"I changed my life."
3"He stepped inside without waiting"
4"He did not flinch at"
5"He never flinched at anything."
6"I shut the door."
7"He tapped the cane tip"
8"I came for you, Aurora."
9"I crossed my arms."
10"He glanced down."
11"He shifted his weight."
12"You look tired."
13"You look expensive."
14"He sat anyway."
15"We need to talk about"
16"I burned it."
17"You copied it first."
18"I kept my face blank."
19"He reached into his breast"
ratio0.409
29.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount185
totalSentences215
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back."
1"I pulled the door open."
2"Lucien filled the frame."
3"Charcoal wool suit, platinum hair"
4"The amber and black eyes"
5"You changed the locks."
6"I changed my life."
7"He stepped inside without waiting"
8"The narrow hallway swallowed his"
9"Curry spices and old paper"
10"He did not flinch at"
11"He never flinched at anything."
12"I shut the door."
13"The wood groaned against the"
14"Eva is in Cardiff."
15"He tapped the cane tip"
16"I came for you, Aurora."
17"The name hit like a"
18"Nobody called me that anymore."
19"I crossed my arms."
ratio0.86
23.26% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences215
matches
0"Because the stairs are already"
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences11
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.5377%