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Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ77WHDBMM2RZESNE6Z04EQT
Run Details
Model:
Qwen 3.6 Flash
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
34.8s
Cost:
$0.009990
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
36.46%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
46.39%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
33.50%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
12.96%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
22.81%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.2931%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The door splintered inward.
I caught the frame before
it slammed against the wall. The deadbolts held fast. My shoulder burned.
The hallway reeked of damp
plaster and old curry leaves.
A shadow pooled across the
threshold.
You lock up like a
frightened rabbit.
I lock up like a
lawyer who knows what doors usually hide.
Lucien stepped into the dim
light.
Rainwater dripped from his tailored
charcoal suit.
Platinum blond hair clung to
his forehead. Heterochromatic eyes one amber, one black locked onto mine. He carried that
familiar
scent.
Tobacco, bergamot and something metallic
that set my teeth on edge.
He leaned his ivory handled
cane against his thigh. The blade mechanism clicked. I
knew that sound
.
We had heard it in
dimly lit clubs and sunless alleyways. He did not smile. Good. Smiling meant danger. You
look
exhausted, Rory.
You look like trouble walking
through a fire door. He stepped closer. The cramped hallway offered no room for evasion. Books rattled on every surface. Scrolls spilled from cardboard boxes.
My research notes covered the
table like a paper avalanche.
I kept my back against
the wall. He mirrored me.
His cane tapped against the
floorboards. Tap. Tap. Tap. Three deadbolts. Ptolemy is hiding under the sofa. And your knuckles are split. Observant as ever.
I pay attention to details
you discard. The corridor felt smaller. Warmer.
His presence occupied the space
like a physical
weight
.
I remembered how that weight
used to feel. Before the betrayal.
Before the blood on his
cuffs and the door behind him slammed shut.
Before Cardiff became a place
of ash and
echoes
. What do you want, Lucien?
He reached into his jacket
pocket. I tensed. My hand brushed the crescent scar on my left wrist. The leather gloves on the counter offered no comfort. He pulled out a folded document. Heavy cream paper. Wax seal. Crimson thread. A summoning. From Avaros. My breath hitched. He noticed. Of course he did. You cannot be serious. The veil thins every winter solstice. The circle requires two anchors. Blood and bone. Memory and fear. We
broke that pact
. You walked away. I walked into a trap. You
know
it. The court demands a fixer who understands mortal resistance. They want you. My mother taught me to read contracts. She never taught me how to survive a demon tribunal. Lucien closed the distance. His shoulder brushed mine. The friction sent a jolt up my spine. I hated how my
pulse
skipped. I hated how his breath warmed my ear. They do not want you, Rory. They want the girl who stole the ledger. The one who burned the evidence locker and smiled through
shattered
glass. You are the only anchor who thinks outside the box. I need you. And you forgot to ask. I had to save you from Evan first. The name
hung in the air
. I dragged my hand down my face. My jaw ached. That was my war. It was a war you would lose alone. He tilted his head. Black eye caught the bulb. Amber eye held the
flicker
. I tied the knot. I buried the threat. You got your flat. You got your
silence
. And you left me in Marseille with a broken rib and a hollow chest. You had a cane. I had a purpose. The purpose vanished when you left. My fingers curled into fists. The scar on my wrist
throbbed
. I stepped back. He followed. Space shrank to inches. His suit fabric whispered against my cardigan. Rainwater soaked my sleeve. I smelled leather and old paper and the sharp sting of his cologne. We had a deal. Deals change when the board flips. I grabbed the document from his hand. Pages crackled. Names scrolled down the page. My name sat at the top. Printed in sharp, unforgiving ink. I stared at the wax seal. The wax felt warm. Like a finger pressing against skin. This is illegal. This is survival. You want me to walk back into the underworld. You want me to stand beside a half demon fixer who leaves me bleeding on
marble
floors. I want you to live. His voice dropped. Rough. Low. It scraped against the quiet flat. I want you to stop running from Cardiff. From Evan. From me. I want you to remember what it feels like to hold the knife and watch the other person flinch. My chest tightened. I tossed the paper onto the cluttered table. It landed between open textbooks and a half empty mug. Ptolemy padded into the hallway. Tabby fur bristled. He wound around Lucien polished shoes and hissed. Even the cat remembers you. Animals sense rot. Or they sense power. He crouched. One finger extended. The cat sniffed. The fur settled. Lucien lips twitched. I hated that tiny shift. Hated how it tugged at a muscle I kept banded shut. The tribunal meets in forty minutes. Silas already owes a favour. He pulled the permit. The door to the underground remains open because your name sits on a list that should not exist. Silas knows I hate him. Silas knows you hate
being ignored
. He gave you passage because you insulted his grandmother and won. I laughed. It cracked. Dry. Desperate. You always did work the angles. Angles keep you alive when the straight line aims for your throat. He rose. The cane shifted. The hidden blade slid home with a soft metallic hiss. I stepped backward until my hips hit the edge of the counter. Books threatened to topple. Scrolls unrolled. My research notes drifted across the floor like falling leaves. I cannot. Can. I promised Eva. Eva studies ghosts. You deal with teeth. Different tools. Different wounds. Rain lashed the window. Thunder rolled across the brick lane below. The curry house chimney whistled. I pressed my palms against the counter. The wood felt solid. Real. Anchoring. You
think
I will say yes. I
know
you will. You are arrogant. I am accurate. His hand covered mine. His fingers were cold. Mine burned. Skin brushed skin. Nerve ends flared. I should have pulled back. I did not. Heat pooled in my
stomach
. Old hunger stirred. It curled around my ribs and squeezed.
If we walk through that
door, there is no return. There never was. I turned my hand. Fingers interlaced. Knuckles pressed together. The scar on my left wrist rubbed against his calloused thumb. I
remembered that thumb
. I remembered the
weight
of it against my ribs in the dark. I remembered the taste of copper on my tongue and the way he whispered my name like a prayer and a curse. Lucien. Rory. The deadbolts rattled. A heavy thud
echoed
through the wood. The door frame shuddered. Ptolemy bolted. A book slid off the shelf. I did not
look
away from him. They found us. He did not blink. He stepped forward. His body pressed against mine. His arm wrapped around my waist. He pulled me against his chest. The scent of storm and iron flooded my senses. His
pulse
hammered against my ribs. Steady. Strong. Unyielding. Hold on. The wood splintered. Iron bars tore through the frame. Shadows poured into the hallway. Cold air hit my bare ankles. I felt his hand slide to the small of my back. I felt his lips brush my ear. Breathe. The lock gave way. Dark figures stepped across the threshold. They carried chains. They carried
silence
. They
carried the weight
of Avaros. Lucien drew the cane. The blade flashed. The hallway erupted in motion.
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4/27/2026, 10:31:15 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1259
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
36.46%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1259
totalAiIsms
16
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
1
1
word
"weight"
count
3
2
word
"echoes"
count
1
3
word
"pulse"
count
2
4
word
"shattered"
count
1
5
word
"flicker"
count
1
6
word
"silence"
count
2
7
word
"throbbed"
count
1
8
word
"marble"
count
1
9
word
"stomach"
count
1
10
word
"echoed"
count
1
11
word
"carried the weight"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"weight"
2
"echoes"
3
"pulse"
4
"shattered"
5
"flicker"
6
"silence"
7
"throbbed"
8
"marble"
9
"stomach"
10
"echoed"
11
"carried the weight"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
240
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
5
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
240
filterMatches
0
"look"
1
"know"
2
"think"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
240
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
22
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1259
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
0
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
66.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
44
wordCount
1259
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.27
worstName
"You"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"You"
discoveredNames
Rory
3
Cardiff
2
Lucien
7
Avaros
2
Evan
2
Marseille
1
Eva
2
You
16
Tap
3
Ptolemy
3
Silas
3
persons
0
"Rory"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Evan"
3
"Eva"
4
"You"
5
"Ptolemy"
6
"Silas"
places
0
"Cardiff"
1
"Avaros"
2
"Marseille"
globalScore
0.865
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
91
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1259
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
3
totalSentences
240
matches
0
"knew that sound"
1
"broke that pact"
2
"remembered that thumb"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
72
mean
17.49
std
16.43
cv
0.94
sampleLengths
0
37
1
7
2
12
3
45
4
36
5
4
6
9
7
50
8
13
9
3
10
7
11
47
12
5
13
40
14
4
15
9
16
4
17
17
18
7
19
20
20
17
21
30
22
39
23
5
24
8
25
16
26
4
27
52
28
4
29
10
30
44
31
4
32
6
33
41
34
3
35
3
36
26
37
47
38
37
39
5
40
3
41
4
42
30
43
33
44
5
45
17
46
12
47
12
48
43
49
2
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
240
matches
0
"being ignored"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
274
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
240
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1259
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
21
adverbRatio
0.016679904686258934
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.0023828435266084196
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
240
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
240
mean
5.25
std
3.38
cv
0.644
sampleLengths
0
4
1
10
2
4
3
3
4
10
5
6
6
7
7
12
8
6
9
7
10
7
11
9
12
5
13
11
14
9
15
4
16
4
17
11
18
4
19
1
20
3
21
4
22
9
23
3
24
8
25
5
26
5
27
10
28
7
29
3
30
6
31
1
32
1
33
1
34
2
35
6
36
5
37
3
38
7
39
4
40
1
41
9
42
8
43
3
44
13
45
9
46
5
47
6
48
2
49
10
46.39%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
27
diversityRatio
0.3458333333333333
totalSentences
240
uniqueOpeners
83
33.50%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
199
matches
0
"Of course he did."
1
"Even the cat remembers you."
ratio
0.01
12.96%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
103
totalSentences
199
matches
0
"I caught the frame before"
1
"My shoulder burned."
2
"You lock up like a"
3
"I lock up like a"
4
"He carried that familiar scent."
5
"He leaned his ivory handled"
6
"I knew that sound."
7
"We had heard it in"
8
"He did not smile."
9
"You look exhausted, Rory."
10
"You look like trouble walking"
11
"He stepped closer."
12
"My research notes covered the"
13
"I kept my back against"
14
"He mirrored me."
15
"His cane tapped against the"
16
"I pay attention to details"
17
"His presence occupied the space"
18
"I remembered how that weight"
19
"He reached into his jacket"
ratio
0.518
22.81%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
174
totalSentences
199
matches
0
"The door splintered inward."
1
"I caught the frame before"
2
"The deadbolts held fast."
3
"My shoulder burned."
4
"The hallway reeked of damp"
5
"A shadow pooled across the"
6
"You lock up like a"
7
"I lock up like a"
8
"Lucien stepped into the dim"
9
"Rainwater dripped from his tailored"
10
"Platinum blond hair clung to"
11
"He carried that familiar scent."
12
"Tobacco, bergamot and something metallic"
13
"He leaned his ivory handled"
14
"The blade mechanism clicked."
15
"I knew that sound."
16
"We had heard it in"
17
"He did not smile."
18
"You look exhausted, Rory."
19
"You look like trouble walking"
ratio
0.874
100.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
4
totalSentences
199
matches
0
"Before the betrayal."
1
"Before the blood on his"
2
"Before Cardiff became a place"
3
"If we walk through that"
ratio
0.02
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
28
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
87.2931%