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Run: 2026-04-27-01KQ780VMYKYFCE3N1QXC1ADH3
Run Details
Model:
Qwen3.6 Max Preview
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
3m 30s
Cost:
$0.054204
Provider:
Alibaba
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
52.87%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
72.73%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
62.34%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
36.64%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.9302%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The third deadbolt clicked back. Rory pulled the door open. Lucien filled the frame.
Charcoal wool, platinum hair, that
stupid ivory cane resting against his thigh. One amber eye, one black. Both fixed on her. "You changed the locks." "You taught me to." He stepped inside without invitation.
The narrow hallway swallowed his
cologne, sandalwood and something sharper, like struck flint. Rory shut the door. The deadbolts slid home. One. Two. Three. "Eva is out." "I know."
He tapped his cane against
a stack of leather-bound grimoires. Dust plumed. "I paid her landlord to keep the curry house ventilators running. The smell masks your trail." "My trail."
Rory crossed her arms
.
The crescent scar on her
left wrist caught the dim bulb light. "I deliver spring rolls, Lucien. Not state secrets." "You deliver whatever Yu-Fei puts in those insulated bags."
He moved further into the
flat.
His polished Oxfords avoided a
scattered trail of tarot cards and half-empty teacups. "Last Tuesday, you carried a parcel wrapped in brown paper. Addressed to a warehouse in Wapping. You did not ask what was inside." "I get paid to ride a moped. Not to ask questions." "A dangerous habit."
He stopped beside the sagging
sofa. Ptolemy uncurled from a cushion, ears flat, tail twitching. The cat hissed. Lucien did not blink. "Animals sense the rot before humans do." "He hisses at the postman too." "The postman does not carry Avarosian blood."
Rory stepped between him and
the cat. "What do you want." "To return what you left in my coat."
He reached into his breast
pocket. Slow. Deliberate.
His fingers emerged holding a
silver lighter. Engraved. Dented on one side. Her father’s. Her breath hitched. She kept her face still. "I lost that months ago." "You threw it at my head." "You ducked." "I bled."
He turned the lighter over
. The metal caught the weak light. "You aimed for the temple. A lawyer’s daughter knows where to strike." "I am not a lawyer." "You think like one."
He placed the lighter on
a stack of annotated scrolls. The paper crinkled under the
weight
. "You also run like one. When the terms turn sour." Rory picked up the lighter. The metal felt cold. Familiar.
She slipped it into her
jeans pocket. "We had an arrangement. You needed a courier who did not flinch at odd hours. I needed rent money. The arrangement ended." "It ended when you stopped answering my calls." "It ended when you let those men follow me home." Silence stretched. The curry house below clanged pans. Garlic and cumin seeped through the floorboards. Lucien’s jaw tightened. A fraction. Enough. "I did not let them follow you." "You knew they were there." "I knew they would not touch you."
He stepped closer
. The space between them shrank. Heat radiated off his suit. "I watch every corner you turn, Rory. I count every stair you climb. I listen for your key in the lock." "That is not protection. That is stalking." "Call it what you like."
His voice dropped
. Low. Rough at the edges. "You slept in my bed. You left your scent on my sheets. You think I forget the shape of your
pulse
under my mouth." Rory held her ground.
Her heart hammered against her
ribs. She kept her voice level. "You made a deal with Silas behind my back. You traded my route for information. You sold my safety for a name." "I bought your life."
His hand rose
. Stopped an inch from her cheek. Did not touch. "The men in Wapping carried iron blades and blessed salt. They do not ask questions. They carve answers into bone. You would have been on a slab by dawn." "So you decided for me." "I decided you would breathe." She laughed. Short. Bitter. "You always did confuse control with care." His fingers curled. Dropped. He stepped back. The cane clicked against the floorboards. "You want me gone. Say it." "I want you to stop treating me like a ledger entry." "You are not an entry."
He unbuttoned his cuff
. Rolled back the charcoal wool. A pale scar ran along his forearm. Jagged. Recent. "You are the reason I carry this. You are the reason I bleed in alleys while you deliver noodles to strangers." Rory stared at the scar. Her throat tightened. She looked away. "You chose this world. I just deliver to it." "You live above a demon’s pub. You sleep three streets from a rift gate. You read Eva’s scrolls when you think no one watches." He leaned in. His breath brushed her ear. Warm. Steady. "You are already in it, *
chérie
*. You just refuse to admit you like the dark." She turned her head. Their faces
aligned
. Inches apart. His heterochromatic eyes held hers. Amber
flickered
. Black swallowed the light. She smelled the sandalwood again. Underneath it, copper. Old blood. Fresh danger. "Get out." "Make me." Her hand shot out. Grabbed his lapel. Yanked him forward. His cane clattered against a tower of books. Pages scattered. Ptolemy bolted under the armchair. Lucien did not resist. He let her pull him into the clutter. His free hand found her waist. Fingers pressed through her jumper. Hot. Certain. "You hate me," he murmured. "I hate that you were right." His mouth hovered over hers. Not touching. Testing. "About what." "About me running." Her thumb
traced
the line of his jaw. Stubble rasped against her skin. "I should have stayed. I should have made you pay for it properly." "You can start now." She closed the distance. The kiss hit like a struck match. Hard. Desperate. Teeth clashed. Tongues met. He tasted of black coffee and burnt sugar. She gripped his shoulders. He backed her against the wall. Plaster cracked. Books slid from a shelf. A heavy tome thudded against the floor. Neither broke contact. His hand slid up her thigh. Pushed under the hem of her jumper. Skin met skin. She arched into him. A gasp escaped. He swallowed it. His other hand tangled in her hair. Pulled her head back. Exposed her throat. His lips trailed down. Hot. Wet. Deliberate. "Lucien," she breathed. "Say it again." "Lucien." The word broke something in him. He lifted her. She wrapped her legs around his waist. He carried her three steps. Dropped her onto the sofa. Cushions groaned. Scrolls spilled onto the rug. He followed her down. Weight settled. Perfect. Heavy. His mouth found hers again. Slower now. Deeper. She unbuttoned his waistcoat. Tugged his shirt free. Ran her palms over his chest. Muscle. Heat. The steady drum of his heart. Half human. Half something else. All his. The flat shook. Not from them. The floorboards
vibrated
. A low thrum
pulsed
through the walls. The curry house pans stopped clanging. Silence dropped like a blade. Lucien froze. His head lifted.
Eyes narrowed
. The amber one flared. The black one went flat. "Down." He rolled off her. Drew his cane. Twisted the ivory handle. Steel slid free. Thin. Lethal. The front door shuddered. Wood splintered around the deadbolts. "They found the trail," he said. Rory grabbed a heavy brass paperweight from the coffee table. Her fingers closed around the cold metal. She did not shake. She did not blink. The door blew inward. Hinges screamed. Smoke poured through the frame. Three silhouettes stepped through the haze. Iron glinted. Salt crunched under heavy boots. Lucien raised his blade. Rory stood beside him. Shoulder to shoulder. "Left side is mine," she said. "Do not miss." "I never do." The first man lunged. Steel met steel. Sparks showered the scattered scrolls. Rory swung the paperweight. Bone cracked. The room erupted.
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"2026-04-27T10:33:36.679Z"
4/27/2026, 10:33:36 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
16
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"He moved further [further]"
dialogueSentences
63
tagDensity
0.254
leniency
0.508
rawRatio
0.063
effectiveRatio
0.032
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1273
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
52.87%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1273
totalAiIsms
12
found
0
word
"weight"
count
2
1
word
"familiar"
count
1
2
word
"silence"
count
2
3
word
"pulse"
count
1
4
word
"aligned"
count
1
5
word
"flickered"
count
1
6
word
"traced"
count
1
7
word
"perfect"
count
1
8
word
"vibrated"
count
1
9
word
"pulsed"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"familiar"
2
"silence"
3
"pulse"
4
"aligned"
5
"flickered"
6
"traced"
7
"perfect"
8
"vibrated"
9
"pulsed"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"Eyes narrowed"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
196
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
196
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
242
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
29
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
1
markdownWords
1
totalWords
1273
ratio
0.001
matches
0
"chérie"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
25
wordCount
776
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
1.29
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Dust
1
Oxfords
1
Ptolemy
2
Slow
1
Low
1
Stopped
1
Rolled
1
Stubble
1
Rory
10
Lucien
6
persons
0
"Dust"
1
"Oxfords"
2
"Ptolemy"
3
"Stopped"
4
"Rolled"
5
"Stubble"
6
"Rory"
7
"Lucien"
places
(empty)
globalScore
0.856
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
41
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1273
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
242
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
72
mean
17.68
std
15.1
cv
0.854
sampleLengths
0
10
1
25
2
4
3
4
4
29
5
3
6
30
7
26
8
51
9
11
10
32
11
6
12
7
13
11
14
30
15
13
16
6
17
2
18
25
19
5
20
30
21
39
22
8
23
10
24
21
25
7
26
5
27
41
28
7
29
37
30
37
31
45
32
5
33
5
34
11
35
19
36
11
37
44
38
20
39
49
40
32
41
2
42
2
43
50
44
5
45
6
46
10
47
29
48
4
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
196
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
157
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
242
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
778
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
12
adverbRatio
0.015424164524421594
lyAdverbCount
0
lyAdverbRatio
0
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
242
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
242
mean
5.26
std
4.57
cv
0.869
sampleLengths
0
5
1
5
2
4
3
12
4
5
5
4
6
4
7
4
8
5
9
13
10
4
11
4
12
1
13
1
14
1
15
3
16
12
17
2
18
16
19
6
20
12
21
8
22
15
23
13
24
23
25
11
26
9
27
9
28
3
29
4
30
7
31
6
32
7
33
7
34
4
35
14
36
1
37
1
38
7
39
1
40
4
41
2
42
3
43
5
44
5
45
6
46
2
47
7
48
6
49
12
72.73%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
9
diversityRatio
0.45867768595041325
totalSentences
242
uniqueOpeners
111
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
137
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
62.34%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
54
totalSentences
137
matches
0
"He stepped inside without invitation."
1
"He tapped his cane against"
2
"He moved further into the"
3
"His polished Oxfords avoided a"
4
"He stopped beside the sagging"
5
"He reached into his breast"
6
"His fingers emerged holding a"
7
"Her breath hitched."
8
"She kept her face still."
9
"He turned the lighter over"
10
"He placed the lighter on"
11
"She slipped it into her"
12
"He stepped closer"
13
"His voice dropped"
14
"Her heart hammered against her"
15
"She kept her voice level."
16
"His hand rose"
17
"His fingers curled."
18
"He stepped back."
19
"He unbuttoned his cuff"
ratio
0.394
36.64%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
116
totalSentences
137
matches
0
"The third deadbolt clicked back."
1
"Rory pulled the door open."
2
"Lucien filled the frame."
3
"Charcoal wool, platinum hair, that"
4
"Both fixed on her."
5
"He stepped inside without invitation."
6
"The narrow hallway swallowed his"
7
"Rory shut the door."
8
"The deadbolts slid home."
9
"He tapped his cane against"
10
"Rory crossed her arms"
11
"The crescent scar on her"
12
"He moved further into the"
13
"His polished Oxfords avoided a"
14
"He stopped beside the sagging"
15
"Ptolemy uncurled from a cushion,"
16
"The cat hissed."
17
"Lucien did not blink."
18
"Rory stepped between him and"
19
"He reached into his breast"
ratio
0.847
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
137
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
5
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
16
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"he murmured (murmur)"
1
"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences
63
tagDensity
0.063
leniency
0.127
rawRatio
0.5
effectiveRatio
0.063
86.9302%